Kumud & Kshitij: Match Made in Heaven! - Page 24

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Posted: 19 years ago
rhea ki bachi...hamesha galat time par roti hain 😡 😆

awesome gulli... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
yeah i love her timings too!!! 😆 😆
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Part 29

Kumud comes back

K is still waiting

K: Where were we?

Kumud: No!! come on get up!

K: Please just one!

Kumud: No!

Kumud gets up

But K grabs her and brings her backs down

They both stare at each other

Kumud: (softly) Someone will see?

K: let them

Kumud: Some one will come in

K: Let them

KUmud: K??

K: I cant keep my eyes off of you for a min

They have a nice moment together

Kali is shouting at Kumud (meaning calling her)

Kumud: Kali is calling

K: Kali ki bacchi!

Kumud: K? She's my sister!

K: what i didnt say she wasnt!

Kumud gets up

And she leaves

K: Thats it... i am taking her somewhere where no body will come and disturb us!!!

Meanwhile Mahi calls a cop over

This cop has the key to the cell

He also has a gun

She grabs the gun

ANd tells him to open it

EVeryone sees and the have their guns ready

They cant do anything stupid

He opens the door

SHe has the gun pointed

She is taking the cop

Mahi: No one move no body gets hurt

She leaves w/ him

Meanwhile later that day

Kumud is waiting for K

K calls her up

K: I will be a little late

Kumud: Why?

K: I am sorry got caught up in something

Kumud: No you come now

K: Kumud?

Kumud doesnt know that he's downstairs

K comes and stands by the door and talks to her on the phone

K: I am sorry! but i have to

Kumud: Fine i wont talk to you!!

K: Yes you will you always do!

Kumud: No!!

She is mad

K: Kumud... i love it when you are all mad

Kumud: Be quiet!!! I am not talking to you!

K comes closer

Kumud hangs up the phone

K is right behind her

He is smiling

He dials her number

Kumud: What? Hello?? Hello???? Hello? If ur not going to talk why do you call??

She turns around and gets so scared

K is laughing

Kumud doesnt talk to him

She turns around

K puts his arms around her

K: I am sorry!!

Kumud doesnt say anything

K: U cant be mad at me forever!! you have to break this silence sometime

He starts kissing her

She moves away

She is going towards the door

K: Oh no.. i wont let you go today

She is going by the door

He pulls her and closes the door

They both look at each other

Kumud is like wow!! is he hot or what?

Then Kk and ABhay come there

Kumud and K are still upstairs

K is about to go for a kiss but Kumud walks away

He grabs her and she spins in

Neither of them can control their emotions

KK is wondering where she could be

She is calling kumud

Kumud and K dont listen

They are lost in each other

He kisses her

Someone knocks on the door

Kumud: Hold that thought!

K goes into the bathroom

Nakul: Kumud.... KK mom is here

Kumud: momma? Okay i will be there

He leaves

She fixes herself a little bit

She comes down

Kk is playing w/ Rhea

K comes down

Everyone is there

Then all of a sudden Mahi comes in w/ a gun

They are all shocked!!

MAhi is laughing

M: Now where will you guys go?

Mahi comes by Kk

Mahi grabs Rhea

Kumud is hysterical

No one is moving

Mahi: No one come by me or i will shoot

She keeps all of them hostage

Stupid doesnt run away

Kumud is crying and screaming to get Rhea back

Mahi tells her to shut up

She is laughing

M: Now i have everyone valueable thing!

Kk: Why are you being so childish?

Mahi: Childish??

Kk: Why are you harming Rhea??

M: Becuz anything that is related to you i will destroy it!!

Mahi is lecturing them

Then all of a sudden a man walks in

Not ACP

MAhi turns around

MAhi thinks she has seen him b4

Then she has flashbacks

MAhi gets shocked!!!

M: U??

Guy: Yes me!!! I have been looking for you for 20 years!! and i have finally found u!

Mahi has a gun and points it at him

Guy: u cant scare me!! i own u!

Mahi is shocked

They are wondering who is he!

Kk sees

The guy is..

Remember when Kk brought Mahi

She was a dancer well he's those guys you know.. it always happens.. the guy that always takes the money that dancers make

You see them in movies as well

So mahi is shocked!

G: You still owe me my money!!

M: I dont owe you anything!

G: You either give me my money or else..

M: Or else what? You cant do anything to me

Guy comes closer

Mahi: Dont move or i will shoot

Kk also walks towards her

Mahi doesnt see her coming

Guy is walking

Kshitij also comes

He grabs Rhea so fast

The guy grabs the gun

Mahi is trapped

G: U will come w/ me!! you promised me so many shows!

G sees Kk

G: Arre Kkusum madam!!

Kk also recoginzes him later on

Guy takes Mahi away

She is sceaming

(How can she dance she's a hippo)

K gives Kumud Rhea

She is crying

She takes care of her

Mahi is trying to escape

G: Hey dont yell!!! i know i made a deal w/ Kk that she only needed for for 2 years but then it became 20

Mahi is shocked!

G knows everything that happened to Mahi

Even her getting married to Abhay

G: Fine... i will let you go on one condition....

Mahi listens

G: Give me my money that i lost in the 20 years becuz of you

Mahi is like i am broke!

G: Two things.. u give it to me or i take you in

MAhi is screwed!!!


The End

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Posted: 19 years ago
very good...i like Mahi getting trapped...what a twist. Ekta , why don't u read this fanfic ?
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 30

Mahi is thinking how to escape from this guy

But this guy is glued to her like anything else

In the night she tries escaping but no use becuz the guys friends are all there playing cards and what not

Mahi is like dam

He recognizes the guys..

They all saw her dance

When she was skinny

Now i dont think they want to see a hippo dance

Mahi tries escaping from the back window

She doesnt have nothing so how could she give him cash

But there are guards everywhere

He planned it out good cuz he knows how sneaky she could be

at home

K is doing something from work in his room

Kumud comes in after putting rhea to sleep

K is almost done w/ it

Kumud sits next to him

Kumud: K do u have to do this now???

K: yes becuz i forgot to do it!

Kumud: WHy dont you stop for a while?

K: I am almost done

Kumud: Fine!

K is like why are you all mad

Kumud wants to spend time w/ him

K notices he's doing that on purpose

K puts it away

Kumud ignores him

K: Kumud what is this?? YOu cant do this!

Kumud: Yes i can!!!

K puts his head on her shoulders

Kumud: No get away!

She pushes him off

K: U cant escape from me that easily!!

Kumud:Watch me!

Kumud runs and K is chasing her

They go out on the balcony yes they have one!

They both look at each other

It starts raining

Both of them are getting wet

K puts his face closer to Kumud's

He kisses her

They hug each other tightly

He lifts her up and puts her on the bed

The lights dim and you know what happens next

Next Morning:

Both of them are cuddled with each other

They are in deep sleep

Saakshi comes into Rhea's room

She sees that she is awake and takes her

She gives her a bath and feeds and does everything

K opens his eyes

He sees that Kumud is sleeping

He goes on top and gives her a kiss

She opens her eyes

Both smile at each other

She blushes

Kumud pushes him off

He pulls her on top of him

When she tries to leave her Mangalsutra gets stuck to shirt

K: See.. u cant get away from me

K takes it off really really really slowly while looking at her

She is smiling

She sits up

Fixes herself a little

He sits up

Kumud: Dont you have to go to work?

K: dont feel like it!

Kumud: U have to go!

K: There is someone here that stops me from going to work!

Kumud: Really?

K: Yes!

Kumud: before you were a person that was on time never late! what happened to that?

K: That was before i met you!!

K comes closer to her

He kisses her again

She gets up and goes into the shower

K is in heaven!!

She comes out

Goes and sees that Saakshi is taking care of Rhea

meanwhile

Dadi is missing the family

Kk totally forgot to talk to them about it

She goes there later on and talks about it

No one agrees with her

Kk tries to convince to let Dadi stay with them

K comes and tells her no

KK is sad

She tries and tries but they all hate her

KK tells Dadi that

Dadi is sad

She knows its gonna be hard trying to convince them that she has changed!!

Meanwhile...

The love birds are at it again

Nakul is calling K

That makes K mad

Kumud thinks its funny

Nakul needs K signature on some papers

Kumud comes down

K is like why did u come down

Kumud goes into the kitchen

K goes upstairs

Looking at Kumud

K is giving signals so she can be with him

Kumud is blushing

She is nodding her head no

K is like please!!

Kumud is like no

Saakshi comes in

Kumud acts like nothing has happened!

K: Arre where did mom come in this picture?

Meanwhile

Mahi tries to convince the guy that she can get the money

Guy agrees to free her

But she has people w/ her so she doesnt escape

She goes to the bank

Acts like nothing is happening

Goes in her account

Mahi had money... in the account long before anything

That money kept doubling every year

So she thinks by now.. its a lot!!

She opens and checks her balance!!

When she looks.....


SHe is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



The End!!

Preview:

The more K comes to Kumud.... the more she irrates him more and more by not coming to him!

K plans a trip for just them two so he can be with her!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwww...............soooooooo cute! lol

I luv it!!!!!!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was great...plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago

thnx guli..at least we make kshitij alive in the fiction...i feel very sad or feel cry for ekta's decision... i don't how far now i will watch this saw..but its comes to end soon...

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Posted: 19 years ago
WOW THAT IS SO ROMANTIC!!! KEEP IT UP GULLI!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 32

Mahi is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!

Her balance is 0.00000000000

Mahi: where is all my money???

Guy: Hey its not my problem.. its urs.. i just want my money!

Mahi is going crazy about her money

She leaves the back all pissed

When she leaves

Kkusum comes behind

She smiles!

Kk: Poor Mahi!!! She doesnt know i took it all!!

Th guy is there see's KK and smiles

She winks back

Kk gave him enough cash to keep his mouth shut about it

His job is to torture her

Kk: My KKusum ur so evil!!

She laughs!!

Back at home

K is trying to get closer to Kumud but Kumud is ignoring him on purpose

Its killing him

He calls her sweetly and nicely to but Kumud is acting mean!

She is laughing

Kumud is alone in the kitchen

K comes there

He is blocking her

K: Now where will you go?

Kumud: Dont be so sure!!

K: I wont fall for anything!

Kumud looks

Kumud pops her eyes out

Kumud: Mummy!!!

K turns

No one is there

She leaves

K is like damn!

All day she troubles the poor guy

At night

Kumud comes in her room

K is hidng behind the door

He comes and hugs her from behind

Kumud: Couldnt you wait?

K: No!! You have troubled me all day!

K kisses her

K: I was thinking about getting away for a few days

Kumud: K? There are a lot of things that are to be done

K: Come on just 3 days

Kumud doesnt reply!

K: Please?

Kumud: i will think about it!

Rhea is crying a little so Kumud goes to her

Kumud comes back in the room

Sh falls alseep

K was finishing some stuff so he goes to sleep as well

He kisses Kumud on the forehead

They both cuddle

In the night Rhea is really out doing her number

She is crying and crying

Kumud puts her in the middle of the bed

She quiets down

She's not sick or anything!

Next Morning:

Rhea wakes up its 6

Kumud has no energy to get up and she's fast aslep

K sees this and takes Rhea with him

He lets her rest

Saakshi wants to hold Rhea so he gives Rhea to her

Man people wake up at 6!! go to sleep i tell ya!

K goes back into bed and gets his 1 hour rest

The alarm goes off at 7

K cant believe that 1 hour past already.. it seemed like 5 mins

Kumud is still sleeping

K wakes her up

Kumud: 5 mins!

K: You are starting to talk like me!

K smiles

Kumud: where is rhea?

K: By mom!

She sits up

So does he

He hugs her

Saakshi walks in

K quickly lets go

S: Kumud i think something is wrong w/ Rhea??

Both of them are shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


The End


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