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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
PART 9

Recap: Sujal ko pata chalta hai k Kripa Kashish ki dost hai ..aur KAshish ko pata chalta hai k Arjun Sujal ka dost hai ..

now bak to da storyy..
Sujal : aray Kashish kya meine tumhe bataya ..k tumhari hone wali bhabhi ka naam Kripa hai ...
Kashish : KYAAA....????
ab is waqt Kashish to bas....lekin Kripa bhi pareshaan hoti hai ..
Kashish : yeh kya baqwas hai ..?
Sujal : yeh baqwas nahi sachh hai ...tumhara bhai aur kripa ek doosre ko ji o jaan se pasand kertay hain...
Kashish Kripa ki taraf dekhti hai ...
Kashish : kya yeh sab..sachh...
Kripa apni nazrein jhuka leti hai ...
Kashish : matlab yeh sach keh raha hai ...
Kashish wahan se chali jaati hai ...Kripa us k peechay peechay jaati..
Kripa : Kashish ..!! meri baat to sunnoo...Kashish..
Kashish : ab aur bhi kuch baaqi hai kya ..?
Kripa : mein aur Angad sach mein ek doosre se pyaar kertay hain ..
Kashish : to mein kya kerun ..??haan
Kripa : samajhne ki koshish kero Kashish ..
Kashish : mujhay kuch nahi samajhna...
Kripa : bas ek baar maaf kerdo plz...itni saalon ki dostii k liyeh plzz sirf ek baar..
Kashish kuch nahi bolti...
Kripa : shayad mein maafi k kabil nahi ...lekin Kashish tum hamesha meri best friend hi raho gii..
Kripa wahan se jaa rahi hoti ...Kashish us ka haanth pakartii hai ...
Kashish : oyee nautankiii....sudher jao .. ab..
Kripa muskurati hai ...
Kashish : chalo angad ne koi kaam to dhang ka kia ...ek achi bhabhi hi de di mujhay ..
Kripa sharma jaati hai ..
Kashish : per tum bhi to nahi na ...apna Target..
kripa : Kashish ...ab aur kitnay din..
Kashish : jab taq shaaadi nahi ho jaatii..
Kripa : tum bhi naaa...(smiles)..
Tabhi Kashish ki nazar neha per perhti hai ..
Kashish : oyee Kripa ..yeh dekho ...SUjal ne apni gf ko apni engagement mein bhi bula hua hai ...bari himmat hai is larki mein ..jo apne pyaar ko kisi aur ka hota dekhne bhi aa gayiii ..
Kripa : yeh larkii yahan bhi ...dekhtay hain ..
yahan Neha aur Sujal baat ker rahe hote hain ..
Neha : bhaiyaa..!! aap yeh sahi nahi ker rahe...aap kyun apni zindagi barbaad ker rahe hain ..?(thoda rone lagtii hai )
Sujal usse hugg kerta hai ..
Sujal : aray merii sweet si sis...tumhe pareshaan hone ki zarurat nahi hai ...mujhay pata hai mein kya ker raha hun..aur meri itni pyaari si behan k aankhon mein aanso achay nahi lagte ..
Neha : bhaiyaa aaap bhi na...
aur yahan Kashish jall rahi hoti hai..
Kashish : arghhh...!! yeh kya ho raha hai ...?yeh meri engagement hai ..aur Sujal mera fiance aur woh hai kk...
Kripa : relax..!! lekin yeh larki hai kaun..?
Kashish : mujhay kya pata...lekin woh us se galay kyun mil....(ek dum se chup ho jaati hai )
Kripa : aray tumhe kya kerna hai ...?
kashish : haan mujhay kya kerna hai ..
lekin phir bhi woh ..Neha k paas jaati hai ..
Kashish : tum..tum ro kyun rahi ho..(smiling)
Neha : mein nahi to..
Kashish : oh comon mein andhi nahi hun ...
Neha : mein bas woh Sujal ki bebasii per...
yeh alfaz sunte hi Kashish gusse se red ho jati hai ..
Kashish : matlab kya hai tumhara haan...? tum samajhti kya ho apne aap ko..do kori ki gf ho bas ...
Neha : gurl friend..??
kashish : aur nahi to kya ..
Neha : shayad tumhe...
Sujal sab sun raha hota hai ...ek dum se udher ata hai aur Neha k mun per haanth rakhta hai ..
Sujal : KASHISH..!! tumhe koi haq nahi banta k tum meri Neha se is tarah baat kero....

*Waiting for ur Commentz..*

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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
hey tashooo kaha thi yaar. was waiting for the update from sooooo long 😭 aur finally aaj tumne part likha. wooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...................kya part tha 👏 . it was hilarious 😆 . i am laughing like crazy for the last scene 😆 . kashihsh thinks that neha is sujal's girlfriend aur kitna jalti hai yeh, when sujal and neha hug each other 🤣 . aik bhai behen ki tarah hug karte hai but this kashish misunderstands them and tells her that she is do takke ki girlfriend 😆 . lolzzzzzzzzz..... she is crazy and sujal hears this aur bhag ke aata hai and closes nehs'a mouth with his hand . taki neha doesn't say ki woh uski behen hai 🤣 .i am sure sujal is upto something now 👏 . he will surely make kashish jelous by always speaking about neha and by being with her aur inn sab mein neha bhi sujal ka saath degi 😉 . u know what tashu this story is rocking and it is going to rock further like anything ⭐️ . i loved the direction u showed in your story 🤗 . jelousy ke wajah se kashish sujal ke kareeb aayegi and sujal will also come closer to her 😳 . this is awesome yaar 👏 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzz......can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: fravashi

hey tashooo kaha thi yaar. was waiting for the update from sooooo long 😭 aur finally aaj tumne part likha. wooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...................kya part tha 👏 . it was hilarious 😆 . i am laughing like crazy for the last scene 😆 . kashihsh thinks that neha is sujal's girlfriend aur kitna jalti hai yeh, when sujal and neha hug each other 🤣 . aik bhai behen ki tarah hug karte hai but this kashish misunderstands them and tells her that she is do takke ki girlfriend 😆 . lolzzzzzzzzz..... she is crazy and sujal hears this aur bhag ke aata hai and closes nehs'a mouth with his hand . taki neha doesn't say ki woh uski behen hai 🤣 .i am sure sujal is upto something now 👏 . he will surely make kashish jelous by always speaking about neha and by being with her aur inn sab mein neha bhi sujal ka saath degi 😉 . u know what tashu this story is rocking and it is going to rock further like anything ⭐️ . i loved the direction u showed in your story 🤗 . jelousy ke wajah se kashish sujal ke kareeb aayegi and sujal will also come closer to her 😳 . this is awesome yaar 👏 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzz......can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊



Hey Nikki...Thanx for da comment...M glad..u liked my storyy...bas dekho aagay kya hota hai 😆 😆 😳

Tashu**
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
hyeeeee welcome back....gr8 part yaar.... 👏
lo ji ab SUJAL ko ek aur chance mil gaya KASHISH ko pareshan karne ka....NEHA ke saath mil kar ab to KASHISH ki vat lagaega.....now the real fun wil start.... 😉
yaar plzzzzz update soon...wil be waitin for the next part.......
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: neh0307

hyeeeee welcome back....gr8 part yaar.... 👏
lo ji ab SUJAL ko ek aur chance mil gaya KASHISH ko pareshan karne ka....NEHA ke saath mil kar ab to KASHISH ki vat lagaega.....now the real fun wil start.... 😉
yaar plzzzzz update soon...wil be waitin for the next part.......



Thanx for such a gr88 comment...m glad u liked it...well yup...yeh donon mauqa kahan chorte hain ek doosre ko pareshan kernay ka lol 😆 😆 ..
i'll surely continuee soon 😳

Tashu**
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
😆 ...ab kya neha gf banay ka natak karay giiiii 😆 ...well not bad at allllllll 😉 ...kam se kam kashish ko sabaq to milay gaaaa 😉 😉 😉

yar tashu tum gayab hojati hooooooo ...update kiya karo naaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 😛 😛 😛 ...now cont sooonnnnnnnnn 😛


rajeev rox 👏




neh0307 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
hiiii...kaha ho yaar ....itne din se no update 😭
update soon yaar.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
Hey tashu dear fantastic fanfic dear plz continue soon😊😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
Thanx a lott for ur commeenttzz guyzzz... 😳 😳

Tashu**
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Posted: 18 years ago
PART 10

Recap: Kashish aur Neha k beech baat hoti hai aur Kashish neha ko Sujal ki gf samajh ker suna rahi hoti hai jab Sujal Kashish ko daant deta hai ...
Now bak to da storyy...
Sujal : Kashish tumhe koi haq nahi banta k tum meri Neha se is tarah baat kero ..
yeh jumla suntay hi Kashish ko bohat gussa aata hai ..aur aisa lag raha hota hai k Sujal ki pitai ho jaye gi lol..
Kashish : ab dusron ki side lena band kero Sujal ...u r my fiance now...
Sujal : shayad aap bhool rahi hain ..yeh mangni sirf ek samjhota hai ..aur pehla pyaar to hamesha pehla pyaar hi rehta hai ..kyun Neha..
Neha ko kuch samajh mein hi nahi aa raha hota hai..
Sujal : well excuse me ..
aur Neha ko wahan se le jaata hai ...aur yahan Kashish to bas ...lol
Neha : bhaiya ...yeh kya tha..mein aap ki girl friend..?(confused)
Sujal : haan to ..(smiling)
Neha : bhaiya yeh sab kya ho raha hai mere to kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha ..
Sujal : Neha ...tumhe aisa pretend kerna hoga jaisay tum meri girlfriend ho ..
Neha : KYAAA..??
Sujal : dekho mana mat kerna...Kashish ko sabaq sikhane ka isse acha mauqa nahi mil sakhta ...
Neha : per bhaiya yeh sab...
Sujal : nehaa plzzz..
Neha : acha baba theek hai ..lekin is se Kashish ko kya farq pare ga..? woh to aap se pyaar nahi kerti..
Sujal : mujhay malum hai ..lekin har larki mein yeh problem hoti hai ...k ager koi usse nafrat bhi kare na to woh yeh chahti hai k sirf ussi se nafrat kare ...
Neha : uff aap aur aap ki psycology,,,
Sujal : tumhara bhaiya aaj tak khud apne aap ko nahi samajh paya ..to koi aur kya samjha ga usse
Neha : han han (smiling)...
ab dekhtay hain yahan Kashish k saath kya ho raha hai ..
Kashish : huh...pata nahi samajhta kya hai apne aap ko ..
Kripa : ab kya hua ..?
Kashish : us ne apni us do kori ki girlfriend k saamne meri bezaatii ki...KASHISH ki..
Kripa : aisa kya keh dia ..
Kashish Kripa ko sab bata ti hai ..
Kripa : uffoo!! to is mein itna gussa hone ki kya zarurat hai...kaunsa tum usse pyaar kerti ho jo tumhe itna bura lag raha hai ..
Kashish : mein aur pyaar woh bhi Sujal se ..huh...isse pehlay to mein khud khushi kerna pasand kerun gi...
Krippa : wahi to ker rahi ho ..
Kashish : kya kaha...
Kripa : nahi kuch nahi ...
yahan Arjun Sujal k paas aa raha hota hai ...aur saamne se Neha aa rahi hoti hai ...Arjun pata nahi kis soch mein ghum hote hain k ..achanaq woh Neha se takra jaata hai ...aur us k glass se sara juice Neha k kapron per gir jaata hai ...
Arjun : Oh!! i m extremely soryy (looking at neha's clothes)..woh mein ..(ab neha ka chehra dekhta hai )...
Neha : what da hell...mera dress...
Arjun : woh mein...
neha : saara kharab ho gaya..
Arjun : woh mein ...
Neha : Goshh!! tum pagal ho kya ..
Arjun : woh mein ...
Neha : o helloo...kya woh mein woh mein kiyeh jaa rahe ho ...
Arjun comes back to hiz senses...
Arjun : oh im extremely soryy..wo mein.. i mean mein apne dost k paas jaa raha tha ..to aap se takra dia to yeh drink aap per gir gaya ..
Neha : u must wear glasses..
Arjun : nahi nahi meri eye sight bilkul theek hai ..
Neha jo k puri tarah irritate ho chuki hoti hai wahan se chali jaati hai ..
Arjun Sujal k pass bhagta bhagta jaata hai ..
Arjun : Sujal Sujal Sujal!!
Sujal : kya hua bay..itna excited kyun hai ..?
Arjun : mujhay apne sapnon ki raani mil gayi ...
Sujal : hain rani kaun rani..?
Arjun : mujhay woh larki mil gayi jis ka mujhay intezar tha..
Sujal : sach mein ...? kahan hai woh..
Arjun : woh rahi ..(pointz towardz Neha jo k Kripa k saath khari hi thi )
Sujal : KYAAA ..??? woh..? beta tu bohat bura pite ga ..
Arjun : kyun..??
Sujal : beta Kashish k bhai Angad ka naam sunna hai ..
Arjun : han to...
Sujal : woh us ki Girlfriend hai ...hahaha (startz laughing)..
Arjun : abay woh to mujhay bhi pata hai ...mein us ki bat ker raha hun jo us k saath kharii hai ..
Sujal : KYAA...?? abay saalay woh meri behan hai ..
Arjun : kyaaaaaaaaaaa???
Sujal : haan ager us ki taraf buri nazar se dekha na ...to tera woh haal kerunga ..jo tune kabhi sapne mein bhi nahi socha hoga..
Arjun : abay burii nazar se kaun dekh raha hai ...mujhay to sach mein pyar ho gaya hai usse ..
Sujal : hain !!
Arjun : yaar Sujal meri setting kerwa na ...
Sujal : kya mein ..!! mujhse yeh sab nahi hota ...aur meri behan us type ki larki nahi ..
Arjun : to mein kaunsa us type ka larka hun..mein bhi to tumhari hi type ker larka hun ...
Sujal : abay chal!! apne aap ko mujhse compare na ker..
Arjun : acha na soryyy...Setting to kerwao...
Sujal : acha mein usse baat kerun ga...
Arjun : thanx yaar...
kher ab finallyyy engagement khatam ho jaati hai aur sab apne apne ghar chale jaatay hain ..
ab ghar mein Sujal Neha se baat kernay aata hai ...
Neha : aray bhaiya aap .itni late ..koi kaam tha kya ..
Sujal : nahi woh bas aisay hi ..
Neha : boliyeh na kya baat hai ..?
Sujal : ermm wohh..
Neha : bolein bhi ab ..
Sujal : neha woh jo kal larka tha mere sathh...
Neha : kaun..??
Sujal : wahi jo har waqt mere sath tha..kal
Neha : oh acha woh idiot!! jis ne mere dress per drink girayi thi ..
Sujal (in his mind) : wahh kya pehla hi impression itna zabardast mara hai unhun ne ..
Neha : han to kya hua ...us ne kuch kaha kya aap ko
Sujal : nahi mein yahi bata raha tha ..k woh
Neha : woh kya..??
Sujal : yahi k woh har larki k sath aisa hi kerta hai ..
neha : kaisa ?
Sujal : nahi nahi kuch nahi ..mein pagal ho raha hun..
Neha : bhaiya kya ho gaya hai aap ko ..
Sujal : is Kashish ne mera dimagh kharab ker dia ...mein tumse subha baat kerta hun...
yeh keh ker Sujal apne room mein chala jaata hai ..
in his room
Sujal ( to himself) : yeh mein Arjun ka kaam ker raha tha k bighaar raha tha ...
kher Sujal apne bed per lait jaata hai ..
k us k darwazay per koi knock kerta hai ...
Sujal neend mein uthta hai aur darwaza kholta hai ..
Sujal : TUMMM!!
Girl : haan mein to...
Sujal : tum is waqt mere ghar mein kya ker rahi ho..
Girl : ohh comon mein apne fiance k ghar kabhi bhi aa sakhti hun ..(yupp she waz Kashish )
Sujal : tum pagal ho gayi ho kya ..??
Kashish : haan chalo pagal hi sahi ...per mein aa gayi hun ab to..
Sujal : chali jao yahan se ...!!
Neha : Kyaa..??bhaiya ...kya ho gaya aap mujh per itna gussa kyun ho rahe hain ..
(yup it waz Sujal's imagination...Neha us ko Kashish dikhai de rahi thi lol)
Sujal : neha tum..!! mein samjha koi aur hai ..
Neha : aur kaun ..?
Sujal : nahi koi nahi ...
neha : aap mujhay Kashish samjhay na..?
Sujal : nahi to...kher yeh batao kya kaam hai ..
Neha : nahi mein yahi dekhne aayi thi k aap thek hain k nahi
SUjal : ofcourse mein bilkul theek hai hun..
Neha : lagta to nahi ..
Sujal : kya..?
Neha : nahi kuch nahi ...Good Night!!
Sujal : Good Night!!

*Sorryyy for da delay...i waz buzy in my studiez...hopee u all will like thiz part...eagerly waiting for ur commentz*

Tashu**

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