*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76

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123abc123

@123abc123

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#171

awwwwwww
dat was great really nce as usual
feelin sori 4 both of dem
n coz u alwys leave me speechles i fought
id giv u lots of...

and hope ur feeling betr

luv nizma xxx

Edited by sweet-niz - 17 years ago

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Sonal

@swt.smileee

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#172

wow!! wow!! wow!! 👏 👏
ur ff is awesome awesome awesome..
i mean i couldnt stop reading it..
i almost had tears in my eyes...
itsss soooooo very well written...n its so emotional...
wel..cant wait 2 read more...
plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon...
i am really eager to noe wats gonna happen next!! 😳
👏

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#173

thanks for updating please continue it soon

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#174

it was cute n well described sweety....continue super soon!!!!!!!

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Shruti

@addicted2ksg

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#175

that was an amazing part!!! luvd it!! continue soon!

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Sheetal

@er.Sheetal

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#176

Hey Pinky dat was a gr8 one... D emotions were described very well... 👏

Specially her black & whites... It is a natural reaction for a human to get stuck wid his/her own decisions at times, specially when it comes to someone very close to ur heart... 😭

Ridz seems to b swinging between yes or no at d time... Watever Armaan did to her was undoubtfully painful... 😕 Armaan have to try more & harder to win her trust back...

I enjoyed d part a lot... Plzzzzzzzzz update soon... dying to know wat Ridz will decide & wat will d Armaan's next step to ge her back i his life...😊

Love
- Sheetal

Edited by er.Sheetal - 17 years ago

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Sanchitha

@Bloomsanchitha

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#177

omg astha.......its fantastic......the capture of emotions in dis part particularly is just undescribeable 👏 its too good actually.....and pls do continue updating ur ff and if possible pls do pm me after the updates 😳 continue asap

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Jodubai

@Jodubai

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#178

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Astha, you are an amazing writer, the evil/nice riddima was tooo good, enjoyed reading it, so much pain & hurt, maybe this pain is necessary for their bond to get stronger

Sorry about your loved one, don't worry, you will get your loved one back very soon, take care.

thanks for the pm

Edited by Jodubai - 17 years ago