'Just Friends?'{DMG}Part 5 updt-Pg 48- 09/08 - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: sheenu

😊Hey kanu... itz just fantastic !!!!!!!!!!! 👏

omg... briliiant concept... n v. much identical 2 my real lyf..😳😳.

I feel d charactersketch is sooooo identical 2 me😳😃.. n i m sure i'll definately get emotionaly attached to ur briliant ff...😃

plzz cont soon... w8n eagerly to know my future.. amm.. may be.. wat say😉

ALL D VERY BEST !!! 😃

luv u

chandni😊

Ohho di!..😳😆..Tell me from which character its similiar too!😉😳..I'll make it the most important character then!😆😆..Thanks!😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

hey kanu,d intro is very interesting......
m sure dis FF ll be as gud as ur other one....
ALL D BEST 4 it...

continue soon...

luv
*vini*

Thanks Vini !😳...

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Posted: 17 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: ArmiandRidz4eva

hey, nice concept will surely be looking forward to reading it, congrats on starting a new one

Sania 😳

Thank u Sania!😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: shalika

wow nice ff
plzzzzzz continue soon and thanks for d pm

Thanks Shalika!😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#75

Ok Guys!..I am at last continuing😆!..Bascially its an intro😳!... This will the present😉.. Then the story will go into the flashback!.. The flashback will be the main story!.😳😉.I hope it makes sense bcoz i haven't still decided what i'll plan for the future!😆..I was very scared to post this part!.😕😆.I have read it nearly 30 times before posting!😆😆..Actually its not my type!😆😉😳..& definately not close to my first FF😆😆!

I also wanted to say 'I am just 13'😳....I am sure many of u r elder to me😃!...So plzz don't call me di!.😳😆😆.lolzz!

This is a total confusing intro!..If any problems or something, PM me or just mention it in ur comment😃😳..I am sure this will make u very happy!😉😆

Intro

"I HATE U ARMAAN"...she shouted...she knew she didn't meant what she said but this was the only thing which came on her mind..

"Basket plzz meri baat suno"...he said moving close to her...he didn't wanted to tell her what he felt..he was scared...

"NAHI!..HAMESHA MAIN HI KYUN TUMHARI SUNO??..AAJ MAIN KAHUNGI AUR TUM SUNOGE!"...she said moving backwards away from him towards the road..

"Basket plzz...Tum yahan aao...!"..he was scared that she was reaching near the road..he cudn't afford to loose her..he really ...........

"NAHI ARMAAN!..TUM MUJHE KYA SAMJHTE HO?..APNE DIL KI HAR BAAT MUJHE BATATE HO NAA?..PAR TUM MERI DIL KI BAAT KYUN NAHI SAMAJHTE?...".....her beautiful face was covered with tears..

"Riddhima!...Tumhara accident ho jayega!.."...

"TO HO JAANE DO...I DON'T CARE...ACCHA HAI KI MAIN MAR JAUN!"..

"BASKET!.." he shouted..how cud she think abt dying?..Mera kya hoga uske bina?..but he cudn't say this...instead he said.."Aunty Uncle ka to socho basket!!..Muskaan, Rahul, Atul Bhaiya, Anjali bhabhi..Un sab ka kya?"

"Aur tum?...Tumhe to farak hi nahi padega mere mar jaane se!"..softening her tone she came closer to him ...

"Riddhima..tum.."...

"Kya Armaan?..Main kya?.."..she was dying to hear those words she had been waiting to hear since years...she knew he loved her...she cud feel that... she had confessed to him but now it was his chance...

"Riddhima ghar chalo..sab hume dekh rahe hai!..."

"TO??...I don't care abt what the world thinks...I care abt what YOU think!"..

"Riddhima plzz..Aunty ka phone aaya tha..she is tensed.!"

"Armaan main main ...main tumse pyaar karti hun!..Bahut pyaar!..Armaan i love u!"...There! she said those words again still expecting a positive reply...why cudn't he just say 'I Love u 2'...she was sure he had said this to millions of girls but why not her?..

"Riddhima plz...tamasha mat khara karo!"

"Armaan...WHY DON'T U UNDERSTAND???...maine bachpan se tumhe pyaar kiya hai....main tumhare bina nahi jee sakti!..."

he kept silent..

"WHY DON'T U SAY ANYTHING??....I KNOW U LOVE ME..KYUN NAHI KEHTE HO?...WHY DON'T U ACCEPT IT??"

"Mujhe nahi pata tum kya baat kar rahi ho?..Bas chalo ghar...bahut ho gaya tamasha!"

"Tumhe nahi pata?..Accha to phir bacchpan se hi mere pas hi kyun aate ho?..jab bhi koi problem ho? Basket!..Jab bhi koi khushi ho?..basket..Jab bhi nayi GF mile?..Basket..Jab bhi Rahul se ladai ho?..basket..KYUN ARMAAN??"

he kept silent still..His silence hurted her..It wud be better if he said 'I hate u' rather than being silent...She was frustated..She grabbed his shirt tightly & pulled him closer..

"Batao mujhe!..Nahi hai naa jawaab?...I knew it!..Hamesha hamesha mujhse hi to jawaab puche hai tumne!..Always!.."..she left his shirt & pushed him..she moved backwards crying..

"..Armaan..Sab ko pata hai..Rahul,Muski sab ko pata hai that u love me!...Bas tumhe hi nahi pata!..accha ye batao ki Jab uss ladke ne mujhe chua, why did u tried to kill him?.koi jawaab hai tumhare pas?...WHY?!...."

He interrupted "BCOZ GOD DAMN I LOVE U!"..finally he said those words..he felt as if a load has been lifted from his heart..he felt relieved..

Riddhima was shocked..She had been dying to hear those words...Her wait was over...Tears of happiness poured down her eyes...She ran & flung her arms around his neck tightly..His hands held her waist..Tears poured from his eyes too..

They stood lyk that for minutes, without caring that they were in the middle of the main road!..Any car cud bang them...Without caring abt the thousand pairs of eyes staring at them!..Without caring abt the car horns..Without caring abt the traffic jam that had formed bcoz of them..Without caring abt the Stupid photographers who were taking their photos..Without caring that they may be on the first page yesterday...Without caring abt Armaan's mobile which was ringing continuously!..

WHO CARES??...AT least THEY WERE TOGETHER!!..

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"Ahhh!..Last night has been wonderful..Armaan is soo Sweet!"..she thought & blushed..

It had been two days since they confessed..As expected the newspapers had their photographs on the first page titled "TRUE LOVERS"....They had to face their families...Armaan convinced both his as well as hers!...Of course they didn't mind!..They were best of friends & were rejoicing that soon they will be relatives.. Their friends Rahul & Muskaan & not to forget 'the newly married couple' teased them a lot... They didn't mind it too...They were together & that was the most important thing...

The following night, Armaan had asked her or rather her parents for taking her on an 'Official Date!'...He took her too the Best Chinese Restuarant..She luved it though she felt awkward after what happened but Armaan made it easy for her..They enjoyed & talked abt everything..That was the best thing in their relationship..They were 'Friends'...

She sat on her bed thinking abt him, his love for her, abt their future life, abt their past. abt the time when they were....."JUST FRIENDS!"......

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Precap:- Flashback- Armaan & Riddhima meet for the first time when they were 5 & 6 yrs respectively!..😉

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Hopefully u'll like it!...1st part will be posted soon!.😃😳
Thank u!...

Hmm readers, i need some names to include in my FF😳!..I wanted to include the names of some of my readers😉😆😳..So those who all want to be a part of this shud tell me their names if i don't know them!😉😆

Do Comment/Critisize!😳

-Kanika❤️😳

Edited by *K@nik@* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76

hi kanu.wow!at the age of 13 ur such a talented writer.im 14 and i dont know anything

awesome intro.from now ur story will be in flashback right?

btw my name is vidushi.if u want u can use it in ur ff.

thanx for the pm

continue soon

Edited by vidu93 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
hey kanu
its really nice and being 13 u sure do a gr88 job!!! hell me being 18 cant do
so well!! it's really nice ... do pm me nxt time if possible.. i like the
concept..n once again it was really nice.. do continue writting so ur skill
polishes over the years .
love
stutie(or stuts)

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Posted: 17 years ago
#78

reserved...

EDIT : aww kanu...it was such a lovely part swthrt...!!!!

just loved the way they confessed...awww....2 cute..!!!...😳😳

Plz update it asap...and ya Thanx for the PM...and ya sweets..do update ur 2nd FF as well..!!!!...😉😉....

Loved ur update...keep ritting the same way...lol...

Edited by ksdbstjodi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
brilliant 👏 👏 👏.............gud intro.cont soon 😊 😛 😉
Edited by nextgerrad - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!......kanu kamaal kar diya!...kya baat hai! pehla update hi itna zabardast!....awesome girl! thanks 4 the Pm.....do continue soon!.....
p.s. - do PM me ur next update!
tc
luv
Nimisha

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