Luv scene btwn AR Part 1- 39 & new 40

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Surbhi

@arvanu

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#11

awesome update,plzzz do continue.u r an excellent writer!! 😛

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mahalakshmi Sathiyamoorthy

@mahalaksh2303

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#12

rushshri tat was a great part........... 👏
atul part was really funny........... 😆
atul angie ko patayega............ 😆 😆 😆

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khwaaish

@chandni2289

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#13

great work.................i loved it...................but lengthen it a little bit........its really short 😉

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Nigtangle

@rushshri

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#14

thanx guys 4 lovin my own DMG so much.
Ur wishes will b my command n i will try posting longer parts.
once again thnx

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sam

@sam78

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#15

great work, love the part atul, sapna and arman are talking.

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Veeki

@Veeki

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

OMG! ur an awesum writer, plz continue!

love the whole atul thing...so jks makes the whole thing very realistic

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Nigtangle

@rushshri

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#17

thanx to all of u
new part will b in dis forum soon

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#18

Kya part hai yaar!!!! I love Atul's line!!!! I'm still laughing! ... Aur mujhe maut ka. LOLOLOLZZZZ Actually loved all of Atul's lines yaar! GrEaT jOb!!!

Komal

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Nigtangle

@rushshri

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#19

thanx
i wanted 2 stick to d character that's y i put funny lines 4 Atul.
in my story there will b happy ending without any kitchen politics. I am gonna 2 make it.