Naina aur Aath Khajoor ff RN

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hey guys this is my first time for writing a ff so i hope people actually apprecite it so first of all ill just post an introduction to see whether it is intersting enough for you guys.

it is inspired by Snow white and the seven dwarfs becasue i thought of doing something new.

well here goes.

THE CHARACTERS

Maharani Naina Singh Ahluwalia - she is only 21 and got forcefully married to the 60 yr old Maharaja Chandoke Ahluwalia. She lived through the humiliation for one yr after which the Maharaja passed away.

Rajkumar Rajveer Singh Shekhawat - he is lovely handsome playboy who has girls falling on his feet. his heat belongs to Maharani Naina but he has an amnesia problem where he tends to forget things every five minutes. that makes him chnage his gf every five mins but deep down he knows his love for Naina.

Rajkumari Ritu Ahluwalia - the vicious vamp who hates her stepmother because she is the same age as her. she is jealous of her beauty, her position and the amount of attention she receives. she finds new ways to put Naina under disgrace by disrespecting her postion as a rajkumari and openly exposing herself.

okay guys these are the main characters of the story which i am introducing right now. there are others which get introduced as the stroy enfolds but before i do that i need to know what u guys think abt this so pls give comments.

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hey guys i thought of posting the first part anyhow so here it is.

PART ONE

Maharani Naina Singh Ahluwalia is in her room looking out of the window at the birds ?on the ledge. She was forcefully married to the king of Barbair, Maharaja Chandoke ?Ahluwalia a year ago because he had to fulfil his challenge of getting married more than ?ten times. He passed away last month leaving her with a step daughter the same age as ?her. ?

Maharani Naina: Kaash ke mein in parindo ke jaisee hotee, yu asaad banke apne paankh ?pehla ke aasmaano kee oochayo ko chootee. ?

A bird comes and rests on her hand.?

Maharani Naina: Aah, iska matlab hai ke mujhe wish karna chaheeye (she closes her ?eyes) Bhagwaan tu koi karishma deekha de jiskee wajese Rajkumar Rajveer kee nazar ?mujhpe pare or ohne mere pyaar ka ehsaas ho (she lets the bird fly away and then sighs) ?

Servant enters

Servant: Maharani kee jai ho (curtseys) ghustakhi maaf per ek buree khabar hai?

Maharani Naina: Khamosh! Tumhe pata nahi ke buree kahabar dene ka waqt shaam ko ?hai subah nahi. ?

Servant: maafi chahata hoo, maharani per yeh bohat hee zaroori hai. ?

Maharani Naina: Acha. Per usul ko to badal nahi sakte hum. Ek kaam karo os buree ?khabar ko tum kavita me sunao take oska dene ka andaaz khush khabri me badal jaye. ?

Servant: Batameze panchi ne phirse kee baghawat
? Chore chaar ke ghar kee aabru or izzat ?
?   ; Tore dale saare darwaze or deewaar ?
? Os ghatiya see scooter ko leke baar baar. ?

Maharani Naina: Pata nahi yeh larki kis janam ka badla lerahee hai (She points at the ?servant) hamare sipaheeyo ko kaho ke jaake dhoondhe ose, or ha kal ke pehle nahi.?

Servant exits ?

Rajkumar Rajveer Singh Shekhawat comes to see the Maharani in her lounge

Rajkumar Rajveer: Maharani kee jai ho (he curtseys) aapne hame yaad kiya??

Maharani Naina: Ji, aaye aakar baitye hamare paas. . ?

He moves towards the empty chair adjacent to her arm chair. He sits himself comfortably ?and stares at her.?



Maharani Naina: (she hesitates and thinks that will Rajveer remember her today and ?will he express his love to her. She had to make sure) Theek hai, hame yeh bataye ke kya ?aap ke dil me koi khaas hai? ?

He sits back with his arms and legs crossed. ?

Rajkumar Rajveer: (scratches his head) Hmmmmmm, yeh to soch ne waalee baat hai ?kyu ke hamare dil me to kahi hai. Chalo list banate hai. Ab dekho isme Sarah hai, Pooja ?hai, Devi hai, Laxmi hai ummmmm, kya tha oska naam…... ab dekho najane kyu bhool ?jaate hai per itne saare ho to phir ek kee kya zaroorat hai. Hame to ye bi yaad nahi ke ?kitno ka dil thoda or kitno ko aasmaan pe charaya. (he chuckles).?

The Maharani puts her hand over his arm

Maharani Naina: Or main? Mere liye koi jaga nahi? ?

He puts up an eyebrow and then gets up, thinking very deeply

Rajkumar Rajveer: Aap? Aap to alag hee kahani hai. Jabhi hum aapko dekhte hai to ?hame aisa mehsoos hota hai ke hona ho ham aapse mohabbat karte hai per yeh kambakht ?yaadaash hai jo hame marth dejaatee hai. That makes me confused. Ek kaam kijye jab bhi ?humein aapko yeh kehna ho ke hum aapse mohabbat karte hai to tub hame yaad ?diladijyega. (It has been over ten minutes in this conversation which has made Rajkumar ?forget the whole purpose altogether.) Are baap re waqt dekha hai. Chalye ab hame ijazat ?dijye wo kya hai ke hamne Sarah ko waqt diya tha or hum aapse baat karne me bhool ?gaye. (curtseys). ?

The Rajkumar exits?


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pls kindly leave comments on wat u think abt the start
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Rajkumari Ritu Ahluwalia has been caught by the security next morning. They are ?carrying her back to the palace but she is ignoring their plea and instead attempting to ?seduce them by singing this song. ?

Dekh le
aakhon main aakhen daal
seekh le
har pal main jeena yaar
soch le
jeevan ke pal hain char
yaad rakh
marna hai ek baar
marne se pahle jeena
seekh le

dekh le
aakhon main aakhein daal
seekh le

baiyaan
khushiyon ki thaam ke baiyaan
gam ki marod kalaiyaan
gam ka yaaron gam mat karna
chhod de ab to har pal marna
marne se pahle jeena
seekh le

dekh le
aakhon main aakhen daal
seekh le
har pal main jeena yaar
soch le
jeevan ke pal hain char
yaad rakh
marna hai ek baar
marne se pahle jeena
seekh le

baiyaan
saanson ki khudh pe daale
baiyaan
jeevan hai barf ki naiya
naiya pighle haule haule
chahe hans le chahe ro le

marne se pahle jeena
seekh le

As her line finished she froze because Rajkumar Rajveer just stepped out of the palace. ?

Rajkumari Ritu: Your highness, kaha chalejarahe hai aap??

Rajkumar Rajveer: Bara hee acha sawaal hain kyu ke hum khud jaana chahata hain ke ?hamaare pair hame kaha lejarahai hai. Abhi abhi hum aap kee maa Shanta Bai se milkar ?arahain hain or ab kaha jarahai hai? (He puts his finger to his forehead thinking deeply)?
? ?
The security is ordered by Rajkumari Ritu to put her down as she would continue by ?herself. They leave her and Rajkumar Rajveer alone. ?

Rajkumari Ritu: Jaante hai abhi abhi hame ek urtee chirya ne aap ka thikana bataya hai. ?To hum aapkee madad karsakte hai.?
? ?
Rajkumar Rajveer: (his face lights up with a smile) Sach! Hame to pehle hee samjhlena ?chaheeyeta ke ek khoobsurat sa ghulab hee hamara thinkana hosakta hai (he traces his ?finger on her face)?

Rajkumari Ritu links her hand with Rajkumar Rajveer and leads him to her scooter. They ?both ride off outside the palace grounds. ?

Rajkumari Ritu: (apne shaitanee mann me soch tee hai ke aakhir khar Rajkumar Rajveer ?ose akele me mil hee gaya. Ab wo ose paaker hee rahegee or os Naina ke haath kuch ?nahi aaega). ?



Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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this is the second part, but no comments so it seems like people r finding it boring

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Part three

Maharani Naina is in her room looking at the birds once again. She is crying over the ?episode that took place with her and Rajkumar Rajveer with this song playing in the ?background.?

Tum Bin Kya Hai Jeena Kya Hai Jeena
Tum Bin Kya Hai Jeena ?
Tum Bin Jiya Jaaye Kaise Kaise Jiya Jaaye Tum Bin ?
Sadiyon Si Lambi Hai Raaten Sadiyon Se Lambe Huv Din
Aaa Jao Laut Kar Tum Yeh Dil Keh Raha Hai ?
Aaa Jao Laut Kar Tum Yeh Dil Keh Raha Hai ?

Phir Shaame Tanhaye Jaagi Phir Yaad Tum Aa Rahe Ho
Phir Jaan Nikal Ne Lagi Hai Phir Mujhko Tadpa Rahe Ho ?
Phir Mujhko Tadpa Rahe Ho ?
Is Dil Mein Yaadon Ke Mele Hai
Tum Bin Bahut Hum Akele Hai ?
Aaa Jao Laut Kar Tum Yeh Dil Keh Raha Hai ?
Aaa Jao Laut Kar Tum Yeh Dil Keh Raha Hai ?

Kya Kya Na Soocha Tha Maine ?
Kya Kya Na Sapne Sajaye
Kya Kya Na Chaaha Tha Dil Ne
Kya Kya Na Armaan Jagaaye
Kya Kya Na Armaan Jagaaye
Is Dil Se Toofan Guzarte Hai
Tum Bin To Jeete Na Marte Hai ?
Aaa Jao Laut Kar Tum Yeh Dil Keh Raha Hai ?
Aaa Jao Laut Kar Tum Yeh Dil Keh Raha Hai ?
Tum Bin Jiya Jaaye Kaise Kaise Jiya Jaaye Tum Bin ?
Sadiyon Si Lambi Hai Raaten Sadiyon Se Lambe Huv Din
Aaa Jao Laut Kar Tum Yeh Dil Keh Raha Hai ?
Aaa Jao Laut Kar Tum Yeh Dil Keh Raha Hai ?

Servant enters

Servant: Maharani kee jai ho(curtseys) gustakhi maaf per ek buree khabar hai. ?

Maharani Naina:(in between sobs) Kya tumhe lagta hai mujhe buree khabar sunee hai is ?waqt. ?

Servant: Maafi chahta hu per agar is baar bhi mene kavita me sunao to kya yeh kahabr ?theek rahegee? ?

Maharani Naina: Theek hai (wipes her tears and sits down on her arm chair). Chaldi ?karo kyu ke mujhe or bhi rona hai. ?
? ?
Servant: Batameze panchi ne phirse kee baghawat
? Chore chaar ke ghar kee aabru or izzat ?
?   ; Tore dale saare darwaze or deewaar
?   ; Le chale sung Rajkumar Rajveer ko apne dwaar?

Maharani Naina: Kya bakwaas bakrahe ho? (all mirrors smashed of her heart) aisa nahi ?hosakta. Hame akela chore do. (it was like she had been absorbed into earth by an ?earthquake after hearing this terrible news.)?

Meanwhile Rajkumari Ritu and Rajkumar Rajveer stop in the forest and roam around in ?each other's arms. They spend time having races on the scooter and singing a romantic ?song by swinging from tree to tree ?


Rajkumar :Tum bhi ho, main bhi hoon, paas aao, toh keh doon
Aakhir kyun pal yun diwaana main ho gaya
Tumhein jo maine dekha, tumhein jo maine jaana -2?
Jo hosh tha, woh toh gaya
Badan ki ye khushboo, jataane lagi jaadoo
Toh hoke beqaabu, dil kho gaya
Tumhein jo maine socha, tumhein jo maine maana
Tumhein jo maine dekha, tumhein jo maine jaana
Jo hosh tha, woh toh gaya ?

Itni kyun, tum khubsoorat ho, ke sab ko hairat ho
Duniya mein sach-much hi rehti hai ?
Pariyon se bhi zyaada pyaari si ladki koyi
Haan itni kyun, bolo haseen tum ho, jo dekhein gum-sum ho
Dekho na main bhi hoon khoya sa ?
Behka sa mujhpe bhi chhaayi hai diwaangi
Tumhi ko maine puja, tumhi ko chaaha paana
Tumhein jo maine dekha, tumhein jo maine jaana
Jo hosh tha, woh toh gaya
Badan ki ye khushboo, jataane lagi jaadoo
Toh hoke beqaabu, dil kho gaya
Tumhein jo maine dekha, tumhein jo maine jaana -2?
Jo hosh tha, woh toh gaya ?

Rajkumari:
Tum bhi ho, main bhi hoon, paas aao, toh keh doon
Tumne jo dekha toh kya jaane kya ho gaya
Jaane kyun, rehti hoon khoyi si, jaagi na soyi si
Ab dil mein armaan hai saanson mein toofaan hai
Aankhon mein khwaabon ki hai chaandni
Aajaane kyun, behka sa ye mann hai, mehka sa ye tan hai
Chalti hoon itraake, ithlaake, sharmaake
Balkhaake jaise koyi raagini
Tumhein jo maine samjha, tumhein jo pehchaana
Tumhein jo maine dekha, tumhein jo maine jaana
Jo hosh tha, woh toh gaya ?

Rajkumar:
Badan ki ye khushboo, jataane lagi jaadoo
Toh ho hoke beqaabu, dil kho gaya

Both: Tumhein jo maine dekha, tumhein jo maine jaana -4 ?

Rajkumar Rajveer:
(once the song was over it was the amnesia attack again) Lagta hai ?ab hame jaana chaheeye (jumping down from the tree and scratching his head) pata nahi ?kaha agaye hai or kyu…..?
? ?
Rajkumari Ritu: Aap ko yaad hai hum dono pyaar ke mare ek buree dyan se bachke ?nikle hai. Kahi maheeno se hum dono oske qaid me thai per aaj hum jaake chuthe hai. ?Chalye ab ham eek nahyee dunya basa nee hai (holding her arms out to call him in)?

Rajkumar Rajveer:(poor guy believes her) hmmmmmm, per yeh jaga mehfooz nahi hai, ?aisa karta hai ke wapis Raj mahal chalte hai. Ek baat or jab hum aap ko dekhte hai (goes ?closer to examine her from top and down) aap me hume aisee to koi baat nazar nahi aate ?jaise yeh lage ke hum dono ek dusre se mohabbat karte hai (checks his watch)Baap re ?dekha waqt kya huwa, ab hume nikal na chaheeye. Goodluck with ur escape from the ?wicked witch. (gives her a flying kiss and walks away)?

Rajkumari Ritu: (furious) Kaha jaarahe hai aap? Itnee saaree mehnat kee aap ko akele ?lejaane me or aap mujhe yaha akela chore ke jaarahe hai. Mera ehsaan mane ke badle ?mujhe beizat karke jaarahai. MEN DON'T FALL OUT OF THE SKY YOU KNOW!?

A loud scream can be heard in the distance and it gets closer until something falls near ?Rajkumari Ritu's feet. It looks like a bundle of clothes bit wrecked and bit burnt.?

Rajkumari Ritu: yeh kya huwa??

Rajkumari Ritu bends down near the clothes and touches it. Then attempts to turn it ?around when falls back with a shriek. In front of her lies a peculiar man who tries to get ?up moaning and complaining ?

The man: Kya dekhrahee ho, kabhi kisee mard ko dekha nahi? (pulls himself up on his ?feet dusting his clothes) ?

Rajkumari Ritu:
Batameze insaan, pata hai kis se baat karahai ho, na shakal hai nahi ?dhung, pata nahi kis kisam ka bhoot hai. ?

The man: Hey Madam, me koi bhoot nahi hu, ek jeekta jaagta insaan hu (stands up ?straight with his chest stuck out like a proud gentleman) agar apnee bhalai chahtee ho to ?phorun about turn leke chalee jao warna……?

Rajkumari Ritu: Khamosh! Tumhe iskee sazaa milegee. Tumhaaree himmat kaise huwee ?hamare saamne aane kee?

The Man: (smirked) mujhe koi shoke nahi hai tum jaisee nakchareeyo ke saamne aane ?kee, me to khud marte marte bacha hu. Me araam se apna kaam karaha tha jab mere dost ?one zabardasti mujhe aisee machine me bethadiya jiskee wajese me urte urte yaha tak ?pohoch gaya. Or ab mujhe ek bhootnee ka saamna karna paraha hai.?

Rajkumari Ritu:(appalled) Tumharee yeh himaat. Abhi abhi mere guards ko bulake ?pakar waatee hu tumhe, batamezee karne ke jurm me. ?

The Man just walks away paying no attention to her because he doesn't know she is the ?Rajkumari and doesn't even care. To him she is nothing but an insolent fool who is too ?full of herself. ?

i hope u enjoy this part



Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Part four

Rajkumari Ritu roams around the forest looking for Rajkumar Rajveer but he is nowhere to be found. Usually she would be afraid of the dark but since she had started practising black magic all the fear disappeared. She soon notices a peculiar house in her sight and sees that there is light so she makes her way towards it.

Rajkumari Ritu: (knocks on the door)
Darwaza kholo!

The door doesn't open and no noise is heard.

Rajkumari Ritu: hame madad kee zaroorat hai, darwaza kholo (knocks harder) Hello!

The door opens with a creak and a young boy comes all wrapped up in a shell.

Rajkumari Ritu: (Leans forward in the darkness)
Koun ho tum or yeh kya hai?

The boy: yeh acha hai, hamare darwaze pe aake knock kartee ho or phir mujhse poochtee ho ke me koun hu. Seriously……

Rajkumari Ritu: (touches the shell and tries to figure it out) is jaanwar me se aawaaz kese arahee hai?

The boy: (feels ticklish) hai stop it okay.

Rajkumari Ritu: (leaning more forward trying to look downward inside) bus bohat hochuka. Hamra keemtee waqt mat barbaad karo. jaldi se bahar niklo ghar se or hamara hokum maano.

The boy: I am outside (annoyed) per lagta hai tum becharee andhee ho, ya to phir bewacoof (removes the shell and shows her that he is human and not animal)

Rajkumari Ritu: (shrieks) tumne to hame dara hee diya. Wow you're so……

The boy: I'm so what…….small? Well I'm certainly bigger than you, kyu ke mujhme zyada samajh hai. Mera naam UD hai a.k.a khajoor number saat. Yeh hamara khajoor qabila hai. Ab batao itnee raat gaye yaha kya lene aayee ho?

Rajkumari Ritu: lene? Ham kisee se kuch lete nahi balke haasil karte hai. Ab hamaree baat suno. Rajkumar Rajveer hamare saat yah ape seher ke liye aaye the or beech raaste me wo kahi khogaye hai, to ab tum jaake onhe dhoond ke lao.

UD: honestly do I look like a security guard to you. aise hokum jatarahee hai jese kahi kee rajkumari ho.

Rajkumari Ritu: Ghustakh!

UD: (covers his ears) sshhhh, yahape sab logo ke kaan bohat hee chote hai to awaaz baree mat karo. ek kaam karo yaha under aao or phir jitna chilana ho chilao.

Rajkumari Ritu and UD go inside the house where there are six other little shell people sitting around the fire keeping warm. They all shriek when they see Rajkumari Ritu and one by one remove their shell.

Nair (a.k.a khajoor no.1):
kiskee ijazat se ise yaha laye tum?

Alekh (a.k.a khajoor no. 2): kis phaltu cheez ko pakar laya tu?

Ali (:a.k.a khajoor no.3):😡inka yahape koi kaam nahi

Huda (a.k.a khajoor no.4):🥱 yaar yeh usool theek kehraha hai (goes back to sleep)

Pooja (a.k.a khajoor no.5): 😃oi pehle iska mobile ka network pakar ne to de

Shalini (a.k.a khajoor no.6): yeah but shhhhh(sneezes)eee shouldn't be here

UD: guys me jaanta hu ke yeh bin bualyee mehmaan hai per yeh kisee ko dhoond rahee hai or bahar jore jore se chilarahee thee. I just couldn't tolerate so I brought her inside. Shayad iskee problem hum solve karsake. Yeh koi Rajkumar, vajkumar ko dhoond rahee hai.

Rajkumari Ritu sits around the little funny people.

Rajkumari Ritu: Rajkumar Rajveer hamse khogaye hai to hame yeh jaana hai ke tum logo ne onhe dekha hai ke nahi

Ali: hmmf. Ab hum chokeedaar bangaye. Hamare paas orse bohat zaroori kaam hai aapke Rajkumar pe nazar rakhne ke badle

Nair: ek minute khajoor no.3. inka apnee baat kehna ka moka zaroor milna chaheeye. Ab bataiye, kaise hai yeh Rajkumar Rajveer

Rajkumari Ritu:😍 onke baare me kya batao. wo to sabse alag, sabse juda, sabse haseen shakseeyat hai. Wo jab bhi bahar nikalte hai to aasmaan jhuk jaata hai or raaste pe saare phool bej jaate hai or….

Ali: khuda ke waste yeh sab befusool kee baate band keejye. Hum ne aapse onka hulya poocha hai onkee daastaan nahi. Pata nahi kaha kaha se aajaate hai fusool me.

Rajkumari Ritu: Zabaan sambhaalkte, warna nikaal dee jaegee.

Bhargav enters

Bhargav: yeh sab kya horaha hai?

Everyone turns towards Bhargav with surprise.

okays the part ends here, hope u guys enjoyed it.

Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Part five

Rajkumari Ritu: 😡Tum! (pointing at Bhargav) You little wretch. Yeh sab ?tumharee wajese huwa hai. Agar tum hamare or Rajkumar ke beech aane kee jurrat nahi ?karte to wo hamse kho nahi ghaye hote
? ?
Nair: tum dono milchuke ho. Khajoor no. 8, report.?

Rajkumari Ritu: Khamosh! Dekhai nahi deta ke hum baat karahai. Beech me bolene kee ?ijazat nahi dee hai, zalil insaan?
? ?
Shalini: how dare yooooooo (sneezes) uuuuu talk to him like that? Wo to shukr maano ?ke tum is waqt yaha hamare chat ke neeche kharee ho warna……?

Rajkumari Ritu: apna mooh band rakho. Don't make a mess on me. (points at Bhargav) ?hum tumhe hukoom dete hai ke abhi isee waqt Rajkumar Rajveer ko hamare saamne ?paish karo, warna tumhe keere kee tarha masal denge hum.?

Bhargav: Kya hai? Kabse sunraha hu Rajkumar ko lado, Rajkumar ko laado. Jahase tum ?aayee ho waha pe beshak log tumhare ghulaam hai per yahape sab hamare ghulaam hai. ?Right guys
? ?
All: RIGHT! ?

Rajkumari Ritu is forced out of the cottage by all the khajoors. ?

Rajkumari Ritu: (knocks on the door) hey how dare you! tum sabko iskee saza milegee. ?Tum jaante nahi sab ko bhasm karsaktee hu me. (Knocks harder on the door) this is your ?last chance you lousy scums. Darwaza kholo!?

Nobody opens the door and Rajkumari Ritu leaves the cottage angrily. First of all she ?was angry with Rajkuamr Rajveer for being a forgetful fool and leaving her. Then she ?was angry with the khajoors for insulting her. She storms out in the darkness towards her ?secret den in the middle of the forest. ?

The next evening Maharani Naina is in court with her advisers. She is waiting for the ?messenger to arrive who had been sent in search of Rajkumari Ritu and Rajkumar ?Rajveer. ?

Messenger enters

Messenger:
Maharani kee jai ho (curtseys) ek achee khabar hai. ?

Maharani Naina: 😊 jaldee batao!?

Messenger: kal raat ko Rajkumar Rajveer ne jungle me ek ghar me sharan lee. Wo ?khajoor qabile ka hai jaha pe 8 khajoor rehte hai. On logo ko humne khabar dee ?Rajkumari Ritu ke baare me to wo log chokanya hogaye or Rajkumar Rajveer kee hifazat ?kee, per……?

Maharani Naina: Bohat ache! 👏 jaldi se unke wapis aane ka intezaam ?karo.?

Second messenger rushes in

Messenger 2: ghustakhi maaf ho Maharani per ek buree khabar hai. Aaj shaam jab ?Rajkumar Rajveer khajoor qabile se nikal rahe the to Rajkumari Ritu waha phirse pohoch ?gayee or onhe phirse apne saat onkee scooter pe bhaga legayee. ?

Maharani Naina: 😲 un khajooro ne roka kyu nahi? ?

Messenger 2: Maharani, Rajkumari Ritu ne un sab se yeh kaha ke agar wo Rajkumar ?Rajveer ko onke hawale kardenge to wo sab ko normal insaan banadegee or onhe adha ?khajoor nahi rehna parega. Wo sab is rishwat kee aar me agaye or Rajkumar Rajveer ko ?de diya.?

Maharani Naina: Bohat hee bura huwa.😭 bechare Rajkumar Rajveer ko to yaad ?bhi nahi rahega baad me ke Rajkumari Ritu ne unko dhoke se pakarliya hai. (Orders her ?guards) hamaree savaree tayaar karo….thero! hamaaree gaaree tayaar karo kyu ke ab ?hum khud jaaenge Rajkumar ko laane.?

? Advisor: Ghustakhi maaf Maharani per yeh faisla sahee nahi hoga. Aap jaantee hai na ?Rajkumari Ritu kaala jaadoo kartee hai or onke sar pe os kaali churail ka pe haath hai.?

Maharani Naina: (turns towards advisor) hum sab jaante hai. Bus ab bohat hochuka. ?Rajkumari Ritu ne jung ka elaan kiya hai or ab hame hamare Rajkumar ko waapis paana ?hai.?

Maharani Naina exits?

okays here ends this part, enjoy.
Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Part six

Rajkumari Ritu takes Rajkumar Rajveer to her secret chamber in the middle of the forest. ?She has made a plan to make Rajkumar Rajveer fall in love with her by making him drink ?a love potion.?

Rajkumar Rajveer:
kya baat hai. Bohat hee mehnat se banaya hai aapne apna ghar ??(Points towards all the things hung around the chamber) ?

Rajkumari Ritu:
yeh sab aap ke liye hai. Hamara ghar.?

Rajkumar Rajveer: 😕hamara ghar? Kyu? Hum hamara raj mahal chore ke ?yahape tum ek anjaan ke saat kyu rahenge, or wese aisee ghatiya see jage pe.?

Rajkumari Riu: 😡ghatiya? Abhi abhi to aap iskee tareef karahe the.?

Rajkumar Rajveer: taareef to hum saaree larkiyo kee karte hai iska matlab ye nahi ke sab ?ke sab khoobsurat hai. Jaise ke tum.?
? ?
Rajkumari Ritu:
(really fuming and thinks after he drinks the potion he will see nothing ?else but her) theek hai jaane dijye yeh sab. Aap ko yaad hai hum aap ko yahape kyu laaye ?hai. (Puts her hand out for him) yahape aake baitye hamare paas. (takes to a pink blowed ?up sofa and then sits on his lap with her arms curled around his neck) aapse pyaar bharee ?baate karne ke liye. Oske pehle yeh leejye. (picks the glass from the nearby table and ?holds it in front of him then her seduction game begins)?

Rajkumari Ritu: Yeh pyaasi mohabbat, ye pyaasi jawaani
Adhuri adhuri ye dil ki kahaani
Jhuki hui hei raat ye
Ruki hui hei baat ye
Yeh chaandni raat aage chale
Ho, kuch pyaar ki baat aage chale
Yeh pyaasi mohabbat, ye pyaasi jawaani
Adhuri adhuri ye dil ki kahaani
Jhuki hui hei raat ye
Ruki hui hei baat ye
Yeh chaandni raat aage chale
Ho, kuch pyaar ki baat aage chale

Kab kaun jaane kahan chala jaaye
Mausam yahan se vahan chala jaaye
Aisa na ho ye sama chala jaaye
Oh, kab kaun jaane kahan chala jaaye
Mausam yahan se vahan chala jaaye
Aisa na ho ye sama chala jaaye
Jhuki hui hei aankh bhi
Ruki hui hei saans bhi
Kuch to mulaaqaat aage chale
Ho, kuch pyaar ki baat aage chale
Yeh pyaasi mohabbat, ye pyaasi jawaani
Adhuri adhuri ye dil ki kahaani

Bole ye nazar ye zubaan chali jaaye
Yeh dil gaya ab ye jaan chali jaaye
Door door tak ye daastaan chali jaaye
Oh, bole ye nazar ye zubaan chali jaaye
Yeh dil gaya ab ye jaan chali jaaye
Door door tak ye daastaan chali jaaye
Jhuka hua hei aasmaan
Ruka hua hei ye jahaan
Saara jahaan saath aage chale
Ho, kuch pyaar ki baat aage chale
Yeh pyaasi mohabbat, ye pyaasi jawaani
Adhuri adhuri ye dil ki kahaani
Jhuki hui hei raat ye
Ruki hui hei baat ye
Yeh chaandni raat aage chale
Ho, kuch pyaar ki baat aage chale
?
Rajkumar Rajveer takes the glass in his hands and is about to put it to his lips when ?Maharani Naina bursts through the door. ?

Maharani Naina:
Nahi Rajkumar! Ose mat peejye, osme zeher hai.?

Rajkumari Ritu: kya bakwaas hai yeh! Aap ise jaante nahi ho Rajkumar, ise hamaree ?khushi se sakht nafrat hai to yu hee bebunyaad baate banatee hai

Maharani Naina: hum ya aap? Pehle se, aap ko naahi hamare ghar kee izzat kee parwa ?hai yeh oskee aabru kee. Or ab to bohat hee hochuka. Os insaan ko aapne bandhee banaya ?jis insaan ko aapse kabhi mohabbat nahi hosaktee. Oh for god's sake he doesn't even ?remember who he is right now

Rajkumar Rajveer: baap re waqt dekha hai, aap dono apna maamla neptaye hume chalna ?hai….?

Rajkumari ritu: (holds onto Rajkumar Rajveer firmly) kaha jaarahe hai aap? Aap hee ke ?liye to yeh sab horaha hai

Maharani Naina: (holds onto Rajkumar Rajveer and pulls him to her) aap theek kehrahe ?hai Rajkumar ab hame chalna chaheeye.?

Rajkumari Ritu: haath haatoan Rajkumar per se. hum tumhe inhe nahi lejaane denge ?samjhee

Maharani Naina: himmat kese huwee aapkee humse aisee baat karne kee! ?

Maharani Naina and Rajkumari Ritu continue arguing with each other and keep on ?pulling Rajkumar Rajveer towards each other. It really gets out of hand. In between ?comes Bhargav due to that the contents of the drink drop on Rajkumari Ritu's face and ?most of it goes into her mouth. She closes her eyes. Everyone is surprised ?

Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Now this is fun!!!!Reminds me of Midsummer Night's Dream.

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