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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG! FAB JOB 👏 👏 👏 ............I would luv 2 read ur FF everydayyyy coz MY fav jodis r in itttttttttttt..............LUV Anu&Prerna and LK.............. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: friend 99999

the intro is great.
continue soon.

thanks i will cont when i have time

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute14us28amy

OMG! FAB JOB 👏 👏 👏 ............I would luv 2 read ur FF everydayyyy coz MY fav jodis r in itttttttttttt..............LUV Anu&Prerna and LK.............. 👏

awww thank you so much and i like anu and prerna jodi aswell and LK

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys i would just like to add something to the intro:

ganga - sahil married to eachother

karan nandini married to eachother

Nakul and sanjhi are married to eachother and they have a daughter called Isha who is 7 yrs old

Bhoomi and Joydeep are married to eachother and they have a son called rahul who is also 7 yrs old

Manthan is also married to a girl called suhana and they have a son called rohit who is 2 yrs old

so i just wanted to add these to the intro so all the little kids call lakshya and neev chachu and isha and rahul go to school

i will update soon

-tuba
Edited by kt4lakshya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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tubaaaaaa..!! kabse intezaar kar rahi hoon update ke liye, jaldi karo!!!! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i lovee the intro so far<333

please start it soon hun . 😳
Edited by babypink<3 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17

Part 1

We see a lady working in the kitchen with a sari on, she has long black hair and is talking to herself…..its prerna

P: arre yeh KT…. Pata nahi aaj kahan hai yeh ladki……KT….roz to kehti hai ki mama aap jaldi kiya karo par aaj kya hogaya usse…..KT…..KT…..KT!!!!

Then we see a girl wearing a white dress coming out of the room, we first see her payal then her bangles then her necklace which is silver and has K on it then we see her earings wich are swaying of the little wind, we see her long, black, straight and silky hair, then we see her smile then eyes and then we finally see its our very on………..KT!!!

KT: [she come from behind and hugs prerna from the back] mamaaaaaaaaa
P: arrey….agayi roz to mujhe bolti hai jaldi karne ko to aaj kya hogaya
KT: (she lets go of her mother and sits down on the chair nearby) hmm mama aaj college ke akhri year ki pehle class vacation baad to mujhe zara extra ready hona tha
P: acha…..toh meri pyari beti tayari main laga hui thi
KT: hmm
P: ok….waise KT har saal koi naya ata hai na
KT: hmm
P: toh iss saal bhi aayega
KT (she started to think)…..umm…..ji
P: theek hai tu jaldi se naashta karle
KT: ok

Prerna handed her, her breakfast and they both started to eat…….

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In Basu house

We see there are lots of people sitting around a table eating their breakfast. When we see that a handsome man is eating and we see its anurag…
A: maa aaj prachi ka pehla college ka din hai
M: haan beta tum dono to last week hi germany se aye ho
A: ji ma….par prachi hai kahan

Then we here a voice in the background saying "papa" we see a girl running down the staires first we see her lips then her eyes then we see its Prachi…

P: papa
A: arrey meri pyari beti agayi
P: ji papa [she bends down to touch his legs]
A: [he gives her his blessings] beta jaldi se naashta karlo phir aaj main tumhe khud chodne jaunga
P:[she got really happy hearing this] sach papa
A: hm
P: ok

She sat down and everyone carried on eating…

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In Virani house

We see some-one sleeping in the bed peacefully but we cannot see their face as it is covered and the room is very messy…just when some-one walks in its Ganga….

G: lakshya beta jaldi utho kitni derr hogayi hai
L: mmmmmmmmmmmm
G: *sigh* yeh aise nahi maane ga
Ganga went to the curtains and instantly opened them and let all the sunshine come up falling on the sleeping person's face

L:mmmmmmmmmm….mom I want to sleep plzzzz
G: no….jaldi utho

When the person finally lifts the covers and we see its our very own handsome and lazy 😆 ……lakshya….



L: MOM!!!!
G: kya mom jaldi se neechay ayo sab mujhe kehrahe hai or yahan tum abhi tak soye huey ho ( she started to walk towards the door when lakshya spoke up)
L: mom neev ko bhi to uthayen who bhi to soya hua hai
G: who bechara to neechay table pe beth ke humarey saat naashta karaha
L: WHAT???????? (he was most shocked at hearing this….neev never got up on time just like laksh)
G: haan
L: ok mom mai ata hoon
G: jaldi aana ( and with that she left for laksh to get ready)

Lakshya quickly got out of bed…got ready and went downstairs…
He sat next to neev like always…

L: (whispering) tu to aaj bada Mahan bangaya sab ke saamnay
N: (whispering) I know ( he said this while lifting up his collar to indicate he is cool)
L: (whispering) arrey chup jaldi naashta kar warna pehle din main late hooraying
N: (whispering) arrey tu mujhe kya kehraha hai meine naashta karliya
G: yeh tum dono kya baatein kare ho laksh jaldi khao
L: ok mom

They quickly ate their breakfast and left for their college. Outside in lakshya's car….

N: lakshya aaj college ka aakhri saal hai
L: toh………
N: what do you mean 'toh' …….come on har saal ek nayi ladki ati hai
L: yaah but ladka bhi to ho sakta hai
N: come on lakshya pichle 2 saalon se ladki ari hai to iss saal bhi ladki hi ayegi
L: ok ok I get the point
N: soooo…..any new girlfriends????????
L: erm…..no maine socha hai ki main iss saal im gonna take a fresh start
N: ohhhhhh
L: anyway baatein chod and let me drive…..
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Hey guys that was the first part hope u liked it
and I know you guys are angry for not updating before
But I was busy so much so sorry….

-plz comment
-tuba

Thanx for everyones comments before!!!

Edited by kt4lakshya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
wow awesum part
👏 👏 👏
thx for update.cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 👏
plz update soon tuba 😳 !
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
yay!! finally updated!! great part!! 👏 👏

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