new ar ff- new part - Page 10

Originally posted by: princess_rulz

I LIKE IT !!
I just love this sentence !.. 👏 i'm glad u do.. my bf actually did all dis when we went on our first date... double date



Kash yeh hota DMG mein during Shilpa's time..hmm.. but think of all the romantic parts we saw when shilpa was there.. they were soo much better

All in all..a good episode.
Thanx for the pm. ur most welcumDo update soon and let me know.will try nd update soon nd i wont miss letting u knw coz ur comments mean a lot 2 me and so do other's comments[ /QUOTE]

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

lovely part 👏
god tht armaan is too much
he's just impossible
poor ridz, she can't evn be angry at him in peace 😆 i know😆😆
and yeah, u're the writer and the ultimate decision of how the story should proceed rests entirely with u
after all it is a product of YOUR imagination ya bt i hvnt decided nethng yet.. actually i dnt knw wat to do

Originally posted by: swansea

amazin part sweety

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

awwwwwww da date fing was sooo cute
really ncly written
well done
updte sooon

Originally posted by: meow23

amzng prt. d datng thing was sooo chweet....................... terrific update. thnx 4 pm.plzz update soon 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: harshita_dmg

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Originally posted by: sony_123

nice part. 👏
first date that too double date. very funny. 😊
waiting for ur next update.

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

hey nice ff yaar...thnx. i just read all the part and they are very nice....loved it..continue soon....can u pm whenever u update pm please.....

❤️MONA