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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part1
Aryan and his team reached the crime scene it was in the restroom of a restraunt.A man was killed with a hammer,the team did their work Zubin took photographs,Shotgun took some samples,Aryan,Ajay and Boxer did some enquiry and so on.Aryan told the manager of the pub that he wished to interogate all the people present there.However few people in the pub wanted to leave as early as possible,they were a part of a band they were there to perform,they had sneaked out of school and had to be back as soon as possible,before their warden turned up.This was something that was totaly unexpected.They had to leave.They told the same thing to the manager who spoke to Aryan.
Manager-Sir,i know you told me that everyone must stay back but there are a group of students here who are a part of a band remix...they have to get back to school so if you please allow them.
Ajay-remix?the name sounds familiar.
Aryan-I dont care rules are rules i cant let them go fast because they have to go back...if they want we could speak to their principal or some incharge.
Hearing this the students jump,as they dont want that to happen.
Girl1-Hey bhaggu!is he a police officer or some child care officer or something...(imitating Aryan)"ill talk to their principal" ,Boy1-Dude,Is that guy mad or what he'll speak to jumbo?".Boy2-maein nahi patha banna....ab hum kya kare?.Girl2-Oh Tia's god!what did you do?Please get us out of this trouble.

Scene shifts to the school.

Shy-Guys,will you tell me whats wrong?

Sid-Maam...actually....Yuvi...Yuvi

Shy-Sid...im listening...Yuvi what?

Sid-Maam YuviAshiTiaand Ranveer havent come back(hes says it fast)

Shy-huh?..What did you say

Vrinda(beats Sid)-Maam actually...Yuvi,Ashi ,Tia and ranveer havent come back.

Shy-What not yet..oh no....try calling them

Pri-we have but their phones say switched off

Shy-Lets go look for Neil sir or Rhea maam

MP-But they have gone for the coference

Shy-Oh God!

Just then their Principal Jumbo enters

Jumbo-What is happening here?

Back at the restraunt

Aryan(to the manager)-Is there a problem?

Manager-Yes Sir.Actually these kids are insisting they go now and they will meet you tomorrow for the interogation.

Aryan(getting angry but then calming down)-Listen Ive already made it clear that they arent leaving just now...I know that they are students but we cant let them go before we finish our work....Ajay,Boxer..just go talk to the kids ill have a word with Deepika.

Ajay-Hello Guys..Im Ajay Behl..listen I know its difficult but you guys need to manage and stay here for some time.

Girl2-Oh Tia's God..how is it possible?What if Jumbo finds out?

Boxer(cofused)-Who are these Tia's God and Jumbo?(Tia gives a disgusted look)

Boy1-This girl is Tia and Jumbo is our pricy & amp; amp; nbsp;

Girl2-who is a dumbo

Boy2-Shh

Boxer-By the my name im Abbas Ali Baig:

Aryan (joins them)-Aryan Garewal.

Yuvi,Ashi,Tia andranveer get suspicious after hearing that name...they all have heard the name somewhere

Boy2-Ranveer Sisodia

Girl2-Tia Ahuja

Boy1-Yuvraj Dev

Girl1-Anvesha Ray Banerjee

Aryan signals Ajay and Boxer to leave as he trie to handle the 4.

Aryan-Good!now may I know what the problem is?

Tia-We need to get back to hostel.

Aryan-I know..but dont worry we will inform your principal

AYRT-NO!!!!!!!!

Aryan(surprised)-Why?

The kids look at each other and nod their heads.

Yuvi-We actually sneaked out from school.

Nivi(Neha originally) walks in and overhears the conversation.

Aryan-oh so you break the rules and ask us for our help.

Ashi-We never asked to help us all we wanted you to do is let us go.

Nivi-and that isnt a favour?

Tia-No

Aryan-Intresting and what are you all upto here?

Yuvi-We are a part of a band .....and our principal doesnt encourage all this...so we sneaked out.

Ajay,Boxer come ther...followed by Dipika.

Dipika-Aryan,dont you undestand that this is a very important case..why are you wasting your time her..with these kids?

Ashi(whispers)-I think shes like a Jumbo to them.

Tia laughs,Yuvi just stares and Ranveer asks her to be queit.

Aryan leaves with the others and he discusses with Nivi and Dipika about what has to be done about the kids.

Nivi-i think we should just let them go...you know they are even saying that they would come and meet us tomorow..and they might have been scared by the murder.

Dip-Scared...they didnt look one bit of it.

Aryan-Dont be so rude..I think I agree with Nivi.

Dip-Dont forget im the boss..you are not letting them go untill we finish with the enquiry.And dont forget to call their pricipal and inform him or her.Im going to SS now as the autposy has to be done ..but you guys watch it.(she leaves).Ajay and Boxer come there.

Aryan-What do we do?

Nivi-Let them go

Aryan-But what about Dipika's orders?

Boxer-Well she isnt here now so..........

Ar-So?

Ajay-So..send them oh come on now Aryan...how many rules have we broken?...or rather how many have we followed.?..it will actually be easier counting the ones we followed...and they are just kids.

Aryan(smiles)-Ok let them go.

AYTR-YEahhhh!!!!!

The 4 younsters leave immediately promising to meet the officers the very next day.

Edited by rockingrebel - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
Now that's nice..... The Remix gang has entered.... Wonderfull.... Continue soon Abha 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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cont soon yaara 😛

itna zabardast ja rahi hai 😛

agay jaldi likhoo 😳 😳 😳

can't wait now 😃

lolz
ana 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 Naam badal gaye... Lekin their sense of humor and rule breaking hasn't 😆

Dose milne waali hai SS me Dipika se 😉

Hey Abha... Nice writing.... Bahut wait karvati ho yaar... Jaldi continue karo naa 😳

Its going just amazing 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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im confused who is the remix band ?? 😕
anyways it was a good, dipika as usual was in a bad mood 😆 I like the name Nivi

waiting for more 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great writing 👏 👏 👏 plzzz continue soon!!!
i havent seen remix but heard alot...!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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continue soon please!!its a fab storyline! i m waiting anxiously to see shaina's reaction to aryan!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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just a bad thought, u r nt planning to desert this story na?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2
"What are you doing here at this time?",asked the Principal
"Nothing Sir,I had just called them to discuss about something",said Shainna.
Pr-So are you done?
Shy-Yes Sir.
Pr-So I think you should all get back to your rooms.
Students-Yes Sir
Shy hints everyone to leave assuring them that she will look after everything.Now they were relieved and they knew she would take care of everything and that was one of the numerous reasons they loved her for.

"oh my god! How long will it take?"
"Shut up timblet!"
"You Punk-
"Please keep quiet both of you,bana why dont you do something?"
"Me?no way dude you take care of these girls anyways we are almost there so just shut them up..ill try calling one of them."
While Yuvi tried calling Sid,Ashi and Tia were still fighting and Ranveer tried to stop them but alas!
Sid managed to contact MP and slowly all the 4 tried to sneak in but were stopped by Shainna.
Shy-Tomorow meet me at 7:30 befor school starts
Tia-But Tia puts her special face pack at that time-
Shainna shot her a glance while the others supressed their smiles.


"God I just hope that.that Hitler doesnt find out",said Boxer as they all left.
Ar-Those four actually reminded me of my college days.
Nivi-Yeah I know
Everyone except Nivi and Aryan had left.
Ar-You know what I have been thinking of lately?
Nivi-Well I dont know WHAT you have been thinking of lately but I know WHO you have been thinking of.
Aryan blushes at this.
Nivi-Shainna right?
Aryan-Yes
Nivi-I knew it anyways...any news about her.
Aryans smile was now replaced by a gloom.
Ar-Not yet but I will soon.
Niv-dont woory we will find her.


She looked at his photo again,she had sneaked it out of his house on the day the whole team had gone to his house.There was something special about this man and as the memories rushed past her mind,tears came down her eyes.She wped them said sorry to the man in the picture,kissed her son who was sleeping by her side and closed her eyes and fell asleep,this was what she did before sleeping everyday.Sometimes she would fall asleep listening to her detail about all the incidents in school about how Ashi and Yuvi fought,about Tia's new make-up kit,about Ranveer's pictures back home in Rajasthan.Or Sometimes she would just have a light chat with her student and her colleagues cum friends Neil and Rhea.
Edited by rockingrebel - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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your FF is getting better and better everyday
I cant wait for Aryan and shy to see each other agian

very nice 👏 👏 👏

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