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Posted: 17 years ago
Oho,to aap badi bechain ho rahi hai Neha ji,
koi gall nahi,humne aapki baat maani,
I am updating now!
Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
thank you sooo much Hina Di! I just read the whole fic! It's rocking yaar! Please chaithi karo. Intezaar nahi honda!

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Posted: 17 years ago
kya karun yaar hina..
uve got me addicted..
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Posted: 17 years ago

Ok Armaan and Riddhima cooking ,how cute innit?


Dr.Armaan Malik and Dr.Riddhima Gupta both ready for their mission paratha!Armaan says!
Both laugh and Riddhima says chalo
Armaan says hello where's the magic word?
Pleeease?
Riddhima goes ok plzzzzz!
Armaan goes thats better,dekha basket tum kal poora din aur porri raat mere sath rahi aur already tumhare manners me kitna farak aa gaya hai! and laughs

Riddhima gets irritated and says Armaan tum phir se shuru mat hona!
Armaan says basket ye to abhi shuruwaat hai!
Agey agey dekho hota hai kya!

and thinks to himself -Tumhe mai itna irritate karoonga ki tum apne pyar ka izhaar karne pe majboor ho jaogi thak ke!

and takes the ata in his hand

Riddhima says lao mujhe do,ye tumse nahi hoga

Armaan says are waah !ata mujhse banwaya aur ab tum credit logi paratha banane ka?

Riddhima says Armaan tum se thik se roll nahi ho payega!

Armaan says ab ye konsa mushkil hai,I've done the tough part of mixing,

she says in a fed up tone

thik hai mai tumhe dikhati hoo kaise roll karna hai, phir tum khud banana,okay?

He says fine ,ab tumse bhi mujhe kuch seekhna padega,itna bura waqt aa gaya hai mera God!and he looks as if talking to God!


She says Armaan be serious,he goes I am serious
about YOU !he says silently
and she goes kya?
He says nahi ,kuch nahi tum sikhao,tutor basket!

She goes aise ata lo and makes a ball of the ata and says ab isko flat belo!in a round shape!
Armaan says heart shape nahi chalega?making a heart shape with his hands
Riddhima says Armaan plz concentrate -in an angry way!

he goes sorry miss!
and she starts rolling the ata with the belan!

Armaan looks at Riddhima lovingly and comes from the back and holds Riddhima's hands while she's rolling the belan as if he is learning to make the paratha
Riddhima feels Armaan so close to her and gets a little nervous
Ridzie's hair is blowing and is disturbing Armaan while is admiring Riddhima from the back of her head

Armaan keeps moving his head to clear Riddhima's hair off his face,Riddhima says Armaan mere baal bandho,tumhe disturb kar rahe haina?

Armaan takes Riddhima's dupatta and ties her hair in a ponytail and while doing so feels so close to Riddhima and enjoys her aroma and adores her beautiful neck and then he recalls the hot scene from the night he kissed the back of her neck and goes into dreamworld!

Riddhima notices him in dreams and sees him from the corner of her eyes and says ARMAAN!

Armaan paratha!
He says ha?
Hmm paratha in a sad tone and comes back to reality!

She says chalo ab tum try karo!
He goes nahi Riddhima mujhse nahi hoga!
She says try to karo,
he goes ok thik hai ,lets give it a go,agey jaake shayad mujhe hi khana banana padey! abhi se practice karta hoo!
And he thinks again of the dominating Riddima ordering him away!

He takes the rolling pin in his hand and asks aise?
She says abhi tumne dekha na mujhe karte hue,waise!
He goes kon paagal parathe ko dekh raha tha? quietly

Then he goes ok ye lo maine try kiya and he makes a map of India shape paratha and Riddhima laughs

He goes oi basket ,mai doctor hoo chef nahi jo tum mujhse itni perfection expect kar rahi ho!

Riddhima says mai bhi doctor hoo Dr Armaan ,remember me

Dr Riddhima,the first intern of the first month,yaad hai,yaad hai?

He recollects that time and says haa ! ha!
yaad hai!,wo isliye tha ke maine tumko jeetne ka chance diya tha
mujhse tumhari haarne wali shakal nahi dekhi jati na islye!

She goes acha?

Waise bhi aap to multitalented hai na Dr Riddhima
Tussi to great ho ji!

Mahaan !
that word takes him back into the scene when he told her off for being mahaan on the terrace the other night

Even she is thinking about the same scene now

and both get sad

and then Armaan says hello basket kya sochne lagi?

just to clear the tension
He says ab ye paratha to mujhse banne se raha,tumhi banado!
Mai tumhari ek madad kar sakta hoo waise isme

Even she wanted to come out of her sad mood and says kya madad?

he goes mai taste karke bata sakta hoo ke kaisa bana hai!

They both smile and cheer up!

She says ok tum table par pani lekar jao ,mai abhi paratha banake laati hoo!

He takes a jug of water and goes and sits on the dining table which is in front of where Ridz is making parathas

He stares and glares at Riddhima busy making parathas
and so wishes they get married and have a family together! so that he can sit in the kitchen always and adore his Mrs Malik!


Now u gotta wait till the eating parathas scene
How cute and romantic will that be,only time will tell!

May be not many will be interested because of the cool episode expected tomorrow,i hope they show Holi and confession and hope it turns the relationship good again!I wish!


Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Anybody here?
or busy reading the update?
Plz reply once u have read it,I wud love to know your response on this part!
I hope I didn't disappoint anyone and hope u enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 really sweet part yaaar to gud
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Posted: 17 years ago
continue soon Hina Di!!!!! Can't wait!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
i jus read it..
very cute..

all the parts were awesome..
i luv the heart shape paratha 😆

n thnk u sooo much for updatin..
i can wait now
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was an awesome part di! 👏 👏 👏 please continue soon! 😳

Avanti
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ok guys,I was just waiting for a few responses,which I got,but not many,

Plz yaar agar acha lagey to reply karo na!

Thanks to who have replied,
The Indian DMGians crew must be fast asleep now ,so I hope to see more replies from them,
All my little friends across the world!

Take care everyone and good night,sweet dreams of AR having parathas(heart shaped)LOLOLOL!

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