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Posted: 20 years ago

I might twist the story a little later on! 😆

Ok here it is! I might not do as well as Eshika or Happe as there dialoges are MUCH better than mine! Don't throw rocks at me!

A little change: I will cont from the part when Kripa goes to find Angad and he pulls her into the forest! 😃

Everyone is busy singing when Angad leaves from there. Kripa is thinking why Angad left. She keeps looking around to see if he's coming back. After 5 minutes, she excuses herself and goes to look for Angad. She keeps looking for him but couldn't find him. Then a strong hand pulls her to the side.

Kripa is about to scream with a hand covers her face, and one arm goes around her waist, now Kripa is sure that it's Angad, she relaxes her body and Angad takes his hand off her mouth yet tightens his grip, brushing his hands up-and-down Kripa's arm, kissing her neck. Kripa closes her eyes and then turns around hugging Anagd before he could do anything more naughty with her.

Angad leans on a tree as Kripa leans into his body, there heart beats togeather.

A few minutes later Kripa and Angad finally part, and look into each others eyes.

K: Angad, tum yaha par kyun aaya?

A: Pulling her closer again, looks very passinotely, and then lighting his expression- Actually mujhko waha betha betha kuch ho raha tha, shayad isliya ki tum mera saamna thi mujhko allergy honi shru ho gyi thi!

Kripa squints her eyes and stomps her foot on top of Angad and turns to leave, but Angad pulls her back, Kripa's back hits his body, Kripa tries to free her self but Angad tightly wraps his arms around her and puts his chin on her sholder.

A: Arre kaha chali? Atleast mujhko saath le kar cholo.

K: Jaharnoum main! Cholo ga?

A: Turning Kripa around- Tumahra saath tho main kahie bhi chalna ka liya tayaar ho! Ek baar pyaar sa pooch ka tho dekho!

Kripa tries hard not to smile but a beautiful smile breaks on her face, Anagd smiles back and says: Haasi tho phasi.

Kripa puts on a stern face and turs around Again, sitting standing near Angad, and then smiles again.

A: Hmmm.... Kripa?

K: Kya hai?

A: Main kuch sooch raha ho.

K: Kya?

A: Main sooch raha ho ki main ab settel ho jao.

K: Are you mad?

A: Um... no not really, aur isma MAD hona wali koi si baat hai?

K: Nahie, waisa kiska saath settel hona ki sooch raha ho?

A: Well I have some choices- Queen Elezibith, Queen Victoriya, Um... film actresses, i mean vo sab mujhko aagar ek baat dekh la gi tho fida ho jay gi.

Kripa turns around smiling.

K: Good! Mujhko darr lag raha tha ki kahie tum mera naam na lego.

Angad is a little surprised.

A: Aur aagar le leta tho?

K: Mujhko shock lagta.

A: Kyun?

K: Grinning- Kyun ki mujhko lag raha hai ki yeh sab abhi kisi plan ka hissa hai!

Angad's face turns serious as tears form in his eyes.

He takes Kripa by her sholders and turns her around pushing her against the tree and leaning into her, his eyes locked in her's.

K: Surprised- Angad...

A: In a rude, yet sad wisper- Shut-up, just shut-up, tum samajthi kya ho kudh ko, huh? Who are you? Tumna jo abhi kaha so kaha lakin aagar tum na aaisa phir kaha, tho i swear, i'll kill my self.

K: Camly- Lakin Angad, i was just joking.

Angad tightens his grip.

K: Angad, mujhko dard ho raha hai, leave me.

He tightens his grip and then lets go turn around face the other way.

A: Yeh maazak, sirf tumahra liya maazak tha, lakin vo ek, ek shabd mera dil tho chibha hai.

Angad turns around again, and walks to him.

A: Kripa, mera liya tum he sab kuch ho, main maanta ho ki maina tumko dukh diya hai, lakin...

Kripa puts her hand on his mouth, they look into each others eyes deeply, eyes which are longing for each other, eyes that are filled with tears, eyes that are despreat.

K: Wisper- I'm sorry Angad, i'm really sorry.

Anagd wipes Kripa tears and they share a long hug, and then head back to the camp.

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Posted: 20 years ago
wow very nice job!! it was good! 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
wow Neha, that was excellent part.
I loved it.
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Posted: 20 years ago
gr8 part neha... continue soon
Kayla~
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Posted: 20 years ago
um.... i will cont this story tomm for sure! 😃
neha9 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
guys, i need someone to help me with this story, cuz i dont know how to cont it?? 😕
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Posted: 20 years ago
awesome part neha, plz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
neha continue awesome part.......... 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
I finally caught up once again..lolzz.. cont soon! 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
awesome part 👏how abt if u keep angad&kripa 2gether 4 a few days... then josh will realize dat he's losing da bet so in order 2 win da bet he sabotages angad by gettin' him drunk & drugged & make him pose sum pics wid his sis mishty...then kripa as usual blows up & when kripa doesn't believe angad tries once or twice 2 win her back... then goes bac 2 being his old self & angad&kripa cant stand 2 c each other in da college.... prithvi becums a support to kripa like in da show & this makes angad jealous... dats da best i can cum up wid now 😕 if u need more help jus ask... 😊

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