`*`CHASE 2`*` Link to chase 3..pg 158! ❤️ - Page 23

Originally posted by: ndnhottie110586

ok so do i have the right to know who Mr.Amish is..hehhe.ok well i read it so it seems hottie's Bf gosh i am soo out of the loop...lol...i am missing stuff and how come i never got to about this Bf of ur's hottie..very bad..😭😭

Originally posted by: ndnhottie110586

Originally posted by: ndnhottie110586

😔..nobody said thay love me..😔u missed ur poor lil sis out....mommy....😭

Originally posted by: chocolate p

ok so do i have the right to know who Mr.Amish is..hehhe.ok well i read it so it seems hottie's Bf gosh i am soo out of the loop...lol...i am missing stuff and how come i never got to about this Bf of ur's hottie..very bad..😭😭.....heyyy sammy.....lol....ofcourse yu have da rite 2 knw..yur my sis remem!!!!LOL....yeaa hez my bf...wht else yu wunna knw..hahhaha well i just found out yest dat he livez closer 2 smiley...weird rite??? i knww...he goez 2 rutgerz...3rd in business...nahhh yu aintt missin stuff...yu justt got left baqq....cuzz yu nevaaa asked..hehehehe i think i did mention it be4..but idkk if it wuzz in my section or ekta's....srry sammmy.....now yu knw....LOL ❤️

Originally posted by: ndnhottie110586

::::: Help :::::

ok guyz..like i said i wunt be able 2 update regulary..datz not da prob i can find a break in bwt..but i need yur help...as yu have noticed..since da beginnin i have been goin @ a slower pace w/ da romance fling...it'z der all rite..but it will still take at least couple of more prt be4 i brin it in....but i have a ques 4 yu ppl...do yu guyz want me 2 proceed @ da same slower pace as i have been doin since da beginnin w/ unnecessary detailz...nd sum comfort level bwt AK or do yu guyz want me 2 skip all dat nd just jump straight into the romance prt....

i want 2 knw yur sugg becuzz i am in dilemma..on one hand i wanna proceed @ a slower pace w/ detailz so yu wunt get confused lter on..but at the same time i just want 2 jump straight through...plzzzzz let me knww wht yu think i sud doo...it will help me decide wht 2 do...nd how 2 go abt it...like da last time w/ family it helped me clear it out......sooo i need yur opinionz nd encouragementz....Thnkzzz a ton.....

❤️ Hottie ❤️

Originally posted by: chocolate p

😔..nobody said thay love me.........awwww sammy not 2 wrry..i luvv yuuu....LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU😔u missed ur poor lil sis out.......nop daa lovee iz still der.....i wuzz waitin 4 yu yest..i went 2 a friendz b-day party..nd came baq arund 1ish..nd yur alwyz on @ nite..so i came one..nd waitin 4 yu since i didn't tlk 2 yu da whole day..butt yu didntt cum 😭...soo seeee i missed yu!!!!!!!!!!!!! ❤️ mommy.......ummm soo whichh mommy re yu callin...LOL...reall or da adopted!!!LOL....dunt wrry jaan...main hoon na...LOL...LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUU ❤️ 😭

Originally posted by: love_iqbal_khan

ok....since you're the write....you should do what you feel comfortable doing. I'd be fine with anything. But if i put my self in a reader's place then I would like a bit of both actually. If you skip all the details and jump to the romance...the readers would get confused cuz they missed out on the detail....and a sudden move from "cool friends" to "intimate lovers" would seem a bit uneasy...so you can still give the detailed part but just dont write the "unnecessary info"..like u said in ur post....parts with unnecessary details....you can take some of that out if they are not needed...and speed up the romance by like 2 units or sumthing.......basically....Dont skip details and rush it to romance nor give details and long the romance.....

You can give details but put in a few more A-K parts!
M I confusing you???😕😕

Anyways...this was my thinking as a general reader......but I personally, am fine with anything!😳😃....vthnkzz ekta...i gett wht yu meann...as a writer yu cann write da way yu want..but as a reader yu tend 2 get diff viewz....LOL...thnkzz no yur nott confusin me..yu actuallyy helped me out..i get wht yu mean..itz just der'z so much dat needz 2 get dun be4 da romance cumz in..nd i just dunt want da readerz 2 feel like im draggin on nd on w/ sumthin...nd derz so romance yet..datz all..but yurr rite...thnkzz yu've helped outt a lot!!!! ❤️

Originally posted by: ndnhottie110586

Originally posted by: love_iqbal_khan

I am glad I could help!!!!😃....btw....since you're on........shud I be expecting a part?😕....
Not forcing you to post........just asking...cuz if u are going to post then i Ain't going to sleep........but if u aren't im gonna go and sleep........havent slept all night!😆......awwww..samee hea..i gott home @ 1ish..nd denn wuzz bzzyy sortin outt my clothez...cuzz my coll haz started..LOL..i will def post a prtt....lter 2day...LOL...soo yu sudd expect a prt..i knww i knww yur nott forcin..LOL..nd itzz okk yu cann go 2 sleep...cuzz my prtt wont bee on till like arundd midnite pr early mornin...cuz i have 2 attend a baby shower prty..nd wunt be homee til like 2ish again..soo yeep.......LOL..soo yu cann so ndd rest!!!til den..LOL...i still gotta read yurr last 1..just haven't gott da time...❤️..guess i will catch up on dattt lter...❤️....