the listeners(DMG)part.1.cruel life-11!!! - Page 9

Originally posted by: *mansibhatia*

OMG..Pragz..woow..dis was jus AWSOME!! 👏 Ur writing & imagination has improved sooo much!! 👏 U ended the story at sucha gripping end..I dint understand Riddhima's part though..But im sure n d nxt few chaps I will.. 😳 Update super soon! 😊

awww thnxxxxxxxxxxx😳....what dint cha understand in ridz part??....yepbt temem huh what u dint understnd..k??...i will update this after m AR oen and rm one😆😳

luv u,

pragz😳

^^Umm..exactly..I dunt knw.. 😕 U update nxt then ill try 2 link dem ok..? 😳

yep okie 😳 😳 and i am soo sorrii dat i cudnt express what i had written well

aww...pragzie...dat was tOOooo heart-wrenching....gosh evrybodyz jus tOOooooo depressed as AR disappeared from their lives all of a sudden... 😭 ......
i feel like crying after reading dis... 😭 ...everybodyz living such an aweful life widout AR...
n armi-ridhhimma demselves r not in PEACE....
dey r terrbile widout eachoder....gosh... 😭

tOOooooo gud pragzie... 👏
now am kinda havin doubts...li'l one r u really 13....as itne deep thoughts mujhe to kabhi bhi nahin aa sakte.... ....am so non-creative... 😆 😆

yar...plz continue dis ff sOOooooon... 😳 😳
u alwayz leave us on a cliff-hanger...
dis ff iz truely getting exciting...am lukin forward for more of it... 😳

lub u loadz... 🤗

Awww Pragzie!! That was So Touching!😭
I myself feel lyk crying😭😆
Awww AR disappeared??😕..Well i am still confused abt Ridz😕😆
All r lively such an Aweful lyf!!
But don't worry u wrote it brilliantly!👏👏

U left it at such a Cliff-changer!!..Continue soon!!😉😕
Hmm..waiting eagerly for the next part!😳

luv ya😳!

-Kanika😳

cheers for the pm....wow everyone is 😆 ....

Ok i curious now with that card u holding with this story line...

Love Kat 😳

HEY PRAGATI!.....how r yah?....vese 2 tell u the truth life really is cruel!...but i hope in ur FF AR's life gets fair enough....atleast i can expect that!....nice part ....n OMG i wuz sooo glad 2 see that both {AR} r f9!.......but get them 2gether n back 2 mumbai soon....or in this FF do whatever u wanna do!.after all it is urs!hehehehe.............continue soon...will b waiting 4 ur update...ho sake toh mujhe bhi PM kar dena!.....
thanks
tc
luv
Nimisha

Hey its a very nice consept i luv the 1st part but i m bit confused about the story like i did not get who is ipshita n how did AR r in the forest n they r not together n who is that baby i think i have not understand that story properly or i m missing something or this is ur suspense that u will revil later on but other then that u rock 👏

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i realy liked it n plz PM me when ever u updat n updat soon

luv

~Nruti

Originally posted by: rabo0

aww...pragzie...dat was tOOooo heart-wrenching....gosh evrybodyz jus tOOooooo depressed as AR disappeared from their lives all of a sudden... 😭 ......
i feel like crying after reading dis... 😭 ...everybodyz living such an aweful life widout AR...
n armi-ridhhimma demselves r not in PEACE....
dey r terrbile widout eachoder....gosh... 😭

tOOooooo gud pragzie... 👏
now am kinda havin doubts...li'l one r u really 13....as itne deep thoughts mujhe to kabhi bhi nahin aa sakte.... ....am so non-creative... 😆 😆

yar...plz continue dis ff sOOooooon... 😳 😳
u alwayz leave us on a cliff-hanger...
dis ff iz truely getting exciting...am lukin forward for more of it... 😳

lub u loadz... 🤗

Exactly..Pragz..pls tell the truth!😆

Originally posted by: *mansibhatia*

Exactly..Pragz..pls tell the truth!😆

aww raboo di luv u😳..and lol mansi as i said i am going to be 13😆😳