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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
Rinki, nice one... I loved how Maan stood behind Geet. That was super cute...

I read your writings elsewhere. You should write more on Maaneet.

Meera: not wanting to get attached to another show? honey, you should. maan and geet are mesmerising..

Love,
Ash
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mineeeee *preens* to be edited in 6 ish hours 😳
yeahhh, 6 hours. 😆
so it's been like 14 hours *erm* but you still love me and my stalking skills do you not? 😉 😎
yay, you've graced us with your adorable presence. :p oh i always do dudette
So you're making me like Maan with all the scenes/mixes you're making me see *shakes head* do you WANT me to love another show? If you do *hmph* too bad 😛 I shall stay happy in hopefully reading more OS's? 😛😉 *hint hinttt*
HAH! i knew it. ☺️ i mean who wouldn't like him? 😍 i DO! u have to like another show, i need my old spamming partners, no one is here. :( yea yea, hint hint ki lagi. ill write later. :p
The whole describing the way Geet left his office, with her payals, and dupatta, perfectoo! 😃 I wish I could describe things half as good as you *pouts* boo youuu👎🏼 🤣 (Can you tell I've just always wanted to use that? 😛 *erm* and dude Maan saying how much like a scene from a movie it is 😆 had me laughing, he seems like an awesome characterrr 😃
i wanna do that to -ahem-ahem- =)) he likes Indian clothing so makes it easier for me. 🤣 oh pish posh, you write amazingly. (i can tell, you creep) i know, i just wanna have a dude actually say that while doing a scene on TV! 🤣
The songgg ☺️ I loves it, can you tell? 😛 But dudeee the smoldering gazeee, had me fanning myself 😳 and teeehee, I love how neither one of them wanted to move, she didn't wanna go and he didn't wanna let her go 😛 It was like giggle-worthy (yesh it's something I'd say 😊)
Duuuude, i was listening to it when i started writing. So i added in the lyrics. 😆 aye hayeee, don't forget aamir/draco now. 😆 yes, true love kinda. 🤣 and you would. *nod*
Ahh so Dev's in here too? *ahem* He's the jerk guy right? I lovee lovee the way you described the whole bit with Dev and Geet recognizing each other 😲 The whole eye widening and all was perfectly written! 😃
He has to be! 🤣 i wanted to write about maan kicking his butt soooo badly man, but i was sleepy. 🤣 so i just left it out. ahem. i got Dadi to slap him thou! And yes, he's the jerk. *nod* And thankkkkk youuuuu meri jaan. 😆 im glad you liked it.
Eeee but my fav part so far was the way you described Maan reacting to Dev's tone of voice and how he's standing like directly behind Geet *swoons* sounded damn smexyy 😳 Stupid Dev *mutters* He kinda annoys me already *hmph* And seriously poor Geet having to relieve all those horrible horrible memories 😔
Hayee, i wud love to have him display that reaction for me 🤣 aye haye, you're swooning for him! 😆 mission accomplished. He should. He's an idiot. HMPH. Ah yeah. I felt evil for a while. :p
She fainted! 😲 😲 Poor Geet, but oohhh Maan for picking her up all bridal style *giggles* Why am I reading this and giggling *shakes head* shame on you Rubiii 😛 Stupid Dev *glares*
Duh. 🤣 And cus you're a creepy lover of romance. 😎 Thanks. ☺️ and yes, stupid stupid dev.
whoa. idk if that's the best way to find out she's pregnanttt *winces* ab kya hogaaa? Dudeee, I think that part of her telling everything to Maan and him answering her questions in detail without her actually saying it, showed their connection even more, and that made it moreee 😃
Welll...i wanted drama. 🤣 So shh, deal with it. Ab kya hoga matlab? *sniffs* YAY. Made it more smiley? Ew. 😆
*sighs* Okay so honestly maybe it's just old memories blooding back or something *ahem* but the whole Maan beating up that...that....(I can't say the word *grins*) Totally reminded me of Prem with Manmeet *ahem* 😳 I know it's strange, but it did, all protective and *giggles* 😳 😃 Anyways back to the current story at hand *puts on glasses*
I knew it! I knew you would drag Prem in this. *mutters* surprisingly Maan does remind me slightly of Prem, just more brooding instead of romantic. 😆 Ahem, yes.
Your end however *glares* I've got some problems with. why was it not all geet and maan being in his farmhousey place together, not lovey dovey but still *giggles* would've made it all 😳😳 Okay so you know I'm kidding 😃 I loved it and it's been so long since you've written a one shottt and actually posted it! 😃
Oh keep glaring, i dont care. *nose in air* CUUUZ! i was tired. 🤣 I might do a sequel someday, dare me to? 😆 Oh as if you already didn't read what i write and don't post. 🥱
rubi, i loveddd itt 😳 and i'm super super glad you wrote after a long long timmmee 😃
meeee, im glad. ☺️ hehe, wrote on here after a long long tiiiiimme.
Love you,
Love you too!
Mee
Rubiii

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Posted: 15 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: ash08

Rinki, nice one... I loved how Maan stood behind Geet. That was super cute...
Thank you Ash! Hehe, glad you liked that. :)
I read your writings elsewhere. You should write more on Maaneet.
Oh have you? It's either Kis Desh forum or in the FF forum. I shall try my best to write more on them. :) I'm actually thinking about starting a full-fledged fic. But we'll see.
Meera: not wanting to get attached to another show? honey, you should. maan and geet are mesmerising..
Well said. 😆
Love,
Ash
Rinki

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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

mineeeee *preens* to be edited in 6 ish hours 😳
yeahhh, 6 hours. 😆
It would've been if I had come straight home *hmph*
so it's been like 14 hours *erm* but you still love me and my stalking skills do you not? 😉 😎
yay, you've graced us with your adorable presence. :p oh i always do dudette
My presence? Do you await it so adorably every time? 😛 and damn right you shud
So you're making me like Maan with all the scenes/mixes you're making me see *shakes head* do you WANT me to love another show? If you do *hmph* too bad 😛 I shall stay happy in hopefully reading more OS's? 😛😉 *hint hinttt*
HAH! i knew it. ☺️ i mean who wouldn't like him? 😍 i DO! u have to like another show, i need my old spamming partners, no one is here. :( yea yea, hint hint ki lagi. ill write later. :p
meeee that's whooo 😲 and aww *pats head* you writes more, I'll feel like watching more 😉
The whole describing the way Geet left his office, with her payals, and dupatta, perfectoo! 😃 I wish I could describe things half as good as you *pouts* boo youuu👎🏼 🤣 (Can you tell I've just always wanted to use that? 😛 *erm* and dude Maan saying how much like a scene from a movie it is 😆 had me laughing, he seems like an awesome characterrr 😃
i wanna do that to -ahem-ahem- =)) he likes Indian clothing so makes it easier for me. 🤣 oh pish posh, you write amazingly. (i can tell, you creep) i know, i just wanna have a dude actually say that while doing a scene on TV! 🤣
how did I know you were gonna say that?! 🤣 I think that's cuteeeeeee thoo ❤️ and pish post...😳 srsly? *ahem* and yeshh I'm awesome 😛
The songgg ☺️ I loves it, can you tell? 😛 But dudeee the smoldering gazeee, had me fanning myself 😳 and teeehee, I love how neither one of them wanted to move, she didn't wanna go and he didn't wanna let her go 😛 It was like giggle-worthy (yesh it's something I'd say 😊)
Duuuude, i was listening to it when i started writing. So i added in the lyrics. 😆 aye hayeee, don't forget aamir/draco now. 😆 yes, true love kinda. 🤣 and you would. *nod*
Smart smartt *pats head* And shushh, I don't forget any lovers ☺️ course I wuddd😎😈
Ahh so Dev's in here too? *ahem* He's the jerk guy right? I lovee lovee the way you described the whole bit with Dev and Geet recognizing each other 😲 The whole eye widening and all was perfectly written! 😃
He has to be! 🤣 i wanted to write about maan kicking his butt soooo badly man, but i was sleepy. 🤣 so i just left it out. ahem. i got Dadi to slap him thou! And yes, he's the jerk. *nod* And thankkkkk youuuuu meri jaan. 😆 im glad you liked it.
gee, I wonder why you was sleepy? nvm 😲 I knoww *rolls eyes* and you're welcomeeeess
Eeee but my fav part so far was the way you described Maan reacting to Dev's tone of voice and how he's standing like directly behind Geet *swoons* sounded damn smexyy 😳 Stupid Dev *mutters* He kinda annoys me already *hmph* And seriously poor Geet having to relieve all those horrible horrible memories 😔
Hayee, i wud love to have him display that reaction for me 🤣 aye haye, you're swooning for him! 😆 mission accomplished. He should. He's an idiot. HMPH. Ah yeah. I felt evil for a while. :p
aayee haayee *nudges* aachaa? And I'm not swooning for him *hmph* the way you wrote ittt, and you felt evil? Isn't you already? 😛 😈
She fainted! 😲 😲 Poor Geet, but oohhh Maan for picking her up all bridal style *giggles* Why am I reading this and giggling *shakes head* shame on you Rubiii 😛 Stupid Dev *glares*
Duh. 🤣 And cus you're a creepy lover of romance. 😎 Thanks. ☺️ and yes, stupid stupid dev.
you're welcome? *rolls eyes*
whoa. idk if that's the best way to find out she's pregnanttt *winces* ab kya hogaaa? Dudeee, I think that part of her telling everything to Maan and him answering her questions in detail without her actually saying it, showed their connection even more, and that made it moreee 😃
Welll...i wanted drama. 🤣 So shh, deal with it. Ab kya hoga matlab? *sniffs* YAY. Made it more smiley? Ew. 😆
I am dealing with itt *sniffs* day in and day outtt 😆 oh ew you *rolls eyes*
*sighs* Okay so honestly maybe it's just old memories blooding back or something *ahem* but the whole Maan beating up that...that....(I can't say the word *grins*) Totally reminded me of Prem with Manmeet *ahem* 😳 I know it's strange, but it did, all protective and *giggles* 😳 😃 Anyways back to the current story at hand *puts on glasses*
I knew it! I knew you would drag Prem in this. *mutters* surprisingly Maan does remind me slightly of Prem, just more brooding instead of romantic. 😆 Ahem, yes.
Must we go thru this? 😛 You know me, and you knowww that Maan's like Prem, and brooding's hoxxier *grins* Not that I'm falling for him
Your end however *glares* I've got some problems with. why was it not all geet and maan being in his farmhousey place together, not lovey dovey but still *giggles* would've made it all 😳😳 Okay so you know I'm kidding 😃 I loved it and it's been so long since you've written a one shottt and actually posted it! 😃
Oh keep glaring, i dont care. *nose in air* CUUUZ! i was tired. 🤣 I might do a sequel someday, dare me to? 😆 Oh as if you already didn't read what i write and don't post. 🥱
oh? 😲 you don't care? fine then. And pshtt I wonder whyyyy 😲 and yesh I dare you to write a sequelll 😃 Better yet a FF 😃 And yeah yeahhh *waves hand*
rubi, i loveddd itt 😳 and i'm super super glad you wrote after a long long timmmee 😃
meeee, im glad. ☺️ hehe, wrote on here after a long long tiiiiimme.
wooootttt you're the peanut to my butter, you're the fruit to my loops and the milk to my cocoa puffs ☺️ 😆 (can you tell what I'm listening to🤣)
Love you,
Love you too!
Mee
Rubiii

@Ash: I'll check it out, but idkk 😆 I get so disappointed watching shows now 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Rinki, it was in the Kis Desh forum..... Full fledged ff - yippee...... Good luck and keep me posted when you write more 😃

Love,
Ash
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: indiandoll89



It would've been if I had come straight home *hmph*
yes yes, excuses excuses. Spare me oh great one. 😆
My presence? Do you await it so adorably every time? 😛 and damn right you shud
I don't do adorable. but i do wait. 😉 i do. :p
meeee that's whooo 😲 and aww *pats head* you writes more, I'll feel like watching more 😉
nooo ways! and acha? i taught u how to blackmail and ur using it on me? sharam kar meri maa. 😆
how did I know you were gonna say that?! 🤣 I think that's cuteeeeeee thoo ❤️ and pish post...😳 srsly? *ahem* and yeshh I'm awesome 😛
cus u know me. ☺️ oh shush, we dont mention it ever again. 😆 yes, srsly. and uh huhhh.
Smart smartt *pats head* And shushh, I don't forget any lovers ☺️ course I wuddd😎😈
Yes i am. and thats why dray's here whining abt u? 😲 oh calm down. 😆
gee, I wonder why you was sleepy? nvm 😲 I knoww *rolls eyes* and you're welcomeeeess
cus i was sleepy. duh.
aayee haayee *nudges* aachaa? And I'm not swooning for him *hmph* the way you wrote ittt, and you felt evil? Isn't you already? 😛 😈
control. 😆 u sooo are. and yea yea. i am and i feel it too. :D
you're welcome? *rolls eyes*
just dont use the ? and roll ur eyes next time. 😆 and ill feel its from the heart. 😉
I am dealing with itt *sniffs* day in and day outtt 😆 oh ew you *rolls eyes*
Psh, u love it. and oh that breaks my heart *clenches fist to chest*
Must we go thru this? 😛 You know me, and you knowww that Maan's like Prem, and brooding's hoxxier *grins* Not that I'm falling for him
Yes yes, i know you and i know that too. :p Yes it is, *SIGH* yet darlin, yet. 😆
oh? 😲 you don't care? fine then. And pshtt I wonder whyyyy 😲 and yesh I dare you to write a sequelll 😃 Better yet a FF 😃 And yeah yeahhh *waves hand*
I do yet i dont. 😲 Me too! and You dare me? Psh. We'll see. Msn. 😆
wooootttt you're the peanut to my butter, you're the fruit to my loops and the milk to my cocoa puffs ☺️ 😆 (can you tell what I'm listening to🤣)
......*sighs* no comment. 😆

@Ash: I'll check it out, but idkk 😆 I get so disappointed watching shows now 😛

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Posted: 15 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: ash08


Rinki, it was in the Kis Desh forum..... Full fledged ff - yippee...... Good luck and keep me posted when you write more 😃
Ah was it? 😆 And yes, we'll see if i do go with it. Need to think of the plot first, already have an idea in mind but it needs to be analyzed first. I'll ask Meera soon what she thinks abt it. :P I shall try to remember. 😆 I'm forgetful so idk. 🥱 I'll post it here thou, so if u see me doing that, come there. 😆
Love,
Ash
Rinki

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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
oh my god your story is great man
i love it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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woman, you need to write more. especially more on them. can I expect a full-fledged FF on them soon? and some form of contact between you and me? :P

as always. reserved.

love you!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
i really think you should continue this and make it a fan-fiction
it will be great
i am sure you can bring the story forward
i am looking forward to your continuation
thanks

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