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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

sorry for late reply.....

d updt was mind blowing and totally crazyyy one.....πŸ‘
thank u so much dear 😊 😊 😊

but was tooo cute.........😳
thank u again πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

hope she remembers d same wen she come out of dat condition......



Ab ye pata karne k liye aap ko aage read karna padega na update. 😊 😊 😊

Thanks dear
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

kahin main sapna toh nahi dekh rahi hun na...??? sach sach bol...ya phir Geeta ki kasamm kha k bol ki tune sach me is fic ko ud kiya hai...!!! lekin tu Getta ki kasamm kaise kha sakti hai...voh thode hi na tere office me kaam karti hai...voh toh meri padoshwali aunty hain... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Nautanki piece, maine aisa kaun sa theer maar diya hai update kar k fic ko. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

par sach me yaar...tune ud kiya is fic ko yakeen nahi aa raha hai...par ud ek damm SUPERBBBBBB tha...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Thank u Priya madam, jarranavaji k liye shukriya.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
vardan ne kisi dushre ladki ko kiss karne ki acting kya ki...kajal maam toh bhadak gayi...!!! aur sara gussa us buchari ladki par nikal diya...!!! phir vardan ki bari thi...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
Ye to hona hi tha na ab itne pyaari si ladki ko chod k kisi aur ko kiss karega to.πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
phir vardan k samjhane parr voh bhaag gayi...parr song kafi achha gaya us ne...πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
Ab nashe me jab madam talli thi to hosh hi kahan tha na ki kya kar rahi hain.πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
toh kahte hain ki insaan jab nashe me hota hai toh sach bolta hai...aur kajal ne bhi vardan se sach kah diya ki voh us se pyar karti hai. aur toh aur phir kiss...bichara vardan sab k samne kitna embarrassed ho gaya...lekin pyar toh voh bhi karta hai...isiliye aage sab kuch vohi hua...jo hona chahiye tha...😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Haan par shayad Kajal k jaisa pyaar ka izhaar vo bhi nahi kar sakta na,πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ bus Kajal hi aisa kar sakti thi na. Ek k baad doosra tagda jhatka mila na. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
ab yeh mat kahana ki comment itna chota kyoun tha...??? maine comment long kiya hai parr tumhara ud chota tha...samjhi...???😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑
Are yaar kitna bada likhoon mai? Bacche ki jaan logi kya? πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
chal ab toh jaldi se ud kar de...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ



Thanks sweet heart 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

zhakkkas Update tha dear !!!

mazaa agaya!!!

Thank u for liking it. 😳 😳 😳

itne dino baad iss fic ko Ud kiya woh toh theek hai...but lemme tell you , this fic is back with a bang !!!

Chalo accha hai na der se aane ka tum logon ko kuch fayda to hua. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Ab please jaldide badasa UD kardo!!!



Thanks Mana so much. 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

i read the entire fic in the past few days n just completed it.it is truly and really a rocking fic dear.too tooooooo good.πŸ‘
Thanks for liking and reading my fic.😊 😊 😊 I'm delighted to know that i got a new good reader like u. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

vardaan aur kajal ki jodi toh ek dum perfect hai(afterall,hamaare RN jo hai,kyunπŸ˜‰)it is a truly entertaining fic.are yaar pehle to kajal ne first meeting me hi vardaan ko thappad maara aur ab uskeliye auron ko thappad maarthi fir rahi hai🀣,very good.she has really developedπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.
Socho chahe vo ho ya phir Vardaan dono kitna badal gaye hain na pyaar hone k baad.πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› Well said about RN.πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Kyounki pehle to Vardaan jee ko bhi gussa bahut aata tha na.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ Par ab to gusse ka door tak ata pata nahi hai.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

i'll be waiting to see what hungaama kajal is now going to create for vardaan in front of a whole crowd,plz ud sooooooooon..........
Tum ne padha hoga na ki us ne kya kiya.... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Ab bus aage padhti jaao. 😊 😊 😊




Thanks so much dear πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: arpita25

Oho so u r again updating it now a days, good to know that.

I read a few more parts.
Kuch jyada hi close aa raha hai na Vardaan with Kajal in a little span of time, aur aaj kal har jagah tareef bhi kar raha hai us ki. Maa n papa has observed a nice change in him. Engagement scene of Anu was so cute and a lot of naughtiness, Shalabh baaj nahi aata hai na flirt karne se aur Mugdha ko dekh k to kho gaya vo aur same yahi haal tha Sunny ko Aanchal ko dekh k. Kitna mazak bana rahe hain na dono Arjun ka.



Thanks dear and no problem. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
Jab tum ko time mile tabhi reply karo. Vardaan abhi bahut badlega n so as Kajal. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
I am not in hurrry.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 32:-

A huge sound of claps was heard soon after their kissing session. Which brought both of them in reality n Kajal fainted in Vardaan's arms because of heavy dose of vine. He gently carried her in his arms and brought her downwards from the stage. People were still hooping for them.

"They look cute na." one of boy said.

"Really, don't we?" his girl friend asked.

"Off course but yaar u didn't do such thing for me."

"What do u want?"

"Tum ko bhi kabhi aise hi bindaas form me apna pyaar express karna chahiye na."

"Ok, to ye lo." And she kissed him in front of so many people and they all got busy in this couple who was center of attraction now.

Sanya was still in shock, she didn't expect that Kajal can do such kind of thing in Vardaan's love. She looked at Vardaan and Vardaan blushed by her gaze.

"Ab tu aise kyoun dekh rahi hai mujhe?"

"U know tum dono ne abhi kuch der pehle kya kiya hai?" she asked.

"Mujhe to acche se pata hai ki maine kya kiya hai but I think jab madam ko hosh aayega to shayad in ko yaad na rahe ki inhone kya kiya hai?" he said sadly.

"To is me itna sad hone wali kya baat hai, aakhir hai to tumhari biwi hi na. She has right on you." She reasoned.

Vardaan thought for a while,'Kaise bataoon tum ko Sanya ki jaisa tum samajh rahi ho hum dono k beech aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Na jaane Kajal kya sochegi mere bare me jab us ko hosh aayega. Kahin vo ye na sochne laga ki maine jaan moojh k sab karwaaya hai us se. Agar vo mujhe galat samajhne lagi to? Agar vo mujhe chod k chali gayi to?"

Sanya was confused looking Vardaan thinking something deeply.

"Kya hua?"

"Kuch nahi vo mai........." Par Vardaan apni baat poori bhi nahi kar paaya jab us ka cell ring hone laga. Phone kaise uthata jab Kajal us ki bahon me thi. "Sanya jara mere pocket se phone to nikalo."

Sanya took out the phone, "Hello."

"Kya mai Vardaan se baat kar sakti hoon."

"Haan ek minute."

Next day morning:-

When Kajal woke up she found herself on the bed in her room. Her head was aching badly n she was unable to think that what she did last night. She thought to sleep more may be her headache would be better after that.

"Are are fir sone jaa rahi ho kya?" Sanya asked entering in her room.

"Good morning Sanya par mera sir dard ho raha hai bahut buri tarah se so pls let me sleep more." She requested her.

"No way Kajal get up n fresh up fast tum logon ko aaj vapas jaana hai na, chalo jaldi karo." She recalled her.

"Oh shit, par mai to bhool hi gayi thi. Give me 15 minutes mai bus aati hoon." She said left towards washroom n got her self ready within 15 minutes.

"Good g8 timing aur maine tumhara saaman ready kar diya hai. So have ur breakfast n driver will drop u to the airport." Sanya said.

"Par mai akele Vardaan kahan hai?" she asked finally . Kyounki bahut der se notice kar rahi thi ki Vardaan nahi dikh raha hai kahin.

"Oh haan mai batana bhool gayi, us ko kisi jaroori kaam se Canada jaana pada hai kal raat. To us ne kaha hai ki vo 4 din me India pahuch jaayega filhaal tum jaao." Sanya said smiling.

Kajal became worried, "Par mujhe bataye bina kaise?" she asked Sanya.

"It's ok Kajal, he will be with u soon." She assured her.

Kajal ko samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki achanak aise kaise kar sakta hai Vardaan? Bina us ko bataye vo Canada kaise chala gaya? Vo bhi ab us ko akele India wapas jaana hoga par aisa kya kaam tha? She tried his cell but it kept on ringing n he didn't receive it.

Kisi tarah se darte hue Kajal airport gayi vahan tak us k saath Sanya bhi gayi par aage ka safar to us ko khud hi tay karna tha na.

"R u nervous?" Sanya asked who came with her when she noticed that her face lost it's color after hearing that Vardaan is not with her today.

"Haan thoda sa." She said weekly.

"I know, Vardaan k bina travel nahi karti ho na." Sanya said.

"Vo.........nahi........aisa nahi hai par..........".

"It's ok Kajal mai samajhti hoon. AKele jana thoda to problem hogi hi na."

"Mai manage kar loongi yaar, tu tension mat le." Now Kajal assured her.

"OK, good bye dear. Wish u safe journey." Sanya hugged her after saying it.

"U too mai chahoongi next time tum ko bhi mil jaaye koi aisa jo tum ko bahut pyaar kare." Kajal wished which made Sanya's eyes teary 4 a moment.

"Tu bhi na rula diya na mujhe." She hugged Kajal again n sobbed a little at her shoulders.

"Mera aisa matlab nahi tha yaar." Kajal said with sorrow.

"It's ok yaar, vaise mai chahoongi next time ek junior Vardaan ho tere paas." She said naughtily.

Kajal doesn't feel why but she blushed hard.

"Oh kya baat hai blush karte hue kitne khoobsurat lagti hai tu. Oh to ab mai samjhi ki baat kya hai?" Sanya said thoughtfully.

"Kya hai baat?" Kajal asked in confusion.

"Vardaan itne khoobsurat ladki ko chod bhi kaise sakta hai na ek pal k liye." She said with a grin.

"Shut up, bus kar." Kajal said blushing hard.

"Ok sun mai tere liye kuch le kar aayi hoon." Sanya said n handed over a neatly wrapped gift to her.

"Kya hai is me?" she asked.

"Baad me dekhna not now India pahuch kar ok." Sanya didn't let her open the gift.

Soon the final announcement is heard of the plane. A final good bye was done by Kajal to Sanya n she left for her plane n found her seat. Soon she dozed of n in her dream she remembered the entire incident which took place in night n she was shattered now after remembering those incidents.

"How can i?" she was unable to control her tears n they started flowing.

"Maine bina jaane aisa kaise kar diya ......." par fauran hi us ko apne is sawaal ka jawaab mil gaya jab us ko yaad aaya ki Vardaan ne kya kaha tha tab jab us ne Vardaan ko I love u kaha tha aur is k baad Kajal k hothon par halki se smile aa gayi. She started blushing when she thought of kissing him.

"Mam u look pretty when u blush." An airhostess said.

"Thanx ", Kajal said.

'Par kya yahi vajah hai ki aaj Vardaan mujhe bina bataye yahan se chala gaya? Aisa to nahi ho sakta na; kahin us ne sab k saamne meri izzzat bachane k liye to nahi I love u too keh diya.' Ab kuch jyada dimaag lagane lagi Kajal bhi.

Sochte sochte kab so gayi pata nahi aur jab neend khuli to India me thi vo aur car bhi aayi thi us ko lene.

"Are maine to bataya bhi nahi tha ki mai aa rahi hoon phir Gupta jee aap kaise aa gaye?" she asked the driver.

"Are madam vo sir ne phone kiya tha ki aap ko le aane k liye." Driver said.

She smiled and thought, 'itne hi chinta thi to saath nahi aa sakte the. Aane do vapas jab baat nahi karoongi na tab samajh me aayega.'

She reached at her flat and took rest that day deciding that she will join office tomorrow.

Here Mugdha:-

Mugdha's first day in college, she was quite uncomfortable when she reached there.

'Hey bhagwaan lagta hai yahan ki ladkiyon k paas kapde kam hain ya poore kapde pehne ki aadat nahi hai in sab ko.' She thought in her mind. They looked at Mugdha as she is from out of the world.

"Vo dekho," A girl pointed towards Mugdha between a group of girls.

"Kya yaar, lagta hai aaj kal college k principal ko college me behan jees lane ka kaafi shauk ho gaya hai."

Kajal heard this, she was already nervous and this comment made her more uneasy.

"Chal accha hi hai na. Agar aise behan jeejs aati rahi to hum log ko koi competition nahi milega aur apne aashik to aur badh jaayenge."

"Sach yaar, vaise bhi in ka koi class nahi hai ki ye hume takkar de sakein."


"Hey bhagwaan, kya yahi sun ne k liye maine is college me admission liya hai." Mugdha cursed her self. "Koi bhi mil jaata pehchaan ka atleast. Hey bhagwaan daya karo na mujh pe. Kisi ko bhej do na yahan." She prayed.

She herself didn't know that her prayer is gonna be listen so fast by god.

Tabhi someone placed a hand on her shoulder.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
That was a cute one.....but Vardaan ko kiska phn aya?? Aur wo aise hi chala gaya!! Kajal ko akele chhorke?? Zarur bechre ko zaruri kaam hoga....warna wo aisa nahi karta....ryt??

Btw I was finding it so cute when he was getting worried if Kajal will misunderstand him or not.....u c he is always in funny mood so it was sweet to see him like this.

And Kajal madam ko finaly apni harkat yaad aa hi gayi....hehe. And she also remembered Vardaan saying "I love you too"....Vertika tum ek kaam karo....iska dimag gayab kar do....kuch zyada hi chalta hai....lolz!!

And here Mugdha....hmm...she is hoping to see a knwn face....gud!! Waise sach kahu to main iske hero ka naam bhul chuki hu....sorry yaar....kya karu....mujhe to sirf Rajeev k character me interest hai na?

Anyways.....w8ing for Vardaan's return....pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Kajal fainted after the kiss and Vardaan carried her in his arms!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Another couple got in the mood after seeing them and they became the center of attraction!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Sanya was shocked as she didn't expect that Kajal can do anything like that in Vardaan's love!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Vardaan is very confused and thinks ke jab Kajal ko hosh aayega toh shayad usse yaad nahi rahega ke usne kya kiya hai!!!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

He is happy that she had kissed him but he was also scared of losing him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

He knew she loved him and that was the reason she had kissed him but she was not in her senses!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Yeh Vardaan ko kiska phone aaya jab Kajal uski baahon mein thi??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Kajal is suffering from hangover and but nonetheless she gets ready as they have to go back to India today!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Vardaan ko aisa kaun sa zaroori kaam aa gaya ke woh Kajal ko bina bataye Canada chala gaya??πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Kajal ko akele India jaana padha aur Vardaan apna cell bhi nahi utha raha hai!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Kajal wished Sanya ke usse koi aisa mil jaye jo usko bahut pyaar kare!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sanya said ke woh chahti hai next time ek junior Vardaan ho tere paas!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kajal blushed which led to Sanya teasing her further!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Sanya gave Kajal a gift aur India pahuch kar dekhne ko kaha!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kajal ko yaad aaya gaya ke usne kya kiya tha aur Vardaan ne kya kaha tha and she started blushing!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Magar phir Kajal apna dimaag zyada hi chalane lagi!!!!!

Vardaan ne pehle se phone kar diya tha Kajal ko le aane ke liye!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kajal sahi soch rahi hai ke itni chinta thi toh saath nahi aa sakta tha!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Mugdha is uncomfortable as its her first day in college and everyone is calling her behanji!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

She is hoping to see a known face and her prayer is answered!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

I hope its Shalabh who has come to her rescue!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
damn cool
superb
great part
but ye vardaan kyun chala gaya
waiting for next part
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Are waah Mahak...

Kya update kiya hai. Waise Vardaan ko kiska phone aaya tha. Bechara Kitna udaas ho gaya Sanya ki baatein sunkar. Pata nahi Kajal kya sochegi. Waisi uski fikr uski jagah sahi hai, par sharab ke nashe me Kajal jo sach bol gayi wo usse nakar bhi nahi sakta.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Kyun chala gaya Vardaan? Aur Kaajal ko akele travel karna pada. Aur flight me usse yaad bhi aa gaya ki usne kya kiya tha aur Vardaan ne usse kya kaha tha. Aur mai Sumi ki baat se sehmat hun... tum Kajal ka dimag kyun nahi gayab kar deti. Ye itna ulta kyun sochti hai??? Ufff !!!

Poor Mugdha... kitni bechain si hai naye college me. Uske hero ki entry hone wali hai kya?

Waiting for Vardaan to come back...

Update soon.

Love
Guglu

PS: Itne dino se mai iss fic ko complete karnr ki koshish kar rahi thi, ab jakar pura fic padha hai maine.

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