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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: P u j a- -*

Aww if you write sweet parts like that you'l get sweet comments back right😆 Loll jk yeahh it wouldve been abit weird if all the couples were best mates yeahh your 100% right bout the advice bit,Awww! hope you had a lovelyy time! Anyway LOVED the first part! the descriptions & your writung style are really good! I loved how yu made Sanjana different to her Bro's & Sis's lol .. && the necklace thing was really cute! Cant wait for the entry of the other two Families i wonder who theyll be😛 cont soon! x

awww ur so sweet thanks😳 yea its important for all of them not to be best friends with their future lovers lol😉 i tried to make sanjana different from the others cuz she's the oldest n seen more things than them like her parents fighting😭 and their withdrawn behavior with each other😭 and she wants to make sure her bros n sis's dont go threw wat she did😳. the necklace thing is something special for the siblings as u'll learn later in the story😉. and i think u already kno who the other 2 families are going to be lol 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
QUOTE- awww ur so sweet thanks yea its important for all of them not to be best friends with their future lovers lol i tried to make sanjana different from the others cuz she's the oldest n seen more things than them like her parents fighting and their withdrawn behavior with each other and she wants to make sure her bros n sis's dont go threw wat she did. the necklace thing is something special for the siblings as u'll learn later in the story. and i think u already kno who the other 2 families are going to be lol-

Lol 😳 Ohh she's thee oldestt bless! Awww poor her What the all of them dont like talk to eachother or their parents?Ohh okay thenn it was cutee 😆 Loll yee i think i may have an ideaa 😆 😆 Loll i ask wayy too many questions:| Cont next part soon! 😊 x


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Posted: 17 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: P u j a- -*

QUOTE- awww ur so sweet thanks yea its important for all of them not to be best friends with their future lovers lol i tried to make sanjana different from the others cuz she's the oldest n seen more things than them like her parents fighting and their withdrawn behavior with each other and she wants to make sure her bros n sis's dont go threw wat she did. the necklace thing is something special for the siblings as u'll learn later in the story. and i think u already kno who the other 2 families are going to be lol-

Lol 😳 Ohh she's thee oldestt bless! Awww poor her What the all of them dont like talk to eachother or their parents?Ohh okay thenn it was cutee 😆 Loll yee i think i may have an ideaa 😆 😆 Loll i ask wayy too many questions:| Cont next part soon! 😊 x


yea she's the oldest u kno the "protective sister" lol no they just don't talk to their parents i guess u could say that the younger kids don't know about their parents fights and acting like a couple in front of others but in reality their not exactly in love anymore, only sanjana knows about that and shields her siblings from all that. so wats ur idea?? its ok, its a good thing wen ppl ask u a lot of questions, lets u kno ur doing a gud job! im still editing some things but it'll be up in a couple of days k?

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Posted: 17 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: krazychik92

yea she's the oldest u kno the "protective sister" lol no they just don't talk to their parents i guess u could say that the younger kids don't know about their parents fights and acting like a couple in front of others but in reality their not exactly in love anymore, only sanjana knows about that and shields her siblings from all that. so wats ur idea?? its ok, its a good thing wen ppl ask u a lot of questions, lets u kno ur doing a gud job! im still editing some things but it'll be up in a couple of days k?

Ohhh okayy awww cute! Ohh rightt i get it loll yeahh i meant that the two Families would be the other guys lol. Awww! okayy😊 && Happy new year for Later on! x
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: P u j a- -*

Ohhh okayy awww cute! Ohh rightt i get it loll yeahh i meant that the two Families would be the other guys lol. Awww! okayy😊 && Happy new year for Later on! x

yea the other families will b the others so they can bug the heck out of sanju lol. if u ever get any ideas plz tell me cuz my brain is all messed up n its hard to think of kute situations for me lol. aww happy new yrs to u also party a lot lol

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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

ok guys the next part will be up in a hour or two or three depending on my pace lol so check back in a while k

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Posted: 17 years ago
#37

Just read the story...and must say that it seems really interesting so far...really liked the intro of the characters.....Sanjana seems like a really interesting character herself...like one of those ideal women type lol....I really liked the way you described each character with such detail...It was really descriptive....It seemed as if I could actually picture them in front of me....Really liked the starting....cant wait till all of the youngsters meet eachother...and the twist and turns their life takes....great part....cant wait for the next one...continue soon...and keep up the great work 👏

And just a request...It would be really helpful if you can put the page numbers up as well...so we know that the recent part has been updated and on what page....it will be gratefull...thanks



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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: mita_mita01

Just read the story...and must say that it seems really interesting so far...really liked the intro of the characters.....Sanjana seems like a really interesting character herself...like one of those ideal women type lol....I really liked the way you described each character with such detail...It was really descriptive....It seemed as if I could actually picture them in front of me....Really liked the starting....cant wait till all of the youngsters meet eachother...and the twist and turns their life takes....great part....cant wait for the next one...continue soon...and keep up the great work 👏

And just a request...It would be really helpful if you can put the page numbers up as well...so we know that the recent part has been updated and on what page....it will be gratefull...thanks 😊


aww thanks ur really sweet. ok thnx i'll start writing the pg and the part updated from now on, actually i was going to do that for this part that im doing rite now, so its like u read my mind but yea i'll do that. the youngesters are going to meet soon and as for their twists and turns well their young adults so thats going to happen a lot lol thank you for readin and liking this.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: krazychik92

aww thanks ur really sweet. ok thnx i'll start writing the pg and the part updated from now on, actually i was going to do that for this part that im doing rite now, so its like u read my mind but yea i'll do that. the youngesters are going to meet soon and as for their twists and turns well their young adults so thats going to happen a lot lol thank you for readin and liking this.

oh and dont feel sad.....wish u a late merry christmas...and a very happy new year!😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: mita_mita01

oh and dont feel sad.....wish u a late merry christmas...and a very happy new year!😊

ohh thanks!! hope u had a great christmas and a lovely new year! uhhh what shouldn't i feel sad about???

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