I thought maybe I will write another fan fiction. I am not sure how long it will be yet, but i am leaning towards a 10-12 chapter fic. Having said that I dont know if anyone would want to read it. So to try this out I am posting a little prologue, just to give you guys a feel for the story, and see if you would like me continue. If the response is good then I will continue it.
And just as a precation: I am not a good writer. So if you dont like it, then please do tell me, I promise I will not get angry. If you do end up liking it, then post a comment or like the post, or PM me, whatever you like . It always helps if people appreciate your work! It is motivation to do better for me. Oh and I haven't thought of a title yet so this is untitled. So here we go
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Prologue
After 5 years the Chaturvedi family would finally be complete. Their 2 sons were coming back and to celebrate their arrival the entire house was being decorated.
The family was overjoyed at the prospect of seeing Pulkit and Sagar. Niranjan had decided to send his two sons abroad 12 years ago, to educate them.
Delectable feast was being prepared in the kitchen and Madhvi in particular was preparing all the food herself. "Madhvi" called Amma ji. "Ji Ammaji?". "Bahu, make sure that the kheer doesn't contain too much sugar, otherwise that girl will create a huge scene ". "Ji Ammaji I will be careful" Madhvi replied with a smile on her face.
She walked towards the kitchen, and as she was walking a voice caused her to stop dead in her tracks. She stood still. She had waited years and years to hear that voice. "Sagar" she said. " Mummy" .Madhvi turned around and saw her son Sagar standing in front of her. Her eyes glistened with tears as she took in his face. He had grown up so much. Memories of Sagar's first steps flashed through her mind. "Mummy" said Sagar. "How are you?" . "Sagar you are here . You don't know, how many years I have waited for this moment". Sagar lovingly hugged his mother.
"Ma" called another voice. Madhvi broke the hug, and saw her older son Pulkit standing behind Sagar. " Oh so all the affection is only reserved for Sagar, nothing for me then? " said Pulkit jokingly. " Aww, come here" Madhvi said, as she pulled him into a endearing hug.
The trio of mother and sons then walked towards the dining area, where Pulkit and Sagar were treated to exquisite food. After the family was done eating, Sagar took his mother to a side and asked " Ma, where is she?" " You are going to have to look very hard. Her anger hasn't boiled down yet" replied Madhvi
In another room, Gangaa was seated on her bed with a stern expression on her face. Remembering those moments filled her with anger and disappointment. She heard a knock on the door and a voice calling her name "Gangaa". She recognized it, in an instant and settled on the decision that she would not open door. She had decided that she would never go back to being the old Gangaa and she wasn't about to let her resolve melt by inviting the owner of the voice into her life again.
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So there you have it guys. Do you guys want me to continue or should I let it be?
The floor is open for you to advise, criticize, suggest, appreciate,😊 or throw tomatoes at me 😆
Pati Patni Aur Panga
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