The Unknown Desire part 39 updated pg. 149

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1091

Sorry yaar mai bhool gayi thi update pe reply karna. Good yaar,👏 tum ye batao ki bina Abhay k tumhara kaam nahi chalega kya?😆 Pehle apne Karan ko le liya Destiny me aur ab yahan Abhay ko 😉 but sab se acchi baat ye hai ki koi bhi misunderstanding nahi hue VK k beech kyounki turant hi pata chal gaya us ko ki Abhay ki ek fiyance hai jis ka naam Pia hai.😉 Arjun par to dhyaan hi nahi jaata ab Shalabh ka,😆 apni Mugdh k baare me sochne se chutti mile to kuch aur sochega na vo.😛 Sunny bhi samajhta hai ki kitna possessive hai Shalabh apni Mugdh k liye. 😉 Par the best part was jab V ko ehsaas hua ki Kajal must be hungry😍 aakhir us ne romantic chat kar kar k us ko kuch khaane peene nahi diya hoga seedhe apne saath le aaya.😃 Ab Shalabh ko bhi Mugdh se sorry kehna hai par vo to naraj hi nahi hai us se 😆 aur us ko apna new name Mugdh bhi kaafi pasand aaya..😉

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 14 years ago

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375400

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1092

Hiii Vertika how r u?
sry for not commenting on ur ff
mai bhut busy thi dear
mera exam tha aur abhi
entrance ke exam me busy hoon...
so anyway awesum upd dear
superb
mindblowing
do cont. soon

Love
Deepa

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362035

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1093

awesooome...

superb...

fab...

loved it...

thanx for the pm...

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1094

the up is good

toh kajal dukhi hai aapne dad ke ziker se aur kajal ka yeh dukh yeh pareshani vardhan ko pareshan kar raha haai woh jaanna chahata haai ke aakhir kajal ko kya problem haai par kajal woh vardhan ko aapne pareshani nahin batana chahate haai

aur yehi baat vardhan ko dukhi kar deta haai

woh sochta haai ke kajal doent trust him

but kajal i thik she needs time

anyways arjun is happy to se mudgha

and this abhay he is behaving over protective are bhai tumhare pass pia haai uska khayal rakh

par nahin usse toh pia se zada vardhan mein ke baare jane mein interest haai

par the scne of kajal and vardhan with the songs is really sweet

plz cotn soon and pm me

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noaccount

@noaccount

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1095

sorry for being tooo late...but i have already told you that i was catching up wid this!!!

and yes thank you very much 4 pm me

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hey ver...how are you???

the update was so romantic, cute it was just awesome!!!

kajaal is really upset and dissoppianted with his dad😭😭😭 she was so quit the whole way aur vardaan se saahaa nahi gaya kajaal ka roona awww...he really care about her!!!

arjun scean was good too!!! hahaha bichara shalab mughda se milna chata hai aur arjun ne saaf mana kar dia...to bad 4 him!!!

abhey and pia seen was so caring!!!...abhey and pia really care about kajol after all kajol us ki best frnd jo hui!!!

when kajal wake up she hugged vardan and she was thinking how her life take a diferent turn just because of vardan!!!

hahahhaha the last seen was way tooo good,superb!!!

'Sote hue bhi mujh se door nahi jaana chahte na tum?' Kajal thought.

"Nahi bilkul nahi, kabhi nahi." He replied.

it was sooo funny kajol thought that vardan is probably sleeping but...

keep it up!!! and yes congratulation for 150 pgs og this fic!!!🥳🥳

love u

esha

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1096

hello di😃

congrats for completing 150 pages😃👏

very nice part👏👏

as vardaan very easily understood kajal's behaviour👏

but what is she hiding from vardaan😕

i hope that abhay is not going to create trouble😡 for vardaan and kaajal but as a frend he is also worried for her

and it is also very true that...vardaan sote hue bhi kaajal se alag nai reh paaega😃

again a very nice part👏

thnx for the pm and

continue soon

bye

takecare

shreya😃

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1097

congrats vertika...👏

tera yeh fic bhi 150 page par pahunch gaya...👏

vaise yeh mahan kaam baht pehle ho jata...agar aap ki daya-drishti is fic par barabar bani rehti aur ud jaldi hota toh...

par tu toh hai hi ek no ke late-latif...tujh se toh jaldi ud ki umeed rakhna maano...indian penal coads ke tahat ek baht bada crime ho...huh...

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1098

abhi ud par aate hain...!!! pahle na compl karrni hai...yaar...yeh ud itna chota kyoun tha...

yeh ud na sachhi me baht cute tha yaar...thoda baht meri tarah...ha ha ha...

kajal ke liye thoda bura laga...!!! apne father ke bare me sunn kar voh kafi chup thi rashte me...aur vardaan ne bhi yeh achhe se notice kiya tha...!!! sachhi...BF ho toh vardan jaisa...kitne achhe se samajh liya uss ne kajal ko...!!! voh rone ka scene na baht achha tha...

arjun ka scene bhi ek damm badhiya tha...!!! salabh...mugdha se milna chahata tha...par arjun ne us par pani pher diya...

abhay aur pia ka scene bhi kafi achha tha...dono hi kajal ke liye pareshan the...!!! arey haan...THANX kehna toh bhul hi gayi...!!! tune in dono ko yahan par vampire jo nahi banaya...!!! mujhe kajal ki tension nahi hai yaar...ladkiyon ki tension main nahi leti...par haan...vardan ka tension laga rehta hai...ha ha ha...

ab se khubshurat scene tha last scene...

Sote hue bhi mujh se door nahi jaana chahte na tum?' Kajal thought.

"Nahi bilkul nahi, kabhi nahi." He replied.

naina ke thoughts...bandh ankhon se bhi vardan jaan leta hai...

yeh mujhe kehna toh nahi chahiye...kyoun ke tu toh ud jaldi karne se rahi...phir bhi yaar...ho sake toh jaldi ud kar dena...

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1099

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Sorry yaar tumhara ye thread khatam ho chuka hai...but I have to reply here only...hehe.

Coming to the part jalddi jaldi...😆 It was definitely very nice.😃 I always love the cute romance of Vardaan and Kajal. But this tym, wid the entry of Abhay...(ahemz😉)...it sumwat gave out a clue to Vardaan abt Kajal's father!!😉 Lets see wat he does wid that.

And well, Abhay wants to knw abt Vardaan...gud that he is a nice frnd to Kajal...and his motive is very noble as well, still I hope that it doesnt create a prob for VK.😳 Other than that, anything is f9...😆

And here Shalab and Mugdh...are doing pretty f9. Both think that the other might feel bad if came to knw abt the feelings and all...😆...hope they'll knw abt each other's feelings soon. And no matter wat hook or crook is used...am pretty sure they r gonna win it.😉

Now lets see if am ryt or wat...moving on to the next part now.😃

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1100

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Hmm...so Vardaan did inquire Kajal abt her father...but I guess she needs sum tym to gather the courage in herself to say it all to him. 😊 Till then he can surely w8.😃

But yaha Abhay ko Vardaan me itna kya bura laga yaar??😕 Itna handsum to hai...😆😆 achha achha mujhe pata hai...Abhay ek ladka hai...isliye usse koi fark nahi padta Vardaan kitna cute sweet hot n happening hai...😆😆😳😳...however I just hope uski shakh or watever neg feeling...ye jaldi se dur ho jaye.😳

Yaha Shalab and Mugdha me zyada kuch nahi hua...bas Arjun ki wajah se bechare ki achhi khasi chance barbaad ho gayi...😆😆

Now coming to the most beautiful thing on this part!! Of course u knw it hai na?😉 Yupp...its the last VK scene. U gelled it so well wid the song...I have heard the song once or twice only...😆 but lyrics is perfectly gud...😃 but the best was ur narrative. The way u wrote it all...was fab.⭐️⭐️ Kajal loves Vardaan more n more every day...coz he compels her to do so. I loved this compulsion in her words.😉 Lovely scene Vartika...😃

And of course...congrats as this thread is finished. 😃😃 Continue wid the new thread Soon. 😃😃

Luv,
Sumi. 😳

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