Armaan Ridzz 3rd part update,3rd pg - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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nce updte
soo there married wundr wot happnd
lked da very first meetin
luv at first sight eh lol really nce
updte soon plzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey friends, last week i started a new fanfic U me aur Hum, and it is based on armaan and ridhima http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=997443 of Dil mil gaye but it has no resemblance to the earlier story..... and here is the recap of part 1 which i have posted one week ago

Recap of earlier post

Arman and Ridhima got married some years ago, and in between this years they have got a huge fight due to which ridhima recently left armaan and is living with her parents... now armaan has realised his mistake and want her to come back in his life, as this is a background story so all these things are not written yet, but the present is that Ridhima forgive armaan and she wants to meet him, armaan asked her to come at the resturant where he will be waiting for her, Armaan was waiting for her in the resturant when Atul (Armaan 's friend) calls him, And from here the story now goes in the background... where armaan was telling atul as how he and Ridhima met for the first time in the cinema hall ........ the link i have provided above is of first part, when u will read it u will understand the 2 part of this fanfic

thanx i hope u enjoy this part

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The story will continuously come in the present and go back in the background as it is important because a lot of things are going to happen in the future plus i also have to show what happend in the past.......................................................

now the story is in the present

Armaan was waiting for Ridhima in the resturant and was getting restless

Armaan says to himself -- Ridhima where are u... come soon yaar,

Scene shifts to Ridhima -- She comes out of the Shopping mall and then she looks at the watch and says Ohhh God!! its too late now Armaan must be waiting for me, ek kaam karti hoon, use ek phone kar deti hoon, bichara tab se wait kar raha hoga..

Armaan 's phone rings and he gets excited when to see her number and says HELLO!! RIDZZ, where r u... i am waiting here for u in the resturant for an hour now .... kahaan ho tum???

Ridhima - SORRY BABA SORRY... actually i was doing some shopping for u, now within 30 minitues i will be there in front of u... BILKUL pizza hut waalon ki tarah...

Armaan giggles and says - stop doing all this masti and reach soon, otherwise i will find another chick...

Ridhima moving towards her car says OHH really.... thik hai dhoondh lo apne liye koi aur ????? EVEN.. i have a better option than you, YOU REMEMBER!!! Sidharth "and she smiles"

Arman smiles and says - ok now Ridhima cut this conversation and reach here soon .. you know na, i am missing u soooooo much...

Ridhima giggles and says - ok hubby i am coming " and she cuts the call and then she notices that her mobile's battery has finished, she was trying to operate it while driving and suddenly a truck comes in front of her car and Ridhima 's car bumps off to the truck and turns upside down it was all blood near her car and then a lot of people gathers her car and later police also comes "

here its 3 hours now, armaan says HADD HOTI HAI LATE HONE KI... pata nahi kahaan reh gayi yeh... he picks up his mobile and says AB TO MAIN BHI PHONE NAHI KARUNGA.. let her call me now

Scene again goes to the accident place, The ambulance comes and they take her out of the car, her face was covered with blood all over, they put a oxgyen mask on her face and take her inside the ambulance and rushed towards the hospital,

now its 8 pm at night .... Armaan was waiting that ridhima will call her....but she didnt call him... and armaan also tries her phone several times but her phone was not reachable Armaan was sitting in the living room of his house and thinking that why she didnt come to meet him, and suddenly something strikes his mind and that was she called her and said that she will be there 30 minutes later and still didnt come.... armaan was scared and was thinking that is she fine or not, and when he cant wait for her call he gets up and takes his car keys and rushes towards Ridhima 's home....

Armaan reaches Ridhima 's house and knocks the door, her father opens the door

Ridhima's father - Aree armaan beta tum ??? come ... come inside...

Armaan - thank you uncle,

Seeing armaan tensed, her father asks What happened armaan, why are u looking so tensed is there any problem my son?

Armaan - uncle, did ridhima came here ??

Ridhima's father - no son.. she didnt came, she said that after shopping she will go to meet u in the resturant and i was thinking that u both were together

Armaan - No uncle, " armaan says it in a very tensed voice" i dont know where she is??? she told me that she is coming at the resturant in 30 miniutes but i was left waiting for 3 hours and then i thought to leave as maybe she will not come, i thought she changed her mind, i dont want to live with me any more... i came here to make her understand that lets not break this marriage as i am very much in love with her, but now as u r saying that she is not here.... i have no idea that where she has gone...

Ridhima's mother and Sister also come out from their rooms and gets surprised to see armaan..

Ridhima 's mother - arree armaan... aao beta.. baitho, aur ridhima kahaan hai...

Ridhima 's sister - kya hua armaan, why r u so tensed...

Armaan - Anjali kyaa ridhima ki koi Phone diary hai yaahan .....

Anjali - haan hai.... main abhi lati hoon.... and then she brings the dairy but what are u going to do with this....

Armaan- Anjali, ridhima kahin chali gayi hai, i dont know where she is ( he says in a voice of frustration, he then takes the dairy from Anjali and takes out his mobile and starts calling all her friends)

then one hour later.... all were sitting in the living room and were looking at armaan who was making a call to each and every person to whom ridhima can go, and at last he calls Atul

Atul - Hello!! armaan

Armaan - hello atul, haan yaar... kya tu abhi ridhima ke ghar aa sakta hai..

Atul - WHY!! what happened

Armaan then tells him the whole matter

Atul - dont worry main abhi aa raha hoon

after a while he reaches there he enters and says namaste to ridhima 's parents Atul then sits beside Armaan

Atul - haan armaan ab bata, ridhima ka kuch pata chala

Armaan was quite and looking on the ground with a tensed face and instead him muskaan replies

Anjali - nahi... we are unable to find her,.. pata nahi kahaan chali gayi... she never got so late (muskaan says with a heavy heart)

Armaan - Atul i am really scared.... itna main kabhi nahi dara, I dont know where she has gone,

Atul - did u called her friends??

Armaan - yes,

Atul - what did they say?

Armaan - she didnt met her friends for a long while .....

and then Ridhima 's mother says to her Ridhima 's father

mujhe lagta hai hume police mein report likhwa deni chahiye.....(Ridhima 's mother says while crying)GOD KNOWS!!! in which condition is my daughter suffering.... Armaan and Atul looks at her, and muskaan tries to calm her down and says

Anjali - Armaan.. both of u go to the police station and lodge a complain,

Armaan- HAVE U GONE MAD OR WHAT!!! (he shouts, and every1 looks at her and then atul tries to calm him and armaan says to atul)

Armaan- no, why she is asking me to go to police station.... ( he then says to muskaan)

look Anjali i know u love her a lot, but stop thinking all this rubbish things... KUCH NAHI HUA USE.. do u get it... and aunty plsss.. stop crying, she is all right nothing can happen to my ridhima... and then he gets up says to Atul

Atul get up we have to find her NOW!! and atul says ok but where do we search for her???

Armaan - aree u come naa, i will tell u on the way..

while sitting in the car armaan says to atul

Armaan - Atul when she last call me she said that she is shopping for me in shopping mall, so we have to go there and ask for her from the shop keepers,

Atul - its ok... but Armaan its already 10:30 and within half an hour the mall will get closed...

Armaan - no atul we have to reach there, then armaan takes out his mobile and calls muskaan

Anjali - HELLO!! ARMAAN, bolo

Arman :- anjali get me some pictures of ridhima i need them to find her..

Anjali rushed to her room and get the pictures then she go downstairs and give the pictures to armaan and says

Anjali - Armaan i hope u find her soon ....

Armaan 's eyes fills with tears and he says

ok...

Atul - ok anjali... take care of aunty, we are going now bye

Anjali - bye

While driving Armaan remembers the time 4 years ago when he was sitting in his bedroom and was thinking his first meeting with Armaan and Atul comes from his back and pours the glass of water on his face...

Story in the Past now

As Atul pours water on his face, armaan suddenly comes out of his thoughts and sees Atul laughing at him loudly,

and then armaan says

abe pagal hai kyaa..... GADHE main hi mila tha iss bin badal barsaat ke liye.....

Atul tries to control himself from laughing and says

mujhe pata hai tu iss waqt kyaa soch raha ....

Armaan :- accha .... to bata kya soch raha hoon??

Atul - if i am not wrong then u r thinking about that same girl to whom we met yesterday...

and to this armaan smiles and says

You r right.. i was thinking about her,

Atul smiles and says do u know who she is ???

armaan says.... who???

Atul - her father works with your dad, he looks to the account of your dad 's business..

Armaan - WHAT??? arman says with lot of excitement

Atul - yes ....

Armaan - but how do you know this ???

Atul - well... just now she came here to give a file to your dad..... as today her father 's health is not good so she came.

Armaan - and whats her name ???

Atul - sorry i dont know that... but why dont u ask it from ur dad ?? i am sure he will tell you

and atul burst out laughing

Armaan smiles and says haan haan has le has le.... you very well know that dad is sooooo strict...

Atul - yeah right... n thats why u have no future with that pretty woman.. so better forget her and look for a girl who match upto ur dad 's standards....

Armaan looks at Atul and says

Armaan - i dont know Atul, but i find her different from other girls, the way she smiles its so innocent, you know something, this is the first time i have ever thought about a girl so much...

Atul - yeah you r right.. i can see that... n i hope ur dad also sees this...

Armaan - Atul now i am going to kill u... and he runs after him......

Scene again comes back in the present, where armaan was driving the car, and suddenly a man comes in front of the car and Atul shakes armaan to put the breaks fast

after putting the breaks

Atul - R U OUT OF YOUR MIND ARMAAN ,...... kyaa kar raha hai yaar.. mar jaata abhi vo

Armaan 's breaks down into tears and says

samjh mein nahi aaraha kyaa karoon kahaan dhundun use...

Atul - armaan plss stop crying... hum jaa rahe hai use dhund nei .... plss dont cry.. do one thing i dont think right now u r in state of mind to drive.. you come here and let me drive....

and then armaan do as he say and then they reaches the shopping mall, when the shop keepers were closing their shops....

Armaan goes restlessly to a shop keeper with ridhima 's picture and asks

aree bhaisaab... aap ne iss larki ko yaahan dekha hai

Shop keeper without even seeing her picture no i havent seen her

Armaan gets more impatient and shouts at the man

AREE AAP DEKH HI NAHI RAHE... AUR BINA DEKHE KEH RAHE HAI NAHI DEKHA....

Shop keeper also shouts....

NAHI DEKHA ... BOL KYA KAR LEGA......

and then atul tries to handle the situation

armaan plss cool down, we r not here to fight... we have to find her aur bhaisaab maaf kijiyega abhi vo zara pareshaan hai... sorry haan...

Shop keeper - haan leke jaao isko

then atul takes armaan with him to other shops and shows her picture and asks about her, and one of them says that he has seen her

Armaan gets a little relaxed and says

where have u seen her??

Shopkeeper 2 - well she came to our shop to buy some men 's T-shirts

and then armaan remembers when Ridhima calls him in the evening and says that she has done some shopping for him,

Armaan - can u tell me where she has gone....?????

Shopkeeper 2 - no i am sorry sir... so many people come here, and how do we know that where she has gone...

Armaan - i am sorry ...anyways thank you

Shopkeeper 2 - its ok.....

armaan says to atul

Chal atul... yahaan se jitna pata karna tha utna kar chuke hai.... chal yaahan se lets go now

this part ends here.... friends let me know you liked this part or not through ur comments.....

Edited by krishnamm2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey it ws grt yaar realy truly lvd it 2 d core yaar it ws jst fantastic update yaar armaan ws sooooooo happpppppppy tht nw thy wll be togthr nd she ws also nd omg her acciidnt took place omg yaar nd ar ws soo frustratd nd thn he thought wht she said nd thn he ws sooooo tensd yaar omg yaar er whle family nd he ws cryng sooooo mch yaar plzzzzzzzz dnt do ths yaar ar ko milwado uski ridz se poor paagal ho gaya hai or udhar ridz om i hope she wll be fne..........
cont soooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing 2 parts sweety
tooooooooo goood
mindblowing
just loveeeeeeeeee the concept
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really a nice ⭐️and touching one😳😳😭 please continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm 😳

"Love is not about finding the right person, but creating a right relationship. It's not about how much love you have in the beginning but how much love you build till the end."
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Posted: 17 years ago
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cheers for the pm.... wow sounds interresting 👏
Welcome to IF
Love Kat😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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a different story n different charachters..
luvd d way u said.. 2222222222222222222222222222222 guddddddddddddd n mindblowinggggggggggg
thnxx 4 d pm.. update soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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tht was gr8. continue sooN!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg dat was such a great updte
bt pooor ridz n armi omg
wots gna happen so much tension im the air lol
seriously greta updte
continue sooon
luv niz x
n thx 4 da pm
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice update!!
do continue soon

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