dill chura liya AR PART 15[pg81 ]28/05 - Page 62

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hot_diva

so ur time starts now😆

ya my dear it had already started

urmila_17 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago

😉hi to all my frnds thanks for waiting and bearing me

ok this time i wanna dedicate this part to pinky she is actual reason who removed my laziness thanks a lot pinky

and to my dear frnds pragati and priyanka who always encourage me

ok here goes ur part

precap: some romance between AR and introduction of atul krishna and our zero ziggy , nisha goes to lonavali and anjali to rectal examination and scene ends at arman hugging krishna lets see what happens

part 15

arman and krishna depart from their hug

ar: krishna iam very happy to see u here

kr: me too

ri: yaha kya ho raha he hey arman ye tummari g.f tho nahi he na

ar: arey nahi meri jaan ye tho mere best frnd he krishna and krishna this is ridhima

kr[suspected there is some thing between AR]: hi ridhima nice choice

ri[slightly blushimg]: hi krishna thanks

all are in their world so no one noticed this

ziggy gets up [remember anjali stamps him again ] and goes near ridhima

zi: hey beautiful iam ..

ar: ziggy the no one flirter and ....

zi: oh tho tum kaun ho me tho tummare shishya hoon tum tho hum sab ke love guru ho

ri: love guru ye kya arman

ar: ridhima kuch nahi abey tum chup karo

at: hi ridhima iam atul

ri: hi atul nice to meet u

an: arman good news nisha left fr lonavali

ar: wow guys ye tho sach mein good news he

an: arey abhi tho baaki he anjali ko rectal examination duty

ar[jumps]: thats wonderful we should do party for that hey guys u are all invited to ridhimas house we will do party there[actually he want to celebrate party for his successfull love]

at: party kyun

kr: haan aur wo bhi ridhima ke ghar me

zi: haan yaar ridhima tho bahut achi ladki he isiliye uske ghar me

ar: u r not invited mr.ziggy

all[except ridz]: yeah right

ziggy goes from there

arman tells atul and krishna about there total story [ofcourse not about love affair between AR]

kr: oh tho ye baath he tho mr arman kya baath he kyu ridhima ke oopar itni hmm u know

ar: chup ridz tho meri best frnd he uske liye kuch bhi

at: great arman tho tum aur ridz ek hi room me wow

ar: omg stop it guys enough

and he drags ridhima with him and goes from there

note : rajan and anand are not there as they already know the story they were disscussing some thing

AFTER DUTIES IN LOCKER ROOM ALL ARE THERE EXCEPT ANJALI AND ZIGGY

ar: so guys come to ridhimas house at 9

all: done we will start our mission

ri: thanks a lot

raj: ridz hum sab tummare liye kuch bhi karenge

ri: thanks rajan u r very good

ar: tho chale

ri: haa chalo dady and giggles

all will laugh while arman gives i will see u later look to ridhima

mean while anjali enters

anj: hey arman

ar: hi anjali kaise raha tummari duty and giggles

anj: theek he

ar: ok enjoy waise mujhe kaam he me chaltha hoon bye

anj: bye[and goe to dream abt her and arman]

all will move arman and ridhima go to their house and arman quickly changes himself as rajeev[ridz dad]

anjali enters the house and sees some arrangements and shouts

anj: yaha kya ho raha he

ar[aka ridz dad]: beta yaha ek party ho raha he mere aane ke khushi me ridhima ne uske dost ko bhulaaya

anj: dost tho arman bhi aayenge na

ri: wo tho yahi he

anj: kya

ar: kuch nahi wo wo he is not comming

anj[depressed]: oh its ok and goes to her room

ri: thank u dady

ar: tummare liye kuch bhi beti and they both laugh

at 9

ok let me tell u who all are wearing what

ridhimas dress [ i know u all will get shocked ] but arman presented her and asked her to wear making puppy face how can she say no

Jovani prom dress 1988

krishnas dress

Jovani 10749 dresses

muskaans dress[dont get shocked i will tell u muskaan story later ]

Mori Lee 7001 Ball Gown

anjalis dress

Jovani Cocktail dress

ridhima comes out wearing her dress and starts to climb down the stairs mean while arman is looking at arrangements

after seeing ridhima arman pretends as if he fainted down ofcourse ridz was looking just like pari from heaven and continues to stare at her while ridz is blushing she will come down

arman goes near her and holds her by waist

ar: tum bilkul pari jaise dhik rahi ho u r soo beautifull

ri[blushing]: thanks

ar[makes a sad face]: omg now i should be careful

ri[confused]: kyun

ar[innocently]: ab najaane kitne saare nazar meri biwi ke upar padenge na jaane kitne dil aashiq ban jaayenge

ri[blushing]: arman stop it

when arman was about to kiss ridhima anjali enters 😡 so they depart

anj[shocked to see ridz in that dress]: ridhima tum

ar: haan beti koi shak

anj: nahi ye ye 😕

ar: wo kya he na naya baap aaya na isiliye wo apne style badal liya he namere pyaari beti

ri: haan papa aap ke liye kuch bhi

ar: meri beti pari jaise dhik rahi he [looking at anjali] hey bhagawan kisi ki nazar mat daalo

anj[gives watever look] : baaki sab kaha he

ar: abhi tak nahi aaya aur waise u r not that bad

anj[attitude look]: thanks and goes again

ar: saara mood karaab kardhiya isko tho me dhekloonga

ri: laughs seeing armans condition

mean while rahul and muskaan enters

rahul is ridhimas college frnd

muskaan is ridhimas neighbour

rahul and muskaan dont know each other

and they are soon going to join sanjeevani[ how can RM miss in my ff 😉]

mu: hey ridhima wow u r looking great

ra: haan ridhima tum bilkul pari jaise dhik rahe ho

ri: thank u 😳

ri: muskaan ye he rahul and rahul this is muskaan

ra: hi

mu: hi

ra: u r also looking ok

mu[giving irritated look]: thanks and u r not that bad

ra[to himself ]: interesting

mean while all others enter and anjali also joins them but she is searching for arman

ridhima introduces rahul and muskaan to others

krishna is trying her best to get attention of anand but he wont show any attention to her

atul secretly admires anjali

rajan stares at ridhima and secretly wishes that she also looks at him

while muskaan is drinking water rahul will push her[wantedly]

mu: hey tum where r u looking

ra: sorry miss me tho sirf sundar ladkiyon ko dhek tha hoon

mu: oye kaan kajoore

ra: kya kaha

mu: kaan kajoore kya apne kaan[ear] bhi ek baar check karvaadho 😆

ra: oye chipkaali zara apna moo bandh karo

mu: kya kaha me chipkaali hoon and take out her sandal and starts to run rahul giving is she mad look runs for his life 😆

at: anjali tum bahut sundar lag rahi ho

anj: thanks

at: me kaise dhik raha hoon

anj[giving irritated look]: not bad

at: thanks

anj: kya arman nahi aayenge

at: wo tho yahi he

anj: kya

mean while arman comes there and listens wat atul said

ar: arey atul beta tum yaha aaja ghale me lagao and gives him a tight hug as if he want to kill him

at[trying to get rid of him] : sorry mujhe chod dho

but no way arman is not leaving

at: ridhima mujhe bachao yaha tummare baap mujhe ....

ar: chup kar and leaves him

ridhima comes there wats going on here

ar: kuch nahi bas pyaar ki baath

anj: omg its very boring

raj: oh miss attitude ko bore ho raha he

an: oh tho hum kya karenge miss attitude ke liye anjali jhi kya aap hammare liye disco dance karenge

kr:: haan bahut mazaa ayenge karona anjali waise tummare dress bhi aise hi he

ri: haan di sab request kar rahe he na dance karo waise tum ko club dances bahut ache se suit hoga

an: haa karo na anjali

ra: haan karo bahut mazaa aayega agar tum kaho tho me tummare liye partners lee aaonga club se

all will laugh loudly

anj[shouts]: GET OUT OF MY HOUSE

ar: arey beti tum kyun aise kar rahe ho thand rakho bache he

anj: go to hell and she goes to her room and slams the door 😆

thats all for today

my dear pragati now bear this part and dont give me any punishment 😆

pinky: for u i have stop to break record of my laziness 😉😆

priyanka: sorry i think i took more time wat to do power cut and i wrote whole part again

IAM EXTREMELY SORRY FOR MY MISTAKES

I WILL PM ALL AFTER WRITING MY OTHER FF ISHQ VISHQ

DONT BANG ME IF IT IS NOT NICE

sorry for not adding any romance in my next part i will add it and i hope u will enjoy my next part

precap: AR dance [ya with original arman not as dad 😆] RM dance

anjali getting high temper

anand and krishnas dance

ziggy enters and lets see wat mess he will do

Edited by urmila_17 - 17 years ago
MagicalKash thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 awesome urmi jus lovd it nd rm hav also come lovely
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Posted: 17 years ago
hiiii urmila........It was very interesting part......Thank god you finally stopped tring to break the record of trying to be the most lazy person but in my sense you already broke the record 😉 ......Coming to your ff it was as uaual amazing........I always enjoy reading your ff...... 👏

p.s: waiting for your other ff also............ 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

wow yaar.. its wonderful. i read the whole ff and its really very good. this is not just fake comment but i really liked it very much... i lik the way u wrote the script of armaan and ridhima, this is awesome... keep up with ur ff on AR... i always read ur ff and they r very good but this is realy much more than the previous ones....i will never skip ur ff... u hav done very good job...

m loving it urmila... keep up ur hard work...

rani

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Posted: 17 years ago
🤗 thanx urmi di.......fr giving us such a pleasant part....and yeh i'll always bear wid u 😳 😳 .....gosh the oart it was amazing simply mindblowing and dont worry you wont get any chapal from me now 😆 ....i lvd it...d RM scene.... 🤣 ....kankhajure and chipkali...omg!!!hahahaha....d dresses were amazing.....and poor poor poor anjali(sarcastic)thanx a lot fr cheering my mood up i was a lil low.......words are less....they are really......cont soon

👏

luv ya loadz,
pragz!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 diiiiiiiiiii
its superb loved it by bits
armaan kabhi bhi nahi sudhar saktha
and RM first metting 😆 😆 😆 was very nice n rajan admires ridzi hailla
wow yaar superb loved the way u explained it it was liking seeing it in real
n anji ko ak sabak tho sikhneyi hi hoi
the dad part was superbbbbbbbbb


precap hailla kina romantic hey n zigggy comes nahi if he do something i m gonna kill him 😆 '


now di updated it sooooooooooooooooooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago

suberb prt! loved it lke always! cntd sn!

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Urmi...Brilliant as always 👏 Armaan Ridzi's dad itz very funny 😆
I'm kinda of enjoying everything...Rajan admiring Ridzi n Atul n anjali...Krishna n Anand.....very interesting....Eagerly waiting for the next update..plzz continue.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwww great part!! 👏 its good to see RM in this ff now too! 😃 please continue soon!

Avanti

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