THE GODFATHER- Part2...Index/ pg1 - Page 33

omg... i need to catch up with 4 parts... before i comment, u updated the next... 😆 😆 😆

superb.... when zaib was reeling in the past... it was so speldid explanation.... i wonder what GF is gonna do now... i have a major doubt, will prateek reach dubai safely?? i am so worried abt him... such a small kid... he is away from his mother... lost his fatherly figure...

i dont believe u ended josh's character... thank lord.. he didnt die with many complaints abt kripa and prateek.. somewhere he had satisfaction that angad/zaib is there to look after them. u didnt end him with so many question in his mind...

that kanan... how much he is lying... she betrayed her job and her paths she took for money... 😡 i dont believe it.... oh god... how come such people survive their conscience... *sigh*

kartik... i hope he remains positive till the end.. i cant digest one more negative charater and villains for angad and kripa at this point... the whole D-gang is behind them... one less is always better 😳 😳

GF dived into the sea to save kripa... and he got exhausted with the lack of oxygen... bhoodepan nazar aa raha hai... 😉 😆

nice enjoyable, finger-gripping parts... 👏 👏
infact dint read it fully... but will read it... little later... 😃

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
diiiiiiiiiii.............
it was awsome,mindblowinggg,fabulous,amazing...rocking prt...
gwaddd its tantalizing meeeee...
too gud...
finally they r together..........
gosh angad is such a darling...
readyyy 2 do anythin 4 his Kripaaa
dil to charaha hai pani main jakar dooob maroon....it had made my senses burst open............

thankuee di 4 the wonderful prttt.......
luv uuuuuuuuuu

iqra 😳

awwweeeessssommme!!!!!!!!!!!! mind blowing!!!
👏

i cant say anymore...i am speechless.........

awwwwwwwwwww yay they're finally together as one!!!!! 😳 awesome part!! 👏 0oh lol i thught prateek was with angad anyway continue soon cnt wait till all 3 of them r together!!

Nice romantic part 😳.Really awesome 👏 Finally they became one again. How is GF going to face Angad?Can't wait.Continue soon...

the romantic part was really awesome i just loved it 😳 😳 finally they are united 👏 👏 👏
continue soon............

grt part...loned i...cont. soon...yay...angas back 😛 😃 😛

Originally posted by: aksksara

Loved ur part. it was superb. Hey btw - are ugonna finish it??? And ya, sorry I wont be able to write ong commnets bcoz my pc is confiscasted. Just managed to sneak on. Hehe. 😉 Love ya, cont sooonnn. Bechara Prateek. Wow Angad gfot his memory back. Thats good. It was beautiful the way u made him get his memory back. Really amazing. 👏 👏 👏 And the last scene here was damn goooddd. Lved ittt.
Poor Josh!!! But his love was soo selfless. Hats Off 2 Josh!!! and u 2!!! Connntt soonn

Thanks sara! Yes, I hope to end this story in 10 more parts....Thats okay, u can read and enjoy when u get a chance to come online! 😳

Thanks for liking angad's memory return parts...Josh is a tragic character, he gave up his life for his love..😭

pallavi

Originally posted by: xoxIqbalxox

Yup you cant steal it lol 😳

Does that mean I can or cant steal it? 😉😆

pallavi