Short Story-Take my breath away-Vik&Nags!Upd 7/26 - Page 50

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

Tum humri haal par haans rahi ho..Ee Dadimaa ne toh humri taien taien phis kar di...Kaheen kuch dair mein gatewa se out na kar dein! (typical bihari... don't ask me to go more rustic than this...I simply don't know how to! Actually I've never spoken this way... I've heard it, but I feel weird speaking like this!!!)...Maan ko bhi Bihari seekhni hogi!

Jab waqt milega tab seekha dena...waise kuch daear ke liye to woh tume kaafi busy rakega....Maan ne tume kaafi kuck sikhaana hain....know what I mean???😉😲😉

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

Tum humri haal par haans rahi ho..Ee Dadimaa ne toh humri taien taien phis kar di...Kaheen kuch dair mein gatewa se out na kar dein! (typical bihari... don't ask me to go more rustic than this...I simply don't know how to! Actually I've never spoken this way... I've heard it, but I feel weird speaking like this!!!)...Maan ko bhi Bihari seekhni hogi!

tum hamari barabari nahi kar sakat ho...na...

hum to bihari hi hai..haan...

my bro was in nagpur and had lot of bihari friends and he speaks absolutely wow..bihari...i am not good at the imitating accents part...

oye girls seriously do you see my writing style has become a bit different from earlier?

do you guys like this? more description of scenarios around the people...mera focus to nahi hatt raha kahin..

pls..feedback do na..! biting my nails here..

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Jab waqt milega tab seekha dena...waise kuch daear ke liye to woh tume kaafi busy rakega....Maan ne tume kaafi kuck sikhaana hain....know what I mean???😉😲😉

Haan Punjabi bhi seekhni hai ab, kyunki Dadimaa toh Punjabi mein hi baat kareingi! Chal Abs Hindi, English, French, Maithili ke saath ab Punjabi bhi add kar le apni resume par! Pentalingual!

Originally posted by: rushtrip

oye girls seriously do you see my writing style has become a bit different from earlier?

do you guys like this? more description of scenarios around the people...mera focus to nahi hatt raha kahin..

pls..feedback do na..! biting my nails here..

Vru....we love the writing style...I personally love the added details...helps create a more RICH background.....The devil is in the details.....no??

Originally posted by: rushtrip

ab abs busy hogi office mein...boss ne pakar li hogi washroom mein jaa kar..IF pe bhatakte hue...

Seriously yaar, yeh boss log bhi na! kya kahein! Lucky you, tumhara boss Jijajee hain. Tumhe boss ko patane mein koi problem nahin! Bas ek wink karo, aur boss flat!😆

Originally posted by: rushtrip

oye girls seriously do you see my writing style has become a bit different from earlier?

do you guys like this? more description of scenarios around the people...mera focus to nahi hatt raha kahin..

pls..feedback do na..! biting my nails here..

Don't fill your stomach with your nails 😆. Yes, I did notice you're describing the locations, and what teh characters are wearing....It's good as it helps us visualize the events/incidents (and for me to hyperventilate! I always panic really quick!).😃😳
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Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

Tum humri haal par haans rahi ho..Ee Dadimaa ne toh humri taien taien phis kar di...Kaheen kuch dair mein gatewa se out na kar dein! (typical bihari... don't ask me to go more rustic than this...I simply don't know how to! Actually I've never spoken this way... I've heard it, but I feel weird speaking like this!!!)...Maan ko bhi Bihari seekhni hogi!

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Vru....we love the writing style...I personally love the added details...helps create a more RICH background.....The devil is in the details.....no??

Kaunsi details ki baat kar rahi ho **Abs coughing like mad***🤣

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly

Seriously yaar, yeh boss log bhi na! kya kahein! Lucky you, tumhara boss Jijajee hain. Tumhe boss ko patane mein koi problem nahin! Bas ek wink karo, aur boss flat!😆

Haan vaaki Vrushali....you have it good...hum to apne BOSS ko aankh nahi mar sakte na...!!😕