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Posted: 17 years ago
Hats off yaar..ive beenr eading ur fanfic today and finally finished it..am uptodate now and its soo good. cant wait for the update!!! 😳 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
love ur ff it's fantastic 👏 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continu soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 21


Apologies for the delay studies are taking a lot of my time
I hope this update makes u happy and able to forgive me😳😳😳

After the amazing dance all did they were all still hanging on their respective couples...... eyes locked couldnt get over eachothers..... mesmerizing eyes.. it felt like heaven .... this placed seemed like heaven God wanted all of them to see....because Love makes you see heaven...

For one couple it was unusual ofcourse it was our new couple Neel and Kehan... they had never felt thsi way before ever..... it was a amazing feeling they exprienced... the girls had now finally lowered their eyes with shyness...... and guyz had evil smiles wanting to kiss them on........ their rosy red checks but they realised the time......... wasnt appropriate as of now.

Kehan- Woh Neel ( not knowing what to say slowly she tried to move)
Neel didnt want her to let go he placed his finger on her lips which made her shiver.
Neel- Shhh ankhon hi ankhon baaton hi baaton main tune churaya jiya.
Kehan couldnt take it anymore she ran out and Neel followed her.

Shashank took over the stage and got everyones attention.

Shashank- Namaste. Aaj Rahul aur Muskaan ki engagemnet ki ceremony pe main ek surprise dena chahta hoon.

Everyone starts murmuring not knowing what he is on about the only person who knew exactly what was going on was Padma.

Shashank- Yeh mera sohbhagay hai ki aaj iss subh din par jahan do dil mil rahe hain majud hain aur Sanjeevani ke logon ko yahan dekhkar mujhse raha nahi gaya main aapni khushi ko rok nahi paya aaj maine yeh phesla kar liya ke main char aur dilon ko milaunga ( again everyone is thinking whats he talking about) ji haan main apni dono beetiyon ki shaadi ki baat kar raha hoon

Armaan and Atul are dumbstruck their mouths are open like this😲
Rahul- Muh baandh karo saalon makhi ghuss jayegi
Muskaan- Haan kaphi crunchy hoti hain
Rahul- Kya Muskaan tumne maakhi taste ki hai
Muskaan- Woh Rahul(all embarrased) meri kya galti sev puri khate samye muh main aa gayi (feeling stupid)
Rahul- Tujhe kitni baar bola hai its unhygenic
Muskaan- Sorry yaar atleast aaj ke din to maat ladh mujhse
Rahul- Tu baatein ho aisi karti hain
Armaan and ATul- Tum dono chup rahoge please


Riddhima and Anjali are shy and they hug their father.
Muskaan's Mum- To is shub din ko shuru Karen
Riddhima gives the ring to Muskaan
Neel bhaiya to Rahul.
They exchange their rings and everyone claps.
Neel looks around and cant find Kehan.

Atul- Aapki nazarien jinhe talaash rahin hain kahin woh yeh to nahi (he points at Kehan who is busy chatting to Riddhima)
Neel soon approaches them
Riddhima- Kehan di main soch rahi thi ki papa ne toh yeh sabh bol diya par
Kehan- Par kya Riddhima koi problem hai tum iss rishte se khush nahi ho kya
Riddhima- Nahi nahi di woh kehte hain naa pehle ghar ke baadon ki shaadi hoti hai
Padma- Haan Kehan beta Riddhima theek keh rahi hai hum yeh postpone kar sakte hain
Neel- Shayad uski zaroorat naa pade
Padma- Kya matlab beta
Neel- Ek minute

He gets the mike and gets everyones attention.
Neel- Itni saari khush khabriyon se mera to maan nahi bhara aapka bhara kya
Everyone- Nahi ( they shout out)
Neel- SO aaj (he goes towards Kehan and lights are on both of us )
Kehan is all red she is shy and is confused regarding what is happening
Neel- ji haan doston aaj main duniya main mere liye sabse khubsurat ladki ko yeh puchna chaunga ki kya woh meri se shaadi karengi…… (he goes to his kness).. Will u marry me Kehan (he gets a ring out of his pocket)
Armaan- Di kya soch rahi hi keh ho haan
Kehan has tears in her eyes – Yes I will marry you (and hugs Neel)
Armaan- Oye Hoye
Kehan departs from the hug she was waiting for in ages.
Neel- I love u Kehan
Kehan- I love you too
Armaan- ahem ahem (armaan is looking around )
Kehan- Armaan (hitting him and hugs him hard)
Riddhima who is standing beside Armaan moves as she thinks sister and brother hsall have a special moment together but she feels a hand on her hand stopping her… she looks behind its Armaan ….. he looks into her eyes and lip says a Thank you

Riddhima- What for (she is confused what he talking about)
Kehan departs and moves to talk to Neel.
Armaan- For coming in my life
Riddhima- Armaan yeh suddenly Thank you ki kya baat aa gayi
Armaan- Woh issliye (taking her face in his massive hands) kyunki jab se tum meri zindagi main aayi ho zindagi jaise jaanat ban gayi hai
Riddhima- Mere liye bhi Armaan


Anjali- Atul tumhe koi problem to nahi hai nah
Atul- Matlab I mean kiss baat se
Anjali- u know woh shaadi
Atul- Arre Anjali(taking her hand his his) yeh to mere liye sabse khushi ka din hai
Anjali- Sachi
Atul- Arre haan pagali aur pata hai kya aaj ek aur suhb din hai
Anjali_-oh please atul aaj to main heartattack se maar hi jaungi
Atul- Anjali kabhi maarene ki baat bhi maat lana(plabing his finger on her lips)
Anjali- Atul main mazzak kar rahi thi tum itne serious kyun ho gaye (she was taken aback)
Atul- nahi Anjali papa ko khone ke baad tumhe khoona khayal bhi mujhe din main raat dekha deta hai
Anjali- I am sorry Atul (hugging Atul)
Atul- Issme sorry ki koi baat nahi hai (tightening his hands on her waist)
Anjali- Acha to kya baata rahe tum
Atul- Woh aaj Kanan ki 2nd bday hai
Anjali(pulls herself )- Atul yeh kana kaun hai (she is so loud that everyone now looks at her)
Atul- Actually Kanan meri daffodil ka plant ka naam hai usse main issi din do saal pehle podhe bazaar se laya tha

Everyone blurts out laughing and Anjali goes and hugs Atul again
Anjali- Atul tum bhi naa I am sorry meine ove react kiya
Atul- Koi baat nahi atleast meri ek baat se sabke cheron pe haasi to aa gayi

Edited by Natalienaz - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
SCREAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sabke aek hi din mein sagai! your sooo cheap!

bakhi sab kissi aur din anhi kar sakhte te kya? 😆

uff naty mujhe kyun laghta hai ki tum apni yeh FF bohot jald katham karne wali ho? sabki sagai hochuki hai... abh shaadi bhi karlenge, unless you plan to write till the bache are born 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
oye hue!!
atleast madam ne cont to kia😆😆😆
Haila!! sub kuch itni jaldi jaldi hogaye too gud yar😉..
kahnay ki bhi bachat😆
dil milnay mein to natty number one hai😆
hha Muskan ate makhi🤢 yahe baaki reh gaya tha🤣..
aww kehan said yes!! or kehti bhi kaise nahi.. tumnay koi option hi nahi chora😆😆

too gud yar..
realli enjoyed readin it..
plzz cont soon

Lotssa luv;Hira😛
Edited by hira_786 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
*reserved*
*edited*

Natty!! meri giggling queen...you should be Revising!!😡 Not writing!!😡😡.....
Hehe...im being all mummy ji again...😆😉
I loved Muskaan...she was soo funny...sev puri khaate waqt moon mein agayee thi...(something like that) and then when she said "bohut crunchy hain!!" ....how do you know...tumhe bhi experience hai kya Natty??😉

That pagal Lubna di ki bachi is right!! sabb ki engagement ek hi din mein rakh di...cheap skate😆😉....challau enuff leg pulling...It was a good update...and Atuls Daffodil so funny(It was a daffodil rite?😕)

Enough of writing now...you shud go and revise😡 (full on mummy mode)

Luv
Nainu
XXX
Edited by Naina123 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
ooooooo
very nce updte
really cute n sweet
updte soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
i left ma comment natyy😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
cute part!! 👏 👏 👏 wow! now everyones getting married! 😛 please continue soon! 😳

Avanti
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Posted: 17 years ago
great part. loved it.
please continue soon

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