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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
thanks kris

n ripi who told u that i think ur annoying???
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey u guys i am writing this short part but the next part is going to be long cuz saki (imdudehead) n i worked on it!!
ok here agoes!
Part 6!! wait am i rite? is it part 6?
its like 11:30 at night n preeti is getting ready to go to sleep. when suddenly preeti gets a fone call...its Dev!
P: hello?
D: (scared) PREETI!
P: Dev? wat happened?
D: preeti just come to my house asap!!
P: y?
D: just come!!!
P: ok i am coming!
Preeti gets ready again n rushes to to Devs house
she rings the bell a couple of times.
noone answers..preeti gets scared
P:(thinks) omg wat if something happened to Dev?
she is nearly in tears. P: but then again y do i care? woh lagta kya ha mera?(i hope u noe wat that means n sryy for mispelling)😳

she trys the door n its open ...it opens n......

HAHA SUSPENSE!! NONE NOES WAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT!! haha! well except saki! ok the next part is going to be up tom. or the next day ok? n remember the next part is going to be exciting!!! something will be exposed!!! but wat will it be? plzz keep predicting!!!

Edited by hotaditya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
hmmm.......i wonder what will happen next lol 😆 , nicelyl written!! 😃 Awsum Part 😛 Continue ASAP plz 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54

lolz ur funny saki!! 😆 😆

Love

part 7

ok this is the other part saki n me wrote..well most of it is saki lolz

RECAP: Dev calls Preeti n says to come to his house. Preeti gets worried.

Preeti goes to Dev's house…she is scared as hell …but she doesn't noe y? do u noe y? she rings the door bell n no one answers. She trys the door n it opens……

……………………..SUPRISE!!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY PREETI!!!

P: (susprised) omg wow!!

Everyone: happy birthday Preeti!

P: thank u!!

The party starts n everyone is having a great time. N Preeti is talking to Saki

P: hey the party is great u guys thanks!

S: u shouldn't be saying thanks to us u should be saying thanks to Dev.

P: DEV?!!

S: yea he is the one who planned the whole thing!!

P: wow!

Loveleen: Hey! I helped too!!

P: oh really? Wat did u do?(laughs)

L: I told him ur birthday date.

S, L, n P laugh.

Soon its time to cut the cake.

Everyone sings the song n n Preeti cuts the cake n feeds the first piece to …..DEV!

Everyone looks at them n both of their parents look at each other n smile.

L: hey I am ur bff n u feed him first? When did he become more important then me huh?

Dev n Preeti both blush(neev n preeti think: y am i blushing? only preeti thinks: y did i give him the first piece?)

now its time to open gifts n preeti opens everyones n smiles(but not happy, y? is cuz she wants to see wat neev got her? sigh..who noes?)

Dev come to Preeti n says "here is my gift for u."

P: but I already got the best gift from u!

D: wat? Really? If u mean this party then this is nothing!

P: this party n ur friendship! Wat more can I ask for?

D: lolz here…

He gives her a small box. Preeti opens it n sees a BEAUIFUL necklace that says D-P.

P: (gasps) omg its so beautiful!!

D: can i?(asking if he can put it on her)

P: nods as in yes.

He puts it on n Preeti doesn't noe y but she loves it n thinks that it is the best present she got ever.

P: but y such a expensive gift?

D: (with out thinking) Well its still not enough for the girl I love!

Dev relises wat he says n bites his tongue: uhh.. I mean for my best friend!

P: lolz oh thank u sooooo much!!

Dev thinks" y did I say that?" n preeti thinks " y did he say that?"

N with out thinking preeti gives him a hug

N both of their parents look at eachother again.

Preeti(thinks)y did I hug him? N y am I feeling so comfortable in his arms?"

While Dev is thinking the same"y do I feeling like never letting her out of my arms?"😳(am i corny or wat?lolz)

The party still goes on… n preeti is dancing with some guy.. n Dev is at the mini bar n drinking.

He looks at her dancing with the guy n just drinks more…"y am I getting so jeloues? Who lagti kya hai meri"

He totally drunk now… n goes to to the dance floor n bumps into preeti's dad by accident n her dad is now thinking "I hate ppl who drink all the time n now he is drunk at my daughters birthday party…chee…I am starting to hat him!" (NOTE: THIS IS DEV'S FIST TIME DRINKING!! HE DOES NOT DRINK!)after that neev goes to Preeti.

" can i dance with u Preeti?"

Preeti can see he is totally drunk.

"no!"

He takes preeti's hand (forcefully)n takes her to his garden( remember the party is at his house), not many peole noticed, but it caught the gaze of Love and Josh n they decide to follow them. Then neev comes close to Preeti n kisses her….Josh n Love r shocked …n then….

Wait n find out!! n plzzzz comment!! some of u guys r lacking!!!😭😭😭 u noe sometimes i dont feel encouarged n i only rite for ppl who comment frequently n not a lot of ppl do

Edited by hotaditya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok u guys now that is a LONG part ok? NOW COMMENT!!! or i am thinking of closing this ff 😭 😭 if noone comments....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
PREETI!!!!!!!!!!
don't ever think about stopping!!
It is a great part 👏 ///
urghh and suspense..lolz
anyhoo
continue soon!!...well u do like everyday anyways..

❤️ ~Ripi~
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Preeti! OMG don't say your gonna end this FF!
This is like the first actual FF I'm reading and actually keeping up w/ so you better not finish if off already!😡
Continue soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next...
ooo it's really suspencesful (spelling?)
😛
LOL @ Neev getting drunk! Isn't he too young? haha j/k😆
Edited by snowflake0555 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lolz ok ripi n kris i will not end it! 😛 n kris yes he is young but only by a year n well it was his first time...i guess when u see ur love wtih someone else u do stupid things....who noes? i dont i have never been in love...or atleast i dont think so... 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lol😆 omfg why is the text all weird? shitt it looks like its changed to something else...

grrr i liked the old regular font better...i dont likee this change😭

Edited by snowflake0555 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lolz yeah i noe kris...lolz i dont like change neither.

NOTE: i will not cont. today cuz not a lot of ppl commented n well...i am busy...i am going to stupid dance class .. idk even noe y i do it..my mom makes me do it she is like"just cuz u arent guju doesnt mean u shouldnt learn their culture!!!" ahhh y cant she put me in like bhangra or something? i dontlike khathic or watever n dandiya n guraba..kris u want to go to dnce class for me? plzz? OH YEA so where is the point again oh rite i wont be cont. today cuz u guys dont COMMENT!! 😭 😭 ?
I CANT WAIT FOR TOM. I DOTN NOE Y BUT I LOVE WED.!! lolz am i weird or wat?

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