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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys ...
i have written some scenes on maaneet at this moment .....enthused by gouri 😊
plz have a look on them and press d like button if u like it ...
Scene 1

Geet shocked seeing maan entering the office ....she didn't expect him so early..she hides herself in the kitchen ...maan doesn't notice her n goes to kitchen ...geet thinks he is following her ...she blurts out ...aap mere piche piche iha bhi aagaye....

Maan: geet for ur kind info ..its my house ...and m here to have a glass of water ..

Geet tried to manage her awkward self consciousness....and starts ...

Ohh...apka aapna ghar hai .islie aap kabhi bhi kahi bhi ja sakte ho....kuch bhi kar sakte ho...

Maan ; haan kar sakta hu ...!! any problem...!!

Geet : galad hai yeh ...!!! ....kaha nahi suna nahi bas gayeb....muh uthaye chal die bilayet ...aiseki jaise kisi aur ke bareme sochte hi nahi hai....kisiko batane ki bhi jarurat nahi samajhte ..

Maan irritated tries to stop her but suddenly notices the tone of complaining in her voice....

Geet : jaise kisisebhi aapka koi bhi rishta nahi hai ...job jaisa marji ho kar sakte hai...dusra banda kya soche ...kya kare koi parwa nahi....apni man marji karna hai aapko harwaqt ..

Maan : so u were worried about me..

Geet bites her tongue...Huh ...mujhe kya padi hai ...woh dadi ki halat itni kharab ho gayi thii ...woh aapko kitna dhundh rahe the..par aapko kya ...

Maan 's eye s popped out from geet

Maan ; geet ...tum janti ho aisi baat nahi nahi hai ....mujhe dadi ki bohot fikar hai ....

Geet ; rehne dijiye ...kamse kam 100 phone kar chuki ho aapko....par aapko to meri koi fikar hi nahi...geet shuts her eyes.....mera matlab dadi ki.....waisebhi aapse bat karna bekar hai ...mai bekarme hi apna mood kharab kar rahi hu....she walks out ....leaving baffled maan behind...

Scene 2 :

Geet realises she has said too much ...and it was actually her fault that dadi got so much excited and got the syncopal attack ....she finds maan totally avoiding her ....nt even looking at her ....and taunting her ....while talking with adi .... "mana mai galti kia tha ...par kuch logon ko apne galti ka ahesas bhi nahi hota hai....woh to sirf dusron ko tevar dikhana jante hai..."

Adi isnot aware of that they are having a cold war ...he was talking with maan on a diff issue...and thinks its related to that matter only...

Maan says in a loud voice by making it sure ...that geet can hear this...

Geet repents ....maan hasn't scold her for once saying ..it was ur decision of leaving that made dadima sick ...

She finds maan sitting quietly in the jhula ....at garden....she goes there standing behind him...

Who mai gusse me kuch jada bol dia.....i m sorry sir..

Maan keeps silence ....

She again starts .....par aapko to batana chahiye tha na..kaha gaye kab ayenge ...islie...

Maan silent ...

Sorry bola na maine... ...aur waisebhi dadi ma jabtak puri tarah se thik nahi ho jati tabtak mai yehi rahungi .....she tries to defend herself...thinking he is still angry with her about the job issue.

Maan silent ...

Aap kuch bolte kiun nahi...kaha na abhi nahi jaungi...i m sorry ....she pleads ...his silence is bugging her to the core ....

Maan looks back at her ....mere bolneka tumpe kabhi koi asar hua hai....jo aj hoga..?.tum to wohi karogi ...jo khud chahti ho...islie mujhse bolneki jarurat hi kya hai.....aur waisebhi mujhe koi fark nahi padhta hai...tum kuchbhi karo...

Geet : accha....usdin to bol rahe the nahi jane dunga....

Maan : galti ho gaya tha..jo bol dia...maaf kar do....he tries to go away ...

Geet is very much hurt at this

When geet crossing the distance comes in front of him .... koi bhi ek chiz bola kijiye.....mai bhi insaan hu...she gasps...trying to control her tears that brimming up in her eyes...mai ihaa aayi thi aapse mafi mangne ke lie..par aap ki nafrat se har gayi mai........she had tears in her eyes..and runs away ...maan bangs his hand on the rim....not able to understand what is going on in this girls mind....

Scene 3

At dadi's bedroom maan trying to feed her ...but not able to do it properly .... as he had never done such things....scatters everything....geet watching this from distance comes to him and snatches the plate ...

Geet : rehne dijiye ...yeh sab kaam aapse nahi hoga....

While feeding dadima...with ultimate care and affection...maan gets overwhelmed watching her caring dadima....he recalls their last talk ...and repents for his attitude...

Maan ; dadi ma...aap apna dhyan bilkul nahi rakhte...dekha kya haal ban alia...sab kitne parehsan hai

Geet : rehne dijiye sir.....aapko kabhi apni galti to najar nahi aati ...sabpe chari ghumate rehte hai ....wasibhi ...dusron ke kaam ke nuks niklalna aapka shuakh hai...

(she and dadima had a discussion earlier to make maan ready for the marriage )

Maan : dekho geet tum bakwas mat karo..mai aisa kuch nahi karta ..

Geet : mai bakwas nahi kar rahi hu.....sachhai dikha rahi hu...agar aapko dadima ki itni hi fikar hai ...to unki baat man kiun nahi lete ..

Maan tries to stop geet ....

Geet continues....rehne dijiye sir...aap sirf aapne bareme sochte hai...aapko kisi dusre ka koi fikar hi hai hai....bohot khudgarj hai aap...

Maan hisses geeet ...

Geet : dekha dadima ..firse..

Maan : geet aisi bat bilkul nahi hai ...mai dadima ke bhale ke lie hi bol raha hu..

Geet : agar aapko dadima ke bhale ka itna hi fikar hai ...to man kiun nahi jate shadi ke lie...

Maan is hurt by geet's word...he turns back...

Geet continues....par nahi ....aapko thodi na fikar hai ....bas aapna jidd ...apna akad ...apne ahem ke age...ksiki nahi sunte hai aap ...

Maan ; basss!!!!!.....agar aapsab yehi chahte hai ...to thik hai...karunga mai shadi ..

Spoon drops down from geet 's hand....she didn't expect him to give in so easily .....

Dadi notices the change of expressions on geets face and conceals a naughty smile...

she somehow tries to manage and goes out from there....while maan watches her from distant .....khudgarj mai nahi geet ...khudgarj tum ho....

Geet talks in her mind ...khudgarj sir nahi hai...khudgarj mai hu...thank you sir ...man jane ke lie...

Scene 4

Pari gets inserted in the scene....maan started showing intimacy with pari...though geet is hurt ...but she is still trying to do something for her maan sir....she wants to help him by picking up the right colour shirt ...tie ....for him ....that will help him to woo pari ..maan obviously highly irritated ....and decides to follow out geet's demands .....he wants to see how far she can go...

Geet gets depressed when maan agrees with her while talking about virtues of pari.....his changed attitude has soured her mind ...but she certainly doesn't express it ....maan gets more irritated ...and somekinda flirts with pari ....he praises her a lot ....geet slowly walks out of the scene ...and soon maan follows her to check on her..and chuckles seeing her sad..

Scne 5 no link with previous

Geet goes to washroom for a shower ....keeping the dress (she will be wearing tonite's party ) on the bed...

Maan sneaks in and changes it to his desired one...locking the wardrobe takes the key with himself..now when she comes out of the wash room she has no idea where is her old dress..and she has to wear the dress kept on the bed...

She gets ready ...thinking how maan will like her attire ....she carefully draws her eye lines and lip lines..she is looking elegant yet simple...

When pinky and dadi praises geet ...that she is looking very much beautiful today ...maan smirks...lol....its pari who is looking beautiful today ...geet gets pissed off...she watches the intimacy of pari n maan ...burns and walks out .....maan's eyes were on her continuously .....he follows her ...and finds she is watching herself in the mirror...with sad eyes...maan slowly stands behind her ...and unties her hair ...he indicates both of their reflection in the mirror and says..now its looking beautiful !! nothing can be more beautiful than this.....geet is stunned by his act ....he walks away ...

Scene 6 no reln wid previous

Geet teased by shasha tasha...and suffering in inferiority complex with pari and her dressing sense and talking style .....does a makeover to herself..with the help of pinky's...

She is looking sexy in a black dress ...appears in the party ....maan who is stunned by her drastic change ...and she is looking really seductive ...stares at her ...jaw dropped...but soon he finds other peoples who are too staring at geet ...and moving towards her .....

Geet smartly walks inside completely ignoring maan's presence ...and talks to adi ..

While maan tries to gain her attention ...she completely ignores him....and says ..what sir..arent u enjoying the party ....its getting interesting with the night ....isnt it ...

Maan drags her aside...and says ..go and change the dress....

She curtly says no....why r u so much bothered ?

Maan : I have no intention to argue with u..u r changing into some other thing right now...

Geet denies ...no I wont ...i m looking good in this..i have been praised by dadima pinky adi and lots of other peoples too...m not going to change ...!!!

Maan drags her to the one distant corner ..and says.. what did you say ?.just say it again ....

Geet stubbornly says .. I wont ..

Maan just empties the glass on her that he was holding in his hand ..she gets completely drenched with the juice ...now she has no choice left...maan leaves her right there ....who is totally shocked by his act ..

Scene 7 cvs obviously wont show it ....but I pray ...!!!!!

at party maan hugs pari ...and plants a quick kiss on her chick ..to irritate geet

geet gets very much annoyed by his act ....she starts irritating him by her acts....

maan asks whats wrong with u geet ...!!u are behaving weird ..

geet ; nothing ...m fine ..!!!

maan : common geet tell me...he forces her to spit it out

geet blurts out ...you are not yet married to her ..and u have started kissing her ....i wonder what kind of person u are..

maan raises his brow ..and asks..is there burning something ...

geet : why should I be jealous ?

maan : I didn't say u r ...u said it urself...

geet tries to move out ..when maan pulls her closer ..and kisses her on her lips ....

maan ; this is called a kiss...not that one ....do you get it ...?and leaves the place

iske geet ki kya haal hai bataneki shayed jarurat nahi hai ...

plz tell me frens how did u find it .....plz plz reply .....all types of comments are welcomed... love reet
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harshiji thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👍🏼 reaaly luved it, , the dialogues r hilarious n the scenes r well presented , g8 job ...... plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
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AWESOME SCENES!!you rock yar..truly👏..want all these scenes to come true!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshiji

👍🏼 reaaly luved it, , the dialogues r hilarious n the scenes r well presented , g8 job ...... plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue yaar

heyyyyy
thanx a ton dear ....!! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome wonderful great scenes!!! i cud go on on but i have to stop na!!! love them!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bul3

AWESOME SCENES!!you rock yar..truly👏..want all these scenes to come true!!

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thank you so much dearie!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Reet,
This time have gone thru all ur scenes and two scenes I liked most are scene 6 n 7.Though I would love to have a little change in scene 6 that Geet may be given a modern look in her new apparel but not too western kind of outfit.Thats it.Otherwise the scene rocks.It suits the attitude of MSK so much....actually I like Geet in her present attire so much that I cant even think abt a makeover for her.........
And scene 7 is too HOT n Passionate..........OMG if at all it'll be taken by the CVs reet then it'll definitely set the screen on fire.........
Love
Ritu
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Reet...
All your scenes are very good and very nicely written.....Loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow yaar, good job👍🏼.
do continue and pm me also plz.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very cutee scenes😃
Keep it up:)

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