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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: soni595

It's the warm words that touch my heart and now not only Nisha, but I'm on top of the world!😛

yup, I will be continuing very soon - tomorrow!😛

love

Soni



u must be already on top of the world for writing such a gr8888 fan fic 👏... i mean u have written so many different stories with different ideas... thats a sign of a good writer🤗 🤗🤗..... keep it uppp... cant wait till u continue it... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: princess1_43



u must be already on top of the world for writing such a gr8888 fan fic 👏... i mean u have written so many different stories with different ideas... thats a sign of a good writer🤗 🤗🤗..... keep it uppp... cant wait till u continue it... 😆

awww..luv ya😛

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Posted: 19 years ago

😳
aww love ya tooo b🤗
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Posted: 19 years ago
Ahmm...SONI....You have to include Rajeev and Me in it too.. but first Iqbal and Neha.. 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: jenny1000

Ahmm...SONI....You have to include Rajeev and Me in it too.. but first Iqbal and Neha.. 😳 😳 😳

I will continue tomorow Jenny, as I wasn't aware I had a meeting, and thus cuz of my meeting I couldn't write up any part. But, not to worry Soni will compensate and write up extra - romantic stories for every1 and all the hearts will linger with warmth!😛

Hmmm...Rajeev😉 and you in it, wow double dating huh?😉

Love

Soni

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Posted: 19 years ago

Heya...

Soni ji...your writing is beautiful..I mean when i read what you write I can imagine it really well..your diction(words) are amazing......and Nisha I'll amke sure your bhiya Eijaz reads it...lol..Luv your Bhabhi..

Soni....👏

Luv ya..

Ouma

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Amazin nd hot!

Heya...

Soni ji...your writing is beautiful..I mean when i read what you write I can imagine it really well..your diction(words) are amazing......and Nisha I'll amke sure your bhiya Eijaz reads it...lol..Luv your Bhabhi..

Soni....👏

Luv ya..

Ouma

😛Awww....Ouma....I'm on the universal romantic stars right now, thanks al lot for the heart-warming words.😛

am on the trip to make your eyes wonder and picture more romance. Romance is in the air...Rajeev, Jenny &Neha and Iqbal are next, and then my tapori with her tapori is next. I hope you enjoy it as well.

Luv ya

Soni

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Posted: 19 years ago
For my Tapori…
Eccentric Vibes!


A girl dressed in black leather pants and a cool white jacket, sauntered out of her front porch. She swiftly runs her fingers through her glossy hair. She looks around the dark, lonesome street, and then finally rests her beautiful eyes on a guy who is dressed in black leather pants and a black leather jacket. And attractive of all besides his Greek God looks is the thick silver chain around his neck that has embedded the initials "ZEB" on it.

As soon as she nears him, he swiftly pulls her into his strong arms and hugs her tightly, all the while tousling her hair lightly. The girl hugs him back with equal passion. They then, pull apart.

Guy: Pappu, as usual you look beautiful.
The girl blushes and punches him lightly.
Pappu: Zeb, ab chale?
Zeb: yes Paps, let's go

Zeb sits on his motorbike and makes Pappu sit in front of him. Zeb brrr's the engine and off they zoom. Wind brushes against their faces and the cool night air has something called love stirring.

Oh hum dum …Oh hum dum
Suniyo re…
Oh jaaniya suniyo re…
Oh jaaniya shaam ko kiraki se chori chori nange pao jaa ayega
Oh hum dum suniyo re
Oh jaaniya suniyo re

Oh jaaniya shaam ko kiraki se chori chori nange pao jaa ayega
Ho suniyo re
Oh oh jaaniya re…
Dheem dheem dhana na…na …dheem dhana na…oh galiyo se ayega
Dheem dheem dhana na… na…dheem dhana na… seeti bhajayega
Dheem dheem dhana na…na…dheem dhana na…peem ke per se
Dheem dheem dhana na…na dheem dhana na…paas bhulayega

Aye here we go
I am rippling in the mike
The guy s go slamming up on the baseline
I don't need Halloween to touch you
…….baam


The frequent touch of Zeb's arms brush against Pappu's shoulders and just that warm touch, flings both of their hearts. Zeb speeds up on his Harley Davidson and Pappu holds on tighter, knowing very well that not only is the night storming but also her heart. Zeb speeds on and SPLASH, puddles of water from the road spray them.

Pappu's hair flies behind her, in Zeb's face, and the smell of her strawberry shampoo that she had used that day, filled him.

Suddenly Zeb halts to a stop in a vast area. It is deserted and not a single sole can be seen.
Zeb gets off his bike and to Pappu's amazement; Zeb lifts her off her feet and carries her over his shoulders. Zeb carries her and walks for about ten to fifteen minutes then he stops in front of a huge hay stack.

This hay stack is weaved in an out and molded into a hut form. Zeb puts Pappu down and entwines his fingers in hers and walks her towards it. Inside the straw hut a lot of green leaves cover the ground, almost like a mat.

The whole hut is ignited with a blue eccentric light. In the middle two straw stools lay with weaved table in between them and lying between them lays a red vat. Pappu and Zeb make themselves comfortable on the straw stools. Zeb lifts the lid off the vat, and places three containers covered in green leaves on the table. These containers contain carillon noodles, mixed vegetable stir fry – Chanson style and cold streamed cutlets. After that, Zeb pulls out a jug that is filled with fruit punch. Then he takes out plastic plates and cups that have flowery patterns on it.
Pappu drenches in the sweetness of Zeb and goes over to him and surprises him with a warm hug. And he in turn hugs her back.

Pappu: Zeb, tum mujhe roolake rahoge, you're so sweet
Zeb in his husky voice: tumhare liye, yeh kuch bhi nahi, agar mere bas mai hota, toh yeh chand tare, toh kya, mai tumhe poora sar jahan tofe mai deta

After they eat their dinner, and share a lot of memories of their past few months together.
Zeb in a passionate mood: Paps, walk keliye chale
Pappu: walk, chalo

Zeb and Pappu walk through prick sprigs and lonesome trees. Their hands interlaced and their eyes interlocking every minute. The eccentric vibes spread like fire in their hearts whenever their close to each other. The fierce winds draw the inch of space between them but their hearts are intertwined in a way, that neither rock nor mountain can pierce their love.

Zeb lifts Pappu up and spins her round and round, their echoes of laughter fill the up the void in the air with joyous rebounds.

Music
Kabhi jaage soyye, kabhi haste gaate
Kabhi tanha tanha
Kabhi aate jaathe
Zeb puts Pappu on his back and takes her around and Pappu holds on and then they stop and look at wildflowers. Zeb plucks out a particular peachy one and plants it in Pappu's hair.

Dil dadakne laghe bewaje besabab
Kya isiko mohobaat kehte hai sab
Kabhi jaage soyye, kabhi haste gaate
Kabhi tanha tanha
Kabhi aate jaathe


All of a sudden, Pappu kneels on the sandy ground. And looks up at Zeb with love filled eyes. Pappu takes out a black case from her pocket. She opened it and there sits the sparkling emerald ring that I had bought for Pappu so that she can gift it to Zeb. Pappu puts it on Zeb's ring finger.
Pappu: I love you, this is for the coming years…
Zeb pulls Pappu into his arms: this memory will forever cherish in my heart

Dil dadakne laghe bewaje besabab
Kya isiko mohobaat kehte hai sab

Kabhi jaage soyye, kabhi haste gaate…

Kahiin ruk gaya
To kahin mai chal pada
Zamana na samja deewana mai bada
Yeh mai bhi na jaanu
Ki mai kya chahta
Meri kya tamana
M,ai kya sochta
Kabhi rafta rafta
kabhi jaldi jaldi
becheni teri chahat pe tanki


Zeb and Pappu interlock eyes and time just tops there. The intensity rises like burning flames, Do I have to count the heart rate???

Preview: Jen and Hritick luvrs coming in just a few minutes
Luv ya Pappu
Soni
Edited by soni595 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was great soni...so romantic...pappu will love it...lol...keep up the great work 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
Okay don't bash me Shereen and Jenny, I admit i'm a slow poach and it takes time for me to type and think pf ideas at the same time, so another fifteen minutes, is that bearable???

luv ya
Soni

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