Serendipity.....Sujal&Kashish....Last-Part...11/07

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#931

amazing part

i really enjoyed the way u potrayed the love between sujal and kashish it was beautifully written.

the way all the family caught kashish and sujal was really sweet and the teasing after wood was amazing.

the sangeet cermony was really good i liked how sujal and kashish were enjoying every minute.

sujal is defiantlt the number 1 ashiq no one can be compared to him.

the way kashish was describing wat sujal meant 2 her was mindblowing.

cant wait 4 their wedding.

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#932

thanks a lot! loved it! thanks for the pm! totally l love their love story in this fic!😃

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samrah

@cute_samrah

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#933

mindblowing parts................................kitne romantic parts thy......................i can't believe it sujal aur kashish mein kitna pyaar hai...................all two parts were superb .....................con't soon..................sorry buhat chota comments hai lekin mery exams ky bad i will cont big big comments............................

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 16 years ago

#934

kashish yaar tumne part post kiya.. aur main aagayi apne comments lekar... yaar kashish main kya kahoon.... har baar tum joh likhthi ho, takes me by a surprise... har baar tum itna achcha likhthi ho, kii mere pass shabd kum pad jaathe hai tumhari tareef mein.. sach keh rahii hoon dear every single time, the way you potray the feelings, the emotions, sab kuch perfect hotha hai.. kabhi kabhi i wonder koi kaise har part itna achcha likh saktha hai.. fanfic tho main bhi likhthi hoon, lekin sometimes i don't like my writing... lekin tumhare likhne ke andaaz par tho main poori tarah se fida hogayi dear.. sachchi keh rahii hoon, hat's off to your writing seriously.. you writing is absolutely out of this world.. tumhari writing ke baare mein main kya kahoon.. every time you write it has a new element, a new flavor to it... har baar tumhari writing padkar mazaa aa jaatha hai.. i love it completely... your writing is absolutely superb, fantastic, excellent, par excellence, marvelous, amazing, awesome, mind-blowing, mind-refreshing, mind-blasting, nice, super-duper hit, jhakaas, bindaas, dhassu, raapchik... i'am completely bowled over by your fanfic...& your way of writing... it just rocks.... tho sujal, kashish kii agli subaah ho gayi..
aur ab tho subaah ke nau baj baje.. becharon kii tho baand baj jaayegi... atleast agar kashish jaldi jaag jaathi aur prerna ke kamre mein chali jaathi, aur sujal, kashish kii is chori chuppe mulaqat kii tho kissi ko patah nahii chalthi.. lekin ab tho yeh dono achche phas gaye.. hehehe... aur ab jab kashish , sujal ko utathi hai, ab bhi after he knows kii 9 hogaya hai, lekin humare sujal mahashay ko tho romance sooj raha hai.. is baat par main sujal se kehna chahoongi, sudhar jao sujal, warna marr padegi... yeh sujal bhi na hamesha aise hii romantic mood mein rehtha hai.. aur khud tho romance kartha hai, aur kashish ko bhi divert kartha hai... aur lo ab thak sujal, kashish ne kya karna hai socha bhi nahii aur darwaze par knock hogaya... and wahaan dekho tho along with prerna sab khade hothe hai.. i'am sure bechare sujal, kashish ko samaj nahii aaya hoga kii woh kya kahe.. aur tho aur unke aamne prerna khadi thi, as a tough , strict principal... hehe.. waise you know prerna aur un sabke pooch ne ke andaaz mein bhi ek tarah chedkhaani tho thi... very nice... aur jab prerna poochthi hai sawaal.. aur phir kashish ka jawaab... awww.... kashish's jawaab was first class.. absolutely A1 dear.. very apt to the situation.. kashish ka answer is really so convincing.. haan yeh bhi hai kii usne joh bhi kaha sach hii tho kaha na.. sujal ko uske bina neend nahii aathi.. aur woh sujal ka khayal bhi tho karthi hai na, woh bhi itna zyada... aur dekho na prerna bhi unke pyaar ke baare mein jaanthi hai.. issi liye tho she understands.. i'am khush kii prerna ne unhe daanta nahii.. lekin ab raat thak sujal, kashish should be away from each other.. yeh dekho prerna ne sujal,kashish ko indirectly sazaa dii.. hehehe. aur phir joh sab log milkar sujal,kashish kii tang kheenchthe hai na..uska main kya kahoon..... aur tho aur poorane secrets bhi khul gaye.. sujal, kashish se milne pipe chadkar gaya tha, woh usse milne gaya tha earlier jab unki shaddi hui... aur joh angad ne reveal kiya, kii he saw angad climbing down from kashish's place, yeh angad aur kripa na are too gooddd... sujal, kashish kii maddat karthe hai, chori-chuppe... they are just too nice.... waise sujal kii embarrassment... kashish kii sharam.. hyee..hyee.. kya baat hai... aur waise dekha jaye na tho kashish to stop shying says things like woh unki bhabhi and stuff like that.. bohat hii achcha likha hai tune yeh bit dear... ab tho jab sujal sochtha hai kii woh kashish pe pone par baat kar saktha hai.. lekin sujal ke is plan par bhi paani phir gaya... kashish ka phone kripa ke pass hoga... sujal, kashish kisne kaha tha, sabke mana karne ke bawajood raat mein saath mein saath mein sone ko.. ab bhukto.. mujhe sachchi woh dono bohat bechare lag rahe hai....aur tho aur unki haalat par mujhe hasii bhi aa rahii hai... sab ne achcha tareeka dhoonda hai sujal, kashish ko tung karne ka.. is baat par mujhe sabse kehna hai.. lage raho... good.. good... tho ab kashish leaves to go with the other girls to prachi's house... tho sujal, kashish ko ek duje se durr rehna hoga woh bhi din bhar.. yeh tho mushkhil hii nahii namumkin hai... sujal ka dimaak koi na koi tarkeib nikaal hii lega i was sure about it... aur jab sab ladkiyaan kashish ko tease karthe hai.. and then jis tarah kashish apni aur sujal ke beech kii baatein batathi hai.. kashish kii baatein sunnkar tho main sharam se paani paani ho gayi... kitne saaf lafzon mein kashish ne apne dil ka kachcha-chitta sabke saamne rakha... sujal, kashish ka pyaar hai hii itna pure, itna real... nd then yeh kya sujal ne kashish se promise kiya hai, kii kashish aur uski har shaddi kii saal-gira par woh uske saath , saath-phere lega.. how nice is this..too gooddd..... mazaa aagaya yaar.. waise mujhe bhi yeh patah nahii tha kii sujal, kashish ka pyaar abhi bhi itna parwaan chada hai...and i'am sure unke pyaar kabhi kum nahii hoga.... sujal, kashish kii kasmein, waade are just mind-blowing... aur ab sujal se raha nahii jaatha.. and he thinks to call kashish.. bhale hii uska sab mazaak banaye...sahii baat hai pyaar kiya hai tho nibhana bhi padega... aur phir joh bahana sujal banatha hai na kripa ke pass... yeh sujal na bahanebaazi mein number one hai.. chalo joh bhi ho atlast he could talk to kashish na.. yahii hai the underlying baat... sujal, kashish ke beech kii baatein are just too sweettt... cutee... kahiin unko meri hii nazar na lag jaye.. they are just made for each other... aur ab sujal, kashish ek dusare se milne ke liye bechaine ho rahe hai... in dono kii mobbat tho itihaas ke panno par likh deni chahiye.. seriously yaar... sach keh rahii hoon.. itna mast.. itna zabardast hai un dono ka pyaar... sujal, kashish ka pyaar maano jaise qyamath dha tha hai... and sujal, kashish ko milne ke liye bulatha hai.. aur kashish ka dil jaana chahtha hai... haan bhai, woh tho jaana chahegi na, uske dil ne usko awaaz dii hai, jaana tho hai hii na.. and kripa is a sweeheart.. ghar par aur koi nahii hai.. and kripa ne kashish se kaha kii woh sujal se milkar aajaaye jaldi se.. i completely love it.... yippeeee.. abhi sujal, kashish mil sakthe hai... then coming to the next scene, jahaan sujal,kashish park mein hothe hai... unke beech kii baatein , woh rootna, woh manana, woh pyaar ka andaaz.. in sab kar main varijawaa... sachchi main qurbaan is sab par.. lekin yeh kya ghar mein yeh aafat gang sujal ko dhoonthe prachi ke ghar pohanch gaye.. aur sabko kripa se patah chal hii jaatha hai kii sujal, kashish ek saath hai... aur jis tarah se yeh log sujal, kashish ko park mein paathe hai, on the bench... too nice...ek dum tweetttt...all these scenes were very nice.. and the bit where sujal aur angad ke beech shart lagthi hai... aur joh baat sujal, kashish se kehtha hai... and kashish runs back to him & hugs him.. yeh sujal na is a shaitaan, chalaak, intelligent, kitna hoshiyaar hai.. he knows kii kashish ko kya kehna chahiye jisse she comes flying into his arms... hahaha.. chalo achcha hai.. woh dono ek dusare ko khud se zyada samajthe hai, aur jaanthe hai... ab shaam mein sangeet ka waqt hotha hai.. sujal, kashish ke beech ka gaana, unke beech kii ched-chaad yeh saari baatein tho poori tarah se chah gayi.. and then coming to the last scene of the 99th part, wowwww.. this was totally awesome.. is scene kii main jitni tareef karoon woh kum hii hogi.. woh sujal ka sulk karna kii kashish jaa rahii hai.. uska asking for a kiss, haan sujal bhi kya kartha agar kashish usse kiss diye bina jaathi tho bechare ko neend nahii aathi... yeh sujal ke bas bahane hai, kashish ke pass aane ko mere khayal se.. lekin agar sujal aisa hai tho kashish bhi usse kuch peeche nahii.. woh bhii sujal ke kareeb rehne ke hii mouke dhoondthi rehthi hai.. issi liye tho maine kaha sujal, kashish are made for each other... then unke gang ka kehna kii they will close their eyes.. woh kuch nahii dekhenge.. and kashish can do what she likes... tho ab kashish ka kissing sujal, was so very romantic... aur tho aur ab saari gang bhi shararat par utar aayi hai.. they all see kashish kissing sujal.. sabke sab badmaash hai.. hehehe.. and then woh unka kehna kii now they understand why kashish's chehra has this glow.. and why sujal is happy all the time in the office... yeh sab tho bas teasing hai... sachchi yeh log teasing mein itne maahir hai... sab mein aaj bhi kahiin na kahiin ek bachcha chupa baita hai... and then kashish ka bidding good-bye to sujal...i'am sure un dono ke liye woh raat bohat hii lambi lagegi...aakhir ek dono se durr joh hai.. anyway kashish yaar good going.. actually i can say going great guns yaar.. absolutely rocking... 👏 now coming to my guess on the next part.. well next part mein i think kii sujal, kashish joh ek dusare se alag hai, woh raat un dono ke liye badi lambi hogi... shayad is baar bhi sujal koi na koi tareeka dhoond nikale aur kashish se mil aa jaye woh.. jahaan thak main sujal ko jaanthi hoon aisa hii kuch karega woh... lekin is baar sujal, kashish pakde nahii jaayenge... kissi ko bhi patah nahii chalega kii woh mile the... ya shayad yeh ho saktha hai kii sab yeh baat jaankar bhi anjaan bane rahe.. kyunke sab ke saamne ek baat tho zahir hai na kii sujal, kashish ek dusare ke bagair nahii reh sakthe... i think next part mein sujal, kashish kii dubara shaddi hogi.. har taraf, sab ko khushi hogi.. har taraf bas khushiyaan hii khushiyaan... aur sujal, kashish ke khushi ka tho koi thikhana hii nahii rahega... they will just be on top of the world... next part mein mere hisaab se sujal, kashish ke beech bohat saara romance bhi hoga... so kashish dear this is what i think will happen in the coming up part.. lekin ab tum mujhe batao kya mera yeh guess sahii hai, ya phir ghalat... mujhe zaroor batana i really want to know....😉 kashish dear next part jaldi se post karna.. i'am waiting for the next part very very eagerly.. hope you liked my comment... 😊😛😃

Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#935

wow kashish it was a beautiful part.full of mastiiiiiii.............kya punishment mili...........bt sk kahan ek dusre ko rok sakte hain..........awesome part

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#936

hey lovely part cont soon

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sofia

@mystified

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#937

bohat badiya part tha😃😃...

i guess the most romantic of all updates in serendipity😳😳😳....u r doin a good job...i mean the selection of dialogues are too good....

keep up the good job and i am eagerly waiting for the 100th part......😍😍

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Shweta

@shreya_shweta

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#938

kashish di pliz continue karo bcoz as soon as i cum home i sit on da computer reading ur fanfiction and wen it is not there i get very sadden and disaappointed pliz jaaldi se continue karo di ab intazar nahi hota

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#939

Hey Kashihs very cute update... Sujal is so naughty n romantic.... Imaginf Sujal being Romeo...😆 thts funny... well amazing part.. plzz continue asap...