Reel & Real life:(RN): 2 remaining updates posted - Page 12

Originally posted by: KRIZZY

tooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooood
and rajeev admiring priyanka was superb
plz update soooon..........

thank you dear, ab Rajeev ko toh Priyanka ko admire karna hi padega, after all hum sab ki khwahish jo hai 😉 waise admiration ek tarfa nahi hai, it's mutual admiration😳😳

Originally posted by: ayip

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wonderful update....
But why aliya is behaving like this???? 😡

sorry for late reply...didn't come on9 these days due to exam..

update soon.

hey dear,

thanks for ur comment! Aaliya par gussa mat ho, woh itni bhi buri nehi hai😉 lekin haan woh slave driver toh zaroor hai 😭

aur late reply ke liye sorry mat bolo yaar, tum exams mein bhi mere fic padke comment likhe yehi bahut bari baat hai maere liye, thank you sooooooooooooooooo much, but tum pehle apna exams thik se likho please, wish u all the very best😊

and yes update is coming soon

Originally posted by: george eliot

hi Mahak,

thank you so much for reading and commenting on my writing, that was really sweet😛

I am going to update very soon😉

yaar pls. jaldi se karna update.

Aur abki Raj aur Naina ko kam se kam baat karte hue acche se dikhana.

hi...dear..

update bahooot accha tha...just loved it. superb 👏

aur priyanka aur raj ka part...it was just mind blowing..... 😆

plz ud soon
take care
love
ashu 😊

Originally posted by: rlrl

hii ,,,,
its just amazing plzzzzz update soon dear.rajeev is concerning for Priyanka looks toooo good n specially the scene where Rajeev running after Prachi hehehe😆looks great...he is such s sweet Papa
n saying ...ye meri beti hai itni asani se thodi na hath me ayegi...
dat was damn good...n well Priyanka bieng jealous of Aliya its very good but Rajeev n Priyanka in ....car ...was too good n Rajeev....teasing Priyanka ....LOVEBLE GIRL hahahahah too good👏

its just n amzing fic....plzzzz update soon dear.....well Rajeev saying his
dialouges of LRL in sleppy hahhaahhahha😃 😃 😃 tooooo goooood
plzzzzzzzz dear plzzzzzz update soon if possible den plzzz update it today
okkkkk
Riti😳

hello Riti,

thank you soooooooooooooooooo much for reading my fic and writing such good words😳 I am so happy that you liked it😛

aur yeh rahi mere neye dost ke liye aaj ka update, hope you like it😛

EPISODE 11:

That day evening.

Our famous six gather at the nearby caf. They see the institute's cadets chilling out in their evening there

Priyanka: yaad hai hamare zyada se zyada scenes caf mein hi hota tha, they look just like our onscreen characters hai na?

Ghazal (smiling) haan in cadets ko dekh ke sach mein bahut achha lagta hai

Harshad: chal tera mood toh achha hua

Tabhi yeh log dekhte hai ki a young girl cadet walks in the caf and starts shouting at a guy cadet. The boy tries to convince her but she leaves in a fury.

Vikas: arrey arrey isko dekh, bilkul Huda aur Phoolan! Hey boy, hello

The boy is very thin, nervous, wears black rimmed glasses and looks too benign

Boy: are you calling me?

Vikas: Yes bro, come join us (He introduces everyone)……….and I am Vikas Manektala. We are here shooting for our film, tum yahan ke cadet ho na?

Boy: Yes, I am Huda

Everybody: whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat???????????????????

Boy: kyon kya hua? Mera naam Huda hai, Aman Singh Huda

Everybody: you must be kidding!!!!!!!!!! Seriously?????????????

Aman: haan kyon? Aap log itne chauk kyon gaye?

Vikas: aur woh ladki jo abhi abhi gaye hai who kaun hai bhai?!!!

Aman: arrey boliye mat, woh Nayanika hai, mere batchmate, lekin sab usse darte hai, bahut gussewali hai woh….sab se zyada gussa toh woh mere pe karti hai, ishiliye main usse Phoolan bulata hoon…………….

Kunal: guys please hold me, I am feeling sick…………

Vikas: main bhi, this is too much, achha bhai Huda yeh batao tum apni Phoolan se, I mean Nayanika se pyar karte ho na?

Huda: haan woh toh main karta hoon, lekin aapko kaise pata!!!!!!!!!!!!! yeh toh maine kisiko nahi bataya, main bahut darta hoon usse………..lekin aaplog itna shocked kyon dikh rahe hai, kuchh problem hai kya?

Priyanka: guys please hold on, this is just a coincidence, nehi Aman, actually hum na ek serial mein bilkul tumhare jaise roles kiye hai ishilye sab chauk gaye, btw tumne kabhi left right left dekha hai?

Aman: nehi par naam suna hai, achha usme similar characters the?

Vikas: similar nahi bhai same!! Matlab naam bhi almost same aur situations bhi, achha yeh batao tumhare friends mein se koi Ali, Aalekh, Pooja, Yudi bhi hai kya?

Aman: haan Pooja toh hai lekin aapko kaise pata?!!! Pooja toh hamesha mobile pe baate karti rehti hai, aapko abhi dikh jayegi aur ek hai Iqbal woh bahut funny hai, Mumbai se hai toh tapori language mein baate karta rehta hai….baki ka toh naam nahi suna…….

Arjun: this is crazy man, I can't believe it!!

Vikas: This is more than a coincidence yaar, pata hai, humare serial mein bilkul aise characters the, anyway aao na hamare sath coffee peeyo

Aman: nehi bas mujhe ab jana hai, nice meeting you people, aaplog hai na abhi shooting ke liye, toh bas mulakaat hote rahenge…bye

Priyanka: sach mein kuchh zyada ho gaya, real life aur reel life ek dusre mein mix!!!

Arjun: aise toh ek real life Neelu bhi hogi! Aur ek real life Rajveer sir!

Tabhi Rajeev enters the caf to pick up some food He sees the gang and joins them.

Rajeev: hi guys, can I join you?

Priyanka: oh sure, btw aapko congratulate karna bhul gayee thi, congratulations.

Everybody remembers and congratulates Rajeev.

Rajeev: kisliye bhai?

Ghazal: aarey aapke film Aamir ko jo itna achha review mila, suna hai bahut achha film hai

Rajeev: o thanks a lot (looking at Priyanka and smiling) thanks for remembering. By the way tum sab thoda dazed dikh rahe ho, is everything allright?

Arjun: haan bas humko abhi pata chala ke humare characters real life mein bhi hai! Vikas tells him everything.

Rajeev: "really?!!!!!!!!! That's amazing!! (thinking) mujhe bhi in real cadets se baat karna chahiye, pata nehi shayad Prachi ke investigation ke baare mein kuchh suraagh mile…"

Rajeev feels a little guilty. He hasn't done anything about Prachi's case since he has come here. He decides to leave right now: ok guys enjoy your coffee, I'll see you tomorrow

Kunal: arrey aapko kya hua? Suddenly ja rahe hai?

Rajeev: kuchh kaam yaad aa gaya, chalo see you, bye.

Rajeev decides to go and look for the jwellery shop whose name was embossed on Prachi's ring. Suddenly he realizes he shouldn't be taking Prachi along with him. Prachi was sleeping in his room, now she's wide awake.

He has kept Prachi out of most of the unit, only his co-actors and Aaliya know about her. Kiske paas chhodke jaaye? Priyanka? Nehi he didn't want to bother her after a hard day's work…….toh fir Aaliya? Chalo dekhte hai woh free hai ki nahi. Rajeev goes and knocks on Aaliya's door.

Aaliya comes out in a white nighty, she looked a little upset.

Rajeev: sorry Aaliya, did I disturb you?sleeping?

Aaliya: nehi boliye

Rajeev: woh actually main soch raha tha ki Prachi ko kuchh der ke liye tumhare paas rakhke jayoon, but only if you have no problems

Aaliya: (not looking at him) okay

Rajeev feels a little uncomfortable: tumhe sach mein koi problem nehi hai na? u are looking a little tired

Aaliya: (still not looking at him): no, main thik hoon. Lekin aap soch lijiye do u trust me with your daughter?

Rajeev: tum aise kyon bol rahi ho?!!!!!!!!arrey tum mujhse gussa ho kya?

Aaliya: nehi you don't trust me with your co-actors, you think I am a slave driver and penalizing them for no reason

Rajeev: arrey aisi koi baat nehi par haan aaj training kuchh zyada tough ho raha tha ishiliye maine bola

Aaliya: I am sorry Rajeev mujhe aapke cadets ko, especially Priyanka ko, itna hard work karwana nehi chahiye tha

Rajeev: tum baar baar Priyanka ka naam kyon le rahi ho? I was talking about all of them aur sach mein mera maano, your shots will be perfect! Ab please gussa chhodo, chalo sorry tumhe bura laga toh

Aaliya: chalo yeh toh pata chala ke aap ko mera bhi thoda khayal hai, ab jayiye jahan ha rahe the, Prachi can stay with me, waise aap ja kahan rahe hai?

Rajeev: bas thoda sa kaam hai, thanks and sorry again,

Aaliya smiles: bye, aur suniye aapna khayal rakhna

Rajeev comes out of the academy. "Galaxy jwellers": the name embossed on Prachi's ring. He had no clue how to start his investigation, filhaal toh yeh dukaan dhoonda jaaye. Tabhi he spots a cadet lurking near the gate.

Rajeev: Hi, I am Rajeev Khandelwal, am here for shooting a film, are you a cadet here?

Cadet: kyon tereko apun ki uniform nehi dikhta?

Rajeev: ahem…haan mereko woh toh dikhta hai, actually mujhe kuchh poochna tha, aap bata sakte ho yahan market wagera kahan hai jahan pe jwellery shop mil sakta hai

Cadet: apun ko yahan ka sab kuchh pata hai, tujhe leke bhi chal sakta hoon par uske badle mein mujhe kya milega?

Rajeev: (thinking) baapre yeh toh Aalekh ka real life sanskaran hai, shayad isse bhi daru hi chahiye (aloud) ahem, aap batao, what do u want, how many bottles?

Cadet: bottles? Nehi apun ko tere film mein ek guest appearance chahiye, bas

Rajeev: okay hum toh aise hi kucch real life cadets ko shoot karnewale hai, ab please batao yahan ka market place kahan hai

Cadet: tere ko kaunsi dukan chahiye?

Rajeev: jwellery shop, Galaxy jwellers naam ka kuchh hai na?

Cadet: haan toh yeh bol na, Galaxy jwellers yahan ka sabse bara jwellery shop hai, lekin kuchh din pehleich wahan pe ek funny cheez ho gaili thi

Rajeev: achha? Woh kya?

Cadet: gundo ne dukaan tahasnahas kar diya tha, lekin gehne nehi loota ! police bhi hairan hai!!

Rajeev: (thinking) this is becoming more and more complicated, I really need to go to the shop at once (aloud) thanks for your information cadet….?

Cadet: Cadet Iqbal

Rajeev: glad to meet you cadet Iqbal, mujhe ab jana hai

Cadet Iqbal: chaliye apun bhi tere saath chalte hai

Rajeev: no cadet, mujhe akele jana hai, agar aur koi kaam ho toh main tumhe zaroor yaad karunga

Rajeev walks towards the market. It's a small town ordinary market, few shops and even fewer people. He asked a couple of people and quickly spotted Galaxy jwellers towards the end of the market. Nobody seemed to recognize him much, only a couple of old ladies he met on the way called him "Sujal!!!"

Rajeev steps in Galaxy jwellers, unaware of the fact that two people are watching him from a distance.

One of them make a phone call: Sir, Rajeev Galaxy jwellers aa gaye, hamara sak sahi nikla

The other voice on the phone says: Don't do anything, keep watching. Attack only if he walks out with that.

Next episode: Rajeev: Priyanka tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Priyanka: (thinking) ab main inhe kaise batau main yahan kya karne ayee hoon

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Priyanka: ajeeb hai yahan pe aisa humla ho sakta hai maine kabhi socha bhi nehi tha

Rajeev: (thinking) yeh humla koi ordinary humla nehi hai…aur Priyanka tum kya kar rahi hi itne der raat ko akele….

Originally posted by: ashu20

hi...dear..

update bahooot accha tha...just loved it. superb 👏

aur priyanka aur raj ka part...it was just mind blowing..... 😆

plz ud soon
take care
love
ashu 😊

hi dear,

thanks again😃 Raj aur Priyanka ke aur scenes aane wale hai, par dono kitna jhagarte bhi hai yaar, hamesha misunderstanding hote rehte hai, 😭 ishiliye dono ko saath laane mein hi darr lagta hai

chalo update kar diya😛

lots of love

GE

hi dear...
update padha bahot accha tha...aur its really good to see cadets huda and iqbal...
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