Dil Ka Rishta 2 -AK- Chapter 6 done pg 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thankx Guyz I m going to post Chapter 1 in seconds Hope you like it!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cool start i would love to read the first part.........waiting for the update!!
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Chapter 1


We see a huge mansion with about 40 bedrooms in the mansion. We see a women setting up the breakfast table.
We see her face. She is a married women but looks so beautiful and doesnt look like she is in her 50s. Her name is Gayatri Sharma! A man walks in says "Gayatri!Gayatri! Where did you put my tie". Gayatri answers " Its in the closet behind your shirt". We see the mans face its none other than Vikram Sharma.Anyone can recognize Vikram Sharma. He is one of the most richest families! The we see Gayatri calling out for her smallest dauther "Anita! Anita bete!". Then we see a girl in beautiful dress " Aai Mama " Then we see a girl coming downstairs .We then see her face and hear her say " Good Morning Mama! kripa kaha hai" then Gayatri answers "hogi apne bishtar mei ek min" Then she shouts "Kripa!Kripa" Then we see a girl in bed! When Gayyatri calls she sits up (still not seen her face). She picks out an mini shirt and topless shirt!Then we see her putiing lipstick and makeup and then we see her face and whole out fit in mirror!



She fixes her makeup again and goes downstairs!She then goes to her mom "why couldnt you name me something else why Kripa uhhhhhh...". Gayatri didnt mind it because Kripa has been sayin this for last 10 years! Kripa didnt care about her name untill she was 9 cuz it didnt go wit her personality she was modern and the name was old fashioned! Then she left for her door and said " Bye Mom I will go eat in canteen bye everyone" Her mom dad and anjali said bye and then Kripa went out of the door. She hopped into her new car which was for her birtday the car had only 1 model cause the car was really special no one had the car she had! She then drove to her UNIVERCITY The UNIVERCITY board name
said " TBU Univercity" The name was different but cool it was the costliest and good univercity in whole India!
She was one of two hottest girls in the univercity. She entered the univercity blowing her bubble and then gettin off Then a car arrived containing a girl and a boy both were wearing cool outfits the girl was wearing min jeans and a sleveless shirt and the guy was wearin half sleeve long shirt and jeans. There faces were reavealed they were none other then twins Mishti and Pritvi!



Pritvi and Mishti get out of car and say "Good Morning Kripa"! Misti was the 2nd hottest girl in univercity and Prithvi was 1 of 2 hottest guy in Univercity! Then suddenlly a car drove in and the window closed up the guy was getting out the fave was not revealed then slowly camera went down to up and saw his face it was Angad Khanna He was wearing shirt and jeans!!



Thats it for today!! Please reply it give encourangement so i can write more !! Thankyou!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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very nice plz continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great but want a long update thank you

love,

nihita
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oooo only 2 people like my update!!! If i wont have any1 to read and compliment or suggestion what is the meaning of writing it sorry guys if i dont get replies i will think people dont like it and i might discontinue! 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great start.
liked it.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr88!! plzz cont. soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 2


When they entered the univercity everyone was greeting them with respect!! Why woundnt they they were the most popular kids around.Each of there mother or father had something to do with the univercity.Kripa-her dad was 1 of the commitee of the univercity.Pritvi and Misti-There mom was the owner of the school and Anghad-His father was in the commitee of the school too! They werent just popular for that they had what it took them! they had looks,discipline and coolness!
Sorry Guys today was short update i will get back to you this evening! Sorry! 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice parts
looking forward for a long update

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