Kank(Karan nandini and Shiv Gauri)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Intro of Characters:

Shiv Kapoor:Yash Tonk

Gauri Khanna: Pallavi Subhash aka Gauri of Karam apna apna.

Karan Khanna: Hiten Tejwani .

Nandini Kapoor: Gauri Pradhan

The basic story is on broken relationships . What happens when u r married to a person who is unable to forget his first love or when two indiviuals are unable to cope up with each other feelings.

Edited by *Pratham Mittal - 17 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Its a good story. Plzz continue.


Usha.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow this sounds kl. waiting for ur 1st part 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Interesting!! continuee Sooooon.. 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8888 concept plz do continue..........

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Posted: 18 years ago
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well i am a bitconfused. Fist to start Kank or Kasam se. Please tell me and mindu i can write only one story at a time 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow.... A new HITEN GAURI fanfic !!!!!!!!
Plz post the next part soon....................
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I will try to post Part one today after some time
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Mumbai Airport: Morning 8 Am.😊

A lady, nearly about 25 or 26 years of age, fair complexion, tall, slim, having shoulder length hairs, big eyes and a beautiful face, totally wrapped in a white business suit along with red shirt inside was making her way outside in a hurry and in this hurry , she bumped into a person😕.

P(a little bit irritated): hey, look where u r walking miss.

The lady looked at the person. A man, nearly of her age , fair complexion, tall, not too muscly but having good physique , deep and naughty eyes . Not too smart but kinda cute, wearing blue suit along with white T-Shirt.

L: First of all , i am not a miss. And second, it's not my fault. You shud know that i was in a hurry , so u shud have given me way.

P(a little bit surprised): Hello, hello. Sorry to disturb u but i have no interest whether u r miss or Mrs. That was not my fault either. U should have walked carefully.

L: You.. Main tum jaise logon ko bahut acchi tarah jaanti hoon. (Looking at her clock) Agar main late nahi ho rahi hoti to tumhe acchi tarah samjhati.

The person was about to utter something but at the same time, there was some announcement about the flight and he leaves from there giving her a hard stare. The lady without paying attention to him, comes out of the airport and sits into the car sent for her and leaves from there.

9 AM.

The car stops inside a big mansion. The lady comes out of the car with her luggage and enters into the mansion named Kapoor Villa. The house of the owner of one of the biggest business tycoons and owner of Kapoor Group of Industries Mr. Shiv Kapoor.

As the lady enters into the house, she found another lady, wearing salwar suit and sitting on the sofa, with her back towards the entrance. From appearance she looked like a member of a rich family. The lady puts her luggage down, and without giving any impression of her arrival comes behind the back and closes the eyes of the lady sitting on the sofa with her hands.

The lady first gets shocked a little bit but then touches the hands with her and a smile starts playing on her lips.

L: So how was your trip Nandini??

The lady who was named Nandini, nodes her head unbeleivingly and removes her hands from her eyes.

Nandini: Ye kya maa?? Main hamesha itne dheere se aati hoon taki aapko pata na chale. Lekin aap har baar mere surprise ka band baja deti hain. Aakhir aapko pata kaise chal jaata hai ki yeh main hi hoon?

L: Mera naam Nikhila Kapoor hai bacche.(Nikhila Kapoor from Karam apna apna aka Achint Kaur) aur mujhse koi baat chupti nahi hai. Accha ye bata, teri Australia ki trip kaisi rahi?

Nandini: Wonderful. Mr. Scott hamare saath deal karne ke liye taiyaar ho gayein hain. Woh agle hafte india aa rahein hain aur tabhi hum ye deal bhi sign kar lenge.

Nikhila: Oh i knew it. Main jaanti thi ki agar tu jaayegi to humein ye deal jaroor milegi. Accha ab tu jaldi se jaakar fresh ho jaa, tab tak main tere liye naashta lagati hoon. Aaj maine tere favorite Aaloo ke parathe banaye hain.

Nandini: Wow! Aaloo ke parathe. Main bas yun gayee aur yun aayi.

Saying this, she starts going into her room upstairs when she reminded something.

Nandini: Waise maa! Shiv kahan hain?

Nikhila: Woh to bas abhi abhi nikal gaya. Keh raha tha ki office mein bahut kaam hain.

Nandini understood everything and Nikhila too got that.

Nandini: Oh ok. Koi baat nahi. Main unhe shaam ko wish kar dungi.

Saying this, she goes into her room whereas Nikhila dials the number from her phone.

The ring rangs where a person about 26 or 27 years old was busy in a board meeting. The man was of average height, having well muscular body, handsome face ,big but lost eyes and which were telling that he had lost something very important in his life.

The person excuses himself from the rest of the directors and picks up the phone.

P: Hello.

Receiptionist: Hello sir.

P(in a strict tone): Lisa tumse kitni baar kaha hai. Jab main meeting mein hoon to mujhe koi bhi calls nahi chahiye.

Lisa: I am, i am really sorry sir. Lekin doosre end par Nikhila maam ne kaha ki unhe aapse urgent baat karni hain.

P: Ok , connect me to her.

The receptionist connects them both.

Nikhila: Hello. Shiv beta.

Shiv: Kahiye maa. Kya baat hai?

Nikhila: Maine tujhe bas ye poochne ke liye phone kiya hai ki tu kitni der mein aa raha hai?

Shiv: Maa, abhi to main board meeting mein hoon. Main aapse baad mein baat karta hoon.

Nikhila: Actually beta... Sun to.

From the other side, she heard the disconnection tone and puts the receiver down in disappointment.She was again surrounded by her fears. She starts thinking that whether she had done anything wrong by tiding the knot of his son with Nandini? Nandini, the daughter of his demised husband's best friend, who promised to tie the knot of her daughter with their son. Today, Shiv's father and nandini's parents are not in this world but to kept their promise, she tied Nandini's knot with Shiv, his son who was madly in love with someone else in his college days. She doesn't knew much about that girl, because before knowing her, she leaved the college and Shiv for some genuine reasons. This affected Shiv badly and he starts remaining aloof from her . It was evident that Shiv was unable to forget that girl and he totally refused when Nikhila gave him the proposal to marry Nandini. But she manofy him for the sake of his demised father's promise and they both got married. At that time, she thought that Nandini's sincerity and genuineness will help Shiv to forget that girl and everything will be allright, but now after almost one and half years of their marriage, she was getting worried as she was feeling that she had destroyed two lives for his husband's promise. There is nothing like a husband wife relationship between Shiv and Nandini . They are not even friends, just share a very formal relationship. Nandini on her behalf, had tired a lot but was unable to get a place in Shiv's heart as his heart is occupied with someone else and Nandini too knows that. Till now, she has managed everything very sincerely but for how long? She is also a human . She also have a limit . What will happen when the things will go beyond her limit. She feels too bad for her. What's her fault in all these? Although she made her her daughter in law because of his husband's promise, she had got that Nandini is the same daughter in law she had thought to bring for Shiv. Genuine, smart, beautiful , spftspoken n mentally strong. She does not want to loose her. She was thinking all this, when a soft voice distracted her.

Nandini: Maa, kahan kho gayin aap?

Nikhila: Nahin , kahin bhi to nahin.

Nandini: To Chaliye na? parathon ki khusboo se pet mein chuhe kud rahein hain.

Nikhila smiled and moved her feet towards the dining table.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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12 PM:

The person, who collided with nandini at the Mumbai airport comes out of Delhi airport and then his car stops in front of a big bunglow . He comes out of his car and enters into the bunglow. As he finished taking a hot shower and comes out of the bathroom in a white towel and with wet hairs, his cell rangs.

P: Hello. Haan dadi. main bilkul theek thaak pahunch gaya hoon. Aapko phikr karne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai.

From other side, a voice of a lady around 65 to 70 years is heard.

L: Phikr kaise na karoon? jab tak main apne Karan ki aawaz nahi sun leti, dil ko chain nahi milta.

Karan: Arre dadi, aap kyun phikr karti hain? Aakhir main Savita Khanna the great ka pota hoon. Phikr karne ki koi baat nahi hai.

Savita(Apara Mehta aka Savita Virani of Kyunki): Kitni badi badi baate karne laga hai. Pata hain itna sa tha jab maine tujhe dekha tha.

Karan: Aapke liye to main hamesha itna sa hi rahunga dadi. Aakhir aapke siva mera is duniya mein hai hai kaun?

Savita: Accha, to Gauri tere liye kuch nahi hai?

Karan: Arre nahi.. Woh bhi mere liye bahut kuch hai, lekin uska number to aapke baad aata hai na.

Savita: Accha, baat karega gauri se?

Karan: Kya baat karun daadi? Woh abhi kitchen mein busy hogi? Main usse baad mein baat kar loonga. Theek hai dadi , main ek hafte mein wapas aa jaunga. Aap dono apne khayal rakhiyega.

Savita: Theek hai beta. Tu bhi apna Khayal rakhna.

Saying this, she disconnects the phone.

Karan who was wearing his clothes , starts thinking something. If dadi had given the phone to Gauri , what shud they have talked?😕 It's not like that they do not talk to each other but he always feels that either him or Gauri was unable to understand each other or there was a diffrence in their thoughts even after completing their 2 years of married life. There is no relation like husband and wife between them. Suddenly he looked at the clock and leaved in a hurry for his office.

Next part: Story of Karan and gauri and Shiv's b'day.

Please comment 😊. I am eagerly waiting.

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