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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Zahra u wrote An Os n u didnt pmed me

Very bad jana
Cuming to OS
Loved it
It was superb
Maan was too protective towards Geet loved him for that
Looks lik Geet heard his feelings tabhi she kissed him😉

Sorry Afsha! It was ma first and all...😳
I know, i'm hoping something like that will happen but we never know! 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: -AsMa04

*wheww* finally managed some time to squeeze my cutie in:
first of all DAAYUUUUUMMM GIRLLL! i loved the whole rain concept geet all soaked up her cloths clining to her fit body *winkk* .... ohh hot dayumm maan singh khurana about to kiss? LOL i would love to see that dayy .. aww i loved the whole geet kissing maan's cheek SO DARN ADORABLE
ahaaa girl dw i suck with the whole hindi/urdu crap too BUT i loved it contuinee soon babes😊

Me, your cutie??? aww shucks 😳😆
😃😃 Thank you Asma!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: cooldude10

OMG. this OS is amazing! i LOVED LOVED LOVED every part of it!

😃😃 Thank you! 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Sarahwahid

OMG zee😍😍

That was BRILLIANT,AMAZING....
Luvd it
tooooooo goooooddd
Awesome jani🤗🤗
Do write a ff😳bt try to use sum hindi lol😃

Thanks Sarah! 🤗
Lol, an FF??? I've only just finished my second oneshot FF, you'll have to wait. Sorry hun.😃
Hindi?😕 Hai rabba, I'll try but don't expect anything major! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Zee89-Maneetfan

Thanks Sarah! 🤗
Lol, an FF??? I've only just finished my second oneshot FF, you'll have to wait. Sorry hun.😃
Hindi?😕 Hai rabba, I'll try but don't expect anything major! 😳

No prob jani will wait😆and do pm me wen u post it warnaaaa...........😈😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
Zeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! 🤗
Woah someone throw a bucket of water on me!
That was.......AMAZING! 👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️
I had no idea ur such a beautiful writer ZeeZee! 😛 And ur saying it's ur first time...?! 😲
Totally loved it! Maan's emotions and his passion was so nicely portrayed! 👍🏼
Oooooh Geet's little peck on the cheek...i hope we get to see something like that for real! 😳
Great work hun! Going to read ur other OS now 😃
Edited by ..-..RoKa.._.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
dat was amzinggg one shot
loved it!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
wow..very nice..zahra.. very near to kiss. *** on my dream land.. he heheh
plz pm me when update luv yes /// hugsss
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
updated my comment on pg6 zee 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50

Yaar that was so purely amazing 👏😃😳

u are such a fantastic writer that it was a pleasure to read 👏
Loved the concept and the story 😳
Very romantic ji
do write more 👏
love,
Humz 🤗
Edited by sonu4ever - 15 years ago

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