Hazaaron Khwahishen Aisi / RA / C16B P27 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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That Was A Reallyy Good Part! ..&& I Lovee Your Style Of Writing ..All The Emotions Are Described Perfectly and In A Way So That I Feel Like Im There! 👏 Awwww Whats The Matter With Aisha?? I Doesnt Have Anything To Do With Yusuf Does It? Hahaa The Part With The Honey & Maryam & Jackie Lol! 😆. Samira Is Soo Sweet Caring For Her Sister Like That! Ohh Andd Imraan! Sabah Sure Does Want Too Sucseed! I'd Love Too Know More About Amaan 😊 Anyway Great Part! 😊 ..Cnt Wait For Nxt Part x
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: P u j a- -*

That Was A Reallyy Good Part! ..&& I Lovee Your Style Of Writing ..All The Emotions Are Described Perfectly and In A Way So That I Feel Like Im There! 👏 Awwww Whats The Matter With Aisha?? I Doesnt Have Anything To Do With Yusuf Does It? Hahaa The Part With The Honey & Maryam & Jackie Lol! 😆. Samira Is Soo Sweet Caring For Her Sister Like That! Ohh Andd Imraan! Sabah Sure Does Want Too Sucseed! I'd Love Too Know More About Amaan 😊 Anyway Great Part! 😊 ..Cnt Wait For Nxt Part x

Thanks so much for the wonderful comments. I didn't get a chance to send PMs out until now, but I'm glad you saw the update. I guess I can reveal that Aisha's problem is not related to Yusuf. It'll take a few more chapters for me to tell what exactly the problem is, but there may be hints in the next one. There will also be more about Amaan! Will post the next part ASAP. Thanks again for reading!

Edited by SuhanaSafar - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I loooooooooved this part 😳 it was sp good and the prank reminded me of our evil deeds 😆 😆
ok going back to ur Questions:
I like this style....I liked old one too but this is also good 😉 ....
and ok Aisha is my fav character 😳 ....well...I guess u know why😳 ..... but I like other characters too ..all the characters seem like real people and I feel like I know them...
ur story has a great power 😉 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nitu07

I loooooooooved this part 😳 it was sp good and the prank reminded me of our evil deeds 😆 😆
ok going back to ur Questions:
I like this style....I liked old one too but this is also good 😉 ....
and ok Aisha is my fav character 😳 ....well...I guess u know why😳 ..... but I like other characters too ..all the characters seem like real people and I feel like I know them...
ur story has a great power 😉 😳

Thanks for responding so quickly...oh so you're a prankster huh? Then I may ask for your help to think of more pranks for the story. Glad you like this style. I think it's a lot easier for me to present the emotions and personalities this way because I don't have to stick to one character's perspective throughout the chapter. Thanks for the compliments.

Edited by SuhanaSafar - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey lovely part plz can u tell me more abt rajeev and amnas character
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey lovely part plz can u tell me more abt rajeev and amnas character

hey, thanks! Well, Aamna is Aisha and she's already been introduced. Rajeev plays Yusuf, who's Rehan's older bro. In the next chapter there will be more about him. Thanks for reading!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi i read the fan fic i think this is a bit more better than manzil i love the characters and the way you tell their feelings it so real like and you've described the characters so well can't wait for the next update i know i say this in every post but the story gets really interesting and you want more and more

love ya loads

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: rozia

Hi i read the fan fic i think this is a bit more better than manzil i love the characters and the way you tell their feelings it so real like and you've described the characters so well can't wait for the next update i know i say this in every post but the story gets really interesting and you want more and more

love ya loads

😛

Thanks so much Rozia! I'm glad you like it more than Manzil because I am after all trying to improve it. I'll update as soon as possible, but I'm going on a trip today and will not be back until Sunday. I think I should have Chapter 3 ready by Monday or Tuesday. Thanks again!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wah 😭 😭
You totally forgot me 😕
I have to go on your PM list okay 😃
Manzil was lovely and Im gonna love this too!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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The characters are perfect! I love the story! The style of writing is soo good and this is more interesting than Manzil aswell( the style i mean)... 👏 I want to find out more about Yusuf even though I know quite alot ready if you dont change the story. Keep up the great writing Suhana 👏

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