`*`CHASE`*` {A-K} Chp 14/2!!!pg. 152 ❤️

First Previous

Page

114

Next Last

Frequent Posters

GuJuHoTnEsS

@GuJuHoTnEsS

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: prabhi
love the story!! the guy is KREEPY!!! 🤢 eww hez sucha stalker!!! 😕 but i love the way the story is going!.. continue soon can't wait!! i wanna kno what the guy wants and who he is?? does kripa kno him??? aahhh can't wait...

hey thanx 4 da lovely commentz..yeep da guy iz really KREEPY...thanx 4 lovin da story...welll all yur questionz will be answered one by one...but derz a twist so yu'll be really surprised....nd abt da psycho yu haven't seen nethin yet...more iz yet 2 cum ❤️

Quote

GuJuHoTnEsS

@GuJuHoTnEsS

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#182

Chapter Six-Part I

FLASHBACK:

He hated working on Sundays. Why can't people just leave him alone for once, For God Sakes? People definitely need to grow up. Just because my stupid staff screwed up with the meeting I had to drive all the way to Kansas. Good for nothing people, UFF. The temperature outside hovered between ninety-four and ninety-five which didn't help much to improve his mood at all.

Prithvi was a big, strapping man with a seventeen-and-a-half-inch neck left over from his glory days, but he was cursed with baby sensitive skin and the heat was giving him a prickly rash. He was tired of waiting for Armaan to come so they could finish the meeting as soon as possible and head home. He was really looking forward to spending his Sunday at his town house alone without any worries. He adjusted the air condition so that the heat would eventually fade and the air would blow directly on his face, leaned back in his chair, and began to read the Des Moines Gazette he'd brought alone to Kansas City with him, while he waited for that stupid-good-for-nothing- boy to come. He was so engrossed in the Gazette that he missed the knock on the door. He immediately straightened in his chair, took the gum out of his mouth and put it back in the wrapper, then called to the person who was knocking for god knows how long inside.

The scent of Calvin Klein's Obsession came floating through the cabin the minute the door opened. It was distinct, heavy, sweet fragrance Prithvi recognized because Kripa had given him a bottle of the cologne on his last birthday. A little of the stuff went a long way, and the penitent had gone overboard. His cabin reeked. The scent, combined with the smell of mildew and sweat, made Prithvi feel as though he were trying to breathe through a plastic bag. His stomach lurched and he forced himself not to gag. He finally muttered courage to control and looked up at the stranger. He looked like a clown wearing turtleneck T-shirt even when the heat is killer outside with an ugly looking hat that only his killer brown eyes and tomato lips were visible. God! Wonder how the guy can breathe! No wonder he hasn't passed out yet from his overdue cologne because that guy can't smell anything besides his own smelly breath.
"May I come in?"
"Um! Sure." He said politely. "Not to mention you are already in," he thought to himself. "Today is Sunday and the office is closed so any paper work you might have has to wait till tomorrow."
"But then you're here so how can the office be closed?" he asked
"I'm here for an urgent meeting, I'm the Boss." "Anyways forget about me. What brings you here? I haven't seen you in my office before, are you sure you came to the right place?"
"Yes, I work in finance department."
"What is your name? Is there anything you want to tell me that you came to work even when you have a day off?"
"Why do you want to know my name?"
"Huh!" "If you forgot, let me remind you that I'm your Boss and I have a right to know your name whether you like it or not. So I ask again. What is your name?"
"Well if you must, it's Unknown Subject. In short I'm the Unsub."
"Are you trying to act smart with me?" "If you want to show your talents go to circus and show it there I am definitely not in the mood for any sarcasm."
"Oh! But I'm not acting smart. I'm given this nickname by the FBI agents----who were admitting how inept and incompetent they are using the word UNKNOWN.
"You came here dressed like a clown just to tell me how dumb and stupid the FBI's are?" "Surely you must have figured I got no connection with the FBI's. I'm a business man."
"Oh! But you do. How can you forget your best friend Angad Khanna is a FBI Agent."
"What exactly is your point?"
"My point is that I have something to tell you?"

Damn this guy has gone beyond crazy. What the hell is he thinking to just barge in like this and act like he's my BOSS? Wait till I show him who wears the pants.
"Listen Un---- whatever your name is or whatever the damn FBI's call you I am just not interested, so you better of leaving because you are just wasting yours and my time."
"It's UNSUB! I expect you to get it right."
Shit! This weirdo actually got the guts to snap at him.
"And as of not interested in whatever I have to say, well let's just say you will soon sweat in your pants after you have heard what I have to say."
"Spill it out, will you! Stop talking in riddles."
"Wish me luck, Prits, for I will sin."
Confused by what he heard, Prithvi leaned closer in his chair and asked the man to start over.
"Wish me luck, Prits, for I will sin."
"You came to tell me about the sin you're going to commit?"
"I do."
"Is this some sort of a game or a-----"
"No, no, not a game," the man said. "I'm deadly serious. Are you getting angry yet?"

A burst of laughter, as jarring as the sound of gunfire in the middle of the night, echoed through the cabin.
Prithvi was careful to keep his voice neutral when he answered. "No, I'm not angry, but I am confused. Surely you realize that April is almost a year away for you to be playing such pranks."
"Ah, but Prits, you will, when you find out the craving's come back and this one is more special than the rest. I wrap myself in her fragrance, and I love to watch her sleep. She's so beautiful. Ask me, and after I have given you her name, you will believe me."
"I will not wish you luck."
"How's the chemotherapy going? Are you feeling sick? Did you get a good report?"
"Prithvi's head snapped up. "What?" he demanded in a near shout.
The madman laughed. "I told you I study my clients before I take them on. You could say I stalk them. I know EVERYTHING. EVERYTHING." He whispered.
"How did you know-----"
"Oh, Prits, you've been such a sport. Haven't you wondered why I followed you all this way just to get your blessing from you? Think about it on your way back to the town house. I've done my homework, haven't I?"
"Who are you?"
"Why, I told you already. I'm the Unsub. And I do so love a challenge. Make this one difficult for me. The police will come here soon to talk to you, and then you'll be able to tell anyone you want," he mocked. "I know who you'll call first. Your hotshot friend with the FBI. You'll call Angad, won't you? I sure hope you will. And he'll come running to help. You'd better tell him to take her away and hide her from me. I might not follow, and I'll start looking for someone else. At least I'll try."
"How do you know-----"
"ASK ME."
"Ask you what?"
"Her name," the madman whispered. "Ask me who my client is."
"I urge you to get help," Prithvi began again. "What you're doing-----"
"Ask me. Ask me. Ask me."
Prithvi closed his eyes. "Yes. Who is she?"
"She's lovely," he answered. "Such beautiful full breasts and long, dark hair. There isn't a mark on her pefect body, and her face is like an angel's, so exquisite in every way. She's…..BREATHTAKING……but I plan to take her breath away."
"Tell me her name," Prithvi demanded, praying to God there was time to get to the poor woman to protect her.
"Kripa," the serpent whispered. "Her name is Kripa."
Panic hit Prithvi like a fist. "My Kripa?"
"That's right. Now you're getting it, Prits. I'M GOING TO KILL YOUR SISTER."

Edited by ndnhottie110586 - 17 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Katie

@love_iqbal_khan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 17 years ago

#183

OMG the guy is a FREAK!!!!
WTH IS WRONG WITH HIM??
He has seen her sleep.....oka....BUT "she doesnt have single mark on her perfect body?"""------WHAT ON EARTH!!!!!!!!!!!
This guy has a perverted mind! Stupid ******* needs to go and Die! Alrighty bhumi........when u bring me in this.......can i shoot him in the middle of the forehead?
Pretty please? with a cherry on top

LOl....ok...jokes aside.......WONDERFUL FLASHBACK....loved it............i think the name of the guy is made up "unsub??"....weird......this is getting tangled even more...its going to be fun seeing Angad, Kripa, and Prithvi solve this knot.........Conti soon...👏

Edited by love_iqbal_khan - 17 years ago

Quote

GuJuHoTnEsS

@GuJuHoTnEsS

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: love_iqbal_khan
*reserved* 😛

HAHAHAHAH yur just plain HALIRIOUZ....

Quote

Preet

@prabhi

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#185

omg!!! ahhh hez soooooo kreepy he knows everything!!! he knows about angad and tht prithvi's reports!! and! ewww hez a pervert the way he was talking about kripa... eww it gave me the chills!! 🤢 🤢 🤢 ... but i love it 😆 haha i like the way you write.. continue..

Quote

nycdesiqt

@nycdesiqt

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#186

OMG!!!!!!! that pervert!! disgusing, sick psycho!!!
how the heck does he know there isn't a mark on her skin! omg!! this is sick!! did he like put cameras in her house or something?? how else would this creep know everything about her???
omg! this is getting insane!!! this guy is a jack***!!
i feel scared for kripa man!! poor girl when she hears this conversation she'll flip!!
i agree with love_iqbal_khan can we like shoot the creep!! please!! 🤢 🤢 🤢

but great part!! 😃

Quote

Cytherea

@Cytherea

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#187

OMG this guy is seriously demented...i mean what kind of a guy goes upto someones brother and takes their blessing for killing their sister...
this guy is one twisted psycho..i wonder how he noes everything abt prithvi and angad cause he's supposed to be stalking kripa not them..anywho lovely update..plz continue SOON..
PS i love CSI Miami too..lol

Quote

Binish

@mayurmaaneet

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#188

lmao.. omg.. u cant be serious hun.. hahahahah.. first i htought pritvi was kripas boyfriend or something..but wen u said sister i was like whoaaaaa.. hun that came as a shock to me.. but who in the world is this loser thinking of sexually assaulting our krips.anywayz great part.. continue soon..

Quote

sameira

@AKForever

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#189

hey great part..continue soon 👏 👏

Quote

Mika

@goldengrl

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#190

Your are simply awesome! This freak needs too die! Poor kripa don't know what too say! Can't believe he has been spying on her and she doesn't even know! Cont soon I don't think I can even wait a second want to know who this creep is so we all can kill him!! Loved it