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Posted: 16 years ago
leeeeeeeee i just said second but i think this is third na, my god how do u manage to write these n ud them regularly?
But love ur work n soon u will get a good reply.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

awesome ud sweety.

Thank u so much ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
Sarthak to sach me bahut jyada hi naughty hai aur us ko Muskaan ko dekhte hi kuch aur time hi nahi milta hai.
Sahi me aisa hi hota hai.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
Phone na ho to pata nahi kahan dhoondha jaaye in logon ko? Sarthak to disturb bahut ho raha hai baar baar call aane se.
In logon ko akela chahiye aur baaki log in ko group me hi rakhna chahte hain.๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Muskaan n us ka last scene kaafi accha tha aur so as Vedoo n Poorvi.Akhir Poorvi ne confess kar hi liya that she loves him.
Kab tak nahi maanti na.๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
continue soon is baar kuch jyada hi time le liya aap ne mam.

Haan par is baar timely kar rahi hoon na ud.๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pritib0

HIIIIIIII VARTIKA...........
THE UD WAS.............
AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOME..............
SUPERB...............
GR8....................
JUST TOO GOOD.................
DO CONT.SOON.............

thanks so much deary ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

kYA BAAT HAI BHAI SARTHAK N MUSKI KO AAJ KAL LAGTA HAI EK DOOSRE K ALAWA KOI KAAM NAHI HAI.

Sahi me lage rehte hain kahin na kahin ye dono bhi.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
HE IS HOPELESS NOW.MUSKAAN BHI MANA NAHI KARTI HAI AB TO.
Kaise mana karegi aakhir yahi to chahti hai vo.๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
LAST SCENE B/W THEM AWESOME.
UD SOON.๐Ÿ˜Š

thanks so much ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: srojaleen

awesome ud... yaar. ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

thanks so much ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
ye sarthak aur mushkan ka kuch bhi nahin ho sakta...!!! dono kahin bhi suru ho jate hain...!!! kya karen...sayad isi ko pyar kahte hain...jis me duniya-jahan ki khabar nahin rahti...!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
Sahi me kabhi kabhi tag line ho jaati hai kya karein control nahi hota hai.๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
lekin maze ki baat yeh hai ki real duniya me unhe wapas lane me un k cell phone ka baht bada hath hai...!!! warna pata nahin kya se kya ho jata...!!!๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Haan akhir yahi hua na agar phone na ho to pata hi nahi chalega.๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
to akhir poorvi ne apne pyar ka izhar kar hi diya...vedant se...!!! achha hai...kab tak bechara yun hi rahta...!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
Karna hi tha jo hai vo to karegi hi.๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
hope ki sakhshi bhi apne ander chupe hue sahil k liye apne dil ki mohabbat ko mehsus kar le...aur apne pyar ko kubul kar le...!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
abhi itne jaldi hona mushkil hai thoda time lagega.
cont soon.๐Ÿ˜Š

off course dear ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

absolutely mindblowing updt............

thanks a lot dear ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

loved it........

muskaan n sarthak wer tooo good n very cute....

Cute nahi shaitaan ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HIIII VARTIKA HOW R U?
THE UD WAS AWESOOOOOOOME
TOO GOOD
MINDBLOWING
SUPERB
FANTASTIC
U R ASUPERB WRITER
I LOVE EACH AND EVERY SCENE DEAR
LOVE
DEEPA



thanks a lot dear ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: arpita25

leeeeeeeee i just said second but i think this is third na, my god how do u manage to write these n ud them regularly?

Pata nahi i think god has provied me extra efficiency.๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† Thanks dear ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
But love ur work n soon u will get a good reply.

Thanks n i would eagerly wait for ur reply.๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

lo ab is ka ud kab hoga madam?

aa raha hai bus,๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 16 years ago
Here's next part:-

"Thi kahan tu itne der?" Vedant ne poocha.

"Kuch nahi bhaiya bus traffic bahut tha." She replied.

"Are tum bhi na kitne pooch taach karte ho. Ab traffic pe kis ka jor hai?" Poorvi ne kaha.

"Haan par mujhe chinta ho rahi thi na." He reasoned.

"Ab to aa gayi na ye?" they asked.

"Haan baba theek hai." Vedant ne finally smile karte hue kaha.

Soon we can see the party in full swing. Sarthak ki najrein poore time Muskaan pe hi thi aur Muskaan ye feel bhi kar rahi thi aur sharma bhi rahi thi. Kuch yahi haal Shikhar aur Vedant ka bhi tha sivaay Sahil k jaisa ki us ko mana kiya gaya tha kuch bhi aisa karne k liye madam Muskaan ki Kripa se.

"To ab ladies n gentlemen vo mauka aa gaya hai jis ka aap sab ko besabri se intejaar tha." And he called Vatsal n Mauli on the floor n Mr. n Mrs. Malhotra too.

"Ladies n Gentelmen mai aaj bahut khush hoon ki meri beti ne apne liye humsafar chun liya hai. Mujhe poori tarah se vishwaas hai ki ye meri beti ko humesha khush rakhega." Ye keh kar vo Mauli ki taraf mude aur bole, "Beta ring pehnaaiye."

Mauli ne pehle ring pehnaai aur jaise hi us ne ring pehnaai poora hall clapping sound se bhar gaya.Phir Vatsal neb hi Mauli ko ring pehnaai aur fir se ek baar poora hall bhai gaya taaliyon ki gunj se. Tabhi achanak light chali gayi aur center light jal uthi stage pe ek aur.

"Ye mere sab se acche dost Vatsal aur meri pyaari se gudiya k liye." He was Sarthak n..........

A group of gals sang for Mauli:-
Kehti hai mangni ki angoothi,
Preet nibhaana raja ji
Der na karna,
ghodi chadkeJaldi aana raja ji
Everyone was astonished to see Sarthak in this way. No one expected that he may be like this ever. Mr. n Mrs. Malhotra were also surprised but they really loved their son for this.
A group of gals sang for Mauli:-
Kehti hai mangni ki angoothi,
Preet nibhaana raja ji
Der na karna,
ghodi chadkeJaldi aana raja ji
Jahan tak Mrs. Mahotra ka sawaal tha vo to jaanti hi hain ki Sarthak Mauli ko kitna pyaar karta hai.
Oh ho ho oh oh oh oh - 2
Kehti hai mangni ki angoothi
Sapne sajaana rani ji
Doli leke voh aayenge
Mat ghabraana rani ji
Koi bhi ladki khush to hogi hi jab vo dekhegi ki us k bhai ne us k liye vo kiya hai jo aaj tak us ne nahi kiya. Sarthak was smiling at her n she was getting senti with each passing minute.
(Banno hai phoolon ki daali
Banno hai naazon ki paali
Banno ka mukhda kya kehna
Dekh na jaaye bhor ki laali) - 2
Soon Muskaan, Poorvi ,Nikki n Sakshi were pulled on the stage by rest of the group of gals. Sarthak loved watching Muskaan dancing n same with Shikhar , Sahil n Vedant. Jab ki Sakshi nahi karna chahti thi dance par Muskaan itne asaani se kahan chodne waali thi kisi ko. Soon they pulled Mauli also with them.
Dulha banke kesariya
Saafe mein aana raja ji
Laali laali dulhaniya ko
Sang le jaana raja ji
Kehti hai mangni ki angoothi
Preet nibhaana raja ji
Der na karna, ghodi chadke
Jaldi aana raja ji
Aayenge sajni ke saajan
Mauli was in centre n Vatsal was really admiring her for making his life heaven. He loved her so much n owed himself never to let her cry. He promised himself too to make her life as beautiful as she is. He thanked god for giving him Mauli n Sarthak as his best parts of life. He winked Mauli n she blushed , she hide her face b/w the group.
(Aayenge sajni ke saajan
Pyaar karenge aise saajan
Rakam byaaj ke saath vasoole
Jaise koi bedard mahajan) - 2
Yahan Shikhar bhi Nikki k liye kuch aisa hi soch raha tha us ne ye baat decide kar li thi ki vo is baar Solan pahuchte hi sab se pehle is bare me apni maa aur paa se baat karega kyounki ab shayad vo Nikki se aur jyada dino tak door nahi reh sakta hai. Jaldi hi dono ek doosre k ho jaaye bus ab yahi shayad dono chahte hain.Shikhar's gazing eyes were making Nikki so weak n she was unable to look in his eyes because this time his eyes were filled with different desires for her.
Khushi khushi tum karz chukaana
Mat sharmaana rani ji
Honeymoon ke liye chaand ki
Ticket kataana rani ji
Here Sahil was not thinking about what Muskaan told him last night. He was lost in her n was unable to take his eyes off from her which was making her quite uncomfortable. Pata nahi kyoun Sahil ki aakhon ka pyaar Sakshi ko kuch ajeeb sa feel karata tha aur isiliye vo samajh nahi paa rahi thi ki kyoun vo aise dekh raha hai us ko jab ki aaj us ne ek baar bhi us se baat nahi ki.
Kehti hai mangni ki angoothi
Preet nibhaana raja ji
Der na karna,
ghodi chadkeJaldi aana raja ji

When the dance finished Mauli ran n hugged Sarthak. Sarthak just smiled at her but inside he was also getting senti because his only sis is going to be wife of his best friend.

"Bhaiya aap ne ye sab mere liye??" she couldn't control herself n tears made it's way.

"Shhhhhh ye kya? Meri behan ko rona aa raha hai. Aise kaise?" he said trying to made her mood light.

"Bhaiya mai??.." ab to Mauli rone hi lagi. Her voice choked.

"Mai apne is pyaari behan k liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon samajhi. Maine ye sab teri khushi k liye kiya hai pagli. Mai in aakhon me ansoon kabhi nahi dekh sakta samjhi." He patted her back.

Yahan Mr. N Mrs. Malhotra ki aakhon me bhi ansoon aa rahe the. "Kaash kabhi aise hi mere bete ne mujhe samajhne ki koshish ki hoti." Mr. Malhotra ne kaha.

"Mai bhi us din ka intejaar kar rahi hoon jab Sarthak mujhe maa keh k bulaye." Mrs. Malhotra said with teary eyes.

After sometime:-

"Theek hai Sarthak ab hum ko chalna hoga." Vedant said.

"Par itne jaldi?" Sarthak asked.

"Nahi yaar kal humari morning ki flight hai na to jaana jaroori hai." Sahil told giving a look to Sakshi. Saksi felt bad for but herself didn't know y.

"Par tum log kal hi to aaye ho na?" Vatsal asked.

"Haan par jaante ho na job me leaves kahan milte hain." Vedant said n when his eyes met with Poorvi he understood that she wasn't happy.

"Are yaar itne door aaye ho to kam se kam humari city to dekh k jaao na." they urged. Vaise Sarthak to vaise bhi nahi chahta tha ki Muskaan jaaye vapas n she knew that.

"Nahi yaar humara jaana jaroori hai . Tum aisa karo in logon ko city dikha do na. Hum fir kabhi dekh lenge." Sahil suggested.

"Par bhai aap logon k bina?" Muskaan ne jaan moojh k kaha jis par Sarthak ne us ko ek killing look diya.

"Are Muskaan Sarthak hai na yahan, koi problem nahi hogi I know." Vedant said.

"Haan haan mai hoon na , tum pareshaan kyoun hoti ho?" he said giving her a sharp look to which she smiled.

Poorvi gusse me bahar chai gayi n Vedant noticed it.

"Vo mai abhi aaya." Ye keh kar Vedant gaya Poorvi k peeche.

Nikki n Muski smiled at him but Sahil found it wired. "Kya hua tum log aise smile kyoun kar rahe ho?"

"Kuch nahi par hum ne aap se jo kaha hai vo aap ko yaad hai na?" Muski asked.

"Haan meri maao yaad kaise nahi hoga." He stated.

Sakshi gave all of them a puzzled expression ki kis bare me baat ho rahi hai. They nodded in negative. Mauka dekh k Shikhar ne ek corner se Nikki ko ishara kiya. Nikki us k paas gayi.

"Kya hai? Aise sab k saamne tum bhi na!" she said.

"Bahut bolti nahi ho tum? Kabhi kuch kar bhi liya karo." He indicated her to kiss him n she fulfilled his wish.

Yahan Sarthak koshish kar raha tha ki kaise vo Muski ko saath le jaaye par Sahil k saamne ye possible hi nahi tha. Tabhi ek ladki aa k Sahil se takra gayi aur Sahil ne us ko girne se bacha liya.

"Thanks," she said.

Sahil held her in his arms n said, "It's my pleasure." Pata nahi kyoun Sakshi ko ye baat jara bhi acchi nahi lagi aur vo doosri taraf dekhne lagi. Sahil noticed it so he kept on flirting with that gal.

"By the way myself Sahil Nigam." He introduced himself.

"Mera naam Chitra hai." She said n they became busy in small chit chat when Sarthak found the time n he pulled Muski with him.

"Kahan le jaa rahe ho mujhe?" she asked whispering but he ignored.

"Are kuch bolo bhi na." she said again but he was still silent.

Soon the reached in a room n entering in the room Sarthak closed the door behind.

"Kya kar rahe ho ye Arth?" she frighten.

"To aap abhi bhi mujh se darti hain?" he questioned.

"Vo aisa nahi hai, par tum mujhe itne ajeeb dhang se yahan tak le k aaye to mai thoda ajeeb feel kar rahi thi." She said.

"Aur jab maine door close kiya tab kya feel kar rahi thi?" he asked moving towards her.

"Kuch nahi." She denied.

"Batao na?" he insisted.

"Kuch nahi kaha to Arth." She said softly.

"Batao Muski pls na." is baar shayad kuch is andaaz me Sarthak ne kaha tha ki Muskaan ko apni soch pe sharam aane lagi.

"Tum??na jaante ho fir bhi kyoun poochte ho?" she said softly.

"Kyounki mai sun na chahta hoon ki mai tumhare saath kya kya kar sakta hoon?" he was getting naughty.

"Arth pls....." par aage kuch kehne nahi diya Sarthak ne us ko. He started placing a series of kisses on her tummy which was shown from her lehnga. She started moaning with pleasure when he kissed her that part. Muskaan was aroused n Sarthak was enjoying to play with her desires. Soon he left her n switch on the lights of that room.

When Muski looked at the room she found it completely awesome. It was a beautiful room n she was just admiring of it's beauty.

"Kaisa laga?" Sarthak asked her hugging from behind.

"Awesome, par ye hai kis ka room?" she asked.

"Humara." He replied kissing her shoulder.

"Mai samjhi nahi, humara se matlab?" she asked confused.

"Hum ko se matlab humara hai maine ye room hum dono k liye decorate karwaya hai." He said.

"Kya? Matlab tum ne ye sab hum dono k liye kiya?" she got another pleasant shock of her life.

"Haan koi shak?" he asked.

"Par abhi to humare ek hone me waqt hai na?" she asked in confused tone.

"Haan maana waqt hai par honge na ek kabhi na kabhi. Aur mai us din ka badi besabri se intejaar kar raha hoon." He said still holding her.

"Tum sach me pagal ho, par maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki koi mujh se itna bhi pyaar kar sakta hai na." she said n turned towards him.

Sarthak looked at her eyes which were looking extremely beautiful n all he want that moment to stop n he looked her like this forever. It was just like a dream to him that she was standing infornt of him in his room. The main thing which caught his attention was her tears which were making him weak.

"Ye kya hai?" he asked rubbing them with his fingers.

"Bus aise hi mujhe pata nahi kyoun apni kismet pe yakeen nahi ho raha hai ki mujhe koi itna bhi chaah sakta hai kya?" she said still having tears in her beautiful eyes.

"U know tum rote hue bilkul bhi acchi nahi lagti. To aaj se mujhe tumhari aakhon me ek bhi ansoon nahi chahiye. In me bus pyaar hona chahiye bus pyaar aur kuch nahi." He said kissing her tears.

"Thanks Arth. Thanks for being in my life n loveing me so much." She said n placed a kiss on his head.

"Hey tum ko hua kya hai? Itna thanks mat karo mera. U deserve it jaanam." His this statement made her blush more.

"Koi mauka nahi chodte na tum flirt karne ka?" she asked him smiling.

"Haan aur vaise bhi chodna nahi chahiye aakhir meri gf k saath mai flirt nahi karoonga to kaun karega?" he asked winking her.

"Par humesha flirt hi nahi kuch aur bhi kar sakte hain na." she teased him back.

"Bolo to ek baar mai kuch bhi karne ko ready hoon." He said n tried to reach her lips when she pushed him back.

"Ye nahi kuch aur." She added.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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