Serendipity.....Sujal&Kashish....Last-Part...11/07

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#951

mind blowing ending kashish

i really enjoyed the way u showed how much love sujal has 4 kashish which was potrayed in his book.The scene were sujal worries about kashish and where he cant stand to see her in pain was amazing.The names of sujal and kashishs children were really beautiful i liked how u described how the family became complete and lived happily together.

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I want to Know how you feel about the story?

i really enjoyed reading the story from start to finish the way u potryed all the different emotion feelings between all the charachters and especially sujal and kashish was amazing.

which is ur most favorite romantic scene?

The scenes were sujal and kashish get married 4 the second time and when sujal picks kashish up to do the pheras.

which is the scene that i made u cry?

The scene were kashish thought sujal had died and also when kashish and sujal found out about his illness.

which is the scene that i made u laugh?

The scene were all the family members catch kashish in sujals room one day before the wedding.

what is the best thing u like about Sujal and Kashish?

the love between the two and how they show that they are one soul two bodies.

Edited by Iqbal Neha1 - 16 years ago

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#952

thanks for the pm! Seriously I loved this whole story! I loved when the girls got drunk and the guys had to take care of them. The funniest was when Kashish's water broke and Sujal just stood there. Also loved how the kids barged in at the end. This story is a great example of how true love really is and how few people actually find it in the end! Keep up this writing because it gives others hope that someday they too will find true love!
P.S I loved how they fell asleep together when they were supposed to sleep seperately before their second wedding!

Edited by adventure_gurl - 16 years ago

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Pihu

@Devotion.

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#953

vry nice part kashish..!!! the story was gr888 n i realli enjoyed reading it

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niks_0203

@niks_0203

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#954

hey kashish i read ur story n it was fantastic i loved it n enjoyed it u r a great writer keep it up i appreciate ur hard work

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samrah

@cute_samrah

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#955

mindblowing ending kashish..............................

I want to Know how you feel about the story?

the story was superb.....................eik he story mein sab kuch tha pyaar, fight aur bohat kuch.......................mindblowing

which is ur most favorite romantic scene?

buhat sareeeee hai.................all scenes of sk

which is the scene that i made u cry?

jab sujal kashish se dur tha..............

which is the scene that i made u laugh?

last scene when their kids caught them.............

what is the best thing u like about Sujal and Kashish?

their passion of love...............

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#956

Mind blowing ending Dear.👏I am going to miss your this FF.

I want to Know how you feel about the story?

Is Eak kahani mein aap ne hum ko itne srae rishtey jeena sikhaya sath hi angad kripa ki nok jhok , armaan aur ridh ki shatart aur sujal kahsih ke atoot pyar ki tasveer diii its perfct and awesome.

which is ur most favorite romantic scene?

Iss FF mein mere Fav Romantic scene sk ke sare hai sath hi angad kripa ke bhi , ya yu khahe i love all Romantic scene .

which is the scene that i made u cry?

Jab Kashish sujal ko yaad kar ke roti thi sath hi sab ussko hasane ki kohshih karte they magar wo hamehs sujal ki yaad mein hi jeena cahti thi.

which is the scene that i made u laugh?

Last mein bacche bare shitaan ho gaye hahhaa tooo good .

what is the best thing u like about Sujal and Kashish?

I love thier Chemistry , love and Passion which they never going to loose in any cost.

Thank you soo much dear for this FF i hope aap aage bhi aise hi likhti rahoge.👏

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preeti~*pari

@preeti~*pari

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#957

most gorgeous jodi rajeev aamna.
lovely story

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preeti~*pari

@preeti~*pari

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#958

marvelous every story line.
simply great

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 16 years ago

#959

kashish dear main aagayi with my comments on "Serendipity", 100th part & the last part.. sorry woh main thoda sa late hogayi.. hope you understand😊 yaar the 100th part was ver good.. i really enjoyed it.. sujal, kashish kii shaddi ka time kareeb aa raha hai.. aur koi un dono ki milne hii nahii de raha hai.. is baat par main sabse kehna chahoongi, arre yaar samjha karo na, yeh sujal, kashish kii ek alag kii equation hai... unke shaddi ko itna waqt hogaya hai, aur ab woh dono dubara se shaddi karr rahe hai, lekin ab bhi un dono ka pyaar, un dono kii mohabbat parwaan chada hai..it is still at a very great height.... aur ab joh kashish ne zidd kii , ki agar usse koi shaddi ke liye taiyaar karega tho woh sujal hoga... and sab log is baat se waakif hai kii agar sujal, kashish ko milna hai tho woh kissi bhi haal mein milkar hii rahenge.. unhe milne se koi rokh hii nahii saktha.. isse behtar hai kii sujal ko kashish ke pass bheja jaye, kashish ko taiyaar karne ke liye... aur jab prerna ko kashish kii zidd ka patah chala tho she did exactly that.. aur prerna ne aise kiya kyunke woh sujal, kashish dono ko hii bohat hii achchi tarah se pehchaanthi hai... ab sujal ka kashish ke pass aana, first uska pareshaan hona kii kashish ko kya hua.. i'am sure sujal might a felt a huge relief jab usse patah chala why he was called there..then the scene of sujal, kashish's romance... sujal ka kashish ko taiyaar karna.. i'am sure sujal might be having immense pleasure apni sapno kii dulhan ko taiyaar karne mein.. bohat se couples mein dekha gaya hai kii shaddi ke kuch din baad the love the romance slowly vanishes in thin air.. but sujal, kashish ka tho koi jawaab nahii.. unke pyaar ke baare mein padthe-padthe unko meri hii nazar lag jayegi.. there love is just so special.. absolutely magical... sujal, kashish ka pyaar aisa hai joh kissi non believer of love ko bhi pyaar mein yakeen dila sakthi hai... the scene between kripa, anjali, prachi, charu & kashish where kashish tells them kii woh waise taiyaar hona chahthi hai jaise sujal apni dulhan ko dekhna chahtha hai.. hmm..well yeh sahii bhi tho hai... jaise shaddi ke waqt ek dulhan ke dil mein armaan hothe hai kii woh kaise lage, waise hii ek dulhe ke bhi tho armaan honge kii uski dulhan kaise lage... jaise dulhan ke sapne hothe hai about her prince-charming , even a dulha will have a cherished dream about a princess.. aur kashish ne sujal ke wahii sapne ko poora kiya hai... jab sujal kashish ke har chotti se chotti zaroorat ka khayal rakhtha hai, kashish bhi tho sujal ke harr baat ka dhayan rakhthi hai.. aur issi liye kashish ko bina lafzon ke sujal ke mann mein kya chal raha hai, woh tho patah chal hii jaatha hai... and same is the case with sujal, for understanding kashish , kashish ke mann kii baat jaaane ke liye bas sujal has to look at kashish.. aur woh saari baatein samaj jayega.. aisa hai sujal, kashish ka ek doosre ke prati pyaar..... waise the scene was nice jahaan kripa sujal kii naakh kheenchthi hai, the ladki waale , ladke waale argument was nice... all this are the main fun element in the shaddi.. they add life to the shaddi.... then the shaddi taking place... the varmala ke time, kashish ka trying to put the varmala around sujal's neck, lekin usse nahii hona, sujal ka going down on his knees... hyee..hyee.. sujal ke is gesture par tho main fida hogayi..marr gayii... kinna sona hai sujal... he is a total sweetheart.... i'am so khush kii sujal, kashish kii shaddi dubara hogayi.... then woh scene jahaan where sujal, kashish rasmein nibhathe hai wapas ghar aakar.. the aangooti kii shararat, all this was so very sweetttt- tweettttt... then joh chedkhani chal rahii thi that was superb.. then kashish ka sujal se kehna kii if he does not carry her then she won't come, aur sujal mahashay ko kashish ko apni baahon mein uttane ka mouka gawayenge nahii, as he always wants to be close to kashish.. aur ab jab kashish ne open offer diya hai tho sujal jhat se maan gaya aur apni dulhan ko apni baahon mein utta legaya... then woh raat aa hii gayi when sujal, kashish phir se ek hogaye.... hyee... hyee... mereko tho fulltoo sharam aaying sujal, kashish ke romance ke baare mein padkar.... the romance was perfect to the "T".... absolutely rocking.... then now coming to the last part of Serendipity, my comments on the last part.. well bada ajeeb lag raha hai kii Serendipity ke last part ka comment likh rahii hoon... it is just that i have got attached to this story... but it was a beautiful end to a beautiful story... it was marvelous, superb, outstanding, excellent, par excellence, out of this world, simple great, awesome, amazing, lovely, wonderful, nice, bindaas, dhassu, jhakaas, bole tho ek dum raapchik.. this part clearly bowled me over.. i'am seriously awe struck after reading the part.. tumne itna achcha likha hai, kii main jitni bhii tareef karoon woh tareef tumhari writing ke saamne kum hii lagega.. you deserve much, much more praises then you are getting... seriously hat's off to your writing...you know dear some days i re-read all the parts of "Serendipity" from the first part.. and believe me i enjoyed it to the maximum extent.... every part was so good... i'am completely fida over your writing yaar... it is something which i cannot explain in words to what extent i like it.. the last parts start was very nice.. the way sujal talked about "My Serendipity", his book, it is uski aur kashish kii kahani.. the way he talked about that, i seriously relived all the good, bad, sad moments of "Serendipity" once again...
dil ko choo gaya yeh last part tho... ab sujal , ka kashish ke pass aana.. kashish ka telling sujal kii she thinks it is her delivery time... and sujal getting all excited and forgetting kii his main priority is too take kashish to the hospital.. hehehe.. very funny.. yeh sujal bhi na.. waise i'am very happy kii kashish maa banne waali hai.. sujal, kashish ko woh khushiyaan milne waali hai which they deserve, and for which they have longed for , since a long time... waqt itni jaldi guzartha hai patah hii nahii chaltha.... sujal kashish kii phir se shaddi hue ek saal ka waqt beet gaya aur is ek saal mein i'am sure sujal, kashish ka rishtha pehle se bhi aur ghehra ho gaya hai... then the delivery ke time par, sujal se kashish ka dard bardhast nahii ho raha hai.. even today kashish's tears pierce his heart... then sabka sujal se kehna kii all will be fine.. i loved sujal's care for kashish... then jab doctor aathe hai aur sabko dungi khushi de jaathe hai.. he says kii kashish has delivered twins, ek ladka , ek ladki... wowww.... this calls for celebration... lagtha hai Bhagwaan ne joh pehle sujal, kashish se unka bachcha cheena tha, Bhagwaan ne ussi baat ko compensate karne ke liye sujal, kashish kii zindagi mein double khushi bhej dii.. then sujal, ka kashish se milna , unka taking their kids in their hands, sujal ka finding similarity between his daughter and kashish... this shows that the baby girl is will a daddy's girl... and kashish ka sujal aur apne bete mein similarity dhoondna, this shows the baby boy will be a mumma's boy... sujal , kashish itne khush lag rahe hai with their bundle of joys in their hands.. kashish ke khushi ke aasoo nikal na... yeh tho lazmi hii tha.. kyunke jab khushiyaan hadh se zyada milthi hai tho kehthe hai aankhein num ho hii jaathi hai.. then names chosen for the kids were nice armaan & sahana... even angad & kripa kids name ayan is very sweet... ab dekhthe hii dekhthe paanch saal ka waqt beet gaya hai.. sabki zindagi mein khushi thi.. all had kids... very nice..goodd.... lekin aaj bhi, paanch saal ke baad bhi sujal, kashish ke rishthe mein tho kuch nahii badla.. sujal is the same naughty person... i should say kii woh ab tho aur bhi naughty ho gaya hai.. uske har waqt romance karne kii aadat abhi thak nahii gayi.. loved their romance from the bottom of my heart.. armaan & sahana are soo sweett.. very cute... woh dono sujal,kashish ke pyaar ka prateek hai.. sujal, kashish kii zindagi hai...sujal ka mazaak, armaan aur sahana ka yeh argument kii batting kaun karega.. i'am sure sahana ne hiii pehle batting kii hogi, after all she is her daddy's princess.. hehehehe.... aur phir woh chaaron, apni sunday kii shuruwaat karne chale jaathe hai sabke saath.... kashish tumne bilkul sahii kaha sujal, kashish ka pyaar tho ek sagar ke jaisa hai , vishal , bada, bohat bada.. unka pyaar ek boond se shuru hua, ek attraction aur katra katra badthe chale gaye aur kab yeh pyaar itna zyada hogaya , khud sujal, kashish ko bhi is baat ka patah nahii chala.... unka pyaar tho hai hii itna achcha.. jaise maine kaha kissi bhi shaks ko joh pyaar par yakeen nahii kartha ho, ussi bhi sujal, kashish ke pyaar ko dekhkar pyaar par yakeen hone lag jaatha.. main tho itna hii kahoongi kii sujal, kashish ka rishtha ek misaal hai.... joh log sujal, kashish ke pyaar ko jaanege, samjenge, unko pyaar se pyaar ho jaayega.... this was so beautiful.. the journet of Serendipity was great..sujal, kashish rock.. your writing rock.. and in short you rock.... yaar main dil se keh rahii hoon , this fanfic has won my heart.. main tho poori tarah se clean bowled hogayi.. hat's off to your writing dear..... Serendipty had every element, every emotion in it chahe woh pyaar ho, takraar ho, nafrat ho, dushmani ho, apnapann ho, parivaar ka saath ho, aasoo ho, pati-patni ka rishtha ho, ya beheno ka saath ho, ya bhaiyon kii masti ho... ya chahe romance ho.... it had everything in it.. aisi ek bhi cheez nahii is fanfic mein jisko hum point out karke keh sake kii nahii yeh tho ghalat hai... every small thing se lekar every big thing thak everything was PERFECT.... you are a STAR....☺️ kashish dear now i cannot say my guess for the next part is... or i cannot even say please continue soon... i'am really very sad kii this fanfi has finished.. itne waqt se ek attachment si ban gayi thi is fanfic ke saath.. me will miss this fanfic very much....😭
par jaise kehthe hai na every good thing in this world has to end some day or the other and so serendipity has come to an end.. i'll surely miss it.. but it will always stay in my heart... you are just too good.. Seredipity is ek dum mast.. totally zabardast.......👏 this is my last comment on Serendipity, hope you liked reading it as much as i loved reading your whole fanfic...😃

Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 16 years ago

#960

Now Kashish coming to the answers for your questions..😃😛😊

I want to Know how you feel about the story?
The story is great.. i have developed a deep attachment with this fanfic....😃😃

which is ur most favorite romantic scene?

My most favorite romantic scene.. yeh baat alag hai kii I love all sujal, kashish scenes.. lekin sabse zyada i like when sujal goes down on his knees during the shaddi ka time, the varmala time...that was just awesome...😳😳😳

which is the scene that i made u cry?

When sujal came back from being dead.. & sujal, kashish hug outside the house as others watch them, as shocked spectators.. this was a very emotional moment.. it bought tears in my eyes... even now if i think about this scene aankhein num ho jaathi hai...😊

which is the scene that i made u laugh?
The scene where kashish tells angad kii "Tumhe kitni baar kaha hai mujhe bhabhi matt bulao..." and how angad teases her with the bhabhi thing made me laugh very much...😆

what is the best thing u like about Sujal and Kashish?

Unka pyaar, which has withstood the toughest tests of life.. & their being together forever & ever...... ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

ple write something that u want me to say something as we travelled so far togather?
Kashish you are a awesome fanfic writer.. i thoroughly enjoyed
all through my journey of "Serendipity"..... do tell me if you liked reading my comments on "Serendipity"...😊😛😃

Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago

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