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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys i know you'll are angry with me because i havent updated in a looooooooooooong time and i am aware of that but im sorry guys my computer has broken down and i will only be able to visit india forums sometimes but it will get fixed soon and i will try to update as soon as i can and i will try really very hard to update but i dont know when i will be able to plz understand

love
-tuba
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Takdeer

Part 4

Prachi and KT were walking down the corridor when they saw a familiar girl walking towards them
KT: Riya how nice to see you again after such a long time
Riya: I know its been long
Prachi: so how are you
Riya: I'm fine Prachi
Prachi: Good
Riya: I came to tell you that I am having a party this weekend and it's a Valentines Day party
KT: Wow sounds interesting
Riya: It is interesting because I am inviting everyone in our year in this party and so you both will have to come
KT: of course we will come don't worry
Prachi: huh!!!
Riya: come on Prachi it'll be fun
KT: haan Prachi it'll be fun
Riya was looking sad
KT: Riya you don't Prachi will come
Prachi nudged KT, and KT nudged her back
Riya: ok guys see you round
She turned around but then she remembered something and swung back round
Riya: um by the way colour code Red and white and you have to come with a partner ok
KT: huh???
Prachi: (was copying KT) Don't worry KT it'll be fun remember
Riya: ok guys bye
KT & Prachi: Bye…
KT: why were you behaving like that
Prachi: Papa will never allow me to come mein unhe kaise samjhaungi
Kt: *sigh* tumhe kya lagta ma mujhe aane degi NO WAY!! But I'm not moaning come on mein unhe kisi bhi tarha mana lungi and she'll understand
Prachi: par mere Papa ka kya
KT: I don't know
Prachi: KT: tu manayegi mere papa ko
KT: main?????
Prachi: haan tum
KT: nai bhi mein kaise manaun tere papa ko
Prachi: come on KT please…. Agar tu nahi manayegi toh mein party mein kaise aungi
KT: you have a point, but how can you be sure that he'll listen to me after all he doesn't even know me
Prachi: mujhe yakeen hai ke woh teri baat manenge
KT: ok I'll give it a try
Prachi: theek hai to aaj after college haan
KT: ok
They both walk away… on the other hand Riya had invited Laksh and Neev aswell…

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After college Prachi took KT to her house. Prachi opened the door and stepped in.
Prachi: KT wait a minute, I'll just be back
KT: ok
KT stepped in aswell she looked around the house and her mouth slowly opened. She was so shocked to see the house it was just so big to her she had never been in a house like this only the little houses in a chawl she had seen where she lived she was really gob-smacked. She walked around the room and observed it she thought it was very nice and she was wondering where Prachi had gone.
KT: Prachi
Just then someone tapped on her back and it was Anurag and of course she didn't know him as she never met him before
Anurag: um….aap kaun
KT: mein KT Prachi ki dost
Anurag: oh acha acha….aao betho Prachi ati hogi
KT went and sat down on a sofa she was so scared and nervous how was she going to convince Prachi's dad she didn't know what to say.
Prachi came downstairs and before Anurag was about to go she stopped and made him sit on the sofa and sat down herself
Prachi: Papa um iss weekend humarey ek dost ke ghar par valentines day party horahi hai kya mein jaa sakti hoon
Anurag: valentines day party mein tumne kya jaakar karma hai whats the point
KT: dekhiya sir yeh valentines day party Prachi ki meri saat pehli valentines day party or mein uski dost hoon agar who nahi jayegi to mujhe kaise maza ayegi
Anurag: lekin-
KT: mein Prachi ka poora khayal rakhungi balki Neev bhi hai na who bhi humarey saat jaraha hai who Prachi ka bhi acha dost hai please usse jaane dijiye
Anurag didn't know what to say he didn't want Prachi to go and he never let her go but for some odd reason he felt like listening to KT and letting Prachi go but he didn't why he was feeling this, he was feeling attached to this girl he had never met before.
Anurag: theek hai lekin sirf iss baar ok
Prachi: ok papa you're the best I love you papa
She gave anurag a kiss, KT saw this and had slight tear In her eye she felt like prachi was so lucky having a dad like anurag she knew se missed out on this but she quickly recovered and behaved like nothing happened.
KT: prachi mujhe abhi chalna chahiye, ma mera intazar karahi hogi
Prachi: ok KT bye
KT: bye
KT left

At KT's house

KT: ma
Prerna: hmm
KT: mein valentines day party par jaa sakti hoon
Prerna: kya????
KT: please ma prachi bhi arahi hai bohot maza ayega please
Prerna: nahi KT bilkul bhi nahi
KT: par kyun
Prerna: kyunki abhi tu bohot choti hai
KT: maaaaaaa
Prerna: abb aise maaaaaaaaa kehke na bula
KT: kyun nahi bulaon mein aapkokya bachi lagti hoon ma mein badi hogayi hoon
Prerna: haan par mere liye tu abhi bachi hai!!!!
KT: ma this is not fair please mujhe jaane den please
KT made a sad face infront of Prerna
Prerna: *sigh* theek hai magar derr matt lagana wahan par haan
KT: maaaaaaa I love you
KT ran to prerna and gave her a big hug
Prerna: I love you too beta

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I know its really boring but I have my exams and I know theres no romance in this and there is no Neev or Lakshya but please guys try to understand and in the next part I promise it will be more romantic because theres a valentines day party coming up
I'm sorry for not updating after a long times please excuse me…

-Tuba

Edited by kt4lakshya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
great part👏
can't wait for the next part😳
Plzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Only 2 comments WOW i guess my FF is really bad

well thank you who commented and hopefully i will get more comments


-Tuba

Edited by kt4lakshya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
great part 👏
can't wait for the romance part 😳
please continue soon 😊

preeti
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhakrishna123

great part👏
can't wait for the next part😳
Plzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛

thanx

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Posted: 17 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: moodle

tuba please continue 😛

dont worry i am😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: aishu_fan

great job tuba keep it up!

thankyou😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: PulkitMouni Fan

great part 👏
can't wait for the romance part 😳
please continue soon 😊

preeti

thankooo

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Takdeer

Part 5

It was Saturday and the night of the Valentines Day party. Laksh and Neev were at home thinking of what to where.

Laksh: yaar Neev mein aaj kya pehnu I mean mein haar jeez mein handsome lagta hoon so what should I do
Neev: wear what you have never worn before
Laksh: But I hate suits with a blazer it's just not me
Neev: then I would suggest you don't go to the party
Laksh: ok fine I'll wear a suit but only if you wear what I say
Neev: why
Laksh: because your clothes are boring
Neev: so?
Laksh: what do you mean so? You have to look cool today not boring
Neev: ok fine but it better suit me
Laksh: don't worry it will

Laksh opened his wardrobe and started looking inside he found a clothes for neev to wear and told him to get changed which Neev wasn't too happy about but now he had to think of himself what suit he would wear himself. But he didn't have to think about that for too long…

At KT's House
KT was lying on her bed thinking about Prachi's dad she couldn't stop thinking about him, why she felt attached? Why she smiled when she saw him? Why? She couldn't find the answer to any of these questions and just then she got a text message from someone on her mobile. She stopped thinking, sat straight up on her bed and grabbed her mobile. She looked and she had a text from Prachi, she red out the message.

KT: tum aaj valentines day party mein kya pehnogi?
KT dropped her jaw she completely forgot about the party it was only 2 hours away she started to panic and wonder around the room she was so shocked she completely forgotten. Just then Prerna came in the room.
KT: ma?
Prerna: beta tu tayar nahi hui
KT: ma mein party ke barey mein bhool hi gayi ab pata nahi mein kya pehnoongi kuch samaj mein nahi araha hai
KT sat down on her bed and Prerna did too
Prerna: beta mein tere liye kuch layi thi
KT: acha…kya?

Prerna was hiding something behind her back and finally showed KT what it was…..it was a red dress. KT was surprised she smiled at Prerna and took it from her she opened the dress, stood up and held it against her body and looked in the mirror

KT: Wow ma yeh dress kitna pyara hai
Suddenly KT's smile vanished. She turned around to lookat Prerna
KT: yeh dress bohot mehnga hoga na
Prerna: um nai itna mehnga nahi tha
KT got angry and sat down beside her
KT: matlab yeh dress mehnga tha
Prerna: Krishna
KT: ma meine aap ko itni baar kaha hai ke itne mehnge dress mat laya kijiye phir bhi aap
Prerna: dekh beta tujhse badkar mere liye koi cheez nahi hai samjhi
KT looked down at the dress and looked back up at Prerna
KT: thank you ma
KT hugged her and Prerna hugged her back.

After some time KT got changed into the dress she was looking really beautiful in the long red dress. It was a cocktail dress, it was a sleeveless dress with a fat strap on her shoulders. The upper part of her dress clung on to her body but the bottom part went outwards and was a little bit frilly at the bottom, the dress had tiny red sequences that made the dress shine the whole dress was silky and red, she truly looked stunning she decided to keep her hair down. She wore a necklace that had a white pearl hanging of it in the middle, she also wore matching earrings which also had a pearl, and finally she was wearing white heal sandals on her feet. KT came out of her room and Prerna looked at her she was so happy.
Prerna: array bhai wah tu toh badi pyari lagrahi hai
KT: ma
Prerna: acha acha abb ja tujhe derr horahi hai
KT: haan woh maine Prachi ko Phone kiya hai to woh bhi chali gai hogi
Prerna: acha
KT: bye ma
Prerna: bye beta

KT leaves the house and reaches the Riya's house. She stands in front of the house and waits for Prachi. People had started to come now and they all had a partner and KT was again panicking she hasn't got a partner either she totally forgot. Just then she saw Prachi. Prachi was wearing red salwar kameez with little white flowers on top. She saw KT and walked up to her.

Prachi: array wah tum toh bohot achi lagrahi ho
KT: haan yeh sab chodo humara party mein partner kaun banega
Prachi: *sigh* mere paas partner hai
KT: kya???? or tumne mujhe bataya nahi
Prachi: mujhe yaad nahi raha
KT: par mera koi partner nahi hai
Prachi: acha
KT: haan
KT got even more worried now even Prachi had a partner
KT: ek minute par tumhara partner hai kaun
Prachi: guess!
KT though for a minute and then she shot her eyes at Prachi
KT: NEEV???
Prachi: haan!!!
KT: NEEV???
Prachi: array bhai haan
KT: NEEV???
Prachi: KT
KT: usne tumhe kab poocha
Prachi: um pata hai jab tum mere ghar ayi thi na uske adhe ghante baad Neev ne mujhe phone kiya tha or phir mujhse poocha ke mein kiske jaarahi hoon mene bola kisi ke saat nahi to phir usne mujhse ussi waqt poochliya tha ke mein uski partner boanoongi?
KT: aur tumne haan kehdi
Prachi: hmm
KT: PRACHI???
Prachi: kya?
KT: kuch nahi

KT was depressed now she had a feeling that she was going to be the only one without a partner. Just the Prachi saw Neev, he was wearing dark blue jeans and red t-shirt and on top of that a white jumper with a hood it was opened from the front. They both went inside. KT stayed outside and went and sat down on a bench she lots of people go inside until she saw Laksh she couldn't take her eyes off him he was looking so handsome even in a suit. He was a white suit with a white T-shirt and the only thing that was red was his tie. Laksh looked her way but KT hid her face and looked the other way and so he didn't see her. She sighed a sigh of relief and decided she will go inside she can't just stay out here in the cold she was very cold so she went inside. When she reached inside she could hear the ear breaking music it was on really loud and everyone was dancing with their partners. She looked around and she spotted Laksh sitting near a bar and smiling looking at everyone she wondered why he was sitting like that. She walked down the steps and headed for a drink on the bar.

KT: um can I have a fizzy drink please
W: ofcourse ma'am
KT: thankyou

Laksh looked her way and was left totally shocked he though she was looking so pretty and beautiful he couldn't take his eyes off of her, he smiled. KT noticed that Laksh was looking at her she started to feel awkward so she started to pull at her dress

Laksh: don't worry you look nice, very nice
KT: thanks
Laksh: to tum yaha kiske saat ayi ho
KT: um…..tum kiske saat aye ho
Laksh: well…
Just then a girl came running over to Laksh and hit him on his arm then put her arms round his arm and acted really clingy.
Laksh: uh…KT meet Sanya she's my mom's friend's daughter, and Sanya meet KT she goes to my college
Sanya: hello
KT: Hi
Sanya: Laksh tum yahan kyun bethe ho tum mere saat aye ho aur mere saat dance bhi nahi kiya
Laksh: tum jao mein ata hoon
Sanya: ok
Sanya left
KT: to tum iske saat aye ho
Laksh: haan….ana pada
KT: kyun
Laksh: mere peechejo padi thi
The waiter handed KT her juice
KT: anyway have a nice time
Laksh: Thanks
She walked away.

End of Part 5.

Hey guys i know i said this would be a romantic part but im really sorry guys but i promise next part will definately be romantic and im sorry if I dissappointed anyone

-Tuba



Edited by kt4lakshya - 17 years ago

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