FF*Simply love*(Maaneet)pt27at pg14(note at pg153 - Page 34

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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice update once again!..Geet Maan SIngh Khurana sounds awesome😉..I am sure Sasha can never win in her cheap tricks.!!..Maan is only Geet's..forever!!..loved Maneet and dadi cute scenes..also lets see how Geet manofy's Maan..she has to kiss him😳..aw😍.update soon😃
Edited by Bul3 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet8

hellow dere nadia...

what a cute update ..



awwsum .....


u know i jusssssssssssssssssst looooooooooooove the song khuda jane....

thank u so much for putting into the fic...

awww......

so cuteeee


plz update soon

love

maanmeet


hi dear
thanks at last you read
happy to hear that you like the song .
i just felt that song goes with the part
as they both are feeling same
i will update soon
love
Nadia
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Originally posted by: Bul3

very nice update once again!..Geet Maan SIngh Khurana sounds awesome😉..I am sure Sasha can never win in her cheap tricks.!!..Maan is only Geet's..forever!!..loved Maneet and dadi cute scenes..also lets see how Geet manofy's Maan..she has to kiss him😳..aw😍.update soon😃



hi dear
i was about to Pm you again to ask you where is your comments. as i felt it was missing .i have really changed him.mind you right now they dont know that Dev was they culprit . may be Geet starting hating Maan.
let see will she will Kiss him or leave him.....
i really dont get how that naught thought came in my mind of kissing 😳
mameet is making me crazy 😆 😆 and i am making you All 😉 😆
Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago



A kiss or a twist
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As far the story is my all readers know that Geet doesn't know that she is married to Dev bro. same is the case with Maan. will she kiss in upcoming part or the truth will be reveal . what feeling my sweet readers have do tell me…. I know it is a kind of playing with your patience . but itna to haaq ha mera 😉
do let me know what you all feel
your 's
Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Giginaik

Hi Dear,
Sorry about not commenting earlier, having work done on the house and it has been really hectic. 😔 I don't even have my Internet working properly because of the constuctions however I want to say Thank you; thank you for the beautiful story, thank you for showing a sweet and playful side of Maan while still keeping him strong and sturdy. It would be nice to see your Maan in the show. I look forward to your updates eagerly and promise that once my Internet is working I will comment much in depth. Unfortunately an IPhone is not the best for commenting.
Faithfully reader,
Radha


hi sweet Radha
no problem dear , it is part of life , i am glad you let me know . i will be looking forward for your comments in future. when your net is fix give me a detail comment. i am obliged that i have such cute friends who read my ff
Love you
take care of your self
Nadia
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Posted: 15 years ago
I dont know yar..I want the kiss to take place but I also want Dev's truth to be out!I just hope that when Dev's truth comes out ,Geet or Maan doesnt misunderstand each-other!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey ur FF is jus fab
Loved the way it turned out as sweet cute love stry
Maan really changed a lot
Hop Sasha dosent harms Geet Though Maan will be there for her forever but than too
Liked this flirty Maan
Dadi was really shweet here
Hate Dev for smsing n all i paka thk its NT whose doing all this
Dev toh will never evr try it as he is hell scared of Maan
Update soon add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
hii dear..im also in confusion
i think 1st the kiss has 2 take place...
then the dev's truth has 2 come out
bu i hope then maneet
doesnt misunderstand each other
or leave each other!!
as u want sweety!!
wathever u write i will liked it
love uuu
mmmuuaahh
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Posted: 15 years ago
THIS IS A GIFT FROM MY SIDE TO MY READERS ON FRIENDSHIP DAY



Part 13

</font>Geet: uff babji Maan aur un kai sharta,mein ab kya karo . she started walking in room restlessly .
Maan came back he picked up his files laptop & cell
Geet: suddenly came in front of him :" please listen to me koi aur sharat rakh la plz"
Maan nodded he was planning to go to his study but he walk to terrace it was cloudy evening
Geet: walk behind him he knew she is a step behind he suddenly stop she bang with him
"aah babji yeh car kai tarah break lagata hain" pat his back
Maan hide his smile ,he pull chair and sit open his files .Geet was about to snatch it he showed his eyes with finger don't dare do it
Geet: whisper in his ear "DD". she walk to the other site of terrace it was cold breeze she just enjoying it Maan try to take his eyes of her but her every action make him look at her she was sitting and trying to take something out her Hand was stuck behind a big pot. she was try to pick it up
Maan: hmmmm loudly
Geet: looked at him: kya ha kara aap apna kaam . again try to pull it
Maan: yeh nahi maana gai mummer. he throw the file on table & walk to her pick up pot
Geet was holding a kitten in her hand she smiled at Maan. "thx him to kitten meet Mr DD he is not talking to me.you will talk to me na"
Maan drop the pot pat her head and sit on his chair
Geet: i got a new friend she made it sit on table ...you sit here I will bring water for you don't be scared of him yeh kuch nahi kar sakta... to maan don't tease it ok.
Maan: look her in anger he picked up his files and stretches his legs on table after min Geet was back
she saw kitten near Maan feet. she smiled she drag a chair and sit .
Maan: was very busy in working or he was trying to ignore her.
kitten was roaming around Maan feet
GEET: you like him .... he is not that bad right ...she tickle at his feet he drag it back
Maan took a piece of paper wrote and forward it to Geet
GEET read it loud Mujhe ko taang na karo i will go to office i have to complete this. she got up & walk behind his chair placed her chin at his shoulder & arm around his neck"let me see what are you doing ?" her present makes Maan crazy her breath was tickling him "oh you want to shape park I was thinking to ask you to make it rhombus at 1 side shops, other side prayer place , a school and hospital. so that everyone can spend some time there. ok hubby me going." she quickly move in bed room.
Maan: was in state of shock he saw she was taking her clothes out of almara. she went in to washroom .Maan how she always help me ? how she read my mind?
she took shower and came out she saw Maan busy doing his work she went to dresser sit there she thought of Maan how he had placed sindoor in her maang she felt he was again close to her her hand was about to apply it at her forehead he hold it in his hand turn her to himself and placed it .she felt shy closed her eyes as she could not see in his eyes
Maan: nahi shhhh shhhh hato meri file se saw he was trying to move kitten
Geet: open her eyes pat her head mein kya soch rahi thi shy
BG
(Orey manva tu to bavra hai
Tu hi jaane tu kya sochta hai
Tu hi jaane tu kya sochta hai bavre
Kyun dikhaye sapne tu sote jaagte)

she walk to terrace picked up the kitten from the table her wet hairs touch Maan face as if it drizzle there he closed his eyes. she turn felt he held his breath . he placed his hand on her duppata she could not move ahead. she trun back andsaw his hand
Jo barse sapne boond boond
Nainon ko moond moond
Geet: ab mein aap ko taang nahi kar rahi hoo iss leya aap bhi na kara plz
Maan smile he start pulling it toward him self he
Geet blush she saw Dadi standing in Garden looking at them :Maan dadi ha maat kara
Maan: he showed her his thumb as if trying to say not again.
Geet some time try to take one step ahead but he is pulled her she lost her balance she was in his lap
her duppata over his head "pat his shoulder dadi is standing down ,calling us for tea.Maan was holding her tightly caring her hairs curls .coming close to her neck as if he had not paid attention what she had said



Dadi Beta kya huwa
Maan let her free she got up
Geet kuch nahi Dadi mera duppata phass gaya tha.eik min mein aarhi hoon. turn to Maan give me my duppata
Maan: pointed at his lips
Geet Maan with a blush face she grab it from his hand & ran

Geet: bubbling "babji kya duniya mein itna pyar karna wala log hota ha."
(Kaise main chaloon, dekh na sakoon
Anjaane raastein)bg
she walk to Dadi
Dadi: beta dekhe kar chal karo
Geet: Dadi woh mein
DAdi: saw maan getting up from chair "acha to yeh tha wahan"
Geet turn back & saw Maan getting up "oh BABJI yahan se dadi dekhe nahi sakti thi"
DAdi : plz beta make coffee
Geet: sure dadi she pour dadi & Maan as she saw he was coming towards them a naughty thought came in her mind she put 5 spoon of sugar in his coffee "aab dekhti hoon yeh muhje se baat nahi karta ha "
Maan: hi dadi after months i am having evening tea with you.
DAdi: jee beta thanks to Geet. smiled at her while taking cup
Geet placed in front of Maan.
Maan: picked up and took one sip .Geet closed her eyes as she knew he will shout he smiled & quickly finish all when he placed the cup on table Geet open her eyes
Dadi aap na pee lee
Maan jee dadi smiled at Geet
Geet felt bad she did wrong a tear appear in her eyes .she started playing with her duppata.
Gunjasa hai koi iktara iktara, gunjasa hai koi iktara
Dheeme bole koi iktara iktara, dheeme bole koi iktara
dadi : Geet beta aap ka juice take it .
Geet cleared her throat got up and ran in
DAdi : iss ko kya huwa ha . what suddenly happen to her
Maan: mein dekhta hoon
DADI :nahi beta i will see you receive guest Mr sharma had arrived .
Maan: went to gate thinking i did wrong

Dadi walk in she saw Geet in kitchen drinking water

"what happen my child why are you crying"
Geet: dadi maan is not paused
DADi Kya Maan.... looked at her face
Geet: shy Maan drink hot coffee ....paused
DADI: acha agar un na pee lee tou kya huwa
Geet: woh mein na iss mein....paused
DAdi: kya aap na
Geet :i put 5 teaspoon sugar so that he shout on me, he talk to me but he took it.
DAdi: holding her head . acha that why Maan was saying let me see.
Geet : shyly hug her
DAdi : ok beta smile now i have few guest for dinner you better see how the servant did Arrangement Maan ko baad mein dekha ga"
the walk in dadi part of home
Maan bit worried what happen to her when he saw she is coming with Dadi he relax.
DADI : meet my bahu Geet Maan
Geet: said namasta to them and sit next to Dadi
MRS Sharma: Maan found such a beautiful wife
Maan stare at shy Geet :"secret ha aunty"
Dadi: Geet beta
Geet: jee Dadi ....she got what dadi is asking her to do
She went to kitchen to see the arrangement. she could hear Maan voice talking about business with MR Sharma. After half hour she asked everyone to join her in dinning room.
Maan sit next to Geet he held left her hand under the table every one was eating she was puzzle how to she was trying to loosen his grab but all her energy got wasted
Dadi :Geet beta plz eat, Maan aap kyun nahi kahta
Maan: dadi she will eat it is her home.
Geet: took a fork in her right hand and try to eat.
Maan: " excuse me Aunty will you mind if i use hand"
Aunty: nahi beta you can
He put back fork & started eating with hand. Geet relaxed she followed him.
they had a peaceful dinner
MRS Sharma: acha muhje ko samreen bahut yaad aa rahi ha
Maan: jump up from his seat and went out
Geet astonish why he got so angry
Dadi: MRS Sharma aap ko kya zarooat thi Maan ka samna iss ka naam lana kai. aap ko pata nahi ha woh kitna depressed hojata ha apni Maa ka naam sun kar. iss ko daar hota ha . kitna din ka baad mein iss ko relax dekha ha. address to Geet beta please go & see him stop him .joa mera beta before he go with his car to some where"

Geet : quickly got up and almost ran to the outhouse. every where it was dark she looked him in his study he was not there she locked the door .she ran up he was packing his luggage .she look the door behind her walk to him.
Geet:"maan where are you going" no reply from his site.
she sit on bed she was breathing heavily as she had ran in. "Maan please bola na she pleased her hand on his he drove it back, you say that face world . don't be scared of people why you are running away. .... he did not reply.ok i will come with you let me pack my bag too. she try to get her bag she lost her balance grab his shirt both fall on bed . their eyes meet. (mahi time).



she was breathing heavily she felt a strange feeling. he was about to go she locked her arms around his neck."bola Maan aap mujhe ko bhi chor kar jai ga." she looked in his eyes with feeling shy."aap ko pata hai how much lonely then i will be bola" Maan saw a tear drop from her eyes it rested at his arm. "she closed her eyes as if she was in some kind of pain. her hug was very tight he could feel it ."Maan aap " she felt some soft thing pressed against her lips she open her eyes it was his finger . he kissed her eyes wipe her tears with his lips . slowly went near her ears whisper" I LOVE YOU I will not leave you ever what happen give me your all pains Geet"

Geet: whisper" I LOVE YOU too no one will come in between us."
Maan roll take her on him he kissed her forehead ,her both eyes she just held him tight as if he will leave her if she try let him free. she let him own her . he softly fix her hairs which was disturbing him kissing her. he came closed to her lips whisper "MAY I" she nodded in positive and he had a laughter. he kissed it passionately several time.
both thinking as if dreaming
Sun rahi hoon sudh budh khoke koi main kahani
Poori kahani hai kya kise hai pata
Main to kisiki hoke yeh bhi na jaani
Ruth hai ye do pal ki ya rehgi sada
BABY:"uff i am so shy i better sleep
The night passed like that.
to be cont if all will like and comment . there must be mistake I snatch pc from my sibling sorry for error I will fix it sorry do comment

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HAPPY FRIEND SHIP DAY
LOVE YOU ALL
Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi naddiya,

have been reading ur posts but never got a chance to comment honey. sorry about that!

lovely update and the last one rocked.....!!!! smoking hawwwwttttttttt.... and i'm off to the LALALALALALALLAALALAL land of maneet..........😳.....

omg omg omg om g they confessed and kissed.....wow owoow.....too much of hotness and fireworks to take for an update....

wonderful job ....👏

soumya
Edited by pickle6586 - 15 years ago

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