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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kriti_6teen

nice part
in never thought angad could b so nice... i mean not love a girl when she demands it...
nice 1 & plz dont b sorry 4 writing love making parts...
v r 22nd century generation & v should behave like 1.
continue soon

lol. 22nd? 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: PyAriViBu21

Mmmk Ladies...settle down..

As we all know Mr. Cristiano Ronaldo is taken..

by the one and only ME! 😃

and a lil competition isnt tht bad..lol 😆 😉

Love Muchos,

MRS.CRISTIANO RONALDO! 😊 😛 😉

pssht. you can have him...Mrs. CRISTIANO RONALDO! 😉

i was just telling rani to back off....and look at rani all ready dreaming away...we all know rani you have a buring desire for him...but too late. 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
ok before the post part 6 i want to say it will be very short mostly becuase part 7 is super long and i just dont want to drag the sad and drepression part to much so part 6 will be sad part 7 will be very happy 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Kissing Away

When returning to California things between Angad and Kripa could not have been worse. Not one word was said to the other and when riding back they did not stop any were unless getting fuel for the bike.

Angad stopped a few miles away from Kripa's house in Beverly Hills, talking to her for the first time in three days. Both Angad and Kripa were very tired for the reason neither had slept in three days.

"Well Kripa, here we are…" Angad had nothing else to say. He did not want Kripa to leave. He wanted her to stay but if she did she would not only ruin her self but also her family. Angad took off his helmet and so did Kripa.

"Angad, I don't want to go" Kripa said so quietly, it was almost impossible to make out what she was saying but Angad was able to hear every word Kripa said clearly.

"I don't want you to go, Kripa. You have to go, hopefully when we meet again we will see that we both have moved on in life or maybe we will see each other and fall in love again with each other." Angad said so tiredly mostly because of the long ride from Mexico to California.

Angad and Kripa heard something from behind them. it was the press. "Kripa, do you think they will kill me if I kiss you" Angad said jokingly.

"No, but I will, if you don't kiss me" Kripa said crushing her soft desirable lips with Angad's. Both Angad and Kripa saw flashes of cameras clicking away on them but either cared. This was going to be their last time they will see each other in the next five years and they wanted to make the most of the few minutes they had left with each other.

Angad kissed Kripa away and she just left unquestioningly. "I love you, Miss. Sharma" Angad called out As Kripa walk towards the heard of the press. She turned to look at him from the distance and just smiled the sweetest smile and just said "Five years" And then walked away into her own world and Angad rode of to his.

Ok so I know this was a sad and boreing part but the next part is supposed to be really good, well at least really happy and not so upsetting. Dont forget to comment I also wanted to tell you that I will be starting a new fan fic after Prince Rider...which wont be for a while but I want to give you a heads up about what it will be about....

COMING SOON

Suicidal

Story line- Kripa Sharma was a girl who had fallen into a depression when she was 12 years old; her parents were very worried about her and took her to many doctors but none were able to help. Her conditions become worse and worse until Kripa became suicidal. Her parents had lost hope that their only 18-year-old daughter would be lost forever. When all hope was lost Kripa Sharma's father meets a young 23-year-old psychiatrist, Angad Khanna who is willing to put Kripa on a 24-hour suicidal watch, by having Kripa Sharma live in his house until she was better again.

A young doctor will live with a suicidal teenager and will find that suicidal watch is a lot harder then he thought when he begins to fall in love with his patient.

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Posted: 18 years ago
great part
i can't wait to read ur new story its sounds so good
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Posted: 18 years ago
suuuppperrrrrrrrr!!!!! i lovd the kiisss and their dialogues were amazing 😆 omg! even i'm more excited and more anxious then kripa, i too can't wait untill the 5 year leaap. contd. sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh great part- but personally Suicidal sounds soo much better. now you've got that cocept out you have o start it soon... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: pooja1221

suuuppperrrrrrrrr!!!!! i lovd the kiisss and their dialogues were amazing 😆 omg! even i'm more excited and more anxious then kripa, i too can't wait untill the 5 year leaap. contd. sooon 👏

😆i think this is going to be the first time some one will be excited about a 5 year leep😛

i am glad you liked the part i thought ppl will think it is upsetting of the fact that angad and kripa will be seprated😭😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ixi-shaj

oh great part- but personally Suicidal sounds soo much better. now you've got that cocept out you have o start it soon... 😉

I am still working on suicidal and i will not start it untill i have the story planed out 😛 i thought a lot of you will think that suicidal will be depressing but it wont be to depression😳 ok i will not say anything more about my coming fan fic becuase i do not want to give out to much😉😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
awsum parts and a great story for ur new ff.waitin for that as well as for the next part.superb 👏 👏

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