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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: love_KYPH

hey amazin update

waitin 4 AK 2 meet
its gonna b fun @ d party
cont soon....


thanks so muchh...yup AK in the next part...thanks for commenting and reading!!

Originally posted by: nidha1983

Hi Dear How R Uits really a mind blowing one cool one plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm






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Thanks hun..im glad u liked it....thanks for reading and commentinggg!! next part will be up soon..and yes wishing u a veryyy happpyyy birthdayy!!!

Originally posted by: arshbest

hiii

veryy nicee partsss!!!actually i am an new reader to thus ff but your ff is soo nicee that i read all the 10 parts in just the matter of half dayyy

plsss continue soon

plss add me to your pm list as i have send you the buddy request as you told in the note.

yours fan

sakshi




aww yayy new reader!!! thanks so muchhh....im glad u liked ittt...nexxt part will be up soon..and omg thanksss haha ur like one of hardly few who followed directions abt the buddy request...thanksss...added u...so u will get a PM next time =) keep reading sakshi!!

Originally posted by: xMamz2ellee

Hey just caught up with ur FF and u know what. i simply love it.. seriously its a new refreshing FF.. please Update soon and can u please PM me when u update the parts please 😳
waiting for the next part :)


aww another new reader!! haha i love it! thanks so much..im glad u like it...yes we tried to keep it on the humorous side..next part will be up soon..and added u to the PM listt =) thanks for reading and commenting!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey great update.. continue soon..

Sorry for the late update been away..

Thanksfor the pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey read your whole ff i n one go....its hell awesome
just love the sister brother bonding they share...its soo cute..
looking forward to the meeting of AK....
continue asap..
and please do add me to your pm list..

thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey this ff is just awesome
loved reading it
can u plz add me to pm list.
thanks.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: AKForever

Hey great update.. continue soon..

Sorry for the late update been away..

Thanksfor the pm..


Thanks so much..and plz dont apologize...read when u get the time =) np...will update soon =)

Originally posted by: Devil_Of_Heaven

hey read your whole ff i n one go....its hell awesome
just love the sister brother bonding they share...its soo cute..
looking forward to the meeting of AK....
continue asap..
and please do add me to your pm list..

thanks


thanks hun =) im glad u liked it...AK meeting in next part which will be up by tomorrow =) thanks for reading....added u to the pm list haha now i shall go talk to u from my original id...bye!

Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL

hey this ff is just awesome
loved reading it
can u plz add me to pm list.
thanks.


thanks so muchh!! added u to the pm list...u actually added my original id (smileyface) but u need to add this id in order to get a pm lol...but thats ok i did it =) next part will be up soon =)..thanks again for reading =)


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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Guys! First of all i would like to wish you all A very Happy Diwali and A Very Happy New Year! Saal Mubarak! hope everyone had a safe and fun diwali =) Secondly Thank you so much for reading our fanfic and waiting patiently for us to update...trust me Katie and I really appreciate this a lot! Ok not enough of me..here is the next part...Enjoy it!



Part 11

Kripa/Kavya/Armaan: MOMMMM WE ARE HOMEEEEEE!!!!

The three yelled in unison as they walked into the house…Gayatri came out of the kitchen with an annoyed look on her face.

Gayatri: Why don't you go announce it to the entire neighborhood.

Kripa: yeah..losers!

Gayatri: Tum bhi kuch kum nahi ho!

Kripa: But…you love me…..hii mommm….I missed you! And woww it smells awesome…I missed your food so much!!

She came and gave Gayatri a big hug while the other two plopped on the sofa happily watching the mother-daughter bonding. Of course gayatri had to melt in front of her youngest child…after all she was back home…her home..safe in front of her eyes.

Gayatri: I missed you too my baby…aur ab main tujhe kahin nahi jaane dene waali…now you are staying here in front of my eyes.

Kavya: Yeah you tell her mom.

Armaan: Please no…let her go…shes so annoying.

Kavya: You are one to say…who was the one..

Armaan: Who hijacked the plane…I KNOW!!

Kripa: Haha…that's right…little cry baby.

Armaan: MOMMMM…tell them to stop!

He pushed Kripa and pulled gayatri over and gave her a hug.

Kripa: heyyy!! Rude much?

Kavya: Come here.
Kripa gave Armaan a glare and went and sat next to Kavya and gave him a hug and then whispered in his ear.

Kripa: Wow he is such a baby!

Kavya: You are telling me…I had to live with this thing for so many years and no one to help!

Kripa: its ok im here now!

Kavya: yes you are and im soo happy!

Armaan: I heard that!!…mommm they are making fun of me again!

Gayatri: Ok stop all of you…go get freshened up and come down to eat lunch…I will go warm it up.

Saying that she left in the kitchen to warm up the food while the three went upstairs..of course while bugging and hitting each other…well mostly Armaan and Kripa while Kavya as usual stuck in the middle..trying to stop the two. After a little while all three came back down again for lunch which they enjoyed very happily!

Kripa: Oh mom I forgot to tell you…im going out tonight.

Armaan: Where?

Kavya: Why?

Armaan: With who?

Kavya: Why?

Armaan (looking at kavya) : You already said that.

Kripa: MOM…im going out with..

Gayatri (glaring at the boys for being annoying) I know who you are going with….un dono ke alava aur kiske saath jaa ye gi…tu jaa

Kavya: Kaun do! Who is she going with mom?

Armaan: Yeah who?

Gayatri: None of your business.

Armaan: But mom…

Gayatri: Shut up both of you…chup chaap khana khao…kripa beta tu jaa.

Kripa (smirking) Ok…bye mom!

Kripa left to go to Riddhima and Anjali's house while Armaan and Kavya were left behind to listen to Gayatri give them both a lecture about how they should let her be now. Kripa got to the khanna mansion and met Naina. They both talked for some time and then Naina left to go out with Dilip. The girls finally decided on their outfits and started getting ready. Giving all three of them a shock…Kripa was the first one to finish getting ready.

Anjali: Wow…kripa are u feeling alright? You are actually done getting ready and u actually look god!

Riddhima: I know right…is everything okay?

Kripa: Haha Very funny you guys…not! Anyways hurry up and get ready I'm waiting downstairs for you two.

Riddhima: Okay..will be there soon.

With that kripa went downstairs and sat on the sofa reading a magazine until she started feeling a little thirsty so decided to go to the kitchen to get some water. Just as she was walking into the ktichen, she walked into what she thought was a pillar….but since when did pillars started spraying cold drinks? And why would a pillar collapse because she bumped into it? Wait…what? WHY AM I WET..she thought to herself angrily!

angad: what the-- oh...Hello there pretty lady.

kripa: are you blind or something? cant you watch where you're going?

angad: YOU made ME fall!!

kripa: YOUR drink spilled on ME! ugh...I HATE YOU!!

Angad: whoa whoa whoa beautiful....you've only known me for a few seconds...and you already hate me?

kripa: yes! you spilled your damned drink all over me!

angad: you're still looking hot!

kripa: how dare you!....argh! I hate you!

Angad (finally standing up and winking at her) Not for long

Kripa: Oh shut up! And who the hell are you anyways? Why are you in this house! Get out!

Angad: Um excuse me but..

Kripa: You are not excused…come on lets go!

Angad: Go? Where? With you…oh I don't mind…we can go wherever u wanna go sweetie.

Kripa: Eww…im not going anywhere with you…you are the only one going and that too out of this house..now shooo!!

Angad: But this is…

Kripa: Nothing doing…get out! Before I call the cops!

Angad: Oh really? Go ahead…call them!

Kripa: Arre…kitne besharam ho! Ek toh kisi ke ghar mein bina soche samjhe ghus jaate ho..aur ab besharam ban rahe ho!

Angad: Listen pretty lady…you

Kripa: I told you! I don't want to listen to you! You would be the last person who I would want to listen to!

And their bickering went on and on until Anjali and Riddhima came running down hearing the loud noises.

Riddhima: Woah woah..whats going on!

Kripa: Ridzi acha hua tum aa gayi…look at this man..he came in this house without knocking, spilled his stupid drink on me and now is arguing with me!

Anjali: Krips..he is..

Angad: Yeah tell her who I am! Wait..no…both of you…why are you talking to strangers..go inside…I will handle this!

Anjali: She is not a stranger…shes a friend.

Finally getting fed up of all three of them talking riddhima decided to shut them all up!

Riddhima: SHUT UPPPP!!!! Omggggg you are alll soooo annoying!! Bhai! This is our friend Kripa…the one we stayed with in London! Remember?? And krips…this is our brother Angad…the one we told you about! And anjali…just stop talking!

Kripa/Angad: Oh

Anjali: So mean!

Riddhima: Yeah…now is everyone clear.

Angad: Oh ive been clear….well hello again Ms. Beautiful!

Kripa: Shut up!

Riddhima: Bhai…leave her alone!

Anjali: Alrite..well bhai we are going out..we will be back later on tonite..talk to you later!

Angad: But..

Riddhima: Bye bro!



Before angad could say anymore or stop them..both the girls ran out of the house…pulling kripa behind them. Kripa was still in shock as to what happened…and now coming back to reality she realized her dress was still wet!

Kripa: STOPPPP!!

Riddhima: Uff what happened now?

Kripa: Ridzy are u blind? Do u not see my dress…its wet..and sticky..and disgusting!! I AM NOT COMING LIKE THIS!

Anjali: Oh oops…ok di..u go and get in the car..im going to go and give her a dress…if we both go in u know how bro will react.

Riddhima: Ok..hurry up though!

Anjali took Kripa back in the house while Riddhima went to go get the car. As soon as they walked in..of course they saw angad sitting on the sofa until he noticed both of them come back.

Angad: Aww Ms. Beautiful you came back…couldn't resist being away from me? Its ok I have that affect on people.

Anjali/Kripa: SHUT UP!

They both ran upstairs leaving a chuckling Angad behind. After about 10 minutes Angad looked up and was mesmerized at the sight he saw. Kripa came down wearing a beautiful knee length blue dress. Wow she looked gorgeous!

Angad: Oh how sweet of you…you're wearing my favorite color…I'm flattered.

Kripa: Anjali let's go change!

Anjali: NO! bhai stop it! We are getting late. (she pulled kripa and started to walk out)

Angad: hey Ms.Beautiful!

Kripa turned around to look at him and raised an eyebrow.

Angad: you really are very beautiful.

Kripa (scoffed): Tell me something i dont know!

Angad: that dress really brings out the brown in your eyes

She looked at him…the look in his eyes…it was so sweet. Even Angad couldn't help but stare. Both kept on looking at each other until Anjali pulled Kripa and she realized that she was supposed to be mad at him. This loser spilled his drink on her! And with that she just walked out with Anjali after rolling her eyes at Angad.

Angad laughed as she walked out. Boy was she something. As he was thinking about her, his phone rang bringing him out of his thoughts. It was Armaan.

Armaan: Haaye meri jaannnn...im gettting boreddddddd....chalo na date par chalte hainnn

Angad: alright buddy...I dont play for your team. Take Kavya.

Armaan: I'm not that desperate!!! he's my bro....unfortunately...OWW

Angad: what the...oh....i get it....someone got kicked.

Armaan: whateverrr..lets go partyyyy guys!!!

Angad: Yeah lets! I'm gonna go get ready and then come get you guys! Armaan tell Kavya he only has 20 minutes! IF he takes anymore time…we are leaving!

Armaan: Yeah the girl here…takes forever!

Kavya (yelling in the back) IM NOT A GIRL! NOR DO I TAKE FOREVER!

Angad: Of course not.

Armaan: Alright see you in a bit!

Angad: Bye!

The boys went to go get ready and soon enough Angad came and the three left to the party. Unknown to them…their sisters were already there…and boy were they having fun.


Ok guys that was the part...we were actually gonna add the party in this part but realized it got too long so then its gonna be in the next part..which will be up in 3 days...so watch out for it...and again PLEASE press the LIKE button if you are a silent reader or if you can't comment because we work really hard on this and if no one is reading it then there is no point of continuing it....and of course comments are welcome even more. To those of you who still read and comment..thank you for that..we really appreciate it <3 Thanks again guys! and again don't forget to comment or press the LIKE button!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi dear How R Uits really a mind blowing one cool one so Armaan-Kavya want to know with whome Krips is going out Bachara Angad kuch bolna hi nahi diya kisi na usayplz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

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Edited by nidha1983 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
loved AK n Armaan Kavya n Kripa
so sweet
cont soon
n thx for pm
luv dhruvika
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Continue as SOOON as you can. I cant wait that long. HAHA :)

Love,
Kriya <33
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome part guys!

So glad you guys updated after soo long..andd yesss i better see an update in 3 days again:P..Pleasee dont take forever ;)
And about the part...the kripa-angad encounter was jokess😆 LOL...butt angad seems to be already flattered by kripa ;)...andd armaan and kripa keep fighting..thats cute..lol..
and cant wait for the partyy ;) im sure theres gunna be lots of mastiii and romancee ;)
pleasee update soon:D
Edited by Armaan-KSG - 14 years ago

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