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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... dat was such a sweet part... i was nearly in tears... cnt wait for u to cont, i wonder how kripa is gunna react to angad!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
aww that was such a cute part
i loved the way he said "papa aapko pinky ke papa se bhi zyada pyar karenge"😳


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi, that was a really nice part. Good thing Angad told his parents everything so now everyone knows. The Angad and Diya part was so cute. Can't wait for next part to see if AK meet. Continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
awww...that was soo cute...grt part..cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
im a silent reader beccause of skool.. plzzz update the pages or i mite not know when u update.. thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
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diya is adorable!! i loved her cute prayer!!
and i loved angad's encounter with diya! so cute!! and soo sweet!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
angad and diya's conversation was so cute!!
diya is so sweet and adorable,
hope angad brings kripa back in his life!
it was awesome;
continue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
part 6

diya was still in angad's arm,she ask to angad,inocently:"aap mumma ko bhi pyar karengey???".angad said:"haa!i will love ur mumma..."he said that having lots of desire in his eyes for kripa.diya said again:"aap bunty se kahengey ??..k diya gandi nahi hai...achi hai"angad noded his head in yes like he was accepting every conditions of her little daughter who is dearest to him.diya smile n said:"to phir diya aap ko kiss karey??"she said cutely.angad said:"papa to kab se wait kar rahe hai...diya ki kiss k liye.."then diya kiss him on his both cheeks n then she sweetly kiss on his lips with her little ,rosy lips.after a while angad send her to her class room.n promise her that he will wait for her outside the skool ..when her skool will off

now angad cant wait for take kripa n diya bak to home..he wanted to clear every misunderstandings..he want to apologize...he will kneeld in her feets too if thr will b any need...but he cant loose her ,now ....he cant able to bear that.

on other hand,kripa went to diya's skool to pick her ...n when skool bell was ring ..diya came runningly to kripa...kripa pick her in her arms...diya said while wraping her little arms around kripa's neck:"papa kaha hai???"ask inocently..kripa look at diya with amazement n ask:"kon papa??"diya said:"aaj papa aye the ..diya se milney...diya ney god se prayer ki thi naa k diya ko papa chaye...to god ney diya k liye papa ko bheja".kripa stare diya ,anoyingly but next moment she felt love for her daughter on her inocent's prayers n wishes..kripa seems lost in her thoughts when diya shake her n said:"bolo na mumma!papa kaha hai....papa ney diya se promise kya tha k wo diya ka wait karengey".kripa came out frm her thoughts n said in a scolding way:"diya!dnt bother me.....koi papa wapa nahi hai..."n then kripa muttered :"pata nahi kis ko apna papa bol rahi hai".diya's eyes get filled with tears by kripa's scolding...diya said stubbornly:"papa hai...diya k papa hai".n then she get off frm kripa's arms showing her anoyance to kripa but she still holding kripa's finger ....they both start walking on foot path...both daughter n mother looking anoyed to eachother.when diya run toward him..

diya saw him frm far away..though she can see his bak only but she recognize his father....diya grab angad's leg frm behind n said:"papa!"angad look bak n then lovingly pick her in his arms.n then his eyes went on kripa who was standing right in front of him...she was freeze in her position...she ran after diya when diya saw someone n starts running toward him that time kripa didnt knw where her daughter was running....she was just following her daughter n then she saw him n forget to take step toward diya as diya was already reached in his arms...kripa was staring him like she dnt believe in her sight.....but then when her mind told her that he was actually in front of her....she looked at him with blank expression n blank eyes....all of sudden she felt coldness creeping inside her...she felt cold herself like an ice...her feelings n emotions were lost...she just stare him with emptyness in her eyes....

angad cant figure out her feelings....he knew that he has to face her hate,anoyance,her complains n her sarcisms but ..here...she was looking at him,emotionallessly...thr ws nothing in her eyes...not love neither hate...

kripa took diya frm his arms n start walking toward her house....all of sudden she feel tired...her every steps became heavy like tons...but still her heart was empty frm every emotions ..she cant even hears diya's voice....wat she was saying ..for wat she was screaming...kripa's soul n heart unble to listen anything like thr was a complete silent inside her...deep silent.n angad stood thr helplessly ...he felt defeated

kripa soon reached at her place...she put diya down n then lock herself in her room....those memories which she thought became blurry by the time ..now flashing in her visions like it had happened just yesterday....she sat on the bed n close her eyes n everything became clear n visible....those memories took her in it trance.

flash back

she was sitting near the dead bodies of her parents(suryabhan n gayitri sharma).they had died in car accident....she was holding her dady's hand tightly like she wont let them go ....she was weeping ,badly ..she was left alone in this big world..she was an only daughter of suryabhan n gayitri....n now thr was no one to take her responsiblity...n she was not big enough to bring up her ownself..he was just 15 years old..when dilip n naina came forward n hold her hand


flash bak continue...............
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
great part!
can't wait to know what happened in the past!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
just read ur fick its gr8...
i am feeling so sorry 4 kripa...
conitnue soon

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