hey guys, i want to make new ff...but i m confused😕...so fristly i want to improve my confident..so that i made a short love scene about maneet, which i want to share with u...pls guys do comment its very important for me...
late night,,geet walking in her room and thinking, why maan didn't say anything to pari, when she gave him so many roses??geet remember her first rose scene, which maan told her throw it in dustbin.. geet becomes more angry, when she ramember it, and go outside of room. when she pass the mann's office, she see the flowers on the table, she talk herself, maine jab thori phool deye thi tab kitna kuch sonaya thi mujhe, ab itni sari phool deye hain os lataknewali ne tab kuch nahi kaha dusht danav ne" haad ho gaye..maan needs a file, which he left in outhouse, he go there to take the file.. geet pick one flower vase and throw it out, maan coming to the upstar, and a flower vase hit his face..ouch! maan scremed.. geet see that, and shocked... maan ask geet, what r u doing? geet said, i m tring to clean ur table..maan said, o really?? ye konsi tarika hain saaf karne ka? geet angry again and said, ek to main saaf kar rahi ho, oparse aap mujhe tarika puch rahi hain? maan notice geet looks upset, he comes close to her, and try to read her eyes, he hold her tightly and said, kue dill ki baat bol nahi patiho, har pal kudko kue rokti ho? geet feel his touch, and start their eyelock moment. after few moments, geet tell him, there is nothing in her heart.. maan frusteted to hear this..maan ask geet, why r u throwing the flowers?? geet tell him, if u need u can keep it, and try to handover all flowers to him. maan try to stop her, and they slipped on the floor, maan fall top on geet, and all flowers coverd on them.. and again their eye lock start..maan remove flowers from her face slowly. geet closed her eyes, and fell it..maan see her lips, and try to kiss her. but he stop himself.. suddenly he pull up geet, and geet stand in front of him.. both r fell very shy..maan walk out from there..geet try to say something, but she can't...
hope u lyk it.. pls do comments...
thanx guys for ur comments.. now i started after disco scene... maneet come back their house.. maan still unconcious..geet take him in her bedroom. becoz maan can't go hawali in this situation.. geet is very irretating to him..she think what was happen to maan? why was he behave like that? and remember their hug. geet feel shy.she ask herself, jo kuch v hoa acha nahi hoa, par aisa kue lag raha hain, oss pal ko samal ke rakhlo, kabhi khudse alag na hone do.."geet notice maan, whos sleeping very well. geet comes &seat near by maan.she notice him very closely.
there r lot of pain hiding in his face, but geet couldnot find it.she covered him with blacket.she put her hand on his forhead.geet feel maan hold her other hand tightly.geet try to escape from him, but she cant.atlast she also lay down and sleep with maan..next morning, maan wake up, he feel his headech badly, suddenly he notice, geet is sleeping on his hand. he shocked to see that. and remember last night. he try to remove his hand, but geet wake up, and stand up quickly. maan looks very embressed, and say good morning. geet give no response. after few minutes geet comes her room with glass of lemon water. give it to maan and said, pe le jeye, aapko acha lagega.maan drink it silently. suddenly maan ask to geet, geet what happend last night? geet speachless to hear this. she told him, u need rest, i'll talk u later about this. geet go out very firstly..
pls comments..
Edited by reea88 - 15 years ago
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