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perfectpiscean thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey vini!
Cant wait 4 ur next upd8! Plz continue soon!

Marisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey sweety,

i couldnt comment......very sorry ....
omg they are mindblowing updates yaar.....i am eagerly waiting for the ball dance......but they are short dear make them long yaar 😉 .....hey the crazy love of armaan for ridzy is making me crazy...... wishing u make balll dance perfect for this luvng couple and for us tooooooo 😉 ......
continue soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
dear......... waiting for next part.........

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey update fast yaar!!!! been waitin frm so long!!! come on hurry up ... cant wait to read wats next!!!! jaldi karo n ayaar!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 27
At home
Rids tells muskaan about Armaan's last wish

"so?? kya korogi?????" muskaan asked... secretly smiling to her self.
She knew armaan would do somethin like this

"jaana hoga..."

"hmmm...actually why not???" muskaan said smirking.

"oh.. shut up" rids said as she hit her wid a pillow." lekin ab kya pehnu???"

"kyon??? peeli (yellow) sari mein kya problem hai?? woh to pehne wali ho na???"

"haan... lekin.. ab.. mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe kuch aur hi pehna chahiye.." rids said looking at her borin saree on the bed

"theek hai... to mall chale??? ready made sarees avaliable honge.."

"mall?? thankz muskaan" rids hugged muskaan... she wasnt too shure she would come wid her... and she really needed to wear soemthin nice.

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At the mall... in FabIndia(hey ive seen pretty good sarees there....lol...)


"wow... they all look so good!! mujhe bhi ek kharidni hai!!! Muskaan said

Rids laughed at muskaan's kiddishness..
"fine... kharid lo"

"lekin kaunsa?????" muskaan said pulling 20 of them out and holding them one by one agaisnt herself infront of the mirror..

"hmmm... this looks really niceZ" rids said pulling one out..

"haan yaar.. and tht too its rahuls favorite colour!!! "muskaan said geting completely excited.

color??? rids thought... ofcourse... armaan loves BLACK!!! i should get somethin black!!! he would love it!!! .. no.. wait... NAHI!! Armaan aur mein?? kabhi nahi!!!Anjali bhi to hai!!! par mein armaan ke saath ja rahi hu... aur armaan ne MUJHE choose kiya... toh... that must mean something ryte???oh shit! NAHI!! mein kya soch rahi hu???!! par... hmm... lekin..... black to ek acha colour hai.... deosnt mean i have to buy it for him... meri choice hai!! i love black too!

"rids??? kya hua??? " Muskaan said watching her

"oh nothing....ummm excuse me... may i see some black elegant sarees??"Rids said talkin to the salsman.

"yes maam..." pulling out black sarees from various shelves

"black????? " muskaan said... she watched the salesman pull out millions of sarees.. evident tht black was the in statement.

"haan... kyon???" rids said looking through the back sarees..

"oh i get it!!! Armaan ka favorite color!!!!" muskaan said wid a huge grin across her face

"kya??? ofcourse no!!!" rids said blushing

"haan haan... rids mujhse jhoot???"

"nahi... mein to bas black islie le rah hu... kyon ki mere pass ek black blouse bhi hai!! aur waise bhi.. i love black!!"

but before muskaan could contradict her statement... Muskaan noticed someone in the opposite store

"Riddhima!!!!!!!!!" muskaan yelped

"kya?? kya??" rids asked looking around

"ARMAAN AUR ATUL!! muskaan said extremly excitedly...

"oh shit!!! kya kare??"

"kya kare??? wat do u eman kya kare!!" we'll call them here na?? mujhe poochna hai ki kya rahul ko yah saree pasand aayegi.." muskaan said about to leave to meet them

"WAT????? muskaan??? tum pagal ho?????kaise kar sakti ho?????" Rids said pulling her back

"kyon????kya hua??"

"kyon????kyon ki mein saree khareedne aayi hu!!!"

"haan to???"

"toh??? armaan waha hai!!!!!"

"as i said..... haan toh???"

"ARMAAN!!!!!!!! ko lagega ki mein uske saath jaane ke wajah se ek nayi saari kharidne wali hu!! BALL DANCE KE LIYE!!!

"so.. aap yah saree ball dance mein nahi pehne wali ho???"muskaan asked getting completely confused.

"haan pehne wali hu.. lekin.. armaan shouldnt know tht i bought one just for te dance... "

"ohhhhhhhhhhhh.....!!!" muskaan said "theek hai theek hai..."

"muskaan dont give me that loook.." rid said looking at her suspisciously..

"wat look...???" muskaan said grinning "accha.. ab batao.. wat have you chosen??" changing the topic

" pata nahi... lekin.. did he see us??"

"hmmm pata nahi.. lagta to nahi hai.."

"ok.. " just then... her cell phone starts to vibrate..

she recieved a message.
BB: hey rids... im picking you up at 7.. alright??

"oh my god!!! muskaan i hink he saw us!!!!!!" rids said

"kya??? he told you??"

"nahi..... lekin"

"toh... he could have just randomly msged you ryte???" muskaan reassured her

hmmm.. she has a point.... rids thought

"do one thing... message him... he might mention it."
muskaan said

"hmm.. theek hai.." ..kyaa kahoo??? rids thought

FF: ok...tumhe mera address pata hai???

As she sent the message she got back to looking at the sarees..trying her best to be out of sight from armaan..

"mere paas ek spaggetti strap black blouse hai.. kiske saath jayega??" rids asked

"hmmm... i like this one.... oh wait.. yeah bhi accha hai.... oh WOW!!! lok at this...... oooooooohh this one!!! " muskan said as she picked up a couple of sareees.

"oh god... sooo many.."
just then she got a msg
BB: yeah baby... i know ur address...

Riddhimas stomach churned at the word 'baby' she read tht line over and over again....
"rids????"
"oh.. kuch nahi..." yeh dekho.." rids said as she pulled out of the trance...

FF: oh.. ok.. umm.. hame kuch kal ke liye lana hai???

she recieved an immediate reply
BB: nahi... kyon??

FF: kyon ki party basketball ki jeet ki vajah se hai... aur... hum teams ke captains hai.. to mujhe laga ki hame kuch laana chahiye... kher chod do... umm.. party kab tak hai???

rids typed.. trying to think of somehtin more to ask

"yeh kaisa hai muskaan??' rids said picking up a black and gold saree

"nahi yaar.. bahoot flashy hai..."

"hmm.. theek hai... so out of these ... wat do i take muskaan??" rids said as she piled a set of sarees seperately on the table

" hmmm... dekh lete hai...oh wait... look at this rids!!!" muskaan jumped as she pulled out a delecate and smooth saree wid silver handwork on it..

rids was checking her cellphone as she recieved another message

BB: 1:00... parso (dayafter) holiday hai.... so deosnt matter..

FF: haan.. bas pooch rahi thi..

"wow muskaan.. it looks amazing!! " rids said falling in love wid the sareee.
muskaan placed the saree infront of riddhima as she tested the texture wid her skin tone in front of the mirror..

"wow... it looks gorgeos!!!" muskaan exclaimed

just then rids noticed armaan and atul leaving the store..
"hes gone.." muskaan whispered..

"Thank god!!!!i taking this.. billing kare??" rids asked...

"shure.. meri saree bhi.." muskaan said handing herlight blue saree to rids..

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As they sat in the car...suddenly rids gets a msg.

BB: oh and by the way... nice choice.. cant wait to see you in it ;)

Edited by muzic_chick247 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
😆 That wuzzz sooooo cutEEE!! 😃 😃

yay dble the treat for me, watchin today's epic n readin ur FF 😃

-Natasha
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Posted: 17 years ago
reserved!
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!
dat waz sooooooooooooooooooooooo GUD!!!!
Amazin
AND SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!!
luve it !
specially da last line!
cant wait 4 da dans!
cont asap!!!!!!
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dis tym cont fast
i really wana read more!!!!!!!
TC Krinz.....
Edited by ***Krinz_dmg*** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
soooooooooooo cute part sweeety
plz update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowww superb yaa......... was waiting for ur part........
thanks for the pm...... wowwwwwwwww he was seeing her thruout the whole scene....its so cute.....
are yaar kab likhogi ball dance....... cant wait any more...... jaldi party wala part likho.......jaldi nai abhi ke abhi likho 😉 .......thanks once again for the lovely part 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Amazing part!
Im soooo addicted 2 ur ff!

OMG...he knew abt her shopping 4 her sari?! Awesum!

Pls cont. soooooooon! 😳


Marisha

PS: Thanx 4 da pm! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
god vini .. go on .. i liked it alot!!! nice choice toh was awesome!! lol ... u updatin a lil more now only nah??

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