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part 77 is
maan's concern for geet is just tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good
maan did'nt know wat pleased her anymore..nothing seem to make her happy or sad
only thing she tressured the most was krish & he will be leaving next week
geets silence was killing maan.
priya is nahi geet aaj nahi...
i can't forget you in my life since you presented me the most memorable moments
that I could only dreamt off..thanxs dear..
on ur 4th anniversary night u left maan to me..
i understood the compassion in your eyes..
u gave us so many days togather..but all we needed was couple of hours
kuch lamho ki khamoshi thi...kuch paloo ka gila..
& then we spoke for an hr or so & he spoke only about you in those one hr
unke sabdoo main ek hi naam gunjtha tha..geet geet aur sirf geet
i realized how well you have merged in his life...
kis hadh tak sama gayii ho uske dil main..zindagi main..
jab hame aapni jaan se pyaari koi cheese ko khona ka dar lagtha hai..to hum
use lekar aur bhi possessive hogathe hain...kyun ki hume darr rehatha hain
koi use tehz na phuncha de...koi aur uska utna khaiyal nahi rakhega..
jitna hum rekhsakthe hain..
but we will be at peace if we realize that they are in more safer hands than us..
main us sukun ke saath yanha se jaa rahi hoon..
priya - yeh ring maan ne nahi de mujhe...maine tumhari tarf phena le..
jis tarah tumhare ring main..maan likha hain..
aur maan ke ring main geet....maine aapne ring me maan aur geet likhwa liya hain...
priya hugs geet & leaves..maan - please geet...tum mujhe jitna gussa karna hain karloo
jitna bura bhala kehna hain kah loo..
lekhin please mujh se aise door muth javoo..
geet i am really sorry ..please geet mujhe maaf kardo
main tum se door nahi rah saktha...please tum mujhe jo bhi saja dena hai dedo
tum jo bhi kaho ghi main karoonga
please geet...please..aise chup math raho..
geet closes maans mouth with her hand... it
geet - pata nahi maan...(she cuddles into his arms)
jab se aap ko jana hai...sirf aap se pyaar hi kiya hain..
kabhi aap se, khabhi aap ke ehsaas se, khabhi aap ke pyar se
bhut koshish ki aapne aap ko rokhne ki..
lekhi rokh nahi paayai..
maan - phir mujh se itne door kyun jaa rahi ho..
geets tears roll down from her eyes..(maan could feel her tears touching, wetting his chest)
pata nahi kyun..lakin main aap se door nahi jana chathi...(maan kissed her forehead..)
mujhe apne se door math jane do...please..& she cries...
he knew geet was drifting away because of her insecurity.
and the best part is he knew he has
to make her fall in love with him all over again...forgetting..all the bitterness he has
given her again & again..over the years..and he will do any thing for that..he held close..
maan - main tumhe kanhi nahi jane dongha...tum sirf meri ho..sirf meri..samjhi tum..sirf meri..
PART 78
maan - some thing is missing..
geet - kuch nahi..every thing is fine..(geet turned to leave)
maan pulled her back..hamesha kyu bhool jathi ho..
he softly puts the mangasuthra around her neck & sindoor on her forehead & looks at her admiringly.
maan - mujhe aacha laagtha hain..(geet looks at him narrowing his eyebrow..ji..)
mera matlab hain..tum inme aur bhi sundar lagthi hoo.
dress changing scene is
and lunch scene is
maan takes a bite & says..geet dekho na namak nahi hain
& asks her to taste it..she has a bite...
geet - namak to teehk hi hain
maan - aacha ..let me see..again does the same thing..
geet understands & walks away...pulls her back & makes her sit on his lap..
maan - please mera saath kavoo na..
geet - ji..(she gets up..)
maan - nahi yanhee behtoo..mera paas..
as they were having the lunch..maan looks into her eyes..he could'nt say anything..
maan - aacha suno..we will go to simla tomrrow..
be there untill tuesday..do wat ever celebration u want.
complete weekend is urs ..friday--monday
krish kissed maan & maan showed his cheek to geet ..like asking for a kiss..
geet looked down..& moved closer...she closed her eyes...she was reluctant.
(did'nt want to create a scene infront of krish...so she)
maan could sense her reluctanants .. he turned to look at her...she kissed his lips instead
her eyes were closed..she opened them in shock...maan blinked his eyes in suprise &
held back his hands up ..(like.. hands up...don't blame me) geet looked at krish & maan..
krish smiled and winked at maan..geet walks out...
brilliant updates dear.
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