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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
hey.
awesome part
i really loved it
do update soon
i will be waiting 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey fst reply it ws superb prt wow lve is blowng all ovr i lvd tht wy future wife how funny ..............now d curse ws finishd i thnk so ab atul kya karega.............
cont...soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
plz i beg u plzzzplzzz continue soon...........ur 2 gud...........
luv ur ff
ishiqa
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
hey just awesome...
u r amazing..
just gr8..
👏 👏 👏 gud job...
cont soooooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow great part. wonder what atul is going to do with the box.
please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
hey great part
woundr wot happens wiv ar
update soon
wanna read da nxt part x
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
Thankyou folsk tht was a great feedback 😳 😳 😳

Maleka/Love Armi
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey maleka first of all it was a really nice part 👏 n im upset with u coz u didnt pm me plz next time pm karna mat bhulna 😉 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sorry folks for the long wait!!!!

here i come with the next part:

Episode# 12 Confused hearts!!!!

Armaan gets very close to Ridz and than he kisses her, but she did'nt resist and when he kissed her on her cheek, a pink light spread all over around A, than Ridz gets into shock he pushes away A, A gets a little shock too, that what he ahs done.

Ridz look at him and says:

Ridz tumne ye kuyn kiya?

A:Tu tumne mujhay roka kuyn hai Ridhima.

Ridz get surprised by hearing her name from A's mouth normally.

Ridz:Tumne tumne mujhay Ridhima kaha?

A gets surprised too, than he smiles.

Ridz gets angry.

A:Haan tha he whispers in Ridz ears, aur ab tuhari bari.

Ridz:Nahi, nahi, ye nahi ho sakta, no,no way, she is getting back.

A:Ridhima!!!Ridz looks at A confusingly and than runs out of the room.

Armaan is stanidng there alone he said ot himself, dekhtay hain, tum kab tak mujhsay door reh pati ho.

Now Atul is sitting alone in cafe when Anji and Armaan enters they both come and sits with,Anji is looking very upset, Atul feels that, he try to talk with Anji, but he remain silent, Anji looks at him but she also says nothing, Armaan notices that he says:

A:Bahut hi thaka dena wala din tha na.

Anji&Atul together:Hmmm bahut.

A to himself:Ye bemari sirf mujhay aur basket ko hi nahi hai.

Anji:Tumne kuch kaha Armaan?

Armaan:Haan main keh raha tha kay aaj kitnay saray beemar loog admit huay hain.

Muskaan comes:

Muski:Hey all, kasam say main bhi aaj bahut thak gayee hoon.

Please have this m'am, everyone see, its Rahul offering Muski a cup of coffee,

Muski smiles and takes the cup.

M:Thanks.

Rahul:No problem , he looks meaningfully at Muskaan.

Everyone is surprised, Anji says:

Anji:Thats so sweet Rahul tumhein apnay doston ka kitna khayal hai.

Atul looks at Anji.

Rahul:Ofcourse kuynkay!!!kuch dost bahut khaas hotay hain, dost say bhi barh kar.

Muski feels something and looks at Rahul but when he looks at her she lower down her eyes.

Than Ridhima enters,

Muski:Aray Ridhima aao na.

Armaan looks at Ridhima, she looks at him, she blushes, she finds a seat no where so she sits in fornt of Armaan, he looks deeply into her eyes, she blushes.

A:Tumne pehli baar koi akal ki baat kahi hai Raooooool, kuch dost (looking at Ridz)bahut ziyada khaas hotay hain.

Ridz does'nt have courage to look at Armaan, who is kep staring at her.She finds no solution, so she tries to hit his feet with her shoes but Atul's feet come in between,he looks at Ridz and says:

Atul:Ridz!!!

Ridz:Kya hua..aaa o aa sorry, wo wo main sorry.

A looks at both Atul and Ridhima, and Anji too.

Anji:Kya hua Ridz?

Ridz:Kuch nahi di.

Rahul to Muski:So aaj ka din kaisa tha?

Muski:Wo tu mainey atay hi kaha tha bahut hi thaka hua...aur ..aur tumhara?

Rahul:Bahut acha, infact ab tu aur bhi acha ho gaya hai.

Muski blushes

Muski to herself: Main kuyn sharma rahi hoon, wo bhi main aur woh bhi is say.

Ridz:Ab mujhay kuch kaam hai, main chalti hoon, she leaves.

Armaan also leaves.

Ridz is walking very fast in the corridor, Armaan follows her, Atul is watching them, he is walking sadly too, he think about what happend in the past few days, he thinks about Rahul/Muski,Armaan/Ridhima and about himself and Anji, than he think that whatever is happening is not normal.

He is siting lonely in the locker room,Atul is thinking , ye jo bhi ho raha hai, theek nahi hai, Anji ko main na chahtay bhi hurt kar raha hoon, main hamesha chahta tha kay wo mujh say aisay hoi pyaar karay leken usay rula kar nahi, kam az pyaar say nahi tu wo muskara kar tu mujhay dekhti thi, aur ab tu woh hansti nahi hai, Rahul muskaan say aur Armaan Ridhima says main tu sabki madad karn chahta tha kahin mainey apany doston ki mushkelein barha tu nahi di???he recalls his conversation with Zoya, so he open his locker and take out the box, he thinks something and than put it back into the locker.

Ridz is talking to someone on the phone at counter when Armaan comes from behind he stares at Ridz, and she notices that, she turns around, Rahul and Muskaan is dealing with a patient, she is talking to the patient that how is he, she smiles and Rahul is staring at her, Anji is quite depressed a nurse is giving her some reports but she is in deep thoughts, than Atul comes and takes the file, butAnji snatches file from his hands and leaves.

Atul dials Zoya's number, he thinks something and than calls her.

Muski takes the file from a nurse, she opens it, she finds an envelope and a red rose in it, she smells the rose, she smiles, and than she opens the envelope and takes out a letter, its written by Rahul:

"Agar tumhara jawab haan hai tu ye laal gulab tum mujhay wapis nahi karogee aur agar na hai tu 2 minute kay andar andar ye tum mujhay lota dogi"

Muskaan:Do minute main, she looks at the red rose.

Aur do minute pooray ho gaye, iska matlab kay tum bhi mujh say pyaa rkarti ho.

Muskaan turns around with he rmouth open, Rahul smiles, he walks closer to her, she than comes face to face her, she looks at him confusingly.

Armaan is at home he is thinking about Ridz again and again.

Armaan:Mujhay Ridhima say baat karni hogi, she picks up his phone to call her but he did'nt.

A:Nahi aisay tui wu phone kaat degi, mujhay uskay gha rjana hoga.

Than he jumps into Ridz room, he comes in he see Ridhima sleeping, he smiles, he see Rdihima is looking very beautiful while sleeping,he comes closer to her, she wakes up she is shock.

Ridz tries to say something but Armi puts his hand on her mouth they both stare each other.

Precap:Armaan falls on the ground and Ridz in schock says Armaan from thw window of her room, Ridz is about to kiss Armaan on his cheek where he is hurt, she is getting closer, Atul is saying to Anji main aaj aik bahut badi sachai say parda uthana chahta hoon, Anji looks at him angrily, Muskaan is saying to Rahul tu ye sab tumharra khel tha,Rahul tumhein koi ghalat fehmi hui hai.

Maleka/Love Armi

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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
hey meleka di i loved thta part thanks so much for continueing
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