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Posted: 19 years ago
its ok neha, i understand, especially when u r in 9th grade, its hard to get used to it, lekin yaar, yeh weekend kab aayega???? 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
oye neha
continue this fan-fic 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: happe

oye neha
continue this fan-fic 😳

oye happe, wait abt 30 mins 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry guys, i will cont this story today for sure. 😛 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago

Kripa and Angad walked on the empty beach hand in hand. The moon shone on them leaving a sensation that couldn't be defined.

K: Angad.

A: Ya

K: Anagd, im tired.

A: Already. Kripa puts her head on Anagd's shoulder and slows down.

A: Kripa tum bauth jaldi thak jati ho.

Angad sighs and picks Kripa up.

A: And you have put on a lot! Of weight.

K: Angad, I really hate you!

And she kisses his cheek.

A: With a naught glitz in his eyes- Do you really, cuz if you hate me the way you do! I love it!

K: Ok theek hai, lakin ab mujhko choro!

A: Kyun, tum tho thak gyi thi na.

K: Haan lakin main yeh nahie chathi ki ab tum thak jao.

A: Very smart!

Angad puts Kripa down and they both sit down on a rock. Kripa rests her head on Angad's chest they both watch the waves when suddenly Angad says.

A: Kripa I want a baby girl.

Kripa looks at Angad- Lakin why a girl?

A: Kykuni mera pass already ek beta hai! I don't need two. Aur waisa bhi daughter are more sweeter then sons.

K: Really?

A: Ya

K: Agli baar Adi aayga na, main usko zaroor bataogi!

A: Bata dena.

K: Maara ga vo tumko.

A: Nahie maara ga.

K: Kyun?

A: Because he loves me just as much I love him.

K: Sach?

A: Moch!

K: Lakin mujhko ladka chaiya.

A: Phir sa???

K: Haan.

A: Nooo… tum dekh lena its going to be a girl.

K: No its going to be a boy.

A: Girl

K: Boy

A: Girl

K: Boy..

A: Ok theek hai! Jab hoyga aapna aap pata chal jayga!

K: Haan! Ok ab ghar chala

A: Haan lakin I want to ask you something.

K: Kya?

A: Lets bring Adi home for a few weeks.

K: Hmm… abhi nahie, uska exams chal raha hoga.

A: Fine! Lakin hum milna tho ja saktha hai na?

K: Of course, jab tum chaho.

A: Kal!

K: Kal?!?!?!

Angad nods his head like a kid, Kripa agrees and they leave.

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Kripa is quite tired after the long day, and she is trying to sleep when she feels as if someone is there. She opens her eyes and finds no one there but the windows are opens. She gets up to close them when she sees someone there. When the image is more clear she can make out it's a man. And she's shook when she sees Prithvi's image standing there. Kripa closes her eyes and then opens it again he's still there. She closes them once again when she feels someone's hand on her shouler. Startled she turns around and finds Angad there, she quickly hugs him and looks out the window seeing the image fade away.

A: Kripa kya hua? Tum itni dari hui kyun ho?

K: Kuch Nahie Angad.

A: Theek hai, cholo, go to sleep, humko kal subha kaldi jaana hai. Angad lets go of Kripa but Kripa pulls him back and hugs him tightly again.

K: Angad, aap mujhko kabhi chor kar nahie jaoga na?

A: Kabhi nahie, lakin tum yeh kyun pooch rahi ho?

K: Pata nahie.

A: Kripa, tum bhi na, stop it ok. I love you a lot. Aur aagar baghwaan bhi mujhko kaha ki main tumko chor do, main tabhi nahie maanoga. Maina tumahra saath nebhna ka vaada kiya hai! Aaisa he nahie choroga. Aagar tum kaho tab bhi nahie.

And then after a short pause.

A: Tum kabhi mujko kaho gi tho nahie na?

Kripa hugs him tighter and Angad had his answer.

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Posted: 19 years ago
aww...damn cute..a lovely romantic part...is prithvi going to make a re appearance???
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Posted: 19 years ago
awsome soooo sweet!!! grrrr....prithvi 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
sso sweet! what would we do with prithiv.. send him back to hell 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
ohhh prithvi back? 😡 just wat we so didnt need 😆! n*e wayz gr8 part continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
lovely part neha
continue soon
loved it 😳

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