Ye Jo Mohabbat Hai.....updated!! - Page 3

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Hey people sorry for the delay in postin.....I was a bit busy!! But anyways i have posted a very long part now.........Hope u people dont get bored.....and hope u love it.......And yes its a very lenghty part so please read it!!!!!!!!😊

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Meanwhile in Garewal house………..

Kahsish had changed in to her night dress……..she was really tired……Standing in her room……she was looking for something………

Just then there is a knock on the door……..She goes to open it………

It was piyush who stood there

Ka: piyush……..??

Pi: hi!

Ka: what? Piyush tum mujhse "hi" kehne aaye ho(smiles)

Pi: yes!!

Ka: piyush chalo jao……..its getting late……..now u should be sleepin…….

Pi: Miss.Prim and Propah………(holds her close) Pyaar main ye sab nahi sochte!!

Ka: uh………ye kya kar rahe ho…….mama ya koi aa gaya to?

Pi: no one would come na.........all are tired after party!

Ka: that doesn't mean Mr. Piyush Garewal ki hum iss tarah kamre ke bahar khde romance kare theek hai!!

Pi: why?

Ka: whats with u?? u r getting more romantic and all huh?

Pi: nothing……….

Ka: leave piyush…….please……..i am tired!!

Pi: no!

Ka:(pushes him) jaao!!

She smiles……..and closes the door……..She smiles again at herself……

Again the door knocks……

Ka: piyush tum na…….

She opens the door smiling…………….

But it was not piyush……….but sujal……….

Ka: (angry) tum??

Su: er……..er!

Ka: what bought u here?

Su: this……..(he shows her…….folder…….her folder which she forgot in the hall itself)

Ka: oh thanks(she said curtly)……..i am sure u need not have come for this?well piyush ko bhi to de sakte the hain na?

Su: nahi who I saw this so………

Ka: (interruptin) oh please…….i know u very well…….tum yahan kyun aaye ho……I know very well……

Su: hmm had u known me………u would have never said so!

Sayin he leaves………and kashish looks at him………Then she slams the door………

She throws the folder……..and tears flow from her eyes…….

Ka: why?? Why u are doin this?????????????????

Her anger was uncontrollable………

She goes near the window and looks outside………It was very queit outside…….but inside her…..nothin was calm…….

Meanwhile sujal comes to his room…….and thinks about how kashish talked to her…….

Su: main jaanta hoon……..(stops)

A tear falls from his eyes……..

Sujal goes near the french window in his room……..draws apart the curtains…..and sits there…….Winds blew……and he looks out at the night……..and thought about her!!

In kashish's room

Ka: why?? Tum meri zindagi main wapas kyun aaye ho………(tears rolled down her cheeks and she wiped them)

She stops……..

Ka: …….why? tum to chale gaye the……mujhse……meri……zindagi se……humseha ke liye…….

She remembers how they danced in the party………

Ka: hmm……I know how u are…….lekin phir bhi…….why this…..attraction towards u….? I hate u…..nafrat sirf nafrat karti hoon…….tumse……..aur itne saalon main ye nafrat itni bad(increase) chuki thi………(stops)

She continues

Ka: kitna pyaar karti thi tumse……….I loved u so much……..But u…………..?????????

She remembers her past………The past she always wanted to forget…..

She remembers…….it was around 5-6 years ago when she was just going to step out from her teenage! She was a happy go lucky person that time…….

A girl who strongly believd in love…..and that one day a prince would come and ask for her hand!!!!!!!Her friends teased her for this;……but she loved all this…..

An ardent fan of mills and boons romance……she not only read them but also belived them……

Had no restrictions in her life……and lived life fully……..

Then…….

She and her some friends had gone to Goa……..for a picnic……..she loved waters…..

Kashish smiled………….

Meanwhile Sujal who sat in his room………also smiled thinking about his past……..

Sujal then was a guy who thought of living life beautifully and not buiness-mindedly……He didn't belive in marriage and commitments. But he loved to enjoy his life full!

Back then he was just struggling to set up his own business…….He could have taken his family business but he didn't……..he knew his brothr would……..And amidst this he had gone to a vacation in GOA ………..He loved waters………

PAST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kashish, and her friends played in water………in the beach……..

Ka: ah…….

Mehak and charu her best friends……..threw some water on her……..

Ka: mehak……..ye lo I wont spare u……….(giggles) hehee………

Me: kashish………me too…………

Just then charu tickles her…….and kashish runs……

Ka: aah u know I hate ticklin…….please!!

They giggle and keep running……..her other friends too play……..

But kashish runs a bit far

Ch: are kashish come back I wont tickle u…….come here don't go up there very far…….in the middle of sea!!

But kashish loved there

Ka: don't worry I will take care………u people play……..(smiles)

Ch: okay………but come soon!!

Kashish……..didnt realize how dangerous it was there………

Suddenly a very high wave came………and kashish slipped and the wave took her in

She became helpless and shouted for help……..but she was in the middle of the sea whereas her friends were in the far end in the sand…….thus they did not see her!!

But then

Me: hey where is kashish!

Ch: don't know she said she would come soon……….but……..(stops) KASHISH!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She sees her drownin in the sea……….

Me: OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just then a man……..who was busy in water sports with his water scooter….heard a girl shouting for help……The man was Sujal……….

He rushed there in the middle………….it was very dangerous……..but still he took the risk and went to save her……..

He quickly got down in the water and swam across her………but since there were heavy waves……..it was getting difficult for him to get hold of her……

He swam faster…………and reached to her……but she again went away……..the tides carried her away………

Finally somehow he got hold of her…….and went to her……..took her in his arms and bought her out……….

He slowly bought her out…………her friends sighed a heave of relief!!

Me: kashish!!!!!

He places her down in the sand…………

Mehak pats kashish's cheeks……….

Me: oh no……..kashish!!

Su: please rub her fingers………

Mehak and charu do so while he presses her stomach to bring out the water she must have taken in……….

But she gave no response……..she still lay unconscious…….

Su: I think she needs CPR!!

Me: what?

Ch: lekin

Su: there is no way………otherwise she could be in danger…….so!

He looked at the girl………It was the first time he looked at her properly

Her hairs wet……eyes close…….and skin wet too with the mixture of sand and water…….

He went close to her………his face moved towards her…….and he slowly placed his lips on hers……..

But the thing on his mind was to just save the girl…….she had…..to…..come out……

Slowly she moved………he saw this…….and came up……..

She slowly opened her eys……….but before that she spit water……that she had taken in……

She coughed……..and slowly looked up……..There was a man……she sensed that she was in his lap…….

He smiled…..he was relieved with girl gainin conscious……he was happy

But her heart melted with the smile……..she kept lookin him…..and he stared at her…..

Just then her friends……….

Me: oh my god kashish ur fine……..(hugs her)

Sujal goes a bit behind…….and kashish slowly sits up……..

Ch: I am so sorry dear……..tum kuch ho jaata to

Me: (to sujal) thanks!!

Su: er….er. that's fine……..

Kashish looks at him……….

Ch: nahi agar aap kashish ki jaan nahi bachate to…….aur wahan paani main to aapke jaan ko bhi risk tha phir bhi u took the risk to save our friend……Thanks a lot(smiles)

Sujal just smiles……..

Su: that's fine……..

Saying he leaves……….and kashish………she smiles lookin at him……she had fallen for him………

Some time later…….kashish and her friends were sitting in their cottage and talking

Me: oh my! Agar who admi tumhe nahi bachata to……..i mean he is real hero……..usne to apni jaan ki bhi parwah nahi ki thi!

Another friend agrees……..Meanwhile kashish who heard this all remained quiet!.......She sipped her coffee…….and looked up at them…….

Me: yep!! Just think about it…….kashish…..he was a saviour….!! Nahi…….

Kashish remembered how she was lying on his lap……and her friends had told her that he gave her CPR to save her life!!……Her hands unknowingly went to her lips……and she touched them…….and blushed!!!!!!!!!!

She hardly listened to what her friends said…….what lingered in her brain……heart was the smile he gave to her…….She thought about the charming smile he had……..

Later………her friends were asleep…….but she couldn't sleep……all she did for the whole day was to think about him and even now she is doin the same…..

Even at night she wasn't able to fall asleep…….whereas she loved sleepin!!

Ka: whats all this??mujhe is samay bhi neend kyun nahi aa rahi hai…..its so late in the night and main……..(her thoughts trail)

She looks at her friends who were fast asleep……….she decided to go out and get some fresh air…..

She got up…….and went out……..She walked a few steps…….she still thought about him…….

Just then she bumped in to someone……….She looked up and found him to be the same man who savd her life!!

Sujal smiled at her……..

Again the same charming smile……….her heart melted at this…….How could she tell this man that what his smile did to her……….

Sujal looked at her in the little light available……….She wore a baby pink night dress……She looked beautiful even sans any make up…….He loved this!

Su: hello!!

Ka: er…..er……

Su: what happened!!

Ka: er….

She wasn't able to find words to speak to him…….

Su: hello kashish ur okay na? any problems?

Ka: (snaps) how did u know my name!

Su: er…..well…….ur friends calld u by this name this morning in the beach…….er…..??

Ka: oh!!(she felt like hitting herself for starting the conversation with him like this)

Su: so u at this hour of night……..over here!!

Ka: er…..woh actually neend nahi aa rahi thi!

Su: oh! Subah jo huwa uske wajah se……..??

Ka: er....nahi......just like that! So thought of takin a stroll outside…..

Su: oh that's good that means I can have a company……it becomes too much a bore to stroll all urself!

Ka: er….er…..

Su: haan that's if u don't mind me being ur company…….u wont……wont u??

Ka: no!.........yes……..er…no!

Su: well no or yes!!

Ka: (smiled) yes!!

Su: oh u broke my heart u wont give me a company……..i am not askin for lifetime just for a stroll!!

Ka: nahi I meant I would……give u company theek hai

Su: for lifetime………

Ka: yes……er….na

Su: (laughs) that's fine……..to chale…….

Kashish smiles and they go down for the stroll………

She remains silent while walkin and he too……..They go near the beach…….

Su: u know what…..the cottage is very near to beach……its so nice!

Ka: haan!

Su: so kashish……tum goa picnic ke liye aayi ho?

Ka: haan! Aur aap…….Mr…….(she didn't know his name)

Su: Sujal!

Ka: sujal…….hi!

Su: (laughs) Hi!! U said it very early nahi!!

Kashish agin felt like hitting herself!!

Ka: (to herself) don't forget how to talk stupid…….!!

Su: so what happened!

Ka: nahi kuch nahi……..

Su: ur from?

Ka: delhi!

Su: oh and how did u drown up! In the morning!

Ka: ah that was a mistake……

Kashish sees the light waves hitting the sand…….she goes near the water……The water was shinin with the moonlight falling on it!!

Ka: wow that is so beautiful……isn't it! I just love all this…..the moonlight night….the water and this quietness!! This is so romantic isn't it??

She looked at him…….

Su: (he looked at her) yes…….it is!!

Ka: jaante ho I always loved all this…….

Su: oh really do u have a boyfriend!!

Ka: (turns around) no…….why??

Su: no u said na that ………this all is so romantic so I thought u must be havin one!

Ka: nahi ab tak to bas intezaar hai………(she looked at him)and u!

Su: even me……..intezaar hai!

Ka: (in her mind) par ab lagta hai jaise woh intezaar khatm huwa........!!!!!!

Su: (snaps his finger) so miss. Kashish lets leave ……..its very cold here…….

Ka: par mujhe to yahi sab achcha lagta hai……

Su: what about me??

Ka: er....

Su: uh just jokin........woh isiliye kyunki girls always count me in too.....with all these moonlight and waters for the definition of romance so?(with a mischevious smile)

Ka: sujal!!!!!

He laughs!!

They keep talking such random talks……..Finally they reach kashish's cottage……

Su: so here we are…..and it seems we got a lot of frsh air and now we should be sleepin!

Ka: haan(a bit disappointed that he is about to go to his own room)

Su: so bye!

Ka: aap kaha tehre ho?

He points to a cottage!

Ka: oh! Wahan! That's really near to mine!

Su: haan! Bye!

He leaves……..and she sees him disappearing in the night………she blushes…..and she goes in her own cottage……

She sees her friends still fast asleep……she slowly removes her footwear and goes to her bed and closes her eyes!!

Ka: (murmurin) Its u………!!!!!sujal!!

Next day

Kashish and her friends were at some shopping place………..

Mehak and kashish were lookin at a hat!

Me: wow that will look so nice on u!!

Ka: (smiles) thanks!! Waise hows this……(showing her some other stuffs)

Meanwhile mehak goes searcing for something else………and kashish still shops in the same place……..

Just then she hears a sound……….

WOOOOOOO!!

Kashish is a bit scared and turns around………

Sujal laughs………..

Ka: sujal aapne to mujhe dara hi diya……..uff I was so scared!!

Su: umm!! I didn't know that the beautiful standing in front of me would be so scared…….So sorry for that!

Kahsish's heart melts………as she sees him sayin sorry with a handsome smile of his!

Ka: (smiles) er…..

Su: lost for words?

Ka: (smiles and looks down) nahi!!

Looks at him

Ka: aap yahan?

Su: nahi kashish beta…….hum to yahan sair karne aaye hain……shoppin nahi!!

Ka: (confused) huh??

Su: what?? Why are calling me "aap" from a long time as if I am a Uncle of urs!!

Ka: (laughs) to ye baat hai………theek hai……abse tum hi bulaongi theek hai!!

Su: always!!

Ka: waise tum yahan……shoppin??

Su: hmm I thought I would do some…..but as all good boys are…….even I am bad at shoppin!!

Ka: oh!

Su: haan it takes me a bit time to select what to shop and what to not!

Ka: so shall I help u!!

Su: (looks at her with a smile) if princess is ready…….what shall I say!!

Kashish laughs and leaves with him to shop in the male section……..

Ka: so sujal…….u mostly like the casual look right?

Su: Yes princess!!

Ka: sujal please stop sayin "princess" log dekh rahen hai!

Su: so…….

Sujal looks thru some t-shirts…….

Ka: wow this one will look very nice on u!!

He hated red colors…….

Su: haan this would!!

Ka: see I always make right choice whatever the matter be nahi!!(a bit proud of herself)

Su: hmm over confidence huh!!

Ka: u liked it!!

Su: (rudely) I hate it!

Kashish was not only disappointed but heart broken…….her face low as she stood in front of him……..he just looked at her……..

And then………..He bursted out laughing……….

Su: OH my God kashish……..bas was all this ur confidence…….main to bas mazak kar raha tha…I loved this!!

Ka: huh!! Sujal……….!!!!!

He laughed!!!!!!!!!!1

Ka: enough!!

Su: theek hai……we will pack this and lets have a coffee?? So…..

Ka: theek hai!!

There was a caf on the other side……..they both sat there…….Winds blew …….the place was quite casual and breezy……..

Kashish…..took off her shades and kept it aside…….

She looked at sujal………and saw that he just stared at her…….

Ka: sujal!!

Su: yes!!

Ka: tum aise?

Su: haan……..there is a beautiful princess sittin in front of me!

Ka: (blushes) oh!!

Su: her beautiful looks………blonde hair………

Ka: (blushed) o…….(stopped)

She realized her hair wasn't blonde………

Ka: huh………(she turned around and saw a blonde haored girl sittin behind her seat)

Su: oh……..

Ka: (interrupts) Sujal!!!!!!!!

Su: huh!

Ka: tum uss ladki ko dekh rahe ho?

Su: so?? If I look at u…….u have a problem……if I look at someone else….even then u are at a problem!!

Ka: nahi

Su: umm!! Jealous!!!!!!!

Ka: no way!!

Just then their coffee arrives…….

Kashish doesn't say anything…….just sips on the coffee withut even realizing that it was too hot!

Ka: aah!

Su: sambhalkar……so jealous huh!!

Ka: sujal please…….why should I be huh!!

Just then a familiar voice is heard!1

Kashish!!!!!!!!!

It was her friends…….and mehak stood there

Me: kashish great we searched for u everywhere and tum yahan ho……do u know how scared we were!

Just then she looks at sujal……..she recognized him as the same man who had saved her friend!

Me: aap!

Su: hi. Sujal!!

Me: mehak!!

Su: have a seat……..

Her friends sit there!!

Kashish didn't like this……..

Su: hmm……..mehak u look very good in this sea blue outfit……..

Kashish looks at him…….she was already feelin jealous……

Ka: ye mehak bhi na……..did she …….(stops)

She thought that she was feeling jealous against mehak who was her best friend……With whom she loved to be with……but now she is thinking of makin her leave from here….

Strange!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ka: (in her mind) shayad……. (Blushes)

Meanwhile sujal and mehak were busy talking……..

Me: kashish…….tum yun akele akele muskura kyun rahi ho?

Su: for someone special!!

Ka: (in her mind) you!!........... (To him) no!! No one!!

Su: Miss.Hidin expert!

Ka: nahi sach main there's no one!!

Su: theek hai…….. (Smiles)

And kashish looks at him…………

Later she and her friends return to their cottage………and kashish goes near her window and peeps outside

Just then

WOOOOOOOO!!

Kashish turns around happily

Ka: Sujal!!!!!!!(Smiling)

But she was wron……..it was mehak…….

Me: hmm Sujal!! Huh!!

Ka: er….er……(she tried her best to hide her blush……but……..) tum mujhe who…eer….nahi

Me: kashish wait first stop blushin then speak to me!!

Ka: (turns around to face away from her) blush (still blushin) and me??

Me: haan u?? Who is it? Wahi to nahi jiska naam abhi abhi liya hai!!

Ka: nahi……..

She goes in……blushin…….

Me: kashish!!

Ka: oh no……..!!

Later…….

Kashish sits outside her balcony………and looks at the moonlite shimmering sky……and smiles

Ka: oh no…….what happenin…….i just think of that one stranger……that one person…..ye mujhe ho kya raha hai!!(Blushes)

She blushes

Ka: and whats this main itna blush karoongi to dil ki baat dil main rakh hi nahi paaongi na!!

She looks at his cottage but he had alredy slept she assumed!

Ka: tum to so rahe ho…..par main……u have taken my sleep…..my time…….my heart!

She stops…….

Ka: heart? Is this………….

She blushes

Ka: is this love???????

Kahsish smiles at herself

Ka: main sujal se pyaar karne lagi hoon………

She looks at his cottage………just wanting to see him and run in to his arms and remain there forever…….

Ka: oh sujal……..how shall I tell u that……..(blushes)

Just then sujal comes out……..he hadn't slept……..He too searched for sleep…….but no!!

He saw a beautiful kashish……standing there…….wearin a blue night dress….and lookin at the moon!!

Kashish didn't notice him since he stood in the dark ……….But he noticed her……Her tresses falling on her shoulders…lost in thoughts!!

Su: why is she so special?

Sujal smiles………

Su: a beautiful…….princess!!!!!!!!!!!

He smiles…………and blushes a bit!!!!!!!!!

Next day……..

Kashish and her friends were chatterin……..but kashish was still lost in thoughts….

Me: kashish…….stop this…….be urself!!

Ka: er…..

Just then a waiter……comes in…….to give a "invitation card"

Waiter: Mam aaj "Valentine Day" ki mauke par the hotel manager has decided for a special party………please do come in Mam!!

Me: (smiles) thanks!!

She turns to her friends……..

Me: WOW!! VALANTINE DAY PARTY WOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!

Kashish smiles

Charu chirps in

Ch: main to ek sexy sa outfit pehnoongi………u see…….Its Valentine Day party na!!

Me: haan!!

Just then she notices kashish standing there…..and blushin a bit!

Me: u would surely go right!!

Ka: uh…….nahi I am not interested!!

Me: What!!

Just then the door knocks and they open the door…….

Su: hey ladies!

Me: hi sujal!!

Kashish looks at him and smiles ……..Her smile pouring her all feelings to him!!

Su: hi!!

Me: so here?

Su: haan!! Just wanted to know u girls are coming for tonite's party?

Me: haan…..(looks at kashish) hum sab jaa rahen hai!

Su: fine!

Me: sirf kashish nahi aa rahi hai!!

Su: oh!

Ka: huh!! Maine kab kahan main nahi aa rahi hoon(blurts)

Me: lo abhi to kaha tumne………strange sujal ko dekh kar haan kar di huh(in a teasin tone)

Ka: (blushes) huh……..nahi nothing like that……..the party will be nice nahi…..

Sayin she leaves!!

She just wanted to run away from there……..Mehak had spilled the beans…….She blushed!!

Later……all the girls got dressed up for the party………but kashish made it sure that it was special…….after all it was her first valentine party where she would be with that someone special…….

She combed her silky hairs………and arranged them……..looked at her red evening gown……..that was perfect……

She had just bought it…….just for the party since this had to be special!.........she looked at her accessories………her earring matched …….her sandals……too!!

She looked her lips…….she added a bit dose of lipstick with a dash of gloss to make the touch up complete and perfect…….

Feeling a bit nervous and excited…….she stepped out…..her friends were waitin for so long that it seemed a century for them!!

Me: Finally ur here!

Ka: er…….

Me: hmmmmmmmmm!! Lookin pretty nice………

Kashish blushed!!

Ka: lets leave……..

Me: haan…….haan…….all this special…..is not done for us na……..hmmmmm……obviously for that

Ka:(interrupts) uh nothing like that……we are already late and shouldn't be wastin more time as the party will begin na!

Me: oh yes!! Lets leave!

They all leave for the party………It was in a hall in the resort itself……..

They all entered in………..The place was fully romantic……..atleast the arrangements made it romantic…..they stepped in…….

The place was fully decorated with balloons……flowers……all sort of heart shaped ballons and accessories…….

People were dressed in black, white or red………

Kashish enterd in……..Many men looked at her……but she……..she only searched for him…….

Just then she saw sujal dressed in black trousers and white shirt with balck suit!……….Sujal slowly walked up to them…..and he saw kashish!!

They both just kept lookin at each other…….

Su: beautiful!!

Me: ahem ahem!!

Su: huh!!

Me: so??

Su: uh nothing….please…..(welcomes them in)

They all go in………and seat themselves…..Sujal orders for juice for the ladies!!

Me: the party is awesome………nahi!!

Just then the DJ announces for the Dance………

Everyone applauds…… and come in to the dance floor!!

Sujal looks at kashish and she looks at him……..

He brings forward his hand……and kashish looks at him surprised and doesn't say a word…..

Su: shall I have the previlage of dancing with u??

Ka: er….er….

Su: hmm……

He smiles………and kashish brings forward her hand…..and slides her hand in to his!!

They stand up and go to the dance floor…….

DJ plays a music………..and all the couples start dancing…….

A romantic music fills the air…….

Sujal slowly holds kashish close……and she brings her hands forward……

They slowly sway to the music………And she just looked at him……

He being so close to her……..her hands on him……..his arms wrapped around him…….

She melted…….She felt out of this world to be in his arms…….she wanted to go more close to him……..she wanted to fill in the space between them…….

Ka: (to herself) what am I thinking aout……..(smiles)

But sujal……..he just looked at her……just did so……she was so beautiful…..kashish his princess……swayin in his arms……..

She looked up at him…… he too felt like bringing her more close…..and fill in the space between them……and he did bring her more closer……

Kashish felt this…….and blushed…….She was so near to this man……just a inch separatin them!!

Her heart melted…….Just then a song plays in the background ……..

"Thoda sa pyaar huwa hai………

Thoda hai baki…………"

And they sway to this tune…….kashish thought that this theme so perfectly suited her…..and him……..

He too thought so!!!!!!!!

They look in each others eyes……..and smile……….and get lost in each other!!!!!!!!

The song changes……..but they keep dancing in each others arms…….happily!!

Just then mehak and her friends come to her……

Me: kashish!!

But neither she nor sujal reply…….they were so busy in each other that they hardly listened!!

Mehak shook her…………

Ka: uh………er……..

Me: kashish……..!!

Su: er….er…mehak…….

Ch: seems we are disturbing?? Huh!!nahi……….(smiles)

Su: no…….nothin like that……..

Me: theek hai then ………kashish……..chalo lets sit for sometime and have some drinks!!

Ka: uh……why aren't u people dancing?

Me: haan we were……but it seems we didn't get a partner…..who would keep us in arms for such a long time……..haina?

Kashish blushed……..

Su: u people leave we will join u!!

Kashish goes with her friends…….she sat with them and they all chattered…… but kashish hardly paid attention…….

Her thoughts still wandered……she thought about them being so close…….his arms around her waist………and she blushed…….

Just then she saw sujal……..looking at her…….She looked at him…..and he smiled…..

She wasn't interested in sitting with her friends……..she wanted to sway in his arms once more as she did before……..Unknowingly she yearned for that………

As if sujal too wanted the same…….he looked at her…….and walked towards her…..

Kashish's heart beat faster……..she could hear them…….She was a bit surprised at this…..He was coming towards her…….

She had never felt these things……as if butterflies were playin in her stomache……her heart beat proceding faster and faster…….feeling nervous………

Su: shall we dance huh!!

Kashish didn't say word ………Just looked at him and quickly went in to his arms……..

Her friends suprisedly looked at her………

They went to the dance floor………and swayed to the tune being played on………

Later……..

Kashish's friends were rather tired and intended to leave…….but kashish still wanted to be there…….with him……

Me: kashish its getting late dear……

How was she goin to explain them……she had no mind of leavin the party and him…..

Su: we would like to enjoy a bit more……..(looks at kashish) so…….(looks at mehak) u people leave we will stay back…..and don't worry about kashish I will take care of her…….

Me: theek hai!!

Kashish smiled!

Her friends leave and she looks at him……..

Ka: thanks!!

Su: for?

Ka: er….nahi!!

Su: hmm so u wanna dance more……..??

Ka: why u don't want to??

Su: nahi its pretty late!

Ka: haan!! But thodi der main party waise bhi khatm ho jaayegi na!

Su: so lets leave for some other place…….

Ka: where?

Su: just come with me!

Saying her takes her along with him…….she doesn't say anything just follows him….

They take a different……..a back route…….and reach the beach…….

Kashish and sujal come there……..the sea was quiet with only a few waves making sounds…….The moon light shimmerin the water…….there was no one except them……..

Ka: wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Su: its nice na!!

Ka: haan!! Perfectly romantic……….wow……so beautiful this is!

Su: hmm……..

Kashish plays with water…..and throws a bit of water on him…….

He looks at her playin with the water………..happily…...!

She again throws a bit more water……..this time more……..

Su: ah………

Ka: hahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!

Su: u…………….

Kashish runs and he runs after her………..she keeps runnin………

But manages to hold her hand and brings her close……….

She still laughs………

But then………she realizes that …….in this……..they both came very close……..

She slowly looked at him……..she didn't laugh…….just looked at him….

He too realized that the distance between them was near to nothing

And he wanted to fill in every possible space between them………

Kashish could sense in his eyes………his eyes were no more playful……they had turned passionate………

Kashish couldn't stand there…….she felt weak and nervous……..

Just then his arms grasped her tighter……..bringing her more close and closing all space between them…….

Sujal couldn't take his eyes off from her……!

He slowly……brings his face closer…... more……..and his eyes searched for her lips…..

Tilting his head……..he came more close ……..So close that she could feel his breath …….and he could feel hers……..

And then…….they hardly thought……..and kissed………!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

His arms graspin her even more tighter……..and she gave her heart to this man!!!!!

Later………

They slowly released themselves……..and looked in to each very deeply……

Kashish felt happy……….and secure……….his arms were still around her……

She hugged him…….No words were spoken…….nothin was said between them…..but a lot was said in the silence………

She had never felt all this…….physically and emotionally……

All she knew was that…..she LOVED this man…..and so did he…..she thought and smiled……..

Moments later…..he released his arms………She looked at him fully blushin……and he smiled at a blushing kashish…….

Su: wow u blush beautifully!!

These were first word spoken between them after………….

But kashish could hardly speak up…… she could hardly stop blushin……

She looked at him…..and ran away from there……

Su: kashish……. Hey!!!!!!!!!

But kashish ran to her cottage……..Sujal blushed……and he too left for his cottage…..

Kashish entered her room……and shut the door ……..and stopped……she was goin breathless…….

She thought of the kiss……of that warm and passionate one they shared in the beach……This was the perfect valentine…….more than she wanted to be……!!

She blushed……touched her lips…...again blushed……and rushed in to the washroom for freshening up!!

Next day……..

Kashish hardly slept the other day……..how could she???????the events that happened…..Dance……..Kiss…….everythin…..made her think about him more and more…….

She sat in her window and looked out……he wasn't there in his cottage…..she yearned for him…….

A breeze came in and her silky hairs blew……..Just then she hears a voice…….

It was sujal

Su: sujal yahan………(blushes)

She rushes out of her room……..She asks for sujal………..

Ka: sujal?

Charu replies

Ch: he left……..

Ka: huh!!

Ch: haan!! He came here…….and he went with mehak that's it!

Ka: what?????? Mehak? Ye?

Ch: whats it dear any problem??

Ka: nahi!!!!!!!! Did they say where they were goin to?

Ch: no!!

Kashish leaves………she feels sad and gloomy…….disappointed!!

Ka: why didn't he meet me…….??

Later…….kashish sat just like that……she became really upset…..sujal and mehak were still out….

After some time…….

Me: (enterin in) hey!!

Ka: tum?? Where have u been huh!!

Me: somewhere…….with someone special……

Ka: huh?

Me: haan!!!!!!!He is so special!!

Ka: what?!

Me: haan……he is so sweet……I have never seen a man like his before……

Ka: stop it!!!!!!!!

Me: array why are u goin angry baby!!

Ka: shut up and leave from here……..

Kashish turns around…….and tears roll down from her cheeks……she feels heart broken and disappointed……

Just then sujal comes in……..and slowly whispers in her ears………

" HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

She looks at him…….

Su: (smiles) happy Birthday!

Ka: huh…….(her eyes still moist)

Su: kashish…….u were cryin now……

Ka: (tryin to hide) nahi to…….(turns around)

Me: main chalti hoon…..sujal u bring her theek hai!! And waise ……. that's why I said sujal sweet and nice….since he was doin so much for my sweet friend!!!!!

Su: (makes her look him) kashish……?

Ka: nahi…..nothin

Su: whats it?

Ka: who……

Su: hmm that's it…….i mean how could u do it??

Ka: what??

Su: u doubted me??

Ka: nahi wo….er….nahi……main to bas…….mehak and u……to…..

Sujal laughs…….

Su: are I was just jokin…..well no need to hide that u felt jealous!

Ka: Yes I did!!!!!!!!!

Sujal just smiles……..

Su: well I know u have many questions…..but first wear this dress and come to my cottage…….u will get all ur answers!

Kashish looks at the dress…..a beautiful peach coloured…. Backless silky shimmerin eveing gown…….with spaghetti straps……

Ka: wow!!!!!

Su: liked it!!

Kashish nods in affirmative

Su: so will be waitin!

He leaves and goes to his own cottage………and kashish quickly gets ready……..and does her make up perfectly since she wanted to be her best in this beautiful outfit……..

Meanwhile her friends and he waited…….Just then mehak said about kashish comin there

They switch off the lights……..Kashish sees that there was nothing…….But she still proceeds…..and the light is switched on as soon as she enters the room!!!!!!!

The room was beautifully decorated…….fragnances of her favorite flower spread across…….the whole place looked romantic with dim lighs and candles adorning the room…….

Silken white and blue curtains……..and a cake completed it!!

Sujal and mehak and everyone came out……….and started singing the usual Happy birthday song……..

Kashish was overwhelmed…….she looked at sujal…….who indicated her to come in and cut the cake

She comes there……..And sees the cake……it was her favorite!!

Kashish cuts the cake……..and feeds everyone…….

Sujal switches on the music……a soft music plays in the background…..she loved it……and he took her in…….

Inside there was food laid down on the table…….Kashish saw it……..Her favorite Italian dishes…….

Everthing was her favorite……….She smiled……..She and her friends had the food

Ka: waise here everything is my favorite!!

Me: haan isiliye to sujal and I went for a zabardast shoppin spree!!

Ka: (looks at sujal) oh!!

He smiled back at her…….

Ka: thanks!!

Me: not fair even I helped out!!

Ka: thanks to everyone!!!!!!!(smiles)

They complete the dinner……and after sometime her friends leave…….

Meanwhile kashish stays back in his house………

The moment she was …………….she stopped thinking as he turned around to look at her……..

Su: so loved it!!

Ka: haan!!

Su: even me!!

Ka: how do I look in this dress?

Su: very beautiful!!

Kashish smiles……….and goes to the window of the room……..and sighs…….

Ka: so beautiful isn't it……..(she admired the climate and wind)

Su: yes( while he admired her)

Ka: I love this……….

He came closer……..very closer………

Su: And ……..I………Love you!!!!!!!!!!

Kashish's heart skipped a beat…….she didn't look at him…….

Su: hmm??

Slowly she turned around…….and looked him……he had the same passionate look that he had last night…….

And he came close to her……and her mind, heart,body, brain…….everything yearned for him…….

She hardly hesitated……in comin close to him……….his arms wrapped itself around her……..

There was no point ……as he couldnt control himself………and his hands touched her skin…..she shivered…….

He felt that…….and he proceeded towards her lips………and kissed her……..

Her arms slowly came around him and tightened itself!!!!!.............

Few moments later……..the kiss finished…….and they looked in each other eyes!

But the passion in his eyes……..lingered…….!! He couldn't stop himself here……

He slowly removed her few tresses, which were falling on her shoulder, and placed sweet kisses there…….

She quivered……feelin weak…….and he kissed her unhesitantly…..slowly from her shoulders to her neck ……..to her collar bones……to her other side of her shoulder

And then to her ears and she melted……..every inch……he slowly took off her earring…..and kissed her ear…..slowly proceeding to her cheeks…….. and other ear

When she moved and turned around…….

But he didn't stop himself…….his hands slowly caressed her hands……..and he holded her palms……..while he kissed her bare back……..

She literally went weak and mad…….but she smiled……a feelin evoked by him….a feelin…..she didn't know but she loved everythin……..

Slowly his arms wrapped her…….and he removed her hairs from her back and kissed there……..in the nape of her neck…….

The kisses were so passionate…….that she could hardly hold herself properly………

She quickly turned around and hugged him tightly……and wanted to get lost in his arms……

Ka: itna mat paas lao ke main tum main sama jaaon!!

Su: sama jao…….i want u…….just u!!!!!!!!!

She looks at him…..and he again comes close to her………passionately and lovely…….

Next day………

Mehak gets up……and freshens up……..and goes to kashish's room…….

She finds her sleepin there……..

Me: kashish utho…….its getting late……

Kashish looks at her with sleepy eyes……..

Ka: mehak I am tired………please……

Me:uthooooooo!!!!!!!!!

Ka: (sitting up) achcha theek hai…….

Mehak leaves and kashish sits there……..and remembers about the previous night…..she blushes…..she and sujal…….!!

She stands up……and looks out……

Ka: pata hi nahi chala that when u came in my life and all this……..(blushes)

Kashish had just come in to her room in the mornin…….without the knowledge of her friends…….

She goes in to freshen up……….

After this…….Kashish spent her time mostly with sujal…….and both loved it!!!!!!

After 1-2 days………

Kashish went happily in to sujal's room……. And there she found him packin his bags…..

Ka: hey tum kahan jaa rahe ho??

Su: leavin! Some work so!!

Ka: par itni jaldi!!

Su: (smiles) jaldi?? Its been a long time I have been here!!

Ka: haan par…….

Su: comeon don't get upset!!

Ka: theek hai…….shall I help u in packin!!

Su: oh sure!!

She packs his bag….. places his clothes in his suitcase

Ka: achcha sujal u said u leave in mumbai

Su: haan!!

Ka: to mujhe wahan kab le jaaoge hmm??

Su: tumhe…..when ever u want(smiles)

Ka: sure!!

She was happy

Ka: hmm to theek hai…….tum bolo mujhe apne gharwalon se milwane kab le jaa rahe ho!!

Su: what?? Why?

Ka: sujal…….(holds his arms) now abhi shaadi ki baat ke liye to gharwalon ki permission leni hogi na!! huh!!

Su: wait shaadi!!

Ka: haan!! We both!!

Su: who said!

Ka: comeon sujal we both love each other so the next is marriage na! huh!

Su: No!!

Ka: Sujal…….whats it!! Dekho we both love each other na ………to abhi hume shaadi ke bare main bhi to sochna chahiye na!!

Su: what!

Ka: aur phir humare beech main jo kuch bhi huwa who…….(blushes)

Su: Stop(firmly) what……humare beech aisa kya huwa hai?

KA: sujal who…….comeon sujal(blushes heavily) achcha who sab chodo ek kaam karte hain we will get engaged first theek hai…….to mujhe kab le jaoge huh!

Sujal somehow feels a bit caged and suffocated while talking all this

He moves……..and looks at her

Su: see kashish……I don't want …….(stammered) want……to marry!!

Ka: (stunned) what?

Su: haan!! I am not intending to marry!

Ka: sujal see……tum kya keh rahe ho…..u love me…….and I love u……so if we want our relationship to proceed it has to be "Marriage" right(happily)

Su: NO!!!!!!!!!!!

Kashish looks at him stunned!

Su: look I never intended ………

Ka: sujal what are u sayin humare bech jo bhi huwa hai….....itne din humne jo saath beetaye hain……aur jo uss raat humare beech huwa

Su: That's it kashish…….humare beech aisa kuch nahi huwa tha uss raat ko samjhi……theek hai…..hum paas aaye…….but I and u both never crossed the limit……!

Ka: but sujal I love u……….(she was almost to cry)

Su: kashish listen………I don……

Ka: (interrupts) u don't what huh!!(angry) tum kehna chahte ho ki humare beech itna sab ho jaane ke baad u don't want to take our relationship forward……

He turns around…..he knew he didn't want marriage……he knew his life……but still he didn't want to break her heart

Su: No!!(he said with great difficulty)

Kashish was shocked and heart broken………She loved him like anything and he ……..!!

Ka: (went to him) Sujal ye tum kya keh rahe ho? Hum shaadi nahi kar sakte? We love each other…….!!

Sujal remains silent……..

Ka: Sujal did I go wrong anywhere…...bolo……Anythin ?? bolo…….Sujal…….maine kuch kaha…….anythin……..

Su: nahi

Ka: sujal……we have come so close……we have loved each other so much and now……

Su: Please kashish…..atleast I don't want to marry and that's why I did not do anything that will force me in a relationship with u…….

Kashish looked at him with teary eyes………

Ka: to u don't love me…. U don't want a relationship….u don't want to maary me huh?

Su: No I don't!!

Ka: (Slaps him) tum ne………ye sab……..(she broke down from within) U cheated me!!

Su: nahi…….i didn't(firmly)

Ka: sujal Please listen ………I love u…….. a lot……..sujal and even u love me right….to…….

Su: but………..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He says nothing and leaves from the place………..

Ka: SUJALLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

She shouts………and he hears it…….But he leaves the place……..and kashish sits down……..

She broke down……..and cried!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ka: Sujal!!!!!

"Kashish" said sujal……..as he opened his eyes……….

It was Present Day……………..

He remembered how she shouted……..his eyes moist…….as he ;looked out and remembered his past…….

He could never forget his past…….how much ever he wanted to……he shifted his base for a few years but still she lingered in his memories…….

Su: Kashish…….I love u!!!!!!!!

Just then kashish who sat in her room………suddenly saw here and there…..For her it seemed as if someone called her name…….That man called her name

Ka: nahi ye mumkin nahi hai……who insaan……mujhe kabhi yaad nahi kar sakta hai…….

Kashish cried…….and thought about her past……..She had to fight for such a long time to get her life stabilized……..she loved him more than her life but he……

She got money, power,fame,riches,business………But him……!!

She had yearned for him long but then she realized she was a fool to have done so……and from then she removed the word "love" from her life……

Until Piyush came in her life…….He was the one who loved her more than herself…….Intially she was hesitant to be involved in a relationship…..But piyush was different……

But then now Sujal has come in life once more to break all hell loose………..

Ka: WHY!!!!!!!!!! WHY DID u!! come in my life again…….Why??????????

She sat down……

Ka: I hate u…….I HATE U………SUJAL!!!!!!!!!!!!

In sujal's room

Su: I love u kashish……….I LOVE U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(he too cried)

He stood there………simply

Su: why kashish……tumne ek baar mujhse poocha hota why I didn't marry u……?? Kashish………….!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He couldn't control himself……..He lovd her more than his life and now she was his brother's would be wife………

Su: kashish….! But I am the one who did …….everythin wron……..I was wrong and not u…….not u…….

He smiled in between tears

Su: u deserve happiness……that I couldn't give u…….i am sorry ………Meri hi galti thi…………………!!!!!!! But kashish i….meri majboori ko tumne nahi samjha…..u didn't understand me …..u didn't understand…………..

They both cry in their rooms…………….

The POLL Question


Should Kashish Forgive Sujal and go to him back or should she not forgive him and stay with piyush?

Please reply😊

hey thanks a lot, devdootcn,kaa_san,nature099,irstsk,kyphkamahbuba!! thanks a lot to all of u!!!!!!

I have updated the part please read and though its a long part hope u people like it! 😊

Originally posted by: kaa_san

beautiful part liked it open the suspence soon as i am dyieng to know that liked the part 👏

Thanks i have revealed the Sujal-kashish past as of now.....For Kavya Anjali......a bit wait......😛!! Hope u like the updated part!!😊

Originally posted by: kyphkamahbuba

wow i just love the way you organized all the characters. BUT don't you think you but too many characters. i mean how will you handle to write about all of them at the same time. 😕

Thanks a lot 😃😛and yes its a bit difficult to manage......but then i wanted to write on these so i did.......!! 😊 Hope u like the updated part!!!!!!!!!!

beautiful part 👏 loved it. in my opinion Kashish should listen to what was his problem and then if they are genuine then she sho forgive him else not