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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi i've been a silent reader until now. your ffs are amazing!!! when reading this part my heart was beating so loudly. how could josh do that??? i wonder whats gonna happen next. wow u r an awesome writer.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg...that bas****....josh is soo eughhh....i hope GF does what he promised...cont. soon 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Omgg I am soo mad at Josh 😡 😡 .....It was such a heartmoving part...I felt sooo bad for kripa!!....The way you descibed eveything was soo extreme...and I felt soo many emotions run through my mind during that part, anger, hurt, sad, even hopeless ...I even felt like I could just go and save her from that beast!...But I am soo glad that Prateek came right on time as a savior of his mother....Prateek is definatly a part of Angad who is always there to protect her mother whenever she's in trouble....I love Prateek!

I actually had tears in my eyes while reading that whole part...I was soo moved by it....You did a fabb job on describing everything 👏 ...it felt as if I could feel every character's emotions in that part...especially kripa!

I guess Kripa was more hurt by Josh's behavior than she was with Zaib's when he handcuffed her in his room...atleast he didnt misbehave with her at such an extent without her will.....he would never have...cause Angad would never ever hurt kripa in anyy wayy!....And all the harsh words that he had ever said to her are nothing compared to what Josh has done...I mean she trusted Josh soo much!.....He had once saved her life and now he was the one who was about to force her!!......It must have really been really heart wrecking.... She would have never thought in her wildest dream that Josh would behave so cruelly with her.....Its a side of Josh she had never expected....

But I guess this incident atleast helped her in taking her decision about who she wants to be with ...but that certainly doesnt mean that everything is going to be fine.... yet!.. I assume Kripa still does have a few hurdles in her way....What will happen if she finds out about Zaib's reality about being a killer??....Things are really unpredictable ......Anything can happen within these two days...Zaib himself is still playing a game with kripa....He will pretend to remember everything just so he can obtain kripa...his intention is noble...because he's in love just like Josh...but their way of reaching their goal is wrong!

They both are still betraying kripa...Josh has let out his emotions in a very not so noble way....but Zaib...he still isnt himself in front of kripa...he's hiding his true identity from kripa....and now he's even ready to lie to kripa about his memory...I just hope kripa doesnt get hurt by Zaib and that his memory comes back before he can really hurt kripa....She has gone through sooo much and now the last thing that she would expect is feeling betrayed and hurt by the only man she has ever loved....and that too when he'll be doing everything on purpose this time

I just wish that Zaib had faith in kripa's love....I wish that he would have been able to tell kripa everything about his present life...and belive that kripa will still accept him...but then again the fact that he doenst know that he's Angad is stopping him...as well as the fear of loosing kripa...so I guess his fear and thoughts are justified at this point...but I just hope that he doenst end up doing something which will lead kripa to hate him in any way


Wowwww Zaib is soo in love with kripa that he's even willing to go against GF??.....Man it is true when people say that a person in love definatly can careless about anything or anyone....and can do anything or go to any extent for their love!

Awww....Zaib felt that kripa was in trouble probably the same time that Josh was abusing her!...I loved the heart to heart connection at that point...It was the cutestt thing!...


I wonder if Kripa will tell Zaib about what Josh did??....and will that event lead him to think about his own betrayal toward's kripa about hiding his identity??...Well lets see what happend next I just hope that Zaib rememeber's everything and GF tells him the truth about his past sooonnnn....so AK can get together...

I guess that Josh will definatly feel discusted of himself after what he did...and probably it will lead him to think that he doesnt deserve kripa...and will set her free from their marriage and let her live her life the way she wants...

But no matter what I will still have a little respect for Josh considering the relationship that he shares with prateek...The love that he has for prateek and the fact that he cares for him soo much ...that he would never ever think about hurting him in any way...His relation with Prateek is something that I would repect and adore Josh for....

I really felt bad for him at the part where he saw fear in prateeks eye's for the first time and that way that must have hurt him....He not only lost kripa but probably lost prateek as well...

Fantabolous part as always....cant wait for the next one...continue soon...and keep up the great work 👏




Edited by mita_mita01 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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josh!!! how could you!! he almost raped her!! yes...i understand he was mad...i thought about it and he had every right to be mad at kripa cuz she did lie to him and deceive him but that is no reason to force her or hurt her!!! that anger is not justified...not at all!! it was worse than wat zaib did to her...and thank god zaib did do anything to her when kripa visited him!
and omg!! prateek...was scared of josh for the first time...this is bad...this means that prateek is gonna drift away from josh....this is soo saddd!!!
but thank god for prateek!! he was his mother's angel!
okay so right now kripa is crushed at josh's behavior...but she will be devesated when she learns about zaib's truth...but it isn't really zaib's fault he is a killer 😭 but yes...it is wrong for zaib to have used her as a pawn for gettin away from the cbi
and the godfather!! i know he is lying to protect zaib...but he doesn't realize that zaib is really in love with kripa and this deception from both the godfather's side and zaib's side will end up hurting kripa the most!

this was a great and wonderful part!! can't wait for the next one!!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
OMG Di

Josh u bas**** 🤢 how could you mann?? grrrr You frekin almost raped herr I know your hurt but that was not the right solution 😭 Ahh this part touched me soo muchh 😭 Plz continue soon and knock some sense into tht uggh Josh
Luv always
Madiha<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
great part!
i cant believe josh did this!he's such an animal!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part Di! i didn't realise i had been holding my breath till the part where prateek interrupted josh from almost raping kripa. thank god he interrupted them otherwise josh would have never forgiven himself for what he would have done and definitely regretted l;ater. no matter what josh had certainly lost the respect kripa had for him in her heart. josh's this horrible act had now determined kripa to leave him and go back to angad. i wonder how she would react when she comes to know that josh had been telling her the truth about zaib being a killer?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg wowwwwwwww so much happened when i wasnt here...im so so so sorrrrrrrry pallavi...i have been dead sick, tired and partying loads....been really busy im so sorry...but wow so much happened...zaib fell in love with kripa how cute...finally the old angad is coming back...im so happy!! josh that *** i cant believe that he really thinks kripa and zaib fell into a physical relationship, i hate it when guys think disgusting...low minded creeps, agreed kripa is cheating on him well not technically BECAUSE SHE ISNT MARRIED TO HIM LEGALLY...angad is alive, GF, and kripa know that, angad hasnt gotten his memory back but hopefully he will soon...please do continue soon am looking forward to read more....and hopefully josh realizes soon that kripa was, is and always will remain angad's amanat no matter what he tries and does she will never be HIS....!!! awesome part do continue soon

sukhi 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamsmart

atleast prateek came to the rescue wen josh was forcing kripa. wonder wht's gonna happen in these two days. awesome part.




~Sana~

Thanks sana!

yes, prateek is kripa's defender....😳 Her superhero!

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: mitali_s

awww pallavi di...i cnt help but feel sorry for josh!!! he loves prateek soooo much...even if kripa leaves him i dun want sunny separated from his papa...josh kitna chahta hai usse inspite of him not being his own blood!!! 😭 😭 😭 ...but ab to kripa wil surely leave josh...i hope josh dies, in dat way atleast he wont hav to undergo the pain of being separated from his onli family!!! 😭 😭 😭 ....tho i wished he had not molested kripa

i feel sorry 4 z-k too tho...awsumeeeee partttt, nicely written 😛 !!! 👏

Thanks mitali!

Yes, Josh wont be able to let go of Prateek....he really loves him! 😭

Thank God Josh stopped in time due to Prateek! Will Kripa leave Josh? 😭

pallavi

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