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Posted: 17 years ago
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tHX GUYZ 4 AL DA COMENTS IM RITIN DA 1ST PART RITE NOW N WIL POST IT SOON
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1

Ring! Ring!Ring!
ridz:ah! wat iz it now helo
mukti:hi ridz kaisy ho tum
ridz:mein teek hoon lykin tum nay itni sub suba kyun phone kya.
mukti:suba suba RIDZ TUME PATA HAI KE TYM KYA HO GYA HAI CoLLAGE KA PEHLA DIN HAI .AUR TUM PEHLE HI DIN LATE HO JAO GI DUFFER
ridz:AHHHHHHHHH! omg men tumse bad men bat kar ti hoon .aur han bus station pay jaldi a jao men bas 15min min pohonchti hoon ok bubi.
mukti:lykin ridz.........
beep beep
ridz quickly gets ready .grabs her bag and quikli runs downstairs to da kitchen

ridz:hi dad gudmorning ap kaise hain men bilkul theik hoon .di ko kehna ke men colage kay liye late ho rahi thi is liye bat nahi hoye ok bi

karan:(from kyunki)are par brekfast tho karthi jao..............
ridz:no dad i told u im alredy getin late az it iz.....
karan:are par
ridz:no dad its ok
a voice fom bhind'no its not ok'
ridz:gud mornin di
its nun other dan anjali fom kavyanjali
anjali:men abi abi mandir se ho kay ain hon .aur ye lo apna aur mukti ka prasad
ridz:fanx di.ok den il c u later.aur han gud luk 4 da interview di.and bi dad
n den she leaves and goes 2 da bus station where mukti is watin 4 her and is rili angri at her.
mukti:oh! to ap a gain .aur wo bhi itni galdi .
ridz:i no n im srili rili sori 4 being late .
mukti;its ok c'mon lets go

so day go n sit in da bus n reach da colage .day both wer rili late so day quickli went 2 deir clases .n wile mukti is goin she bumps in2 sum1
mukti:OUCH DEKH KEH NAHI CHAL SAKTE KYA. ANDAY HO
guy:han anda hon tumhare pyar men .
mukti:oye tum muje samagte kya ho....
guy:basanti .han aj se men tume pyar se basanti kaha karon ga.
mukti:u
guy:d .ud nam hai mera mis basanti
mukti:HOW DARE U?
ud:how dare i? hmm... tum shayad colage men nayi ho .isi laye muj se istar han bat kar rahi .tum shayad janti nahin ho ke men kun..
mukti:han janti hon .tum is colage kay sabse bare dufer ho.idiot,kamenay.
ud:DONT U GO DEIR?
mukti:go weir .tum he kahin jana hai to jao.MERA TYM KYUN WASTE KAR RAHE HO
UD:huh... tumhe kya lagta hai ke men tum jasi behenji's men intrested hoon
mukti:AAAAGGGGHHH!!! .TUMHE TO MEN BAT MEN BATATI HOON KAY MUKTI KYA CHEEZ HAI
ud:wat eva miss BASANTI .
mukti:mera nam mukti hai basanti nahin aur...
ud:hi n im not intrested basanti in yr name.bi da way......
den a voice fom bhind says''ye kya ho raha hai.leson start ho chuka hai aur ap dono abhi tak yahan pe hain........

precap:mukti iz chased around bi gundays n den she bumps into sum1.........

k guyz dat waz it 4 2day plz tel me how it waz n if i shud cont it or in aniwayz i cud improve it or anifing els


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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
AWESOME!!!! continue soon! it was great! i loved it, yay me im the first one!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
nyce update plzz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
wowie, please continue soon. first part was amazing! Loved UD & Bsanti first meeting. Oh so kool! I'm gonna love this ff, infact already have! Cab't wait for next part. continue soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
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fanx guyz 4 al yr coments here iz da promo

ridz spils her juice on sum1 n day both get into a fight and mukti gets stuk being ud's tuter
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Posted: 17 years ago
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kewl promo! can't wait for the next episode
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
thx guyz 4 al da coments part 2 wil b cumin tonite.im ritin it rite now
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice promo pl. cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part:2
it waz nun oder dan Janki devi........
m:im so sori mam.i rili am n i promise dat it wil neva hapen again.
J:gud now go bak 2 yr clas
m n u:yes mam
J:ap kahan ja rahain hain .i dnt say u cud go.
u:per... mam...mein wu ...clas ke kiye late ho rahan hoon.
J:late hoon ke ho raha hoon
J:Mr.prem prena sharma.
m:ah!(den quietli laughs 2 her self)
u:he jst feels so imbarased coz janki jst sed hiz ful name which no body new.
J:mukti to yahan pe nayi ayi hai lykin ap ko tho school rules pata hain lykin agar bhool gaye hain to yr veri welcum 2 cum after schol n i wil tel u again.
u:no mam its ok
J:gud now both ov u get bak 2 yr clas
m n u:yes mam

mukti n ud go 2 deir clases.
in da class........

Ridz:kahan reh gayi thi tum????
mukti:mein tumhe bad men batati hoon
ridz:kyun abhi kyun nahi aur yeh kyun tha????
mukti:is colage ka.... nahin is dunia ka sab se bara idiot,duffer,kameena
ridz:Wow! mukti colage ka pehla din aur insted ke pehle koi dost banao tum ne tu apna dushmen(enemie) he bana liya
mukti:PLZZ!!! i fink dat i can find btr frnds dan him
n can v plz change da topic now
ridz:wateva! nwayz ye hamari maths ki teacher kahan reh gayi

jst den kashish cums in....

Kashish:gud mornin clas
mukti:lo! tum ne buliya aur a gayi

jst den anoder handsum lukin teacher cums in(sujal)

sujal:gud mornin clas
e1 iz lyk "oh no not again" wile ridz iz lyk wats goin on n mukti iz lukin at ud ho waz lukin at a gurl ho waz werin a mini skirt....
which waz anoyin mukti alot

kashish:sir!
sujal:ho waz lukin at kashish n got lost in her beautiful blue eyes...
kashish:sir!!!
sujal: ya.. yes
kashish: ab .. ye .. meri clas hai.
s:aur tum meri ho(2 him self)
k:sir!
s:oh! o.. ok
K:tu pher ap jain ..i mean dat ap ko bhi tu apna leson teach karna hoga
s:ho iz stil lukin at her which waz
gtin anoyin 2 kashish.
s:oh ok den bi
K:bi
s:bi
K: bi sir
S:bi


Ridz:woh! colage men romans tho normal hai lukin teachers aur woh bhi infront ov da clas. vierd han mukti????? MUKTI????????
ho waz lukin at da gurl in anger

y waz mukti angri at da gurl 4
2 ind out read kabi khushi kabi gum.....


ok guyz dat waz it 4 2day.i'l cont da nxt part 2moro mi hands r akin rite now....so n wayz plz leave yr coments


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