Life and Crime( Cont.) - Page 31

Bhaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii meri gut feeling such nikli... Something said that you would have updated today... And kiya bhi to kya update.....

Yipppp yip yipeeeee Dipika Pratham ko saath le jaa rahi hai and I know ki vo bahut shararatein karne waala hai 😉

Waise I like Prithvi too, lekin Shaurya ka kya... He can always be there for Mahi naa... Jab vo hai to use kya aanch aane dega 😭

Hey Krithika n Sujata , what can i say about both of u. U both r really wonderful like always the first to read and give sch type of comments that encourages me a lot. 😊 Thank u so much.

Sujata, what can i say, u r pukka hgtian more than me 😉 and i love that.I really like ur comments it shows that u r enjoying this

@Krithika Really very happy that u liked this. Don't worry , in next part i am sure u will be a little bit assured . And about Pratham, what can i say, even i don' knw what is he going to do but from now Deepika has to handle two kids 😆


@Armaghan0 don't worry i hope u like the next part as now the triangle of Shaurya, Mahi and Prithvi will come to an end. Thanks a lot for commenting . Just keep on reading.

@Proud_2_b_mysel, don't worry. I am sure u will like the next part a litle bit more.Thanks a lot for commenting.

Thanks a lot for giving such lovely comments on my work. I am going to post the next part right now.

Mahi was sitting near the window of her house thinking about the sweet moments spent with Shaurya.

Flashback:

Shaurya and Mahi were arguing on their favorite topic, i,e, love and marriage.

Shaurya: Oh come on Mahi, now don't start again your lecture on love and marriage. I am fed up.

Mahi: Even i am fed up. U know what Shaurya, kutte ki poonch (tail of a dog) ek baar ko seedhi ho sakti hai, lekin tumhe ye baatein kabhi samajh mein nahi aa sakti.

Shaurya: U r right. Tum bahut dino se mujhe bahut seedhi lag rahi ho 😉

Mahi understood the meaning of Shaurya's words n got angry.

Mahi(picking her bag): Tumhe to ladkiyon se baat karne ki tameez bhi nahi hai. I am going.

Shaurya: Arre listen Mahi. I was just joking.

Mahi comes out of the retaurant.

Shaurya: Oh god, ye ladkiyaan bhi na...........😆

Saying this, he follows her.

Shaurya: Look Mahi, i was just joking. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki tumhe itna bura lagega. I am sorry.

Mahi stopped on her way and looked behind.

Mahi: Kya kaha tumne?

Shaurya: I said i am sorry.

Mahi: That's all right. Waise main bhi majak kar rahi thi.

Shaurya was a little bit surprised.

Mahi: Kyun, tumhe kya lagta hai ki sirf tum hi majak kar sakte ho.(Looking at Shaurya in a totally diffrent manner) Lekin tum mujhe gussa dekhkar ina serious kyun ho gaye? Aaj se pehle to tumne meri itni care kabhi nahi ki.

Shaurya(looking here and there): Woh...... woh..... main......

Mahi: Main kya?

Shaurya(looking into his eyes): Woh woh main aaj apna purse lana bhool gaya hoon aur cofee ke paise abhi bhi bacche hue hain. Ab agar tumne paise nahi diye to mujhe wahan jhute bartan dhone padenge.Isliye........warna i care for a damn...

Before Shauya could complete his sentence, Mahi starts running behind him to beat him and he too starts running to save his life.

Flashback ends.

Mahi(talking to herself): Nahi. Main kyun uske baare mein soch rahin hoon?? Itna kuch hone ke baad bhi...... i will not think about him.... I do not love him....I hate u Mr. Shaurya Khanna.. I hate u....

Prithvi(entering into the house): Don't do that Mahi.

Mahi looked at him in a puzzled manner. And he starts moving towards her.

Next Morning:

Shimla

Pratham was taking morning walk in the garden with the help of a walkstick. Shweta had adviced him not to put much pressure on his right feet for two days otherwise his fresh stiches will open again that will trouble him much more. He comes near a bench and sits there. Today he was in much control than other days. He was trying to figure out the incidents of last day. Who was that lady? It seems like he knows her and the expressions she was having in her eyes and on her face were enough for telling that she too knows him. But who is she and what is his realtionship with her? He was unable to figure out that. At the same time, a feminine but determined voice hits his ears.

",Hi".

He looked in the direction of the voice and found her stading behind his bench, looking at him, having a deep smile on her lips.

Pratham: Hi.

Deepika(coming forward): May i sit here?

Pratham: Oh please.

Deepika smiles and sits on the bench.

Pratham: Actually i want to meet u . I am really sorry for yesterday's incident . I hope u didn't got hurt.

Deepika: No not all . That was pefectly fine.

Pratham smiles and starts looking in other direction whereas Deepika keeps on looking at him, thinking that he will definitely ask questions from her that was clearly visible on his face.

Pratham(unable to control his curiosity): Excuse me.I am feeling like.......(after a pause)do we know each other?

Deepika(extending her hand): Deepika. Deepika Ghosh.

Pratham felt like heard this name somewhere. Don't know why but was expecting her name to be something like that.

Pratham(shaing hands with her): Pratham. Pratham.......??????

Deepika(understanding her condition): Mittal. Pratham Mittal.

Pratham was delighted after hearing that. He really liked the style in which she told her that she knows him.

Deepika: Andar chalein??

Pratham nodded his head like an obidient child . Deepika again smiles looking at him like this and starts moving inside whereas Pratham remain sitted there totally lost into her smile.

Pratham(thinking): Beautiful

Thinking this, as he was about to get up, 😆he found a person flying in the air with a bow and an arrow*. He was amazed. The person shoots the arrow from his bow and n it found target in his heart.😉

Pratham(placing hand over his chest): Ouch.

Deepika(turning back): Kya hua?

Pratham again looks in that direction, but the person has disappeared. He looks at Deepika who was looking at him.

Deepika: Are u ok?

Pratham: Haan, i am allright.

Saying this, he looked here and there if anyone has noticed him whereas Deepika smiles again nodding her head and then goes inside whereas Pratham too picks up his walkstick and follows her thinking in his mind that", What was that?".

*Cupid😉

Shaurya was packing his luggage. He picks up the pic of him with the other three, keeps on looking at it for sometime, and then puts it into his bag. He was wearing his shoes when he heard a knock on the door. He opened the door and his eyes became wide with surprise one more time by watching Mahi on his door.

Shaurya: Tum?

Mahi comes inside quietly and starts searching his bag.

Shaurya: Stop it Mahi. What are u doing? (Finding his warning as a waste)I said stop.

Mahi finds out the pic, he has kept inside😊. She looks at the pic and then at Shaurya. Shaurya was unable to say anything.

Mahi: Agar tumhe lagta hai ki tumhare mujh se door jaate hi main tumhe bhool jaungi to ye tumhari galat fehmi hai Shaurya. I will never ever be able to foget u. Chahe tum mujh se kitna bhi door chale jao.(Rubbing off the tears from her eyes) Aaj ke baad main tumhare paas kabhi nahi aaungi, na hi tumse kuch kahungi, jab tak tum apne aap mere paas nahi aaoge.

Saying this she puts the pic into her purse and then leaves from there without saying anything and giving Shaurya any oppurtunity to say something. As Shaurya looks out, he finds Prithvi standing there, looking at him and smiling.

Shaurya: Aisa kyun kiya Prithvi?

Prithvi(a smile playing on his lips): Maine to wahi kiya jo maine tumse promise kiya tha.Maine tumse kaha tha ki main Mahi ko hamesha khush rakhunga, aur uski khushi tumhare saath hai. Ab ye tum par depend karta hai ki tum use khush dekhna chahte ho ya nahi.

Shaurya was unable to answer him this time. He just closes the door. Prithvi too starts leaving from there, but at the same time he heard some sound from inside which were enought to tell that Shaurya is again taking things out of the bag to put them at their original places.

Prithvi(smiling): Tum yahan ruk to gaye ho Shaurya. Ab ek din tum CB mein bhi waapas jaroor aaoge.

Saying this, he looked at Mahi who was sitting silenly in the car. He then takes out the pic of their training days from his pocket.He again looks at Mahi and torn the pic into pieces and throws it away. He smiles again and moves towards the car.

Deepika stops the car outisde St. Thomas private school. It was very difficult for her to convince Shraddha to let her go oot only for 3 hours to go to Bhoomi's school. Deepika comes out of the car and contacted the police officers present there in civil uniform.

Deepika: Anything wrong?

Officer 1: No maam. Everything is all right. We didn't notice any unusual incident or person here as told by you.

Deepika was a little bit surprised after knowing that. But she thinks that it's ossible that the person is aware of each and every moment of her and thus cacelled or changed his plan.

Deepika: Ok but i don't want any kind of negligence.

P2: Don't worry maam, we are alert. Nothing bad will happen here.

Deepika makes her way inside and finds Bhoomi on her way .😊

Bhoomi: Mumma!!😳

She starts running with her little staps towards Deepika who just picks her up in her lap and then kisses her both cheeks.

Deepika: How's my baby?

Bhoomi: I am fine mumma. You know what, i missed u so much.

Deepika: Mumma missed u too beta.

At the same time, Mother Mary too comes out of her office. Deepika greets her and she gave her blessings.

MM: God bless u my child. How r u?

Deepika: I am fine mother.

Bhoomi: Mumma, where is papa? You know what our whole class wants to meet him.

Deepika turned a little bit serious after hearing that from Bhoomi.

Deepika: Papa is here only Bhoomi. But before meeting him, u have to listen to me carefully.

Saying this, she moves into Mother Mary's office along with her and Bhoomi.

After sometime:

Deepika : Look Bhoomi. Aapko in sab baton ka khayal rakhna hoga. Agar aap chahti ho ki papa hameshaa aapke paas rahein to......

Bhoomi( a little bit upset): Theek hai Mumma. Main papa ko papa nahi kahungi, uncle kahungi. Lekin mumma. Papa theek kab tak honge??

Deepika: Bahut jaldi beta. (Kissing her forehead) Mumma is proud of u Bhoomi. Accha ab main chalti hoon. And i promise papa aapse milne bahut jaldi aayenge.

Bhoomi: Bye mumma.

Deepika: Bye Bhoomi.

Deepika while coming out of the school was feeling that how difficult will be for Bhoomi to call Pratham uncle instead of papa and she was proud that she has a daughter like her. She sits into the car and then leaves from there.

Awesome updates Samar !!!!!!!!!👏 👏 👏
I m just loving the PRATHAM - DEEPIKA track.......its amazing..😳 😳 😳
I hope Pratham soon try to remember about Deepika and Bhoomi 😊

Sacchhi Bhai Dipika sure has to handle two kids now 😆

Wasie it was Prithvi who tore the pic proud_2_b_mysel
, because he now knows that Mahi is for Shaurya ad Shaurya for Mahi... So loving a person who loves another person, is not fair in friendship... Wow love Prithvi's maturity.... Proud of him 👏

Bhoomi would really be upset.. Lekin Dipika is so sweet to have brought up her kid so matured 😳

thanks a lot Krithika for comments as well as for clering proud_2_b_mysel confusion. I think he got confused there and your explaination will really help her because u explained it in such a wonderful way 😊

And yes, Deepika has brought her daughter up so maturely and that's what gives us an idea of Deepika's mental plus internal toughness 😊 She is really a tough and mature person 😉 Plus Prithvi is too mature as it is not easy to sacrifice your love for your love's happiness> But he got the fact that Shaurya loves Mahi much more than him and really repected his feelings 😊 He is really a gem of a person.

@Sujata , again don't know what to say on your commentss. Just happy tht i am able to write my story as per your expectations and promise u that u will not be disappointed. Thanks a lot for your encouragement 😊

@frenz4u thanks for such lovely comments. I hope i am able to write the story as u expected. JUst keep on reading to find out what happens next. 😉

@proud_2_b_mysel, i hope Krithika cleared your confusion. Prithvi just torned the picture just as an indication that he has given up on Mahi. He feels that there is someone else who loves Mahi more than himself and he is so good that he does not want to be a barrier between them. Now Mahi is a closed chapter in his life but he will be always with her as a true friend. Thanks a lot for comments and i hope u will lil the next part too.

Anyways, i think many of u would be relaxed now that Shaurya and Mahi are going to be together and Prithvi is not going to be negative. Thanks a lot for such lovely comments and encouragment. I will try to post next part soon. And just want to tell u that i have comleted 55%-60% of my story and will completele the rest of the story soon. Till then u have to relax and think about the story on the basis of the promo i am giving 😉 Tc and bye

loved it awsome magnificent couldnt be morem happier loved prithvi hes a sweetheart hope shurya gets his brains now pls con soon

Preview:


Shaurya: Deepika tum?

Deepika: Mujhe Prithvi aur Mahi se pata chala ki tum yahan reh rahe ho. Main tumhe waapas le jaane ke liye aayi hoon. Chalo Shaurya, Wapas chalo.

Shaurya: Nahi Deepika, main wapas nahi aaunga.

Deepika: Theek hai Shaurya. Agar tumhara yahi faisla hai to main kuch nahi kahungiSirf mere ek sawaal ka jawab de do. Uske baad main yahan se chali jaungi.

Enjoy 😉

Bhai aapke previews, hume bahut sochne me majboor karti hain and i hate thinking 😉 😆

Great preview, ab Shaurya ko aana hi padega.. Yeah 😛