FF: Ek Paal...Prt14 pg13

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SugaNain

@suganain

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

Jazzy, like a computer hangs all the time. You have put us at another suspense point Yaar!

Anyways love the emotions, the drama.👏

Kanya got married to a drunkard, err! I can see how this can relate to many women.

Note: I hope she learns Karate! I think all women should.

Continue Soon & All silent readers Comment!

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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+ 6

Posted: 17 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: suganain
All silent readers Comment!

amen to that! 😃😃...how about a deal...if i get some silent readers to comment on this update...then i will post part 4 today...so what say...😉😉😉...i have about 8-9 parts pending...just waiting to be posted 😆😆...😛
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simran1285

@simran1285

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+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#23

Ouch! Jazzu that was really touching, poor Kanya I feel so bad for her, thank god Rannu is there to save the day but looks like we'll have to wait for that

please update soon the suspense is killing me

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ka435mal

@ka435mal

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#24

I am a silent reader and have read all your stories. excellent update. please update sooooooooon. can not wait for the next update. hurry please.

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Kiran

@Kiran_1

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#25

That was simply brilliant
Ure stories are pure genius
Poor Kanya hope she leaves chinmay soon
So ranbir and Kanya finally meet
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooooooooon

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 17 years ago

#26

Hi,

You seriously are a damn good writer. You sure you haven't written any award winning novels 😉, Then you should try to write some. I especially think you write soulful parts very well. Just reading it will make you feel the pain of the character. I cannot give any more praise than this comment. Post the next part as soon as possible.

-psarada